An alternate, considerably less Rapey Legend of Krystal CYOA

[Totemist]

EDIT2: http://editthis.info/create_your_own_st ... of_Krystal BEHOLD MY... Words. Additional proofreading and comments welcome.

EDIT: Whelp, it would appear that Chyoo2 has been abandoned, and left to slowly degrade from lack of maintenance while maintaining the illusion that it still works. Really, not so much as a notification anywhere, even when you submit stories that I suppose just vanish into the ether. So you don't realize that you just essentially fired PAGES of your precious print-words into the heart of Oblivion, not bothering to save it elsewhere because you're in a hurry, until you google the website again, in the hopes of finding a working help section, and instead discover the new, shiny, actually goddamn working *CYOA* website. Hopefully my sacrifice appeased some dark volcanic God of impotent E-Rage, so my work wasn't totally in vain.

In other words, the actual story going up will be a bit delayed.
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Hey, longtime lurker finally breaking down and posting here. The original Legend of Krystal was one of the first pornographic flash games I ever played, probably permanently warped my young mind, and still holds a special place in my heart despite being... Well, to put it blankly, pretty damn creepy, and increasingly so as I got older. I'm also tired of the main Krystal CYOA being seemingly dead, and have endeavored to make my own damn version, one that won't make you feel guilty once you close the tab if you're the same kind of softy I am. I'll also, as usual, be "borrowing" pieces of other media I like, in this case other LoK games and stories, but I'll be ignoring Albert Einsteins advice and crediting everyone I take elements from. Any Authors who object will result in the offending material being removed out of courtesy, but I hope they'll view it as the compliment it is.

I've tried writing a CYOA solo before, and it didn't really end well (Read: Died halfway into Page Two of Path One, although I did turn it into something else later). So I've recognized the need to bring in other people on this who have more experience writing smut than I do. I'm going to be using EditThis for now, since Chyoo2 looks harder to learn and has issues with hitting "last page" to choose another option.

STORY OUTLINE

My story, the first page of which should be up later today, will obviously follow Krystal having sexy adventures on Sauria. My premise being that Star Fox is doing that asinine "I care too much about you to be near you" thing and has kicked her off the team again, is probably cheating on her with some human chick (Inspired by a line in the abandoned Version 3 of Another Tail), and Wolf crossing himself out on the potential post-breakup-hookup list by leaving a smug comms message telling her he'll be waiting for when she "comes to her senses" and decides she wants "Real Alpha Male". Frustrated, horny, and in search of somewhere to find a good rebound one night stand or two, Krystal takes a job to make ends meet from a Mining Company to activate the backup drone on a crashed automated courier vessel. On the way, her Arwing is damaged in a battle with a Pirate Cruiser, which she also severely damages (Important Later), which leads to a number of mechanical failures as she finds and activates the Drone in the Deep Jungle.

END EXPOSITION DUMP/BACKSTORY

Here I plan to borrow a bit of the opening from the original Krystal CYOA, namely Krystal getting Hot and Bothered in the cockpit with her climate control malfunctioning in-atmo, and either stripping her top off or going totally nude, becomingly increasingly aroused as she does so, or focusing on finishing the mission.

Focusing will result in her being forced down due to a mechanical failure, and being found at the crash site by the Seven Blades Tribe, who will note the blaster marks and obvious weapons pods on her ship, and the survival knife and sidearm she carries, in addition to her shapely form under the flightsuit. She will awake wearing the standard Trophy 'Armor'

Going Topless will result in her losing concentration while fondling herself and imagining flashing a surprised Fox to remind him what he's missing and getting hit by a ground laser, crashing her in Seven Blades territory after losing control. They additionally will note the extra damage, obviously the result of a clash of some kind with their rivals, and how truly excellent her perky tits are. She will awaken extra horny in the topless Trophy Armor, with the option of putting the top back on.

