Mr.D's Krystal Ball Slide-show and Mr.D´s characters

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Mr.D's Krystal Ball Slide-show and Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Mon Dec 13, 2010 3:00 pm

Here is my "Mr.D's Krystal Ball" - finished OH YEAH FINISHED AND NOT ON FUNNY-GAMES trolololol and now on funny-games D:
update: v 1.1 is out
added ch:10, fade effect and changed some buttons

Next game?- "Mr.D's Wizard training" if I will be able to finish this than note that this game is a continuation of the "Mr.D's Krystal Ball" game but will have nothing to do with Krystal or LoK type of animation.

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GOT A JOB...have to work 6 days a week...and have to work overtime... yea I really dont have any free time...or an working computer -_-
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Last edited by Mr D on Thu Mar 15, 2012 5:56 pm, edited 73 times in total.
1 game (oh I mean story slideshow -_-) and 5 flash loop FINISHED...fuck yea
My mini flashes link : http://legendofkrystal.com/forum/viewto ... f=7&t=1972
Also I am working on a project right now.But remember, it's a secret to everybody >:D
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Thaedael » Mon Dec 13, 2010 3:22 pm

Is it arceus...? [looks at the name of the .swf]

It looks pretty good so far, my only suggestion would be to touch up the black lines that aren't smooth, along with continuing them where they are cut out. Her right [our left] elbow looks a bit funny, but I guess it was done to allow rotation in other directions to allow for more variations. Either way good work on posting content within your first few posts!
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mechanios » Mon Dec 13, 2010 3:46 pm

The spikes on her hips, the back ones should be more at the angle of the front hip spikes. And other than what Thaed said, Good job. I like it. :D
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby KaTsuO_O » Mon Dec 13, 2010 4:49 pm

Good looking model but you may need to create the model in a other style to get it just right.

If you want to know how to code in actionscript 2.0 i can help you with that.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby bombsofglory » Mon Dec 13, 2010 7:51 pm

I like it, not sure which pokemon it is though. I would guess arceus. :)
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Mon Dec 13, 2010 8:08 pm

Ok time for improvements. Personaly I think I should work more on her face (jaws to be more exact) but I just dont know how to cnotinue. I did some smoothing....so yeah this is what i got so far.


IT´S ARCEUS (no 493 btw)
1 game (oh I mean story slideshow -_-) and 5 flash loop FINISHED...fuck yea
My mini flashes link : http://legendofkrystal.com/forum/viewto ... f=7&t=1972
Also I am working on a project right now.But remember, it's a secret to everybody >:D
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby bombsofglory » Mon Dec 13, 2010 8:26 pm

Mr D Wrote:Ok time for improvements. Personaly I think I should work more on her face (jaws to be more exact) but I just dont know how to cnotinue. I did some smoothing....so yeah this is what i got so far.


IT´S ARCEUS (no 493 btw)


That looks a lot better than the first, good job. :)
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby bosworth115 » Tue Dec 14, 2010 3:25 am

idk y but i'm uncomfortable with the feet....
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Reaver » Tue Dec 14, 2010 3:35 am

just dont show them in scenes
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:02 am

bosworth115 Wrote:idk y but i'm uncomfortable with the feet....


Hmmm you are right. Acurate does not allways mean better. Ok I will re-edit her feet so she will have shoes (the ones liz girls are wearing)
1 game (oh I mean story slideshow -_-) and 5 flash loop FINISHED...fuck yea
My mini flashes link : http://legendofkrystal.com/forum/viewto ... f=7&t=1972
Also I am working on a project right now.But remember, it's a secret to everybody >:D
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Ookamisuke » Tue Dec 14, 2010 11:25 am

I think her feet look fine. She is a pokemorph of Arceus, who does NOT have feet. I know, becvause I have a partyful of them (Thank YOU Action Replay).
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Tue Dec 14, 2010 12:19 pm

Ok here is Acerus with shoes and split to parts. If anyone wants a .fla from this than let me know.
1 game (oh I mean story slideshow -_-) and 5 flash loop FINISHED...fuck yea
My mini flashes link : http://legendofkrystal.com/forum/viewto ... f=7&t=1972
Also I am working on a project right now.But remember, it's a secret to everybody >:D
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby tarvos » Tue Dec 14, 2010 2:25 pm

any particular reason why we are now throwing what is essentially the pokemon god(dess now I guess) to the (link) wolves? its a good model but still.. :P
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Tue Dec 14, 2010 2:36 pm

tarvos Wrote:any particular reason why we are now throwing what is essentially the pokemon god(dess now I guess) to the (link) wolves? its a good model but still.. :P


Acerus is a pokemon god :shock: !?!?!? Wow didnt know that :? . I just did this model becouse there have been a lot of talk about pokemorphs on the forum so I just looked at the pokemon list and did the last one that was there. So yeah no reason why it had to be Acerus, just poor luck i guess.
1 game (oh I mean story slideshow -_-) and 5 flash loop FINISHED...fuck yea
My mini flashes link : http://legendofkrystal.com/forum/viewto ... f=7&t=1972
Also I am working on a project right now.But remember, it's a secret to everybody >:D
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby haloman » Tue Dec 14, 2010 2:44 pm

You know, i realy like her Mr D. your doing a great job so far. did you mae her compleatly by your self or did you take an "old" modle from somwere else and re-write it?
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Mr D » Tue Dec 14, 2010 3:07 pm

haloman Wrote:You know, i realy like her Mr D. your doing a great job so far. did you mae her compleatly by your self or did you take an "old" modle from somwere else and re-write it?


Basically this is just re-colored and re-edited Liz girl model. The only things I did from scratch was the spikes, the golden ornaments and the helmet. For the hair I used Hair model from Peach after I re-colored it and cut out some parts from it. I had the first model done in about 4 hours and 5 hours for the improved one.


Oh and btw I have one Male model that I am working on and that I made from scratch (here is a hint Digimon Frontier).
I will submit it after I am done with the "finer details".
1 game (oh I mean story slideshow -_-) and 5 flash loop FINISHED...fuck yea
My mini flashes link : http://legendofkrystal.com/forum/viewto ... f=7&t=1972
Also I am working on a project right now.But remember, it's a secret to everybody >:D
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby haloman » Tue Dec 14, 2010 3:47 pm

Wow. that sounds like fun! lol. Im sure it will be great.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby swirls » Tue Dec 14, 2010 6:16 pm

Well, being a god(dess) she could be the dominant one.

I think this looks pretty nice, keep it up! (large boobs ftw)
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Boomer » Wed Dec 15, 2010 12:57 am

I think it looks great, but it may just be me i like her with out the shoes
Dude what the fuck are you doing here? I have no idea what so ever so leave me alone and let me return to my pathetic loserness.
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Re: Mr.D´s characters

Postby Boomer » Wed Dec 15, 2010 12:57 am

I think it looks great, but it may just be me i like her better with out the shoes but still hot!
Dude what the fuck are you doing here? I have no idea what so ever so leave me alone and let me return to my pathetic loserness.
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