First animation

[Haldor]

Since everybody seems to be doing it now, I thought i'd try my hand:

Any improvement suggestions? (Besides finishing it obviously...)

[kuja]

Is her left leg, the same as her right? and her right leg(butt) is a bit small. Look at head n at the butt. Make a comparison of scale. Isnt appearing to be proportional. ;P thats what i think

[pToon-T]

first I would speed up the animations in some parts, putting the dildo up to her Virgina should be sped up, so the slow down during the insertion is more noticeable, and have her sit down faster. when she's masturbating have the motions bi lager so it's easier to see what she's doing.

and I think you can work on the pose so it's easier to read (giving her a better silhouette), hear is a suggestion.

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hare is an image showing the different silhouette.

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[Kalypso]

I would definitely consider speeding up the frame rate to 17-20 fps and fixing the positioning of the chin. The chin was a huge problem to me because it's too far down so it makes her appear masculine, and could be easily fixed by rotating it and moving it up.

[Haldor]

Yeah, that chin did give me some trouble... I might get round to improving it at some point, but TBH I just did this because I was a little bored I think ;P