Going nude will cause her to set the Arwing on Autopilot and start idly fantasizing alternately about being captured and turned into a sex slave by hulking, muscular Sharpclaw males and about experimenting with other females, before the two amorous males from the original game catapult onto her Fighter during a slow bank around a mountainside, who pry open her cockpit and attempt to introduce her purty mouth to their dicks. Despite being highly turned on at this point, and pretty much getting what she asked for in some kind of perverted Aesop, she kills one with her sidearm, is disarmed, stabs the other with her Survival Knife, taking a slash to the face in return, before shooting him too. After the brief fight she suffers a mechanical failure and crashes, again, in Seven Blades territory. The warriors both salivate over her naked form, and notice how she unconsciously spreads her legs and swishes her tail invitingly. More veteran warriors point out the blood-stains on her Arwing, the slash on her face, and the obviously used survival knife and pistol. Though snickering at her poor melee weapon, this will gain her respect as a Warrior who fought and killed Warriors their greatest foe (The minions of General Scales). She will awaken naked aside from an ornate leather belt holding her pistol and an inwardly curved combat knife (Topless and Full Armor still optional) and very horny, with both guilt/excitement over her fantasizing about Sharpclaw dicks being shoved into her and more receptive to "playing" with the Seven Blades girls.

END INTRO

Here we get Mala, the standard weapon-polishing Intro-Lizard-Girl-Who-Speaks-Lylat. She explains that Krystal is now a "Trophy" of the Seven Blades, a prized female either of exceptional beauty or exotic origin captured and brought back both to show off and "Put to use". Here we get our first real look at the Seven Blades and how they differ from most Sharpclaws. Based on a blend of Kurd (Culture) and Gurkha (Signature weapon and Mountain warfare expertise), with some Pashtun influence sprinkled on, her position as a Trophy is mostly ceremonial, as they don't know what else to do with her. While technically she's obligated to "service" the Tribes warriors, that could technically be fulfilled by helping Mala care for the spare weapons and serve drinks in the Tavern. With females treated with far more respect, even near-equality, unless she signals that she's willing the Chief and Elders will come down like the Hammer of Cain on any Warrior foolish enough to force himself on her. Here we also learn the significance of her Armor:

Full Armor: Acknowledging her status as the tribe Trophy, granting her room and board and freedom of movement within Tribe lands in exchange for nebulous "service". Generally left alone, with some leers, propositions in halting Lylat Standard and pantomime, and some Tavern ass-grabbing.

Topless: Same as above, save that she's effectively signalling that she's open to anything "Above the waist". Expected to deliver Blowjobs, Handjobs, Boobjobs, and Bukakke parties on demand.

Naked: Effectively wearing a sign that says "Fuck Me". Warriors will use her frequently and however they want, and put a great many miles on her poor rear.

This also crosses over into the culture of other tribes, save that usually the Full Armor only protects the female as far as the Warriors not being interested at the time, or reserving her for use by a limited number of Warriors. Another key difference is that Mala will actually make sure that Krystal is fully informed before making her choice, instead of leaving her in the dark until she discovers the consequences.

If the Naked option is chosen in the intro, the weapons belt signifies that the Tribe recognizes her kills against an enemy Tribe, providing one of their traditional knives on loan to replace her inferior blade and granting her the right to carry arms openly and concealed among the Tribe.

The Seven Blades themselves are a small and relatively poor Tribe, with low numbers and very few women (Putting extra "strain" on Krystal if she decides to embrace her Saurian sex toy fantasies), but are bar-non the greatest warriors of the Sharpclaws, both in personal combat and in tactics and battle-cunning. Time and time again they turn the tide against the more numerous warriors of their onetime master General Scales and the looted technology of the Barbed Spear Tribe through clever maneuvering, trickery, use of their mountainous home terrain, and sheer close-quarters ferocity. Fiercely independent and culturally divergent from the main body of Sharpclaws, they have been in constant conflict with their neighbors for their entire history, even more so than normal for their kind, aside from a brief period after being conquered by Scales and before his defeat by Fox.

