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Evil/Good Krystal

Postby Favelor » Sun Nov 28, 2010 5:25 am

was wondering if someone could make something out of these like a mini game or something (i suck with Flash only good with ideas) [NOTE] i didnt make these i found them all i did was invert the colors and add a VERY SMALL little detail to them (doubt you can find it)

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Re: Evil/Good Krystal

Postby bosworth115 » Sun Nov 28, 2010 6:16 am

The first set is pretty nice, too bad I have no clue about animation and such :(
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Re: Evil/Good Krystal

Postby Oriandu » Sun Nov 28, 2010 9:11 am

Pretty sure people will need a little more to go on than this.
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Re: Evil/Good Krystal

Postby toddymon » Sun Nov 28, 2010 11:50 pm

all i see is inverted colors {though kudos on the sindoll pic in the first one *unless you took it from one of my posts*} i think that there needs to be more in terms of content on the subject.try describing what you thing dark kry should look like. and if you need help clarifying im open to give such aid.
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Re: Evil/Good Krystal

Postby Cold Flame » Mon Nov 29, 2010 12:15 am

Do you mean something like a dark/evil counterpart of Krystal who shows up to (sexily) oppose our heroine, or an evil version of the character with edgier physical characteristics and personality, or what? Seems like these kinds of ideas have potential.
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Re: Evil/Good Krystal

Postby Favelor » Mon Nov 29, 2010 5:33 am

hhhmmmm..lets see what i can come up with. i would like the dark/evil counterpart of Krystal to be like a ruler of the planet were the shapclaw live. (her story could be that Dark/Evil fox has died and she kidnaped the good fox to take his place.) we know that we play Good krystal (Good blue Evil Darker) and trying to regroup with Fox but scales has taken her. ill start the story (my idea) were the game was left off in the dark woods.

As Krystal makes her way through the woods she gets a feeling that she is being watch. As she travels farther into the woods the runs in to Dogs/wolfs with 2 dicks. she is raped(or not refering to the like "Why Get fucked") then she runs into the leader of the wolfs and gives her a test. survive his cock!(like in the game K Fox and the magic sword) krystal lives and proseeds to a place very peaceful at first but she quickly relises that its not. there she finds someone who looks just like her (evil krystal) and she has Fox. Krystal has take the dicks of both Scales and the wolf leader(does he have a name?) so she thinks she can handle anything. (possably this could be were the horses come in[ forgot the link]) she is given a test to fuck something (again mayby the horses). After she passes the test Evil and Good krystals git into a fight wich quickly turns into girl on girl action!( before this happens the krystals make a bet to free Fox or good krystal becomes the sex slave of the hole planet!) evil krystal has lost but betrays good krystal. she is then forced to take 2 sharp claws and 2 wolfs!(the sucking off pics i posted) after she passes the T-rex she fucked earler comes back but being color blind fucks the Evil Krystal this is our heros chance to excape. as Fox and krystal are running back to the ship to call for help they are stoped by Scales and the Wolf leader. she then sucks scales and pussy fucks the wolf. then they trade places. after cumming in her twice she can barely move but Fox is there to help (lol too many dicks :P ) as they make there way back to the ship scales and the wolf war back but this time Scales and the wolf leader are back but to help them (mayby) [or this] as the make there way back to the ship they are ambushed but by 2 dozen shapclaw! But the zorra (fish people) are ready to help! the zorra destract the shapclaw by fucking them. this bought Fox just enough time to call for help. after hideing in the woods for a few days help finally comes, But when the get there they find Fox and Krystal getting laid in the woods! they watch and after they finish they go back home.

i feel like i just wote the ending of the game! i sure as hell hope Playshapes has something better! anyways! for the game creaters PLZZZZZ take what you like and make something from it im really looking forward to it! (since i alsmot got a bonor just from writting this. also to Playshapes i posted this here for 2 reasons!

1 to help you guys!

