Dark Souls one-shot

[fielddranzer]

A/N: This is a really sex filled story based on the game Dark Souls. If you're not interested in Reading something thats outright porn, then just don't do it. If you do want porn, then I think you {Reader] will like some. Or not, I'm nowhere near good at writing, so at the best case scenario, I'm decent at doing this, and I don't specialize at anything in particular. If ya' feel like havin' a read, then do have a read.

The Asylum
By Shadow Nightstrider

Deprived


The room was enshrouded in darkness. All she could hear was the faint noise of dripping water. A cell. Her best bet would be she was in a cell, whether it was locked or not didn't matter to her. All that mattered was the endless hunger she felt. A hunger for nothing, yet everything.
A loud rumbling sound was heard somewhere above her, quickly followed by a bright light shining down through an open hole in the ceiling.

Turning her head up, to look at the intruding light, she realized that her surroundings were as she thought, a dark cell consisting of a dark stone brick, dripping water and a white liquid slowly dripping down the walls around her. The only thing that was different than what she'd imagined, was the open metallic door at the other side of her small cell. Figuring it would be better to move ahead and get a look around her prison, rather than staying coped up inside her cell, she made a weak attempt at getting up from her previous fatal position.

Finally getting up on shaky legs, she looked down herself, seeing her naked form with more of the dry white substance at the inside of her thighs. Tracing a nimble hand over her ample D-cup breasts, down her toned stomach and slowly, into the space between her legs. Shuddering slightly as her fingers brushed against her overly sensitive sex. Tracing her most recent, and only, memories, she remembered her own physical appearance, having long blond hair that went down her back into a tightly made ponytail. Reaching behind her back to confirm her memories, she did indeed feel her hair being tied into a ponytail. Thinking back, she couldn't however, recall her name. All that came to mind when thinking about it was the word "Deprived" and several other names people had called her by, such as "Bitch" "Slut" and "Whore" were the most common ones.

Looking herself over once more, she couldn't help but move her hands around her breasts and gently groping them, sometimes pinching her nipples, causing herself to yelp and moan highly. Slowly, almost teasingly, she slipped her right hand down to her sex, moaning even more as her fingers brushed against her extremely sensitive clit.

Figuring she should sit down for better comfort, the blond slid back down onto the floor, except this time she had the light to see her fingers tease both her nipples and her dripping snatch. As she got more used to the teasing sensation, the blond slowly pushed one of her fingers into the tight vice that her pussy was, moaning lewdly as her tongue dropped out of her gaping mouth. The more of her finger that slid into her pussy, the further back her head went, until it softly hit the stone wall behind her. Her eyes were half-lidded with her tongue lolling out of her mouth, panting like a real bitch in heat. Her attention was soon drawn up however, as she saw a human man standing above her with his leggings pooling around his ankles. What caught her attention the most, was what he was doing.

The human above her, a knight was her guess, was holding onto his very large, very erect cock, while jerking off at a furious pace. His gloved hand was going at such a high speed that it was difficult seeing the throbbing cock in its grasp.

Getting even hotter than before, the blond woman below the knight, started fingering her tight pussy even faster, moving her left hand away from her over stimulated nipples down to her sensitive clit, rubbing it furiously along with her right hand pushing two fingers into her slick opening. Moaning as highly as she could, the blond kept fingering herself until she felt her pussy clench around her digits, signaling her release.
As she opened her mouth to scream out her release, she heard the man above her give off a loud groan while slowing down his furious pace.

The first heavy glob of liquid, cum she remembered, came as a shock to her, as it landed on her exposed breasts, being quickly followed by several heavy gushes of cum, hitting her in both her gaping mouth as well as her already cum stained hair, covering her golden hair completely in a sticky white substance.

Her screams of pleasure were soon drowned out by the immense gush of cum that came flying into her open mouth, forcing her to swallow it all. And she did, the blond easily swallowed the cum being given to her, slowly feeling her endless hunger dissipate, for now. Bringing her hands up to her cum-covered breasts to try and scoop up the delicious liquid there.