The main plot of the early story, as far as it doesn't revolve around getting Krystal plugged like a Surge Protector, will follow Krystal gaining respect in the community by joining warriors on hunts and sparring ("sparring" will also grease the wheels a bit), learning the Sharpclaw language, and eventually building up enough trust to be allowed to lead a detachment of Warriors to seize the crashed Pirate ship before Scales finds it, using communications equipment from the wreckage of her Arwing to triangulate the source of Pirate comms chatter. The Pirates (The red-eyed Orc-dudes from the Twin Orbs game) will be low on food, ammo, and Morale, and be fairly easily overwhelmed, with the option of Krystal "distracting" them by being intentionally taken captive. Armed with Pirate weaponry, tools, and with stolen equipment and data originally bound for a Colony world giving them the ability to start building their own basic technology, they begin using their new advantage in ranged weaponry and body armor to bring the war to their enemies.

END ACT ONE

Act Two will focus on Krystal being named Warleader for her role in arming the Seven Blades, giving her control over the new campaign against Scales and the Spears, along with any other enemies they find. This is completely compatible with Krystal embracing her inner slut, as the Blades don't have the same hypocritical negative outlook on promiscuity that the other Tribes hold. To them, this is simply confirmation that Krystal, like every male hero of the Old Legends, has lust to match her skill in battle, and they are suitably grateful.

From here, the player can have Krystal focus on the following goals, in whatever order is desired:

1: The Barbed Spears have many captive Seven Blades kept in check with a stolen cache of explosive collars, constituting the majority of their Elite Guard. Freeing them will nearly double the number of Warriors available to the Blades and remove one of the advantages that keeps Scales from moving on their territory. This will also double the number of plows working Krystals fields if she decided to get experienced by the Blades, so she'll have to learn to walk with her legs a yard apart and sit on a stack of pillows/get used to the coating of cum thick enough to count as a shirt and a permanently sore throat and jaw, or set out to capture more Sharpclaw females soonest.

2: While Krystal may find it distasteful, capturing females from rival Tribes is an integral part of Sharpclaw culture, and vital if she wants to decrease the number of horny warriors waiting to violate her like a parking meter to manageable levels. Captured females will be more than happy to service the far more respectful Blades and look forward to equality and freedom for their daughters, and will begin to experiment more openly with each other due to the Blades having no issue with females enjoying each other, especially if one of them are involved. If Krystal hadn't been explored by any of the Blades women previously, this will either be additional temptation or, if she has, a chance to organize orgies of smooth female flesh, with or without fresh Sharpclaw cum adding flavor to feminine slits. She will also meet Liz, a potential lover and the Wake-Up-Lizard-Girl she would have gotten if she'd been captured by Scales' crew, and Nalia, a hornier and more dominant female from the Spears who delights in seeing innocent young females defiled by Sharpclaw Warriors who would have greeted her with Aphrodisiac-laced soup if she'd been taken by the Spears.

3: Before they were executed to a man for preying on Merchants and killing women and children (Both big no-nos for the Blades), the Pirates revealed that their Captains personal toy/enforcer, a captive Corporate Security Officer from the lawless asteroid mining camps (The whip-wielding, red-furred Vixen Dominatrix from the Twin Orbs game), was abducted by Darkwolves and taken into the deep Swamp. The Warriors are eager to capture another Fox, especially if Krystal has proven herself a good catch. Infiltrating the unfamiliar territory, fighting off waves of two-dicked primitives, and eventually freeing the Vixen and taking home a number of mutated, intelligent Darkwolf females, including Alpha Female Vulf, who Krystal will have to first fight and then "fight" to establish dominance, the Blades will remember this as one of the few battles they fought against non-Sharpclaws of their own free will. Krystal can choose to serve as a "distraction" here as well, and return home not only with renewed appreciation for the massive, barbed Sharpclaw cocks and their equally large loads, but a hankering for double penetration as well. Vixen the Pirate can become a lover, if Krystal goes Bi, and/or be convinced to "try the local cuisine" and even go topless or fully nude in imitation of Krystal. Vulf will eagerly submit to her new captors, especially if becoming a favored concubine of the Alpha Female (Krystal) is thrown into the bargain.

