Liz of Egypt

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Liz of Egypt

Postby SteelSaurus » Fri Jul 02, 2010 5:02 am

Personally I think she'd about finished. I still need to add in the snake tattoo. And if you snag it you can see my inspiration images. I'm thinking about adding a little something infront of her skirt and altering her head design and shoes. But she's pretty much done. Thank you Eggplants.
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Re: Liz of Egypt

Postby kuja » Fri Jul 02, 2010 5:09 am

Good job.
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Re: Liz of Egypt

Postby Mechanios » Fri Jul 02, 2010 6:29 am

I like this. I think the necklace/collar thing should cover the back shoulder though. It looks like it slips off to the side when compared to the in front shoulder
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Re: Liz of Egypt

Postby guilmonex » Fri Jul 02, 2010 8:20 am

What is the cloth that attached to her arm? A cape?
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Re: Liz of Egypt

Postby Mr.Elefant » Fri Jul 02, 2010 3:17 pm

If you're making your own flash game then keep it up. Otherwise you should see Kal's new models in version 0.3 for he says that they are very different from the originals. Also I can't really comment until you get the extra lines off of the picture.
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Re: Liz of Egypt

Postby Vyksen » Fri Jul 02, 2010 5:12 pm

Everything looks fine except the cloth on the arm. And the headgear, meaning that cone-thing, confuses me. Otherwise, yeah, she looks great!
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Re: Liz of Egypt

Postby SteelSaurus » Fri Jul 02, 2010 10:50 pm

You know, when I first posted this, it refused to load for me. But since Kuja commented on it I figured it worked. Now coming home, the internet is back up to speed, and it load completely, and I realize that I posted the wrong one. That cloth is from Midna and was going to be used as a decorated loincloth of sorts to go over her skirt. I didn't like the design and hid it. Apperently, It reappeared when I published it. Looking at it now I'm thinkin of using it for wrist cloths...

A little dissappointed that the original style can't be utilized. But I'll continue along my path, though it may be a solitary one. PShapes has a easy style to replicate (little detail, thick lines, moderate shading). The shapes are pretty universal, and require very litte work to get something new.

Reposting snake girl in a few, I'm going to try out something with the cloth.
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Re: Liz of Egypt

Postby SteelSaurus » Sat Jul 03, 2010 1:29 am

Take 2. How's she looking? Now to give her a different hairpiece and some new shoes and she should be done. How's that cloth look? Yay, nay?
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Re: Liz of Egypt

Postby kuja » Sat Jul 03, 2010 1:41 am

Looks awesome. Will that blue transparent piece of cloth be only in her right arm?
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Re: Liz of Egypt

Postby SteelSaurus » Sat Jul 03, 2010 2:03 am

On both if people like it, and I plan on making it fully see-through.
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Re: Liz of Egypt

Postby Xananos » Sat Jul 03, 2010 2:07 am

If it's fully transparent, then yes. Do both. I think her lower jaw is placed a little bit too high, 'cause she's got a really long, curvy neck. And I think you've got her front forearm backwards or something, it doesn't look quite right, though I see why you put it that way. Maybe recolor her heels tan and gold or white and gold?
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Re: Liz of Egypt

Postby kuja » Sat Jul 03, 2010 2:53 am

I agree. Fully transparent. BUT; white. Dunno why, i think will combine.
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Re: Liz of Egypt

Postby DemonFiren » Sat Jul 03, 2010 10:31 am

White, gold or crimson, translucent and on both.
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Re: Liz of Egypt

Postby SteelSaurus » Sun Jul 04, 2010 2:42 am

Actually I'm going to try out crimson. I wanted to give her grey jewels a little colour but I could never decide on what. Crimson may very well do it.
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Re: Liz of Egypt

Postby kuja » Sun Jul 04, 2010 2:48 am

u can make these lasts cloth pieces the same color as the jewels
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Re: Liz of Egypt

Postby SteelSaurus » Sun Jul 04, 2010 2:56 am

One step ahead of you Kuja (finally). I even made the trim in gold. If I may say so (and I part because I feel a little gangster) This is off the chain! Posting in a few. (Having trouble figuring the other arms cloth.)
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Re: Liz of Egypt

Postby kuja » Sun Jul 04, 2010 3:10 am

;o looking foward 2 see it ;o
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Re: Liz of Egypt

Postby SteelSaurus » Sun Jul 04, 2010 4:10 am

Alright, still can't get cloth number two, or the sandal boots to work out, so here's Liz of Egypt. I'm basically done with her now. Last chance for any major concensus requests.
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Re: Liz of Egypt

Postby Xananos » Sun Jul 04, 2010 5:40 am

I quite like her as is. Seeing the sandals as they are, could you maybe make the cloths' shadow be beige-ish? I think that might fit better with the desert theme, than a blue-gray or white-gray.
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Re: Liz of Egypt

Postby 8749 » Sun Jul 04, 2010 5:46 am

Id like it if u can make the clothes shes wearing slightly more see thru o.0 adds a tad of sexieness =D o, and u might wana add another cloth on her other arm, looks kinda outa balance right now
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