Having swallowed all of the knights cum that she could reach, deciding to leave the huge amount in her hair, she realized exactly what was covering the walls around her, having a mini-orgasm on the spot.
Figuring she should rest up a bit, the blonde settled down on the floor, curling up right next to one of the corners, just hoping that someone would come by while she slept and abuse her tight holes.
Quivering in delight as sleep overtook her, the blond made a solemn vow to herself, that she would venture outside of her cell when she woke up again.




The light from the hole in the roof had settled right on the blonde's face, she groaned audibly before slowly rising back up to a sitting position. Looking around her cell to see if anyone had been there, she was quickly disappointed that no one had been there. Taking a quick look up, confirmed for her that the knight from before had not returned.

Rising up on shaky legs, the blonde slowly made her way towards the open door, carefully avoiding the edges, not wanting to arouse herself too much from the cold metal.

As she got out of her cell, the first thing she noticed was a man that looked like he had dried out, a hollow, standing against one of the walls in the corridor, bashing his head against the wall while steadying himself with his left hand, his right hand seemed to be wrapped around something near his crotch, which she quickly guessed had to be his dick.

To her direct right, she saw another one of the hollows standing behind a locked door, his hand trying to reach her beyond the confines of his cell. As she tried to ignore the first hollow and look at the second, the blonde walked over to the cell door, close enough to let the hollow inside touch her dripping snatch, and shudder by the feeling.

The closer she got to the closed door however, made her not think about the hollow that had long since stopped bashing his head against the wall. The first of the hollows now watched her carefully, slowly making his way over to the naked human girl.

As soon as the blonde stepped up right next to the closed iron door, the hollow inside got to his feet and reached both his arms out through the openings, roughly groping her breasts, squeezing them together, not caring in the slightest about the now moaning woman before him.

Having the hollow's arms abusing her breasts, squeezing them together and pulling them apart, made her yelp at first, but slowly, the blonde got more used to the feeling, giving small hesitant moans of pleasure as the hollow increased his pace, sometimes pinching and twisting her already stimulated nipples.

Every single sane thought in her mind screamed for her to get away, that something bad was going to happen if she didn't, but the pleasure she was receiving from the hollow made her forget about all else.

It wasn't until she felt another pair of hands creep around her waist and cup her boobs that she opened her eyes to look behind her, being greeted by black eye sockets, showing no sign of any humanity. After a few minutes of wild groping from both hollows, they slowly started working together, the first of the hollows moving to grope the lower part of her ample chest, while the second hollow bruised the upper part of her chest.

The blonde slowly felt something hard and wrinkled push against her ass, in her lust covered mind, she simply thought it to be the first hollow's hands, but it became clear to her what it was, when she felt an intruder enter her slick pussy. Moaning lewdly as the hollow behind her started franticly rutting into her snatch, the blonde leaned forward slightly, pressing her uncovered chest against the cell door. The instant she did, the first hollow's hands pressed against her back, while the second hollow put his mouth to her nipples, while moving his right hand down to his wrinkled member.

The blonde had lost all ability to care at this point, having received several small orgasms from the rough treatment of her breasts, gaining another one from the intrusion into her wet cunt, and then being franticly fucked from behind while having her boobs suckled from the front. She was in heaven right now, cumming over and over again as her snatch was abused by the hard pace of the first hollow.

Hearing a ghostly cry from behind her, quickly followed by her pussy being flooded, it seemed like the first hollow couldn't take any more, filling her already dripping cunt to the brim, some of it shooting out of her as the hollow kept thrusting in and out.

In front of her, the second hollow that had been jerking off furiously, let out a cry similar to the first one, before shooting his heavy load onto the front of Deprived's body, coating her dripping pussy as well as most of her stomach.

Crying out her pleasure, Deprived came once more before slumping against the door, letting the cum on her stomach slide down in rivers along her thighs. Both the hollow in front of her, and the hollow behind her, fell on their backs, but just before they hit the floor, their bodies dissipated into particles, leaving nothing but the heavy loads they shot at her as evidence of their existence.