4: There is still a good amount of heavy earth-moving and terrain altering equipment in the hold of the Pirate Ship. Moving it through the Jungle, fending off attacks by both Sharpclaw Tribes, dinosaurs, and some Darkwolves and surviving Pirates will allow the Blades to clear fields for agriculture around their rugged village and end their supply shortage, and dig down to rich veins of industrial metals to make metals plentiful. Following completion, a celebration is held, in which a Stockade for locking down rebellious females in need of "punishment" is erected as per tradition. While it would normally remain empty, Krystal can volunteer to be "punished" to christen it and supposedly bring good luck to the Tribe, either finally getting her holes broken in properly if she kept her golden thong on u till' now, or get destroyed like she never has before while every male in the Tribe runs a train on her. Krystal can also "Volunteer" Liz, Nalia, or Vixen, and have fun watching them get railed.

5: The Pirate Cruiser still has functioning point-defenses, good armor, and a full missile battery and sensor net, all valuable assets even though it will never travel the spacelanes again. Krystal decides to simply move the entire ship to the Blades village and set it up as a central Stronghold. Clearing the ship of the predators who have moved in in the meantime, and a nasty infestation of ambulatory and intelligent green slimes that Krystal will have to "neutralize" personally, with Tribe herbalists later discovering that the non-sentient variety of slime, which grows readily on cave walls, makes for a potent aphrodisiac and pleasure-enhancer, especially for females. The Ship is defended from all comers until it can be patched up enough to activate the Emergency Thrusters and make the short hop to the Village.

END ACT TWO

Act Three opens with the Blades having established their own simple technology base, building up their home village with strong, concentric stone walls and watchtowers and large, relatively comfortable stone houses with hot and cold running water and electric lighting replacing rude wooden huts and wooden palisades. The Tribe has also made Krystal an honorary Seven Blades Warrior, and used their new technical skills and machine shops to repair her Arwing. While still unable to travel in space and prone to make odd and disturbing mechanical noises while performing high-stress maneuvers, Krystal still loves being back behind a joystick again. She can also put on her Flightsuit, now noticeably more form-fitting over her increasingly muscular frame. While no longer in her Armor, she will be treated the same, with the warriors leaving her alone unless enticed, shoving her head down into their crotches and unzipping her torso for breast access, or pulling her halfway out of the suit to violate her on a Tavern counter-top at will, depending on her previous choices.

Soon after, another fighter crashes, this time in Spears territory. Leading a squad to investigate, Krystal finds and rescues Kat, who was independently searching for her, but is unable to save the Catspaw from being torn down for scrap. Kat is taken back to the Blades Village, where she exhibits varying degrees of shock at what Krystal has been up to, ranging from commenting on her outfit and "pet to guerrilla army" to exclaiming "You've had how much pipe laid in you?!". While initially upset at having to wear a skimpy bra and thong to fit the local dress code (Krystals Armor reserved for her as the Tribes most prized trophy) and having to help clean the Tavern, she soon decides that she may as well make the best of it while she's stuck there. Kat will be interested in Krystals discovery of her feminine-appreciative side and can easily be seduced, attempting to seduce Krystal if no advances are made early on. She can also be convinced, eventually, to try out a Sharpclaw or two if she sees Krystal or Vixen being fucked publicly and how thoroughly they enjoy it. While Krystal, Vixen, and to a lesser extent the Darkwolf females all have to deal with Sharpclaw cocks being far larger than anything their bodies were designed to handle, Kat has it even worse, the poor little feline being so tight that it takes a lot of claw-spreading and effort for the Sharpclaws to even fit inside her.

