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Re: foxy caper

Postby LiKrySo412 » Wed Dec 01, 2010 11:04 am

i guess that whoever enters the tent when fox wakes up will give him teh amorotus, "i enjoy prey with a little fight in it" :lol:
I changed the question in the fox costume post.
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Re: foxy caper

Postby toddymon » Wed Dec 01, 2010 4:11 pm

{huzzah FTW} yeah im pretty sure it will be the cheiftess who gives you the first amorotus {since im starting to think that later on in the game you get a better version. maybe from obsidian} im alos thinking of removing the choice {since it seems kind of silly since fox cant resist with the amorotus on any way until later in the game.} as i said before over time and with experience he will slowly gain the ability too resist but until then he cant do much. {though if i can i still want to keep the names for the chapters. they just feel so...right}
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Re: foxy caper

Postby LiKrySo412 » Wed Dec 01, 2010 4:17 pm

WARNING QUESTION SPAMMING! ZOMG!
Random Question: This "Amorotus" is a jewel, right? How it looks like? Original Color? it´s In a necklage? a bracelet? a golden and shiiiny armor?
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Re: foxy caper

Postby toddymon » Wed Dec 01, 2010 4:26 pm

h. teh amorotus looks like... let me see if i can get a good repersentation.

well until i draw one myself this is as close as im going to get.
Image just not nearly as fancy since it is a slave item. or atleast until he gets his upgrade to veteran slave or something.

i also thought that some slave bracelets would be cool to. like this one
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or this one
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Re: foxy caper

Postby LiKrySo412 » Wed Dec 01, 2010 4:49 pm

Something Like This?
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Re: foxy caper

Postby toddymon » Wed Dec 01, 2010 4:54 pm

well teh necklace was thicker in my minds eye but essentially yes. later on in the game he will get the royal one. which will have slots for the four other ormas from the 4 mistresses {debatebly obsidian kalypso midna and rouge}
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Re: foxy caper

Postby LiKrySo412 » Wed Dec 01, 2010 5:04 pm

Thicker... Done
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Re: foxy caper

Postby toddymon » Wed Dec 01, 2010 5:12 pm

yup. thats more like it. the chain also has a lock on it.
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Re: foxy caper

Postby LiKrySo412 » Wed Dec 01, 2010 5:13 pm

wrong pic (lol) check it again
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Re: foxy caper

Postby toddymon » Wed Dec 01, 2010 5:17 pm

yeah i saw it. it still needs a lock on it. but it is very good. almost exactly how i imagined it. no what? never mind forget the lock. i dont really think we need it.
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Re: foxy caper

Postby toddymon » Wed Dec 01, 2010 10:04 pm

okay i tried continuing the plot a little. tell me what you think

ch 1: going through booty camp

fox awakens after the crash to find himself tied to a pole with his hands bound and a muzzle over his mouth, in what appears to be a tent in a war camp of some kind and telling by its size and how it is adorned and furnished he distinguishes it to be the tent of a cheiftess of sorts. soon after you see the cheiftess herself enter the tent.

"ah awake i see. Good. Being able to survive a crash like that must mean that you are a pretty tough one. a trait much desired for the slaves of the ladies of the (sliptongues i guess, ill get a stable name later). So before we get started with your initiation i feel i must say that any attempts to escape will be futile. All of you weapons were destroyed in the crash and you craft was rendered useless in te collision when you crashed. But still, since i would like to know just how i should treat you, i will ask you. Will you comply to us or resist? (Choice) know that either way we will take advantage of you, and i wouldn't mind if you resisted. i enjoy prey with a little fight in it, so what will it be?
*If resist the lizard cheiftess will give fox a tit job. Then once he is aroused she will mount him having rough intercourse.*
*If comply she will lay on the floor and take the muzzle off of foxes mouth. She will open her legs and push foxes face into her crotch allowing him to lick her. After she cums the first time on his face fox will take the opportunity and fuck her missionary style with his hands still tied behind his back. Once he cums he will slump over onto her*
*huff* *huff* oh you are quite the catch alright. I think you will do quite well in your new home. But first *she puts the amorotus on fox*. Girls here like men with stamina, and this will ensure that you never run out. However don’t push yourself. I don’t want to have my ladies dragging you back here when you pass out. You are free to rove around the village now *to other liz girls untie fox from the pole* I look forward to our future “acquaintances”.
*inorder to get through the camp you must charm several key women. Occasionally you will run into a random encounter but the women here will be easy to please *I mean come on it’s the first level. And when I say random encounters I mean a random girl may come off screen and decide to please herself with you like in the original kay and the magic sword.*
the first you will have to please is the chef, the second a new recruit, the third the armory girl *upon which he will earn a knife*, the fifth one of the elite guards and the last the cheiftess’ sister. The random encounters will give you exp and if your lucky a minor orma but upon reaching lvl {lets go with 3} the rewards they give you will be insufficient. The main girls will give you far better rewards. All in all you should be able to reach lvl 4
*upon your return* good work, you didn’t stay an amateur for long. With you amongst us Im sure there will be fewer lonely nights. And I hope to have you stay with us for a long time.
*the sun is setting and the camp prepares for sleep. Fox who is getting water for a bath *since he is now a slave.* over hears a conversation amongst some slip tongues about a neighboring sharp claw village having captured a particularly prized blue fox. Upon which fox will decide to make his escape in. once he believes that all the women are asleep he uses the knife he took from the armory to undo his binds. Then hiding it carefully in a sheath he made to conceal it he will attempt to sneak out by out foxing the ladies. He will have to get past the guards patrolling the camp. However if he is caught he will be raped and returned to the tent upon which he will have to escape again.
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Re: foxy caper

Postby LiKrySo412 » Wed Dec 01, 2010 10:36 pm

toddymon Wrote:*she puts the amorotus on fox*

Speaking of which...
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No locks...yet.
I didn´t knew how many quasiormas are, but i guess 12 are enough...
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Re: foxy caper

Postby Nightmenace » Wed Dec 01, 2010 10:47 pm

that story sounds awesome to me, with really well thought out RPG style gameplay

ps. have u attempted to make a model/drawing for Obsidian? i wanna see what she would look like :P
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Re: foxy caper

Postby toddymon » Wed Dec 01, 2010 11:34 pm

hm. thats a good idea. ill get on that. but the problem is i still dotn have a scanner. oh well the quasiormas are something im still looking into. but yeah twelve should do. by the way it looks amazing. hwo long have you been doing work like this?
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Re: foxy caper

Postby LiKrySo412 » Thu Dec 02, 2010 12:14 am

about... *Starts counting* 3 Hours ago. :lol:
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Re: foxy caper

Postby Cold Flame » Thu Dec 02, 2010 12:19 am

I really like that plot you just posted. Sounds very alluring.
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Re: foxy caper

Postby toddymon » Thu Dec 02, 2010 12:32 am

sweet. i congratulate you then. very good work.
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Re: foxy caper

Postby trunks2585 » Thu Dec 02, 2010 1:20 am

no offense but don't you think the latest design for the amorotus is a bit girly looking? I think you should stick to the gold color and make the jewls a more masculine color, like rubies or something.
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Re: foxy caper

Postby Nightmenace » Thu Dec 02, 2010 1:48 am

true, the point of this is fox fucking girls so we do want fox looking as heterosexual as possible :lol:

how bout u change the colour of those 4 pink pieces to say... a green or red? and keep the actual necklace itself gold like trunks said
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Re: foxy caper

Postby toddymon » Thu Dec 02, 2010 1:55 am

well i dotn mind it. but i guess your right. fox is manly and we cant be tainting that.
also still open to story board and plot suggestions.
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