2 to get a mini game going

hope you all enjoyed my little story (After the Cave) ill call it

PS. for the mark i added in that you cant find is a little Red dot (Red= i edited it Blue= i created it) its my marking :)
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Re: Evil/Good Krystal

Postby toddymon » Mon Nov 29, 2010 9:03 am

eh. story wise i give it a meh. im not sure about everyone else but an evil krystal who rules the planet? just sounds a little silly. it sounds a little shallow and is to based off of other things you've seen {i doubt we are going to put a sindoll pic inside the game} adn why is there a dark krystal to begin with? dark samus was created from samus. how did dark krystal come about? why is there a dark fox? {just sounds like wolf to me} and the color blind thing sounds like a stretch. im being a dick of a critique but i think it needs something a little more original.

heres what i came up with. dark krystal is actually a powerful sorceress who is an ancestor of krystal and ruled the land with her. when fox crash lands he crawls out and in his search for shelter falls into a cavern. inside the cavern is the tomb of the sorceress who swore that she would return one day to rule the land once more. far in the past she had a lover of noble heart. torn by this love for her but his will to defeat evil { and she was evil} the fox of the past was actually the one who sealed her since he couldnt bring himself to kill her. but the queen doesnt remember this her memory lost of when she was sealed. so when she awakens and sees fox {who somehow brings her back to life by most likely activating and ancient spell she put in place with his soul being similar in wave length to her lover.} she beleives him to be her lover of the past and takes him for her own telling sweet dreams of the two of them ruling the world. fox beleiving this to be krystal but shocked at her sudden ambition of course tries to resist {since hes good} and the queen reluctantly turns him evil by placing a jewel of an evil spirit upon him *for kicks lets call it the amorotus.* making him her evil lover {even though she actaully liked that good and strong willed part about fox. it made her wet for him}. i sort of thought it woudl be cool if it was liek a joint effort. similar to sphinx. at moments fox will have control over himself once more and can explore the castle finding secrets and as to how to defeat obsidian {thats what i chose to call dark krystal} while krystal herself works on the outside inorder to rescue fox from his fate.

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an ancient ancestor of krystal. she was called black Anubis. ruler of all lands. in every respect she looks similar to krystal. however she is black and gold instead of white and blue. and her powers of magic insurpassable. she was solely done in by foxus. her lover whose skill with the blade was comparable to none and was only rivaled by vulpin. obsidian was exetremely ambitious and wished to rule all she could see. but her love for foxus was the sole reason she held her hand. foxus was a pure soul and would not have such evil as that, fearing his perspective of her she would often visit him in disguise. changing her colors to blue and white and appearing as a servant girl assigned to him. however her ambition grew over time. and even her love for foxus was a becoming a waning hindrance. foxus, asked by the central armies to aid in repelling her faced her himself. a great battle was waged but foxus along with falconans aid was victorious in the end. however foxus, unable to deal the final blow. sealed the queen away in a tomb with the aid of peppernan the great mage rabbit and slipputh the black smith. however little known to the world. during one of the queens secretive visits to her love in guise a child was conceived, inorder to hide the truth from the world she fled the kingdom momentarily under the guise of a magical exodus, she gave birth to quartz by herself. returning to the kingdom with her quest fulfilled she hid the child by having it raised by one of her most trusted right hand, Kat. the queen though ambitious was not a terrible ruler, she just overreached her power. thus when the identity of the child was discovered she was bestowed the royal name of krystal which has been passed down to the descendants of obsidian, becoming the royal family of krystal.
{dont know why the hell i wrote this} *copy rights: this now belongs to the foxy caper*
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Re: Evil/Good Krystal

Postby rodvi » Mon Nov 29, 2010 4:07 pm

what if you had krystal and fox land in different places on the planet krystal lands right outside the sharpclaw camp and fox lands somewhere in the forest
krystal is of course found by a group of sharpclaws while fox is unconsius in the forest
krystal is taken captive by the sharpclaws and has to pleasure them in every way.
and after she has had a litle "fun" she overhears one of the liz girls say that the warriors found some weird guy in the forest and that unfortunately that person had some sort of BAMF gun and he blew most of the warriors to very smal pieces, krystal realises that person has to be fox and tries to get more information that means she has to use her "special skills" to get to know where fox is.
fox was captured by the remaining warriors and brought to their shaman (the shaman is a lizgirl) the shaman tries to cast a spell on fox so that he falls in love with her (or something like that) but that doesnt work, so after a little while the shaman finds out about fox and krystal and she tricks krystal into a magic lake that makes the shaman look exactly like krystal (only with darker colors) after that krystal is sent into a prison full of lustfull prisoners that she will have to please in order to get out, while that happens the "dark krystal"/shaman seduces fox and hypnotizes him
so when krystal gets out she has to "fight" the shaman and fox. i dont really know what i want the ending to be like so why don't someone else try to figure that out?
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Re: Evil/Good Krystal

