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Re: New project

Postby Digfree » Fri Jan 07, 2011 8:21 pm

Bussa Wrote:Anyway, I tinkered with the foxy lady and male wolf last night and as promised here is what I came up with:

pretty decent but you set him up as a cunning, aggressive character. But with his blushing and and heaven like face, you completely changed his character. Yeah kinda a random rant, but just saying. Maybe should put that other face he had from other pic on him. Just a suggestion.
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Re: New project

Postby Digfree » Fri Jan 07, 2011 8:22 pm

HolyPaladin Wrote:I agree with Trunks, I love what your doing but....
Well lets just say I loled at the thought that came into my head when I saw your last too pictures.

It kinda looks like they just found out they were having sex and yelled "WHO THE F*@K ARE YOU?!"

Hope thats not too harsh, :(
I dont like handing out criticism because I dont wanna discourage people.


I laughed so hard just now.
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Re: New project

Postby Axel Delerose » Sat Jan 08, 2011 8:20 am

Digfree Wrote: pretty decent but you set him up as a cunning, aggressive character. But with his blushing and and heaven like face, you completely changed his character. Yeah kinda a random rant, but just saying. Maybe should put that other face he had from other pic on him. Just a suggestion.


How about using him as a character who likes BDSM and uses all manner of things to dominate the girl?
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Re: New project

Postby Bussa » Sat Jan 08, 2011 10:26 pm

@ Kat: Yeah I'll try and post updates as much as I can, but no promises on too much cuz of school and all keeping me pretty busy.

@ Dryingpole: I'll keep that in mind for the animation. Thanks! ;)

@ Trunks & HolyPal: Yeah I kinda noticed that afterwards ha, I'll be making changes to their facial expressions quite a bit. And I'm a girly girl so I like including the blush, and there's nothing you can do about that, it's just my style hehe. ;)

@ Haldor: What do you mean by that? :?

@ Digfree: Yeah I'm working on changing the expressions as I go, posting the change as well.

@ Axel: Hah, sounds like you want a bit of personality with my characters huh? I'll be working on that too, thanks for the input hun! ;)

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- Facial expressions changing.
- I haven't had much time to color any of the characters yet, but I'm still working on them, here's a sneak peek of Sasha:
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Re: New project

Postby Haldor » Sat Jan 08, 2011 10:46 pm

@Bussah Well there were a few people saying that your artwork didn't look finished, so I pointed out that that was because you hadn't finished it yet, as you said :lol:
"We could just... run away?"
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Re: New project

Postby Bussa » Sat Jan 08, 2011 10:51 pm

Ah ok haha got it ;)
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Re: New project

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sat Jan 08, 2011 10:51 pm

Looks good as allways Bussa but i do think that the hair has to much volume and also i think she would look hotter if she had a more yellowish color, darker detail color and more like a purple blue hair color. It does also look preaty weird when you look at the arms and then the legs, the arms got so much more muscles than the legs got.
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Re: New project

Postby Bussa » Sat Jan 08, 2011 10:57 pm

Yeah I'm having a bit of trouble with her; her limbs aren't all that proportionate, it seems like her legs are way too long and too skinny and her arms seem too beefy and really short right? idk maybe it's just me, but i'll be messing with those and I'll post an update when fixed and line colored. And I think I just need to switch the colors in her hair and make the inside color the dark one and the outside the light one, yeah? I dunno, she still has to be tweaked quite a bit, I want her to be perfect, I mean common it's effin Sasha I'm making here, she has to be above average haha.
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Re: New project

Postby taizetsumei » Sun Jan 09, 2011 10:37 am

the sasha setup looks nice,although the lines being seen how they do --while i'm sure is temporary-- catches my eye easily--and no,i cant do any better so you can ignore what i'm saying-- the others look nice,as for the blushing,i think it looks fine,although i do agree they both looked very confused about what was going on.
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Re: New project

Postby Sleepnir » Mon Jan 10, 2011 3:12 am

WOW on the new Sasha model. Amazingly done face/hair/ears especially! If that's a sneak peek, can't wait to see the finished product. Damn well done.
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Re: New project

Postby Bussa » Mon Jan 10, 2011 9:17 am

Hah thanks guys! ;)

Well I fiddled with her limbs and proportions a bit and got her to this point, I kinda shaded her clothing but not really her body. This is my first time using pupils as well, so that's a decent improvement, also I used a bit of a pink-ish "gradient mask" on her goodies (upper and lower) which I think worked out great! I'm really happy with how she turned out so far, and it seems I'm learning and bettering my works as I progress. :D Also I tried to give her an extra hair style, kind of a pull back with a golden hair barret holding it so that it flips out a bit in the back (pony tail-ish but sexier I think) ;)

