Bowser's World Alpha 2.3 (Warnings? Yes! All of them!)

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Re: Bowser's World Alpha 2.2 (Warnings? Yes! All of them!)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Mon Sep 10, 2012 7:41 pm

Okay, I think I've found your secret. Is it:
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The area behind the tree at the beginning? With the pipe that leads to a similar place at night and the big drop that leads to a mushroom house (in the shape of a spade)?


Either way, more advice.

Make the updates a bit more clear in your OP. I didn't even see them until you specifically said so. Also, you might want to go into detail a bit more. Like, what little fixes did you do? I'm not asking you to write in 200+ words what you fixed, but it could be a bit more obvious and detailed.

Next, I noticed (last time too), that you made the path to the toadhouse a bit... empty. You're just walking left. Maybe try to make the terrain less even?
Or put some more goomba's in there. That's always good fun.
Also, at the end, to go to the path that actually leads to the toadhouse, you need to press down. I don't think that's clear enough. Maybe make the arrow face down instead?

Also, is there no empty block in the code somewhere? I noticed you made the blocks disappear when you hit them, but in the games they become empty brown blocks instead. You know, these:
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Image Image

Maybe try incorporating these, it feels a bit weird seeing the blocks disappear.

And last, but not least, a bit of messageboard/forum advice, when replying to someone, use that fancy quote button you see on the topright of someone's comment.
Makes it easier to notice just who you are talking to, okay? Okay. :D

-Quiz
(PS: The keywords here are clear and detailed, that's why they're in bold)
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Re: Bowser's World Alpha 2.2 (Warnings? Yes! All of them!)

Postby BulmaSSJ4 » Mon Sep 10, 2012 8:12 pm

No, those are not the secrets, the spades thing is listed in a spoiler in my first post, and the "place at night" is level 1-2 i guess...
I realy should make that 1-2 sing visible again, even if its just written on the "leafs / tree tops"

I wrote most of the stuff that i did, somewhere in the main post.
When you expand the spoilers, its pretty long :P

For the blocks. Yea, its pretty easy to make them stay, actually i just need to delete the ? at the last frame.
I dont even remember why i removed the last frame, because i already had it like that once, but for some reason, i removed the block again...
Ill fix that soon :3

Didnt tought that others were that interrested in answers, that i give to other people :P
But since you want it, ill quote stuff when i answer someone else then the post above me ^^
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Re: Bowser's World Alpha 2.2 (Warnings? Yes! All of them!)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Mon Sep 10, 2012 9:20 pm

BulmaSSJ4 Wrote:No, those are not the secrets, the spades thing is listed in a spoiler in my first post, and the "place at night" is level 1-2 i guess...
I realy should make that 1-2 sing visible again, even if its just written on the "leafs / tree tops"


Okay then, I think I'm used to how Ivanaedler handles these things and I just like the way he does it, so that's why I didn't go and open up all your spoilertags.
I will now. Back to find the actual new stuff, I guess.

BulmaSSJ4 Wrote:Didnt tought that others were that interrested in answers, that i give to other people :P
But since you want it, ill quote stuff when i answer someone else then the post above me ^^


I always read everything in threads I follow. Like this one. Say someone mentions a glitch, or gives you an idea other than me, I'd still be interested in seeing what you think. You are the topicstarter after all.
Also, what would you do if two people ask/tell you something and you want to reply to both? You can't do that without a "quote" button. Unless you'd double-post. But that would become confusing and it's banned on forums.

Thanks for replying.
(PS: Just one more piece of advice. Try to use correct spelling and grammar. I sat here for like 20 seconds wondering what you meant with a sing. And that's not even counting the other (minor) mistakes you've made.)

Disclaimer: I don't have the intention of making you feel bad even though my words have a somewhat harsh tone at times. My advice is strictly used to help others on their way and to provide them with constructive criticism.
So if I made/make you feel bad or annoyed with my words, I am sorry for that.
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Re: Bowser's World Alpha 2.3 (Warnings? Yes! All of them!)

Postby BulmaSSJ4 » Mon Sep 10, 2012 11:42 pm

Uploaded another version, again with some tiny fixes and stuff... See my first post.

@QuizMasterBos
I dont realy know how Ivanaedler handles stuff, so... i have no idea what you mean or what you like. ^^
Also, just like yesterday i spend almost the whole day working on this project. I dont have time to spell stuff right.
Besides that, i am not english. If you find text errors in the game, let me know.
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Re: Bowser's World Alpha 2.3 (Warnings? Yes! All of them!)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Tue Sep 11, 2012 12:01 am

To get a bit of an understanding how Ivanaedler handles things, check his first post on his thread: Mario is Missing Mim Ae version.

Also, you might be interested in knowing, but I'm not a native english speaker either. I'm dutch.
But I understand that it can be difficult to spell things right when you don't have time, but when things are too unclear for people to understand (like the sing/sign thing for instance), please don't hesitate to edit your post.

Edit: Found the easteregg:
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Metroid area. It's looking great, did you make that yourself? Found it just hidden enough to be considered a secret, but not too secret-y that you can't find it, well done.
Also, I like the little mousegraphic at the beginning.
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Re: Bowser's World Alpha 2.3 (Warnings? Yes! All of them!)

Postby BulmaSSJ4 » Tue Sep 11, 2012 12:14 am

I still dont get what you mean, he has lots of spoiler tags, just like me.
You have to open them there to if you want to read anything but the very latest update.
Edit: Good job :P
And yea, i made that myself. ^^
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Re: Bowser's World Alpha 2.3 (Warnings? Yes! All of them!)

Postby QuizmasterBos » Tue Sep 11, 2012 12:19 am

BulmaSSJ4 Wrote:I still dont get what you mean, he has lots of spoiler tags, just like me.
You have to open them there to if you want to read anything but the very latest update.


I meant how he details his updates a bit more, like:
-Added enemy x
-Added sex scene for enemy x
-Fixed goomba glitch

The stuff he puts in spoilers are usually either older stuff, you know updates for version 1.1, 1.2 etc. or miscellaneous things that are useful the first time, but you already know after checking them once before, like what this game is.

Hope that makes things a bit more clear.
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Re: Bowser's World Alpha 2.3 (Warnings? Yes! All of them!)

Postby BulmaSSJ4 » Tue Sep 11, 2012 12:55 am

Well, when i say tiny fixes, i mean pretty uninterresting stuff, like little graphic flaws and stuff like that.
If there are any big news, that i dont leave unannounced as a "secret", i will put them good visible on the first post.
You dont have to worry that you miss anything realy interresting... game breaking... innovative... or porn ^^
(As long as you read at least the "news" spoilers. They are in spoilers because thats what the news are, spoilers.
Maybe some ppl wanna figure stuff out on their own in the future ^^)

Btw: Glad you like the mouse. I was kinda thinking of "Link's awakening" when i did that XD
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