Postby Favelor » Tue Nov 30, 2010 5:27 am

Toddymon. i really like what you wrote but i kinda like mine better. ive been trying to come up with a name for the dark Krystal and so far i got nothen good. i like the idea of her being a sorceress how ever i dont like how she is already dead. heres what i want but doubting ill get.

{The story of Dark Krystal(names PLZ all ideas are open)} for the time being ill call her just Krystal even though she is evil!

Krystal has ruled over the shapclaw and the wolfs with her evil magic for hundreds of years. with her magic she has raised an amry General Scales and Captin Wolf (he also needs a name or it could be wolf) the General is incharge of all the charpclaw and the founder of Good Krystal in the forest. the Captin is leader of all the double dicked wolfs (who would have guessed?? :P ) Krystal once had a lover who was killed in a war long ago. this lover looks just like Fox who crashed in the wolfs area. Krystal places a spell on Fox to make sure he stays with her. Krystal doesnt know that the good krystal her grand daughter is also here and being "treated" at the shapclaw area. Krystal has always wanted to rule everything she touched and saw. since she has ruled the land for hundreds of years (i think i forgot to say that shes immortal due to her magic)

thats preety much all i got. not too bad for makeing that up on the spot :D

Good and Evil the sex story of Fox

Krystal good and evil meet while evil krystal is fucking Fox. this makes Krystal (good) snap and that break out into a fight! Fox breaks it up since he is in love with Krystal (good) since he is still under the spell of evil krystal she licks him on his cheek. to prove that he is good krystal she drops on her knees and starts sucking Fox. this causes them to get REALLY horney and go into a 3way. Good Krystal now rideing Fox and evil Krystal getting her pussy licked puts a spell on Scales by mistake (not knowing he was there) this causes him to get hard and starts fucking Good Krystal in the ass. after the wolf sees this he charges in and starts fucking evil krystal in her ass since her pussy is bussy being licked by fox. evil Krystal puts a spell on fox being careful not to remove the current one, this makes him fall truely in love with the one who pleases him the most. after Fox finished in Good krystal and the wolf is evil krystal scales carries good krystal over to Foxs mouth to get her pussy licked and now its evil krystals turn to ride him. while this happening the wolf and scales are still fucking them but they are so turned on they dont care. after all of them cum (at the same time scales, wolf, Fox, good and evil krystal) scales and the wolf pass out and Fox wakes up the krystals (still horny) are now haveing a little girl on gril with strap ons evil krystal made (remember shes a sorceress) Fox is freed from the spells and takes Good Krystal home the Evil krystal being heart broken lives out her days ruleing over the wold now with Scales and Wolf fucking her (so the wolf and Scales are her new lovers) but this cant heal the pain of evil Fox (i really need names although i doubt evil Fox will be in the game) Krystal and fox return to the ship and call for help.


The only ideas i had for names were these

Krystal =Good AL
Krystel =bad EL

and to Rodvi i dont like the idea of her being a shammy.
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Re: Evil/Good Krystal

Postby toddymon » Tue Nov 30, 2010 5:45 am

isnt your description similar to mine? except the death of the lover. and then we run into the problem of how old is krystal then. how long ago did the lover die? all in all it sounds pretty the same i just went into more depth. {and the lover lived}
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Re: Evil/Good Krystal

Postby Acidrayne360 » Tue Nov 30, 2010 8:30 am

._. Could Evil Krystal be like a side quest, where there is a sharpclaw spiritual leader that casts a curse on Krystal and Evil Krystal is born from Krystal starting to enjoy all the fucking? Maybe like, a physical manifestation of all of Krystal's built up lust? I personally like my idea, cause it's quick, it's to the point, and it seems (To me.) like it's small enough to include in the final LoK game.
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Re: Evil/Good Krystal