Taking her time to scoop up the cum on her stomach, she fell down onto her knees, face slumping against the floor in exhaustion, just as she was on her way to sleep, she heard a terrifying roar sound through the entire asylum. A roar that died out as quickly as it appeared.

Letting her curiosity get the better of her, the blonde stood up on wobbly legs and made her way down the corridor, aware of her abused slit aching from the session she just finished. The cum that had been deposited inside of her was slowly leaking out in rivers that fell along her thighs and down to the floor, leaving a light trail of cum as she made her way into the next room. Finding a staircase at the end, she quickly decided on going up, having to find out what lies ahead of her. Maybe she could even find another few hollows to satisfy her.

As the blonde left the staircase, she was greeted by a small room. The only places of dry land seemed to be right in front of her, the rest of the room was covered in a thick darkly colored pond of water. At the far end of the room, she could see an opening that hopefully lead to another room, and in the middle of the room, standing in the middle of the dark water, was a hollow.

Her curiosity about the mighty roar earlier was soon forgotten, as she laid her eyes upon the naked hollow, standing around with his cock already leaking pre-cum into the water below him. Taking one fast look from his head to where his legs disappeared in the musky water, the blonde quickly got down on her hands and knees while slowly crawling towards the end of the platform she was on.

The second she came within a certain area near the edge, the hollow turned towards her and started walking over to the ledge. Upon reaching it, the hollow quickly latched his hand onto the blonde's hair, pulling her face and lips onto his dry member. Quickly setting a rough pace, this hollow, like all the others, started franticly rutting against her face, shoving his cock deep enough into her mouth to make her gag around it.

Not caring about the little slut sucking him off, the hollow started sinking his entire length into the slut's mouth, already growling and hissing in that same ghostly voice as the others. Quickening his pace even more, the hollow soon came inside the blonde's mouth, flooding it completely with his seed while forcing most of his cum down her gullet. A few huge globs escaped her mouth as the frantic rutting continued, until the hollow slumped backwards, spraying the blonde's face with his sticky seed, before he too disappeared in a cloud of particles, leaving only the panting blonde coughing up heavy globs of cum.

Swiftly swiping her hands over her face, the blonde scooped up the excess cum and shoved it into her mouth, savoring the unique taste of hollow cum. Slowly getting up, she noticed the little puddle of cum that had formed between her legs from her previous session. Not wanting to waste any of the thick cum, she turned around and bent her head down to the ground, slowly licking the floor clean of the cum she had left there.

Standing up once more, the blonde looked into the opening opposite of where she came from and noticed a small illuminated area that seemed to shine in her direction. Looking down at the water once more, she was a little grossed out by the idea of walking in that, but thinking back to her licking the floor clean, made that thought soon disappear from her mind.

Carefully jumping into the water, the blonde felt a weird tingling sensation as it rose up to her kneecaps, feeling the heat in the pit of her stomach come back with a vengeance.
Slowly walking along the edge of the drenched corridor, she soon came upon a cylindrical room with a torch hanging on a nearby wall, along with a ladder on the far end of the cylinder. Seeing no new hollow for her to play with, the blonde let out a low sigh before making her way out of the slimy water and towards the ladder. The further she walked out of the water, the less seemed to stick to her, and the second her feet touched the cold iron ladder, she was completely dry except for her dripping cunt.

As she slowly made her way up the ladder, her thoughts finally returned to what might have caused that almighty roar earlier. As she finally reached the top of the unnecessarily long ladder, her eyes were met by the bright light of the evening sun, as well as seeing the ruined buildings surrounding her current location. As she walked through an open door right before her however, her eyes immediately fell upon the small bonfire ahead of her with what looked like a sword sticking out of it.

Feeling some unknown invisible force pull her closer and closer to the bonfire, she couldn't help herself any longer, going at a slow paced walk towards it. As the blonde reached the small bonfire, she sat down cross legged in front of it and put her hands towards the flame as a gesture, trying to heat herself up a bit.

The second she did so however, made the bonfire shoot up cinders around the base of the sword and immediately shine much brighter, lighting up the entire courtyard she was now seated in. After what seemed like hours of staring intently at the depths of the fire, the blonde stood up, noticing the giant doors at the end of the courtyard, also noticing that they were opened enough for a human to be able to make it through.