If Krystal has gone Topless or Nude, Kat can be eventually talked into following suit, if she has both been convinced to let a Warrior stretch her out and is in a sexual relationship with Krystal and/or Vixen. If Nude, she will spend a lot of her time afterwards in the Tavern, spread out on a table and either recovering from the last fucking or squealing shrilly as another Warriors impales her on a cock her poor holes were never meant to take on.

Soon after, with Kat lending her blaster to the fight (Possibly alternating being fucked stupid for Stress Relief while Krystal is unavailable), Krystal ups the ante against Scales and the Spears, wrecking supply lines, burning Outposts, abducting Sharpclaw Females here and there, and at one point capturing and relocating the entire Zora population to a newly created lake adjacent to the Blades village, where the aquatic ladies make their appreciation for being rescued from Scales' thugs known. The Spears eventually collapse entirely after Scales invades, with an optional raid to steal their looted Laser Cannon and other scraps of mostly-broken technology and the pieces of Kats fighter. If not, the Spears destroy it to prevent it from falling into Scales hands.

After finally re-conquering the remnants of the Spears, Scales sends an invasion force into the Blades home mountains, forgetting that, unlike last time, he lacks the technological superiority that enabled him to gain victory over the fierce mountain warriors last time, in addition to repeated strafing runs by Krystals Arwing, and later dropped Firebombs. With the half of the Blades without looted Pirate Weapons armed with home-built Assault Rifles (Essentially a Future AK-47 based on a design for a heavy-duty Nail Gun), heavy machine-guns, light mortars, and even some light artillery and armored vehicles, Scales is defeated with a truly humiliating casualty ratio, admitting defeat and withdrawing from the mountains with barely a third of his forces intact. As per tradition, and under threat of unending bombing runs by Krystal, Scales gifts the Blades all of the Spear females taken in their conquest, along with half of the Spears treasure and allows any of his warriors who so choose to join the Spears, which results in many of his most experienced and veteran warriors, several former Blades themselves, to leave him. He decides to simply cut his losses and content himself with ruling almost all of the Sharpclaw race.

All is not well, however, as a cutthroat mining company, the very same one that Krystal was working for in the intro, invades with a mercenary army. intent on exploiting Saurias rich mineral resources. The Jungle begins to heat with warfare as Scales wages an increasingly unsuccessful Guerrilla campaign against the mercenary army, mostly composed of remnants of Andross' old army and assorted scum, including associates of Vixens old master. The Blades ally with the CloudRunners and EarthWalkers to hold back the invaders, while Krystal leads an operation to steal a ship containing a medley of Misc. Pirate fightercraft and supporting equipment and use them to build a Seven Blades air force, and repairing Kats ship with spare parts, either putting the enthusiastic feline behind her controls as soon as the ship can fly or shaking her out of a cum-soaked stupor. She also gives Vixen a customized Pirate Heavy Fighter belonging to one of her hated masters even more hated colleagues, Vulf a heavily armored fighter-bomber, and Liz an agile craft armed with an over-sized energy cannon while Nalia works as often sarcastic base support and intel. They either name themselves the Blade Force Five, painting decals of a five-clawed hand on their fighters, or the Dartbroads, with decals of a silhouetted female bent over with a red bulls-eye painted over her rear, depending on whether most or all of them go into battle with Sharpclaw cum leaking out of them and staining their flightsuits.

To combat them, the ambiguous mining company hires another all-female mercenary group, the Lead Investment Corporation, lead by the Dragonhearts Squadron, to neutralize them. Composed of an elf, a winged dragon-girl, and a she-panther, along with a wing of mercenary fighter pilots drawn from whatever scum of the sector aren't already on Sauria, they quickly discover that the rag-tag squadron they face are going to be harder to beat than they thought. The two squadrons quickly become arch-rivals as the war heats in intensity, with taunting radio transmissions calling Krystals band "Lizard Sluts" and "Flying Cum Dumpsters" either being answered with short, angry retorts or laughing invitations to visit them at base an see just how brutal a "Brutal Spit-Roast" can get, depending on whether or not they're true. A fair bit of angry lesbian sexual tension creeps in as the war reaches its peak, with several optional hate-fueled "dogfights" between Krystal and the Draconess Squadron Leader, which the Dragon wins handily by virtue of her thick, prehensile tail and exceptionally long and flexible tongue.

