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Re: foxy caper

Postby toddymon » Thu Dec 02, 2010 2:44 am

okay i need help with this one. what should obsidian look like. what is her style of clothes all of this. i need a suggestion. {also a little help on the plot}
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Re: foxy caper

Postby Nightmenace » Thu Dec 02, 2010 2:56 am

i thought u were making her black and gold?? as for clothing u should make her wear one of those skimpy cloaks :)
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Re: foxy caper

Postby Nightmenace » Thu Dec 02, 2010 2:59 am

i thought u were making her black and gold??? as for clothing u should have her wear one of those skimpy silk see through dress-cloak things i dont know what their called >.< but sorta like that gold trophy armor that krystal has in LoK
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Re: foxy caper

Postby toddymon » Thu Dec 02, 2010 3:00 am

i am making her black and gold. but will she look exactly the same as krystal? or have certain other traits to tell her apart though the veil sounds good.
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Re: foxy caper

Postby Nightmenace » Thu Dec 02, 2010 3:08 am

well u should make her bigger than krystal (taller not fatter) bigger tits just for kicks XD she should have messier fur and her face should be...mean looking i guess lol with like a "naughty girl" expression, thats all i got atm so ya :P
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Re: foxy caper

Postby toddymon » Thu Dec 02, 2010 3:16 am

thats fine. ill work on her. later. for now im continueing the story.

Upon escaping his pursuers fox tries to get to the sharpclaw village so that he can save krystal. However he is captured along the way by slavers.
“hey look what I caught sis!” a mino says “a hot one!” the slaver says “looks like hes already got some metal on him” she says flicking the amorotus “well its always in me to be a good Samaritan, why don’t we return him. And maybe get a reward in turn”
Dragged back to the caravan fox is once again subjected to rape. However this time fox is saved by the unslaved {for lack of better name} when they attack the caravan and save the slaves. Taking them back to their cave hide out. Here fox can find reprieve from his future adventures buy items, and sell things he has gathered. He will also receive orders from harogus a veteran male who was once the sex slave of a sadistic queen. And is also said to be the only one to survive the forest of painful love. He tells you that he will have scouts look out for krystal, and that he would ask fox to stay in the camp. Of course fox cant do that so harogus gives him a quest. His son is still being held by his previous captors. Several attempts have been made to try and save him but none have been successful. He asks fox to save his son. Then gives him the entry pass, giving fox the ability to come and go as he pleases. But he is not to come back until the son is saved.
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Re: foxy caper

Postby Nightmenace » Thu Dec 02, 2010 4:05 am

another kickass chunk of story right there :P

ps. OMFG i accidently double posted again...can someone mod that first one out pretty plz lol
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Re: foxy caper

Postby LiKrySo412 » Thu Dec 02, 2010 4:44 am

toddymon Wrote:okay i need help with this one. what should obsidian look like. what is her style of clothes all of this. i need a suggestion. {also a little help on the plot}

As Nightmenace said, you should make her taller, change the hairstyle (Long hair, maybe?) and the clothes... you (maybe "we") will think about it later. :lol:

trunks2585 Wrote:no offense but don't you think the latest design for the amorotus is a bit girly looking? I think you should stick to the gold color and make the jewls a more masculine color, like rubies or something.


Yeah... it was supposed to look like platinum or at least silver, but my AMAZING FLASH SKILLS *cough*isuck*cough* weren´t enough amazing...
What about this version?
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No locks... yet... again...lol
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Re: foxy caper

Postby toddymon » Thu Dec 02, 2010 5:00 am

i think that one looks great.though he may have also meant its design, im not sure. any way yeah i think ill give obsidean long hair. and maybe tie her tail in a different way *like how krystals has the bands, maybe ill make obsidians a spiral going down her tail.
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Re: foxy caper

Postby LiKrySo412 » Thu Dec 02, 2010 7:56 am

2nd try...
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Just the central design, the locks, and stuff will be made... eventually...
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Re: foxy caper

Postby toddymon » Thu Dec 02, 2010 8:34 am

yeah i like that one. dont know what trunks will say but i think its good.
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Re: foxy caper

Postby LiKrySo412 » Thu Dec 02, 2010 10:52 am

Today´s Random Question:
Were-Bunny-Bat´s Ears (During teh Day...)
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Re: foxy caper

Postby trunks2585 » Thu Dec 02, 2010 1:34 pm

The necklace thing looks fine to me now.
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Re: foxy caper

Postby Nightmenace » Thu Dec 02, 2010 1:44 pm

necklace looks awesome! long hair idea is awesome too, the hair should prolly go down to her tits maybe even longer :P unless that would be hard to animate, as for the bunny-bat ear thing... i like the left one
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Re: foxy caper

Postby toddymon » Thu Dec 02, 2010 5:28 pm

okay im working on the obsidian concept now. ...and i think tht ill try the bunnybats as well and see if that works out. wow guys. i really hope this oen comes out good because i literally had to reteach myself how to draw for obsidian. had to change my very point of view and everything. a harder time with a picture i have yet to have.
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Re: foxy caper

Postby Aon » Thu Dec 02, 2010 11:49 pm

hows about these :idea:
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Re: foxy caper

Postby Aon » Thu Dec 02, 2010 11:54 pm

i will post a thread for you guys under thee title FC V0<.2
IDK why it won't let me use the pics i got.... :cry:
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Re: foxy caper

Postby Nightmenace » Fri Dec 03, 2010 12:33 am

glad to hear it! i cant count how many times i saw u mention things about foxy caper being dead but now it seems to be making a comeback! :)
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Were-bunny-bats / Sliptongues

Postby LiKrySo412 » Fri Dec 03, 2010 12:52 am

toddymon Wrote:okay im working on the obsidian concept now. ...and i think tht ill try the bunnybats as well and see if that works out.

Meanwhile...
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Everything in this sliptongue can be changed, so feel free to say anything about it/her and i will (eventually) try to fix/add it.
Ears WILL be redone
Clothes WILL be changed
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Re: Were-bunny-bats / Sliptongues

Postby Nightmenace » Fri Dec 03, 2010 12:55 am

[quote="LiKrySo412"
Everything in this sliptongue can be changed, so feel free to say anything about it/her and i will (eventually) try to fix/add it.
Ears WILL be redone
Clothes WILL be changed[/quote]

um....thats a sliptongue?... looks more like a "bunnybat" to me

but anyways the blue eyebrows look retarded and her bra is attached to nothing...in reality it would just be floating there lol

other than those 2 things its a nice looking model :D
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