Looking to her left first, she noticed a door at the left end that was barred with wooden planks on the other side of it, easily figuring out that it was locked for the time being. Wanting to figure out where to head next, the blonde looked to her right, quickly noticing a black wooden door there, it didn't seem locked, but there was still something about it that sent a shiver of excitement straight down to her groin, promptly making her start rubbing her hardening nipples.

The longer she looked at the door, the more she wanted to rub one out.
Finally coming to a decision after a few minutes, the blonde lay down on the grass floor, spreading her legs wide apart while quickly latching her left hand around her budding clit, while her right hand immediately entered her pussy, realizing the cum had all disappeared for some reason.

Not one to dwell on such things, the blonde plunged two fingers into her pussy, moaning lewdly as she roughly finger fucked herself. Cumming almost instantly, but still wanting so much more. Pushing a third finger into her tight cunt, she screamed out in her ecstasy as a numbing orgasm shot through her body, forcing her back to arch from the ground.

As her pussy clenched hard around her digits, she could feel the insatiable desire to pleasure herself slowly die down. As she laid on the ground, panting and gasping for air, the blonde put the three fingers that had been used to finger herself, into her mouth one at a time, sucking her cum off of each digit, being careful so that she didn't waste any cum.

Feeling the glow of the bonfire against her over stimulated snatch and clit gave her another small continuous orgasm, coating the grass besides the kindled bonfire completely with her juices.

"It seems I'm not the only one that likes some willing pussy." The blonde giggled to herself as she slowly rose up to her feet, trying to hold her gaze away from the deceivingly powerful door, and towards the opened gates.

As she slowly walked over to the gates, she had the constant feeling that something was wrapped around her legs and arms, but every time she looked, there was no sign of such a thing. The feeling didn't disappear however, it only seemed to grow stronger the further away she got from the bonfire.

As her palms settled against the heavy iron doors, she snuck a peek inside the room, seeing the knight from before standing at the end of the room with another knight or maybe a warrior, this one obviously female, giving her what looked like a key, before the woman left through the now newly opened gates.

The new room consisted of a cracked stone floor, an open ceiling and a balcony above the newly opened gates. On the left side of the room, there were several large pots, whose contents were unknown to the blonde, as well as an open door near the end of the room. The right side was only lined with more pots, and nothing else worth noting.

The male knight she recognized from earlier that day, sat down on a giant staircase that was leading up to the gate where the second woman she had seen so far, had left.

Not wanting to stay hidden any longer, the blonde walked through the crack in the door she was at and slowly walked over to the sitting knight. The second she got within a certain range, just like with the hollows, the knight's helmed gaze shifted upwards and came to a halt on the naked woman that was slowly approaching him.

"Well hello there. I see you've crawled out of your cage. You liked being abused so far? Anyone walking around naked is just asking for it. You're just lucky the hollows around here are really weak, else you wouldn't be walking around at all right now." The knight said, she could hear a light chuckle in his voice before it died down as fast as it came.

"You would know, wouldn't you? Sitting above my cell like that, covering my helpless naked body with your rich cum." The blonde pouted, putting her hands on her hips while subconsciously spreading her legs a bit more, giving the hungry knight a good view of her hairless cunt.

"You like what you see, big boy?" She asked, already knowing his response. "Well then, come and get it." Was all that she got out before the knight was upon her, pushing her down to the ground with her ass sticking up at him.

Hearing the muffled noises of armor being dropped to the ground, she was about to turn around and look at her 'would-be-rapist' being interrupted when his gloved hand hit her ass hard, forcing a startled yelp to escape her lips.

Finally feeling his unclothed cock rub up against her abused pussy, she nearly came right then and there as she felt him push into her, stretching her far more than she had ever been stretched before. Moaning lewdly, the blonde tried placing her hands on the ground for better balance, but they were swiftly gripped and pinned behind her back, forcing her breasts and face to lift off the ground and dangle in the air.