The conflict ends with Scales' army collapsing after his death by an infected wound, with the survivors, the toughest and most capable of his army, being recruited by the Blades, who now simply refer to themselves as the Sharpclaws. The reinforced Blades and their Earth and Cloud allies mount open assaults on Company strongholds, backed by the finally fully trained Sharpclaw Air Legion, and overwhelm the Company mercs. After the final battle, the Dragonhearts formally recognize Krystals team as fellow "Tough Bitches", and either leave in peace, optionally after a parting lesbian orgy, or decide that there must be something to being a Sharpclaw toy if Krystal and her team insist on bending over for them on a daily basis, and join the team, leaving their mercenary contracts, and life without the smell of Sharpclaw semen on their breath so normal that it's barely noticed anymore, behind.

END

That's pretty much it. I feel like having a good outline, especially one that fires up imagination, helps a lot to keep a story from running out of inertia. I've got some plans for "epilogue" chapters when/if this thing is actually finished, mostly covering Sauria entering the spacefaring community, but I'll leave that until later.

The intro should be up today, following which you guys can pretty much go nuts so long as it's kept safely within Closeted White Knight tolerances. Any thoughts or suggestions?

[Ayeka]

Sorry, but novel? Seriously? No offense, I get bored after less as 20 lines. Well, do as you wish but you know proverb "One picture is worthy thousand words".

[gaser20]

Harsh Ayeka... I am the opposite. I'm more likely to enjoy a well written and detailed story so I'm all for this. I'd love to see how this turns out! Erotic scene's with a lot of buildup have the best peaks, so I'll look forward to the big moment and hope you can write well!

[bestusernameEVER]

I, for one, think this totally sounds awesome and hope you are going to finish it, since you've got a lot of work ahead of you

[Enkide]

Could always use the same area as the other Krystal CHYOA

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_st ... of_Krystal <- This one right here. Its the same site me and BinaryHedgehog used.

[Totemist]

Could always use the same area as the other Krystal CHYOA

http://editthis.info/create_your_own_st ... of_Krystal <- This one right here. Its the same site me and BinaryHedgehog used.

If you're not going to be using it, that would be great. I'm re-learning how to into wiki pages and the formatting thereof now, so the first few pages should be up soon.

Harsh Ayeka... I am the opposite. I'm more likely to enjoy a well written and detailed story so I'm all for this. I'd love to see how this turns out! Erotic scene's with a lot of buildup have the best peaks, so I'll look forward to the big moment and hope you can write well!

I've done some writing before, mostly in sci-fi Choose Your Own Adventures and roleplaying on other sites. I'm strongest on fight scenes and creative world-building, but I'm weaker when it comes to dialogue (Improving there recently) and totally new at writing adult material. Hopefully this will be a good learning experience.

Well, EditThis is being retarded about the external linking (Only one submission with an external link allowed every 20 minutes, but it doesn't give you the anti-spam captcha until you submit the page. This effectively means that I have to wait 40 minutes before the page is actually published). Oh well, I'll just use the extra time to write out a Crash scene or two for the Grand Debut.

[Enkide]

Oh we're using it.....We're just using it for this one -> http://editthis.info/create_your_own_st ... _Girls_ENF

Not that I'd mind if you wanted more writers to your little CHYOA thing I'm very fun to write with.

