Lizardwoman voice acting sample

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What do you think of her performance?

★★★★★ Dick-stiffening!
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★★★★ Good, but not great.
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★★★ So-so.
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★★ Meh.
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★ Hated it.
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Re: Lizardwoman voice acting sample

Postby dryingpole » Wed Dec 29, 2010 1:34 am

Uhm... damn... That was very good, and I certainly hope we see more of this.
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Re: Lizardwoman voice acting sample

Postby Crossbow1701 » Wed Dec 29, 2010 4:03 am

how did you get it?
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Re: Lizardwoman voice acting sample

Postby trunks2585 » Wed Dec 29, 2010 4:29 am

honestly, it sounds like a human trying too hard to impersonate a snake. Either she needs to get the full snake voice down, not just rolling the S sounds, or don't bother with it at all. BTW that recording was pretty low, even with my headphones on and the volume up higher than I normally have it. Last we never said we were going to use voice acting...
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Re: Lizardwoman voice acting sample

Postby Oriandu » Wed Dec 29, 2010 5:54 am

She's fucking atrocious. Sounds unbelievably bored with what she's reading... it's got that whole "you can soooo tell she's reading" thing going on.
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Re: Lizardwoman voice acting sample

Postby Digfree » Wed Dec 29, 2010 7:07 am

I am sorry to do this, but it really gave me a pleasant laugh, I am easily entertained by graphs that resemble sex organs, that are ironically about sex.

P.S. I love her voice, but it is hard to imagine the game having the voice, it sounds good, but would be out of place.
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Re: Lizardwoman voice acting sample

Postby Balzac » Wed Dec 29, 2010 9:12 am

They may not be handling any voice acting, but Constructive criticism can't be that hard to find around here.
The voice is... spectacular. The acting - could certainly be better.
What's been said is still true, the lizard thing either needs to be better or none at all, personally, I vote no.
It also sounds less genuine than it could be. Like reading rather than speaking.

I don't have terrible amounts of experience with this particular type of acting, all I can say is that she sounds cramped, confined, definitely scripted.

I think that with practice, this could be something to be pitched as a sort of extra. Give the Dubbing an on/off switch, reward a sexy voice (and the owner) for a little hard work, please both sides of the gamut.

Its a sound theory, anyhow.
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Re: Lizardwoman voice acting sample

Postby Mr Meh » Wed Dec 29, 2010 10:12 am

Digfree Wrote:I love her voice, but it is hard to imagine the game having the voice, it sounds good, but would be out of place.

I second this motion. It's a good voice but it would feel out of place and awkward.
Hey it was a good idea at the time, so it's not my fault that they think it's illegal.
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Re: Lizardwoman voice acting sample

Postby Surskit » Wed Dec 29, 2010 5:09 pm

She has the capacity to do it, but like others said, it sounds like she's reading it and not feeling out the character. Like the sssss at the end of most of those words comes off as "okay reading, reading, reading, OH she's a lizard woman and there's an s ther- SSSSSSSSS!!!"
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Re: Lizardwoman voice acting sample

Postby super8crazy » Thu Dec 30, 2010 3:53 am

the laugh in the end is so not needed.
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Re: Lizardwoman voice acting sample

Postby Crossbow1701 » Thu Dec 30, 2010 4:30 am

super8crazy Wrote:the laugh in the end is so not needed.


agreed.
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Re: Lizardwoman voice acting sample

Postby Crossbow1701 » Thu Dec 30, 2010 4:31 am

super8crazy Wrote:the laugh in the end is so not needed.


agreed.
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Re: Lizardwoman voice acting sample

Postby Digfree » Thu Dec 30, 2010 5:08 am

super8crazy Wrote:the laugh in the end is so not needed.


I looked up some of her other works, oddly she laughs like that at the end of most of her porn lines, kinda weird lol.
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Re: Lizardwoman voice acting sample

Postby Atemisc » Thu Dec 30, 2010 9:51 pm

She had that kind of deeper voice that turns me off completely. But that's just how my tastes are. I guess it could work for the "sexy vixen" type. But I don't like it. I prefer lighter sounding voices.
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Re: Lizardwoman voice acting sample

Postby Renara » Thu Dec 30, 2010 11:33 pm

I had this PMed to me as well but I'll say publicly too; it's a good attempt and a nice voice, but the main problem is that we're not currently planning any spoken dialogue, certainly not this early on. If we were to add spoken dialogue we'd want to do it all in one go so that we can record the lines as consistently as possible, but we've not got any plans for this right now.
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Re: Lizardwoman voice acting sample

Postby Sleepnir » Fri Dec 31, 2010 12:08 am

Atemisc Wrote:She had that kind of deeper voice that turns me off completely. But that's just how my tastes are. I guess it could work for the "sexy vixen" type. But I don't like it. I prefer lighter sounding voices.


Exactly this.
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Re: Lizardwoman voice acting sample

Postby Rogue 909 » Wed Jan 05, 2011 5:56 pm

Personally I like her voice.

With a little more work could an interesting addition. The laugh at the end wouldn't really be out of place either (the voice role isn't exactly a nice person so they probably would laugh at poor Kyrstal).
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Re: Lizardwoman voice acting sample

Postby trunks2585 » Tue Jan 11, 2011 7:51 am

Leave the character personalities and motives up to me, ok? Overall it's better to leave stuff open to interpitation, let people decide for themselves if the first lizard girl is helping you, or being a bitch to you.
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Re: Lizardwoman voice acting sample

Postby bleeduntildeath » Tue Jan 11, 2011 8:21 am

sounds like dawn bennet of foamy the squrrel fame, not germaine, but that new succubus character, anyway hisssss is lazy, and her voice isn't really that good, I don't mean to come down on her, but that isn't the voice I expect from the lizard girl
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Re: Lizardwoman voice acting sample

Postby Acidrayne360 » Wed Jan 12, 2011 1:09 am

You know, maybe voices AREN'T a good idea? When I think about what the lizgirls' voices would sound like, I imagine that their voice would sound Naga-like...Raspy, yet still feminine, and that doesn't really fit how sexy the lizgirls look...And for those who don't study creatures of myth and legend like I do, a Naga is a snake person.
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Re: Lizardwoman voice acting sample

Postby ShatterPalm » Wed Jan 12, 2011 2:25 pm

yeah, wouldn't it be better if it was a text based game? it would be out faster, since you wouldn't have to deal with voice acting.
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