For each hard thrust the knight made, the blonde came over and over again, by the time the man above her had gotten to a rough pace, she had already lost count of how many orgasms she had received, and she loved every second of it.

Hearing the knight that was pounding away at her snatch give a loud groan, she was sent into another spiraling orgasm as her pussy was filled with his huge load, filling her waiting womb to the brim with his hot cum. As his orgasm dragged on, the blonde felt like her stomach had started to bulge slightly from the extreme level of cum she had received and he still kept cumming.

After what seemed like hours, the knight pulled out his rock hard member from her pussy, unleashing a torrent of cum as he placed his slick dick at the entrance to her ass. Not caring much for the pilgrim underneath him, the knight started circling his cock head around her puckered asshole, making the blonde underneath him whimper and try to pull away.

"Who do you belong to bitch? Who is it that's going to keep fucking to until you can't think of anything else? Who's your new Master? Huh?" The knight said as he started relentlessly spanking the blonde's ass, forcing more orgasms out of her already abused slit. "Oh, now I remember something, you didn't even ask the name of the person fucking you. Well..." He said, preparing another powerful round of spankings. "The name is Oscar. From now on, whenever you're cumming, you're going to thank me for it. You got that whore? You're going to say 'Thank you Master Oscar' and then I'll fuck you even harder. Is that simple enough for such a tight whore to understand?"

After another relentless round of spankings, the blonde's ass was beet red, with markings of the knight, Oscar's, gloved hand on it.

"Yes! Thank you Master Oscar! Thank you!" The blonde yelled as Oscar made short work of her ass. Grinning underneath his helmet, Oscar lined his twelve inch cock up with her puckered asshole, seeing the ring of muscle quiver with excitement and pain from the beating she just received.

Giving one final slap to her ass, he drove his cock home in her ass, going to the hilt while listening to the blonde whore underneath him writhe in pain and pleasure, nearly chanting "Thank you Master" for every deep thrust Oscar gave her.

Her ass felt incredible. It was the tightest thing he'd ever fucked, easily outmatching her vice-tight pussy. For every agonizingly slow thrust he made, the woman underneath him seemed to cum for each time he pulled out and pushed in. Feeling himself growing closer to completion, Oscar gave another loud grunt of pleasure, while stuffing the pleasure enticed woman's backdoor with his cock.

She loved every second of it. Every hard slap she received, every thrust he made into her abused asshole, every degrading comment he made. She loved absolutely everything about this. The only thing she didn't like however, was the creeping feeling that she should have gone through the dark wooden door, that something far greater than her current human lover could ever hope to accomplish.

Hearing him give another grunt of pleasure sent those thoughts to the back of her mind, as she simply tried not to faint from the pleasure. She could feel his cock swell in size before he let loose another huge torrent of cum.

"Thank you, Master Oscar, for filling my whorish ass with your cum. Please fill me up with your dirty seed and send me back to my cell where I'll await your next visit with absolute bliss." She cried out as her final orgasm that session let loose, quickly knocking her to the ground with the extra weight of the half-naked knight on top of her.

As her mind went completely blank from the pleasure, an image of the kindled bonfire appeared in her mind, the image of her sitting there, peacefully fingering herself, cumming all over the bonfire...
And there she was out cold.

The blonde woke up next to the bonfire. The same bonfire that she had seen in her mind before fainting. Quickly looking around, she noticed two things. Firstly, there was no Oscar around, the knight was completely gone. Second, she was sitting cross-legged with a hand stroking her pubic mound and her other hand rubbing her ass cheeks.

After a few minutes, she decided to just go the other way. Rising to her feet, she noticed there was no real difficulty doing so, her ass was just fine, no red hand marks, while her pussy seemed to be just like it was when she first woke up in her cell. Weird, she thought, as her legs carried her naked form over to the dark wooden door.

Already feeling the pull it had on her sexual senses, the blonde had to steady herself a bit before continuing. The closer she got to the door, the more the need for pleasure began to rise within her.