Postby Kale » Tue Nov 30, 2010 9:04 am

Something big and dramatic with a large backstory isn't really fitting for a game like this, in my opinion. Something akin to what the above poster said, where Krystal is just released from the confines of her own will and allowed to indulge herself however she wants for a limited time, would be better in my opinion - it allows the player to experience a new aspect of gameplay, with Krystal perhaps being the quasi-dominant force in animations(Or perhaps simply grinning/smiling, instead of her more shocked gestures in the current version), while not interfering with whatever story is currently planned.

Rather than inverting Krystal's colours, or making her a dark version with black colours, I'd rather see them make her colours sharper. Rather than a blue/light blue, it should be a very in-your-face blue, much darker but not near black, perhaps keeping her lighter coloured areas the same colour as before. It's less cliche and, in my opinion, would look much better in the end, while keeping Krystal's overall appearance untouched - because, after all, what's the point of playing the Legend of KRYSTAL if we're going to change Krystal to look like something vastly different from her actual depiction?
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Re: Evil/Good Krystal

Postby Favelor » Wed Dec 01, 2010 5:04 am

3 things ill start off with Toddymon

i guess it is kinda like yours with a few differences, i coppied everything on this page after what i wrote yesterday. ill take all of that and edited it into one big thing and ill give credit to all of us :)

acid

love the idea! Crystel (evil krystal couldnt thing think of anything better) being the sex version of Krystal (the good one). anyone think they culd wip somethig up like the 1,2,3 file of samus with 3 different choises.

Kale

i like the idea but i just cant see it. mayby if you coppied the pics (right click one and hit save picture as) and edited it to show us that might help a little. atleast keep the backround i really like that one. (if your not a good editor like me jsut paint it up as best as you can)

asfor everyone who has helped so far i say THANK YOU! as i said earler ill make one big story and post it over the weekend when i have it finished (mayby sunday) this will allow us to get a good idea of what to do next with Crystel (evil one remember that) what needs to happen is someone needs to make something real easy (i know flash isnt something that happens over night but possably by the weekend mayby???) take what you like i dont care just dont say you created the pics cause i didnt even do that.

PS. Toddymon i didnt take these pics from you i found them while looking for other pics to help with other ideas on this game and thought i could start something.

thanks again and keep up the good work ill start working on a story line of Crystel and post it when im done.
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Re: Evil/Good Krystal

Postby toddymon » Wed Dec 01, 2010 6:30 am

crystel? -_-; you know you can use obsidian if you like.
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Re: Evil/Good Krystal

Postby Favelor » Thu Dec 02, 2010 5:08 am

well thats better than what i got. Obsidian it is :) by the way what do you think of Obsidian's lover being a skille warrior who dies in a war with the zorra king? and that would be how the zorra became sex slaves to the shapclaw
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Re: Evil/Good Krystal

Postby toddymon » Thu Dec 02, 2010 5:42 am

hm....yeah that actually sounds good. i think thats a good idea. go for it.
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Re: Evil/Good Krystal

Postby Favelor » Fri Dec 03, 2010 4:15 am

cool. im almost done with the story live of Obsidian and her lover (just going to call him eFox {evil fox}) i also added in another story. ill finsh it and post it when im done. i had alot of free time today so i got to work on it :) ill eather post it tommrow night or satarday night dont know yet. i want to make this one GOOD! and so for its good but not GOOD.
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Re: Evil/Good Krystal

Postby toddymon » Fri Dec 03, 2010 5:25 am

efox? -_-; you know i can help you in terms of names. vulox is my choice {pronounced vulecs}
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Re: Evil/Good Krystal

Postby Favelor » Fri Dec 03, 2010 5:34 am

works for me. but he has to stay a fox sine im haveing Fox awaken Obsidian. depends on how bussy i get tommrow ill probly be posting that story i created. still editing it a little more.
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Re: Evil/Good Krystal

Postby toddymon » Fri Dec 03, 2010 5:38 am

vulpes is the scientific name for fox. i just halved the two of them and put them together
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