[coyoteredmoon]

I don't know if you're absolutely glued to the idea of making a CYOA of epic scale and fully individualized to each unique individual; but a pretty decent way to do CYOA's is as a community participation game. It allows the main writer (you) to do small manageable snippets at a time, the players to make choice commitments, and more importantly to someone who is not terribly confident in certain aspects of their writing skills to get good feed back which can be applied to each of the subsequent posts Plus: players that have shorter attention spans don't have to try to burn through an entire story at once.
It's how I did my CYOA and It was really fun! Just a thing you might consider

[bestusernameEVER]

I like what you did so far. 4 things:

1. Don't give Slippy any mercy.
2. Gas giants don't work like that. At all. Doesn't really matter,though.
3. More paragraphs.
4. Keep going!

edit: Btw, are all of these entries written by you? Because I could notice a certain quality dropoff (paragraphs!) with some, and they did not seem to fit the writing style of, say, the intro text. Example: The galdon scene.

[Totemist]

I don't know if you're absolutely glued to the idea of making a CYOA of epic scale and fully individualized to each unique individual; but a pretty decent way to do CYOA's is as a community participation game. It allows the main writer (you) to do small manageable snippets at a time, the players to make choice commitments, and more importantly to someone who is not terribly confident in certain aspects of their writing skills to get good feed back which can be applied to each of the subsequent posts Plus: players that have shorter attention spans don't have to try to burn through an entire story at once.
It's how I did my CYOA and It was really fun! Just a thing you might consider

That's actually exactly what I'm going for here, sorry if I wasn't clear. Anyone who can spell correctly, feel free to add on as you wish, as long as you don't alter a Major Plot Point without discussion or take it into weird rape fetish territory. There's no way I could do this myself in under a year, and I would be risking severe burnout along the way. I think I'll be able to stick with this project easier, because every time I check these forums for good "Recreational" material and don't find anything my squishy morals can deal with, I'll just go "I'M GONNA MAKE MY OWN LOK PORN, WITH BLACKJACK! AND HOOKERS!" and then we'll have another two or three pages.

I like what you did so far. 4 things:

1. Don't give Slippy any mercy.
2. Gas giants don't work like that. At all. Doesn't really matter,though.
3. More paragraphs.
4. Keep going!

edit: Btw, are all of these entries written by you? Because I could notice a certain quality dropoff (paragraphs!) with some, and they did not seem to fit the writing style of, say, the intro text. Example: The galdon scene.

Thanks man, I should have the other two Intro pages up today, and maybe more if I'm up to it. Nothing much better to do.

Due to how linking on EditThis works, the Wake Up link automatically links to the equivalent page from the dead Spycam LoK CYOA that inspired this project. Everything past that is a collection of artifacts from that CYOA, which now resides on the equally dead Chyoo2, sitting in dusty corners like remnants of a forgotten civilization exposed to the surface world by someone building a strip mall. I definitely don't plan on having Krystal instantly being raped into becoming a slut and then literally almost drowning in mutant dinosaur semen.

The Gas Giant thing was stolen from a SciFi series I like (Star Force), because I needed some way for a "Remote planet on the edge of the Lylat System" to be warm enough for liquid water oceans and an atmosphere, as opposed to being a King Size Europa. It's not really "almost a star" in my head anyway, so maybe I should make that clearer, just so goddamn huge that its gravity has compressed its core to the point that you have low-grade fusion reactions outputting enough heat for close-orbiting moons to be habitable.

This also explains why Sauria broke into four pieces in its introductory game: It's too close to its parent body, and only the influence of the strange energy beings that call its core home keep the gravitational forces of the Gas Giant from tearing it into a new ring system. Scales, in his Andross-Influenced madness, nearly destroyed his own homeworld in mad bid for power, not understanding that the "Spirits" were barely able to keep his newly conquered orb from getting grav-shredded as a result of his actions. You may have noticed, but I really like coherent background worlds and narrative in my porn. I'll try to wing an interesting story too, if I can. Eventually, I want to get to the point where a player could go through the entire story without a single sex scene, if he/she so chooses.