Let me know what you guys think:
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Re: New project

Postby KaTsuO_O » Mon Jan 10, 2011 2:37 pm

I see alot improvments and also that you lay some extra time on the eyes. The clothes looks good but deosnt those boots going to far up the legs?
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Re: New project

Postby Digfree » Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:03 pm

Bussa Wrote:Hah thanks guys! ;)

Well I fiddled with her limbs and proportions a bit and got her to this point, I kinda shaded her clothing but not really her body. This is my first time using pupils as well, so that's a decent improvement, also I used a bit of a pink-ish "gradient mask" on her goodies (upper and lower) which I think worked out great! I'm really happy with how she turned out so far, and it seems I'm learning and bettering my works as I progress. :D Also I tried to give her an extra hair style, kind of a pull back with a golden hair barret holding it so that it flips out a bit in the back (pony tail-ish but sexier I think) ;)

Let me know what you guys think:


hahaa like the 2nd one alot. Anyways, for the hair, I like the original hair, however I will say if you keep that big poofy hair, it will look weird when animating her, because frankly gravity takes effect when she is in doggy style for example. I am not a huge fan of the pony tail (I like the front of it, not the back) but it may be more practical. Maybe in your game when you meet her she got long hair, but she goes and changes it up before sex.
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Re: New project

Postby trunks2585 » Mon Jan 10, 2011 8:57 pm

I say use a conbination between hair 1 and hair 2
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Re: New project

Postby Bussa » Mon Jan 10, 2011 9:43 pm

@ Kat: In all of her pictures by Bernal where she is wearing those boots they go up a bit past halfway up her thighs so I just put them as high as in the reference pics I used.

@ Digfree: Great idea! She'll pull her hair back before "seeing" her clients hehe ;) Thanks! (Also I just wanted to know what your avatars are and where they keep coming from?)

@ Trunks: Erm...not too sure how I'd do that, but maybe I could come up with a whole new hair style that suits her better ;)
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Re: New project

Postby trunks2585 » Mon Jan 10, 2011 10:06 pm

i really just mean keep the detail of all the different locks of hair you have in the second version, and apply it to the first.
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Re: New project

Postby Digfree » Tue Jan 11, 2011 6:39 am

Bussa Wrote:Great idea! She'll pull her hair back before "seeing" her clients hehe ;) Thanks! (Also I just wanted to know what your avatars are and where they keep coming from?)


lol people keep asking me, go here http://legendofkrystal.com/forum/viewtopic.php?f=7&t=831&start=20 to see my explanation of the series and the link to watch it, scroll down a bit to see it.

and yeah, I know it is a good idea ^_^

this may sound weird, but any plans for a male horse furry? lol
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Re: New project

Postby Bussa » Tue Jan 11, 2011 9:38 am

@ Digfree: So I watched like the first few episodes and I think I'm in love with that show, it so cute, funny, and sexy haha. The artwork for the girls is great in both styles (by both styles I mean when they are normal and when they are portrayed as anime characters when they transform and such) :D And as for the male horse character I have had a few ideas for one or two hah, I love love love how the artist Matoc does his horses so I'm planning on doing a character modeled off of one of his horses and there might be another one I've had my eye on, you want me to maybe post ref pics?

Also I just finished up the new male Jag, check him out:
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Re: New project

Postby KaTsuO_O » Tue Jan 11, 2011 3:56 pm

Its a really good looking model but there is some things that you may want to change, mostly the tail. It looks a little to ballish in the end and it dosent really look like its attached between the but more like its attached on to his back. Theres also a little lump just over his boxers that looks kinda weird. And the last thing is that his thights are a bit to thin especial in the end but the rest is good.
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Re: New project

Postby Bussa » Tue Jan 11, 2011 9:39 pm

@ Katsu: Yeah the tail needs a bit of adjustmentas well as the thighs, thanks for pointing those out ;) And as for the lump above the boxers on his abdomen, thats just the lower abdominal muscle, it'll look better and like it actually fits when I shade him and such.

Anywho, I'm thinking about working on a new demon character, who will be like the hostess at the front desk kinda deal, I found this great reference pic I wanna use, expect in it she looks like a teenager, and I want her to be a fully shaped lady. So let me know what you think, if I should include her or not and if I should make any changes to her appearance (such as skin color, body shaping, horns, etc.). Thanks! ;)
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