When she was finally right next to the door, ready to reach for the handle, she hesitated slightly, having to rub her thighs together in order to quell the raging fire in her groin. Not now. I'll do it in a little bit, but not now. She thought, as she reached her hand out to the doorknob, twisting it and slowly opening the door.

Beyond the wooden door, she was met with a truly marvelous sight. Beyond the door she saw a huge room filled to the brim with hollows. Some were in cells, while others were walking up and down the short corridor leading to a massive dome. The walls, like all the others in the asylum, were a dark stone brick.

As she took a cautious step into the room, the blonde jumped slightly as the door flew shut, giving her toned ass a hard smack. Stumbling forward a few steps, the blonde fell onto her knees, causing her boobs to be pressed firmly together, as her hands slowly drifted to her sore ass, rubbing it gently to soothe the stinging pain.

Now on her knees with her eyes shut tightly, the blonde didn't notice the nearest hollow slowly walk his way over to her prone form. After rubbing her aching back end for what seemed like minutes, the blonde opened her eyes realizing that the sight before her had altered from before.

Before, her gaze was fixated on the huge dome in front of her, now however, her eyes rested on a wilted cock leaking pre-cum from its tip. Slowly, warily, the blonde looked up to find a hollow before her, this one however, was far different from the ones she had previously encountered, as well as fucked.

The hollow standing before her had pieces of armor placed haphazardly around its upper body, while its lower body seemed to be completely naked. Slowly turning her gaze back to the dripping member before her, the blonde woman lifted her head from the ground, placing her soft lips onto the head of the hollow's cock, giving it a wet sloppy kiss before she began taking more of the length presented to her into her mouth. She didn't know how to explain it, but the hollow whose cock was halfway into her hungry mouth, had caused the forgotten feeling of a fire in her groin to spring back to life, which she easily noticed as her tight cunny started dripping her juices onto the floor.

Forcing those feelings back to the depths of her mind, the blonde focused solely on the cock presented to her, it was longer than the others she had pleasured, almost as long as Oscar, she thought. Setting a slow pace, she started bobbing her head back and forth on the first few inches, sometimes she would pull off completely to give the head a few slow licks. Having gotten the experience of pleasuring men with her mouth long ago, the process seemed almost natural to her by this point. As time passed by, the hollow however, didn't seem to like the slow pace he was given, reaching down to place his wilted hand on top of the blonde head bobbing back and forth, the hollow used the strength he possessed to force the blonde to take his entire length, giving off a ghastly hiss as he felt his cock throb in her throat.

Taken by complete surprise, the blonde gagged on the cock in her mouth, spluttering salvia out of her mouth and onto the hollow's crotch. The feeling she got from being forced along the length in her mouth was ecstatic at worst, at best it was pure bliss. The rough textures of a dried in tool soon had her legs quiver in anticipation, wanting nothing else than to have something, anything, fill her greedy holes.

As if on a cue, the blonde felt another rough texture rub against her ass cheeks, trying to look over her shoulder didn't help much, so there was no real way to prepare her for what truly lay ahead of her. The small touches along her butt cheeks soon became a sea of hands sliding along it, and before long, most of her ass and lower back was covered in hands, all of which she believed to be hollows.

Having not stopped her ministrations for the one in her mouth, the blonde was pleasantly surprised when the hollow before her pushed her face to his pubic bone, forcing all of his cock into her mouth, just before he exploded in a torrent of white, which was sent straight down her throat, coming to a rest at her gullet. What didn't flow down on its own, the blonde quickly went to work swallowing down, without realizing it, or caring for that matter, the hollow before her had vanished into the particles she had started thinking of as their souls.

With her mouth now free, she was allowed to turn around, nearly cumming on the spot as she saw at least a dozen more hollows standing in a circle around her. Taking a quick look around, it seemed someone had carried her to the middle of the dome, or maybe she walked there herself, she honestly couldn't recall it, but with all the hollows standing around her, either feeling her up or jerking off, it wasn't like such a small detail mattered to her.

Taking another look towards her rear, the blonde quickly came as she saw the hollows all jerk off. One of those that still fingered her ass cheeks, seemed to be positioning himself behind her, and soon enough, she felt the head of a cock press against her precious pussy. Hadn't she been so wet already, the intrusion might have hurt her, but instead, the hollow's member slipped into her depths with a audible *slurp* noise.

