Pokemon Hentai Game update (Jan 31, 2016)

[coyoteredmoon]

Fatman: don't know if you're particular art style appeals to this kind of project.

In terms of critique: review basic female anatomy. Many bone and muscular landmarks are either misplaced or highly over-exaggerated.

also:
query: why is Drowsee in a puddle?

[Wonderful Hawk]

Yeah, really, why is Drowzee melting? I'm so confused. You do realize Drowzee has legs, right? It's a 100% solid Pokemon.

[Zeus Kabob]

I believe the artist was thinking of psyduck, who would reside in water. If you two will notice, Drowzee has variable leg length in the three pictures, which would indicate it standing in water.

You two are cruel. That set of drawings is better than anything I could do. Fatman, thanks for your efforts; they're certainly not for naught.

[Wonderful Hawk]

Man, I'm not saying crap about the art, I like the art. It's just... I really don't get the legs. That just came out of left field.

[coyoteredmoon]

Cruelty was unintended. Fatman requsted critique.

[humbird0]

@ Digital Ninja - I started drawing this before I saw your post. I'm not trying to be a copycat, you did good work.

I decided to do Drowzee first, and I was hoping for some critique before I finalize the line art. I was going for wide hips, since Drowzee's a bit heavy-looking.

That's looks very good!
With such clean-linework it would look great with color.
But personally, I don't find it particularly sexy. For example, why did you hide her legs? A character's figure has a lot to do with their attractiveness.
She might look sexier with a little more of an "hourglass" figure, but these proportions do look Drowsee-like.
And you definitely pulled off a great "sleepy" personality. Those poses are perfect!

[Zeus Kabob]

Cruelty was unintended. Fatman requsted critique.

Man, I'm not saying crap about the art, I like the art. It's just... I really don't get the legs. That just came out of left field.

Ah, no problem. Reading the two in conjunction made me think that you two were disapproving of Fatman's efforts, and that seemed mean.

[Aetrun]

While I will agree that at first glance it looks weird, thinking about it, (and verifying on bulbapedia) one of the habitats for Drowzee is near water (said source specifically states muddy water). Adding a bit of coloring in my head to visualize that as mud/muddy water that Drowzee is in, it actually works quite well. I think the oddity is more due to the lack of color than an actual fault with the image itself.
That being said, let me also say nice work there Fatman, and I look forward to seeing what else you come up with for us to enjoy.

[AsianP3rsuas10n]

Oh man, your game made me rage so hard. I swear I was gonna toss my computer out my window when I got so far only to have it shut off without me saving. Haha

I love these artworks they are amazing!
That drowzee in water I didnt get so much... I was thinking maybe he was drawing a drowzee and then thought of a grimer or a muk lol

Maybe I'll play again when I feel I have better control over myself. That way I wont rage so much haha.

[bubba91]

someone asked for a vulpix?

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

https://www.dropbox.com/s/kr5o0fsgfu6o9yd/vulpixhorny.JPG

[fatman]

To answer the questions, I put her standing in mud. I've always seen the brown half of Drowzee as being muddy, so I had her standing in it. I realize now it would make a lot more sense colored, it was already colored in my head, . I'd be more than happy to draw her out of the mud if that's what you guys want, I haven't spent much time on it yet. At the very least I'll tweak it with the feedback I've gotten.

I was thinking of doing Weedle next, I already have an idea for it. I really like Bubba91 Beedrill, so I wanna make sure there's a Weedle to go with it.

I really like that Vulpix, man.

[OwnerOfSuccuby]

Girls in mud are sexy aren't they

But i do not understand what you are talking about but things that i understand was interesting for me

Just a joke

[iateacrayon]

Girls in mud are sexy aren't they

@ Digital Ninja - I started drawing this before I saw your post. I'm not trying to be a copycat, you did good work.

I'm glad to see the OP so active, I really liked the game. I liked it enough that I want to contribute. I hereby promise I'll submit at least one series of poses a week. All I ask, is you keep up the good work and not skip on any cool features.

I decided to do Drowzee first, and I was hoping for some critique before I finalize the line art. I was going for wide hips, since Drowzee's a bit heavy-looking.

Drowzee WIP 1.png

It looks great. The whole mud thing reminds me of Grimer. Maybe you could do one of those too?

