The Adventures of Captain Cutie(5/2/14)

[Avenger]

Coconuts? You should make better models, especially in the orgy-Just suggesting.
~~You can right-click the game and press play to skip some stuff~~

[nemoudeis]

This game isn't so bad. But I just think it's strange a girl who always lived on he island is white wereas the captain, who just arrived here, is black. Just saying.

[Lucky777]

If you go with "fair skinned" and "tanned" instead of white and black, that statement is logical and also not even racist.

[oneeyezero]

This game isn't so bad. But I just think it's strange a girl who always lived on he island is white wereas the captain, who just arrived here, is black. Just saying.

Very observant of you. Id give you a cookie but I’m greedy and don’t want to share. That’s actually part of the story line, you’ll see… If I ever get enough free time to work on this again. Sigh… Sometimes I hate real life.

[nemoudeis]

If you go with "fair skinned" and "tanned" instead of white and black, that statement is logical and also not even racist.

Thank you for enriching my vocabulary.

[Icaelus]

If you go with "fair skinned" and "tanned" instead of white and black, that statement is logical and also not even racist.

Thank you for enriching my vocabulary.

Amen to that. Wait, nevermind. I ain't even Christian. Game isn't bad, but animation and art needs to be worked on a little.

[proxxie]

I really like it. I just wanted to say that, since too much "constructive criticism" at the start of a project can be quite discouraging. The spider motif is sexay, and I look forward to seeing what you come up with next!

[Hip0krit]

Hoping for an update soon cant wait to play the second chapter.

[oneeyezero]

I really like it. I just wanted to say that, since too much "constructive criticism" at the start of a project can be quite discouraging. The spider motif is sexay, and I look forward to seeing what you come up with next!

Thank you, I’m very happy you like it. I know that it still needs a crap load of work but I’m getting it little by little.

Hoping for an update soon cant wait to play the second chapter.

I’m working on it but I keep changing my mind about things, crying myself to sleep for not having an artistic bone in my body …. You know normal stuff. I’ll have more time to work on this during the summer so the update will most likely be around then.

[Hip0krit]

Hoping for an update soon cant wait to play the second chapter.

I’m working on it but I keep changing my mind about things, crying myself to sleep for not having an artistic bone in my body …. You know normal stuff. I’ll have more time to work on this during the summer so the update will most likely be around then.[/quote]

Its all good i shall lie in wait.

[oneeyezero]

Chapter 2 has been added.
Haven’t changed anything in the first chapter yet so just skip to #2
No sex yet ,hoping to get game over scenes up within the next few weeks.
This chapter was me just experimenting with platforming and vcam (which I hate now)
As always I welcome criticism and suggestions

[Biles]

Well in that case, I have a problem in the chase scene where our protagonist is running away from the further mutated plant. Once I pass the bouncing spiky ball obstacles, the next scene is practically instant kill. I suspect it's because you have the plant and the hero in one spot when that new scene begins. You should've pushed the mutant plant back further away, even if it means out of the vcam scene.

[oneeyezero]

6/19/
Added sex scenes to chapter 2
Went back to ch1 and redrew "some" backgrounds(still looks crappy, have to learn how to draw one of these days)
Resized some enemies
Screwed around with the vcam and I think I got it to work better.
Going to start working on ch3 soon.

Well in that case, I have a problem in the chase scene where our protagonist is running away from the further mutated plant. Once I pass the bouncing spiky ball obstacles, the next scene is practically instant kill. I suspect it's because you have the plant and the hero in one spot when that new scene begins. You should've pushed the mutant plant back further away, even if it means out of the vcam scene.

Fixed … I think. If there are any other major problems let me know.

[oneeyezero]

Been tweaking my captain model a bit. Fixed up her legs/arms and gave her a new butt (think I’ll make it bigger later ). I also gave her hands, not very good hands …..but it’s a start. I know you guys didn’t like my people models before so I wanted to fix them up a bit before the next chapter is released. Soooooo what do you think? Better, worse, am I improving or should I burn my computer and never touch flash again? I’m open to advice on ways to improve my models( especially for hands/feet). For reference here are my previous models.

[Biles]

Don't give up learning Flash just yet. You're only weakness is being able to draw characters, but you've definitely been improving the designs so far. Here's one advice, try to keep the line thickness consistent. And if you need to learn how to do some additional human animations such as run or crawl, check out my sig.

[oneeyezero]

Don't give up learning Flash just yet. You're only weakness is being able to draw characters, but you've definitely been improving the designs so far. Here's one advice, try to keep the line thickness consistent. And if you need to learn how to do some additional human animations such as run or crawl, check out my sig.

Thanks for the advice; your Animation Kit was very helpful. I used it to make a new running animation. The hardest part was getting the butt to look right. Think I’ll try redoing the walking and still animations next. Once again thanks, if anyone has any other advice to help me improve I’m willing to listen.

[Biles]

Well, it's definitely getting there alright. What you can do is try to make the legs run smoother so they're less jerky. I'm gonna assume this is WIP (work in progress) because you haven't animated the arms yet, right?

[jikkplo]

maybe it's just me, but does the camera constantly seem to be slowly scrolling downwards for anyone else starting at the spider caves?

[Avenger]

Great Job on the plant. :]
Can you make Cutie walk faster? Just a suggestion.

[oneeyezero]

Yes these are still a work in progress, just wanted to get some opinions. How would I make the animation smother? Just add more frames? How’s this, little better? I fooled around with the butt a bit as well, which looks better left or right?