As her pussy was intruded upon, her head soon slumped against the stone floor, resting there while moaning lewdly in time with the hollow's thrusts. Hearing a muffled sound around her, the blonde lazily gazed around her, seeing how the hollows had followed their comrade's example. Now there stood four hollows on each side of her, with two standing around her leaking pussy and one more at her front, all of which were jerking off at a monstrously fast pace. Hearing loud hisses of pleasure around her, the blonde raised herself onto her hands and knees, opening her mouth wide while letting her tongue hang out the front of her mouth, urging the hollows around her to cum all over her naked body.

Within seconds, the hollow at her front gave one of their ghastly hissing noises, cumming near instantly afterwards, covering the blonde whore's face and hair with its vile seed. Opening her mouth even wider, the blonde felt a few gushes of cum hit her tongue, making short work of it, swallowing down what landed on her tongue.

As if on command, the hollows all around her came one after the other, the three flanking her left side completely covered her upper back as well as what wasn't already covered in her hair. The three at her other side quickly followed suit, unloading their loads all over her lower back, as well as her unused anal opening. Next were the two at her rear, both of which covered one ass cheek each, while the final hollow came inside of her already abused pussy, filling both it as well as sending a hefty load into her waiting womb. All acting as one, the remaining hollows all gave off their ghastly hiss before vanishing in a cloud of particles.

Thinking herself done here, the blonde tried rising to her feet, but was quickly shoved down to the ground as another cock pressed into her filled pussy. Wiping the cum covering her eyes away, the blonde looked back with a lust-filled gleam in her eyes, only letting out a low gasp as she saw herself covered on every side by another group of hollows, this one twice the size of the one before.

Groaning in a mixture of pain and pleasure as the hollows started playing with her cum covered body, she was quickly flipped onto her back, showing off her unstained, bouncing boobs for the hollows to ogle. Within a few seconds, she had one hollow pounding into her wet cunt, while another one had positioned himself with his cock between the valley of her breasts. Looking up, she found a hollow on his knees, easily invading her mouth, starting to roughly face fuck the slut before him. Taking another frantic look around, the whore noticed all of the hollows were jacking off at an unbelievable pace, some already dripping pre-cum.

More and more hollows crowded her, and soon, it was almost impossible to see the walls around her. Feeling a sudden rush of cum being shot in her mouth, quickly accompanied by a ghastly scream told her that the hollow using her mouth had finished, only being able to take one quick gasp for air, her mouth was soon stuffed by another hollow, this one was equally enthusiastic as the previous.

As she started to slowly lose herself in the pleasure, several of the surrounding hollows hissed and came, all covering the one rutting between her boobs. This one too, hissed as he released a huge load straight at her face and chest, easily covering the underside of her chin with cum. One soon replaced the other, as the hollows each came, another was quick to fill in for the last. More and more came, all the hollows that had been standing around her, jerking off their red-brown cocks, erupted at once, making room for the next in line to take a shot. Having no sense of time, hours could have passed, hours felt like minutes, while minutes passed like seconds.

Having lost all ability to see due to the large amount of cum coating her face, the blonde slut didn't even notice as hollows replaced hollows, her arms were now jacking off two of them, while her mouth was busy working on two who had felt like sharing her oral opening, both of which soon came and were replaced by the next in line.

How much time had passed, she couldn't tell, the endless flow of hollows never stopped, when those around her faded away into nothingness, a new row soon came forth with their members leaking over the now cum covered floor. Not that she cared, for each load that was sent into her waiting womb, she came. For each shot that was sent down her throat, she screamed out her pleasure and came hard, just before getting her mouth clogged by another cock.

This was going to be her new meaning of existence, she was going to stay as a cum-dumpster for the rest of her pleasurable undead life.

[VintageBass]

A/N: This is a really sex filled story based on the game Dark Souls. If you're not interested in Reading something thats outright porn, then just don't do it.

