Mr.D's Krystal Ball Slide-show and Mr.D´s characters

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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby KaTsuO_O » Wed Dec 15, 2010 1:32 am

Yea those leg things was way more awesome than feet is so i would like to see them back again.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Reaver » Wed Dec 15, 2010 1:59 am

yeah i think the leg things would go better too
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Darek » Wed Dec 15, 2010 8:04 am

The first Arceus is absolutely awesome! Keep up the good work!
Unfortunately I am not too fond of the second version. For some reason she seems far too...muscle-y; and her china area looks more like a beard in the second version...
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Wed Dec 15, 2010 1:38 pm

Ok I uploaded an Arceus2 .fla file in my first post.(it is actualy my third Arceus model and it has both leg types).

And here is my Agunimon model that I am working on (I will have to remake it into 3/4 view)
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby KaTsuO_O » Wed Dec 15, 2010 2:13 pm

One word, Awesome!
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby haloman » Wed Dec 15, 2010 2:14 pm

He looks less for fucking and more for kicking serious ass. :lol:
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Wed Dec 15, 2010 2:49 pm

Here is a little test run for my models. And guess what? the spikes are in the way............I will have to do something about that.
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Last edited by Mr D on Wed Dec 15, 2010 9:03 pm, edited 2 times in total.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby KaTsuO_O » Wed Dec 15, 2010 3:10 pm

I looks great, and i dont think that the spikes are in the way as far as i can see.

But you need to fix her back hand.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby trunks2585 » Wed Dec 15, 2010 8:19 pm

I'm not gonna lie, his head is too small for the body.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Wed Dec 15, 2010 9:09 pm

trunks2585 Wrote:I'm not gonna lie, his head is too small for the body.


OK I made his head a bit bigger this time (You can see it in model test scene) and here is a .fla
1 game (oh I mean story slideshow -_-) and 5 flash loop FINISHED...fuck yea
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby trunks2585 » Wed Dec 15, 2010 10:23 pm

i don't have flash, so i can't open the file, just so you know.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Sat Dec 18, 2010 11:59 pm

Next on my list is pokemorph Arcanie. Lets see how that will turn out. ;)

I think that my Arceus model still needs more work but I think that I will get back to it later.
Trust is that my experience with flash up to this point were 0 (zero) so yeah. What you can see here are my first works.
1 game (oh I mean story slideshow -_-) and 5 flash loop FINISHED...fuck yea
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Sun Dec 19, 2010 7:13 pm

Here is a litle preview on my Arcanine. It is not as good as I wanted it to be but this is the limit of my skills......and I still have to finish the legs as you can see.
1 game (oh I mean story slideshow -_-) and 5 flash loop FINISHED...fuck yea
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sun Dec 19, 2010 7:52 pm

Looks amazing but i think the hair on her legs goes to far up on to her leg and I also think it should be longer but other than that its just amazing.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby trunks2585 » Sun Dec 19, 2010 10:40 pm

yeah looks like you just didn't get around to finishing up her legs, i'd also keep it so the fur only comes off the sides/backs of the legs instead of wrapping all the way around. otherwise i think this looks pretty amazing.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Sun Dec 19, 2010 11:34 pm

Ok here is my Arcanine model animated to show that she works. As for the legs I decited to use legs from Krystal model and just add a little fur. So far I thinks that it works better like this.

Btw the .fla to this will be in my first post.
1 game (oh I mean story slideshow -_-) and 5 flash loop FINISHED...fuck yea
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby OwnerOfSuccuby » Mon Dec 20, 2010 12:46 am

She is really really good ;) :mrgreen: I like her Image

But left hand looks a little strange i think - when move.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Mon Dec 20, 2010 1:24 am

OwnerOfSuccuby Wrote:She is really really good ;) :mrgreen: I like her Image

But left hand looks a little strange i think - when move.


You are right about that hand. The animation is just something I did just to show how the model work and that it works ,so the movements arent really that smooth.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Xanatos » Mon Dec 20, 2010 3:44 am

I think it looks perfect except something about the fur on the left elbow dosent match up to the one on the right elbow(left elbow has more yellow fur) when you look at them altough this may be deliberate due to the perspective i suppose.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby swirls » Mon Dec 20, 2010 6:23 pm

I think it'd probably look nicer to have the fur on her ankles going down instead of up. Otherwise, not bad!
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