Ridley?

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Re: Ridley?

Postby MrBear » Tue Sep 14, 2010 5:10 am

SteelSaurus Wrote:Alright, here's my Ridley so far. Now for the life of me I can't figure out what went wrong with his dick. It's the same angle as all the others, but why does it not sync with the torso?


Yeah the real problem is that hes just leaning forward. Maybe tilt his dick down a bit more? No idea how this works but just a suggestion.
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Re: Ridley?

Postby SteelSaurus » Tue Sep 14, 2010 7:16 am

I got it actually. I used the wrong pelvic set. Val's Ridley is more straight on. Shedra's had two, the one I used was at the 3/4 angle.
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Re: Ridley?

Postby Oakleaf » Tue Sep 14, 2010 10:10 pm

The only thing I really want changed is the face. It's killing me with its toothless mouth and soulless eyes.
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Re: Ridley?

Postby toddymon » Thu Sep 16, 2010 12:16 am

i dont know about toothless. but ridley is pretty soulless, not to mention heartless.
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Re: Ridley?

Postby SteelSaurus » Fri Sep 17, 2010 7:06 am

Ridley Update. It's not top notch, but I'm once again at a loss at figuring out what's wrong.
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Re: Ridley?

Postby toddymon » Fri Sep 17, 2010 7:08 am

itd say go a little farther and then double check in. right now the errors cant really differentiated from what is and not done yet.
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Re: Ridley?

Postby Valithan » Fri Sep 17, 2010 8:24 am

Looks really good so far, Steel. I dunno if I'd go so far as to say 'wrong' but at least as far maybe tweaking a few thinks to look better would be:

1) time down the mouth webbing so it ends at that corner of his upper mouth were it meets the ridge pink color.
2) Maybe reduce the size of his back lope a bit.
3) Rotate the shoulder socket area and have it connect to were the pink/purple rib/armor ends. There will be some cover up behind the pecktorals, so you'd erase a bit of it.
4) Narrow the tongue a bit and get the tip pointier.

5) finis hit up :P

If i'm not clear what I mean in the suggestions, I could prob overlay some arrows on a screen shot of your ridley progress.
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Re: Ridley?

Postby Thaedael » Fri Sep 17, 2010 8:29 am

http://metroid.wikia.com/wiki/Ridley
http://sdb.drshnaps.com/objects/7/1075/ ... Ridley.gif
http://metroidpower.tripod.com/sprites_ridley.html

If my laptop was working I would give you better sprite rip swith segmented limbs and animation tiles...
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Re: Ridley?

Postby SteelSaurus » Sat Sep 18, 2010 12:45 am

Thank you so much Thaed, those will help so much with the legs/feet/arms.

Val could you overlay what you mean exactly for points 1, and 2?
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Re: Ridley?

Postby Thaedael » Sat Sep 18, 2010 2:42 am

So far a lot looks good, the only major thing I don't like is the head. Here is a close up from one of the metroid mangas maybe to help inspire you.
http://images2.wikia.nocookie.net/__cb2 ... _Manga.jpg

I am looking at aquiring a laptop from my neighbor, if that works I can get some actual high quality sprite rips for you.
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Re: Ridley?

Postby Valithan » Sat Sep 18, 2010 10:26 pm

Just read over my previous message and noticed how terrible my typing is in that post o_O

anyway, here's a quick edit on those suggestions. I just did some copy/paste overlays to demonstrate the changes and then tossed on a red arrow to point at that area.
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Re: Ridley?

Postby SteelSaurus » Wed Sep 29, 2010 4:54 am

Highjacking the topic. Fixed the head and the tounge. Forgot the mouth part.

viewtopic.php?f=7&t=539&p=12669#p12669
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Re: Ridley?

Postby something » Wed Sep 29, 2010 3:27 pm

Imo Ridley shoulnd't fuck Samus. His Pingas is too big. He should grab her press her against a wall and lick her pussy and maybe finger her. Ridley would be good to fight as a boos
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Re: Ridley?

Postby SteelSaurus » Wed Oct 06, 2010 3:41 am

Hey Val?

Could you perhaps draw me a foot for Ridley and some hips. I messed up on my set of hips.
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Re: Ridley?

Postby Valithan » Wed Oct 06, 2010 4:22 am

I think I can punch something out tomorrow.
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Re: Ridley?

Postby SteelSaurus » Wed Oct 06, 2010 4:27 am

Perfect, tonight is Chozo and JB Suit.
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Re: Ridley?

Postby Valithan » Wed Oct 06, 2010 9:35 pm

The hip is just a 3 bone joint-segment on people, so I kept on the rest of the thigh for reference. I based the details more on Super Metroid and Fusion than Zero Mission this time. I also did a different save style on the image scan format, so maybe that'll work better than jpg compression. From what I see, his hip's are just a ball that meets together the split segments of his armored legs. I've also angled the leg upward so the foot can be more flat. I realized that the Zero Mission Ridley must be placing a terrible strain on his feet with that stance >.< so i've I'm thinking the low-hover style for Ridley (and not so much be flat on his feet) would probably be better.

The foot wasn't sized for any particular Ridley basis, so you may want to stretch/lengthen it to fit your Ridley.
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Re: Ridley?

Postby Oakleaf » Wed Nov 10, 2010 2:33 am

....I still don't like the face x) Would you like someone to redraw it for you? I could do it, it's just that.... well, I'm okay at drawing, but I don't know in what file format to upload it or in what program to make it >___>''
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Re: Ridley?

Postby Valithan » Wed Nov 10, 2010 5:18 am

pretty sure SS is on a hiatus till thanksgiving at this point, so I don't think he's going to be doing anything to update ridley this month. SS posts his work in .fla and .swf files, so I'm pretty sure he's working out of Flash, and unless you're saving into those formats, anything you posted, I think would still need to be redrawn in flash, so if you do draw something, it'd prob be best just to keep it simple, and clean line work.
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Re: Ridley?

Postby Oakleaf » Wed Nov 10, 2010 6:00 am

Good to know. Thank you for the information x)
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