Well we didn't want porn, we wouldn't want to be here

[fielddranzer]

A/N: This is a really sex filled story based on the game Dark Souls. If you're not interested in Reading something thats outright porn, then just don't do it.

Well we didn't want porn, we wouldn't want to be here

Fair point. Can't even count how many things I've seen here that would be considered "porn" elsewhere. Do be so kind as to tell me how much I suck, in Every. Single. Way.

[VintageBass]

A/N: This is a really sex filled story based on the game Dark Souls. If you're not interested in Reading something thats outright porn, then just don't do it.

Well we didn't want porn, we wouldn't want to be here

Fair point. Can't even count how many things I've seen here that would be considered "porn" elsewhere. Do be so kind as to tell me how much I suck, in Every. Single. Way.

For one, don't be so hard on yourself. That's not exactly a good thing to keep. Unless you're referring to a different kind of suck, but I do believe otherwise.

Otherwise if you want a critique, I actually need to read the thing and I'm not exactly a fan of Dark Souls, nor do I know a single thing about it, so I can't really give a critique on how good it is retaining to the source material. For a story and its porn material, sure that I can do.

[fielddranzer]

Yeah, I don't expect many people to approve of this as Dark Souls, so as a pornographic story, that's about all I'd like to get critique.
And as for me sucking, it's just gotten a thing for me to believe, mostly because I don't really get any "feedback" on what I do. Sure, I may like it or dislike it myself, but that's just my opinion, kinda like this one though, for various reasons.
I just write whenever I feel like it, so it's more of a hobby than anything. And it just so happens that I like making women, some times men, into hardcore sluts. Mostly women, but you've gotta try it all, right?

[Lucky777]

A couple grammar mistakes, but it's cool.

[Kurushimi]

I am somewhat curious as to your tendency to switch up what you call the woman in the story. It doesn't seem to provide any kind of consistency. Other than that, your grammar and spelling are both excellent, your punctuation is not lacking, and your storytelling is pretty good. I'd certainly want more.

[fielddranzer]

I am somewhat curious as to your tendency to switch up what you call the woman in the story. It doesn't seem to provide any kind of consistency. Other than that, your grammar and spelling are both excellent, your punctuation is not lacking, and your storytelling is pretty good. I'd certainly want more.

I do my best most of the time, when I'm "taken" by a subject. I've still got a ways to go when it comes to both consistency and my grammar. As for what I called this particular character, it's slightly from in-game. The Deprived starting class is described as someone that has lost everything and has no memory of their past, as well as the fact that they start armor-less with only some shreds of cloth covering their sexual areas, for men it's just a loincloth, and for women, it is a kind of cloth wrapping around their breasts and a, I don't know, sewn together loincloth to prevent getting some up-skirt, believe me, I have tried.

That part is mostly for those that don't know much about Dark Souls as a game, and this here, meaning "The Asylum" is one of my newer stories. Just can't post it at the site I posted some older works due to a lack of category.

[Terrantor!!!]

Dark Holes: Prepare to Get Fucked Edition. The only thing you suck at is sucking at this, if that made sense. I say keep it up, I know there's a lot of ppl that write and need writers. You just gotta put yourself out there and who cares if no one likes it, they'll more than likely tell you why and u can use it to better yourself.

[fielddranzer]

Dark Holes: Prepare to Get Fucked Edition. The only thing you suck at is sucking at this, if that made sense. I say keep it up, I know there's a lot of ppl that write and need writers. You just gotta put yourself out there and who cares if no one likes it, they'll more than likely tell you why and u can use it to better yourself.

Dark Holes: Prepare to Get Fucked Edition... *Chuckles*
I've gotta remember that one.

"The only thing I suck at, is sucking at this"
Now that one is a bit tricky, but I think I know what you mean. "Think"

[GreaseMyBACON]

Your writing is really good, can't wait for her to run into a big ol' boss monster.

One thing I would mention however is there are some cases of repeating phrases. One example is whenever the girl moans, she is "moaning lewdly". Variety in diction is definitely one of the harder skills of writing, especially in longer works, but it can easily take "very good" writing to "great" writing.