[BobbyGecko]

Hi,
Seems like my first post is still "unseeable" (not sure if it's a proper word), even if it appear to be the last message but if it's on the thread and it's my computer which doesn't work, please delete this one.
So this post doesn't concern the pokemon game but "babysitter club 2" hence Humbird0 doesn't have any thread where he can post his games, I thought I could put my mod on this one.
Well, as you could understand I've made a mod of "babysitter club 2". I just had a new mission, with some bug I weren't able to correct, everything is explained in the read me file, please read it.
I've made his edit and posted it here hoping I will not be the only one to edit humbird0's games, and I saw that people on this forum ( I've already made some mod, check the ulmf forum) are active, plus, the Humbird0's Rpg Maker is very easy to use, anybody can do better than me.
So here is babysitter club 2: http://humbird0.net63.net/games/babysitter2/show.htm
And here is the mod: http://www.mediafire.com/?88k8zuygm02uqq0
To play with it, just mix the charset and levels folders with the ones already in babysitter club 2 and replace the files of the levels by those I've made. ( not sure if I'm clear)
I suggest you to store the babysitter club 2 unmodified to have a bugless one.

PS: I've some "creamy" animations, tell me if you prefer them or the classic humbird0's. And sorry for my english, it's not my primary language.

BobbyGecko

[bubba91]

newest artwork I've made:

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

jolteon horny(fixed)
https://www.dropbox.com/s/dedxibqsxu1n6 ... horny2.jpg

Fearow(new version)
https://www.dropbox.com/s/60h1ke9h10slkox/fearow.jpg

Haunter horny
https://www.dropbox.com/s/4dn8osccinglk ... rhorny.jpg
Some people think that ghosts are made of energy and emotions, and who is more plenty of emotions than a woman?

Chansey horny
https://www.dropbox.com/s/3gn3fpj2hdc4n ... yhorny.jpg
this could be a special character for a quest, "someone" is replacing the pokeballs for eggs at the pokecenter or stoling the eggs or something like that

[humbird0]

That fearow looks really good!
You put an impressive amount of detail into those feathers.

And I like Chansey's design.
It reminds me of the description for that pokemon, which was something like:
"Chansey only shares her eggs with people with good hearts"
I could play that description off as a misunderstanding and have it actually mean that
"Chansey shares her eggs with the people who helped make them."

I'm not completely sure what I think about that Haunter.
But you definitely captured a lot of the "dangerous" personality I was aiming for:
She doesn't look ugly, but she doesn't look safe.
I might use this.

Your Jolteon does look better without the lightbulb.

[bubba91]

Do I have to draw the rest of images for Fearow and Chansey?
Please, check the dropbox folder.

[bubba91]

I'm working on a Onix masturbating with a stalagmite while sucking a stalactite.

[humbird0]

I'm working on a Onix masturbating with a stalagmite while sucking a stalactite.

I wouldn't worry about the Fearow. Someone already drew a very good one. I really like the feathers on your version though.
Chansey is completely optional since she wasn't originally planned for the game.
I've always liked your version of Onix. It's clever how you managed to give her human-like attractiveness while still capturing the likeness of the pokemon. I have to admit that it's more interesting to have variety in the way the various pokemorphs masturbate. You tend to be pretty good at that.

[humbird0]

Hi,
Seems like my first post is still "unseeable" (not sure if it's a proper word), even if it appear to be the last message but if it's on the thread and it's my computer which doesn't work, please delete this one.
So this post doesn't concern the pokemon game but "babysitter club 2" hence Humbird0 doesn't have any thread where he can post his games, I thought I could put my mod on this one.
Well, as you could understand I've made a mod of "babysitter club 2". I just had a new mission, with some bug I weren't able to correct, everything is explained in the read me file, please read it.
I've made his edit and posted it here hoping I will not be the only one to edit humbird0's games, and I saw that people on this forum ( I've already made some mod, check the ulmf forum) are active, plus, the Humbird0's Rpg Maker is very easy to use, anybody can do better than me.
So here is babysitter club 2: http://humbird0.net63.net/games/babysitter2/show.htm
And here is the mod: http://www.mediafire.com/?88k8zuygm02uqq0
To play with it, just mix the charset and levels folders with the ones already in babysitter club 2 and replace the files of the levels by those I've made. ( not sure if I'm clear)
I suggest you to store the babysitter club 2 unmodified to have a bugless one.

PS: I've some "creamy" animations, tell me if you prefer them or the classic humbird0's. And sorry for my english, it's not my primary language.

BobbyGecko

I just created a post for this game here:
viewtopic.php?f=7&t=2743

It wouldn't make sense to move this post directly to that thread, since you mention at the top of it that you're "posting in the wrong thread."
So I guess it would make sense if you put a new post there with your mod links.