Steam | an AMJ CYOA novel | updated 4-20-2014

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How does Pram react?

Poll ended at Thu Jun 05, 2014 4:32 am

Flip the fuck out
2
15%
Ordered, ladylike response
5
38%
Time for tea
6
46%
 
Total votes : 13

Re: Steam | an AMJ CYOA novel | updated 4-20-2014

Postby [Brand_Name] » Sun May 04, 2014 7:31 pm

Personally, I don't really care, but I can't speak for everyone. I read of my phone a lot, which prevents me from downloading the pdf's. But that's just my two cents.
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Re: Steam | an AMJ CYOA novel | updated 4-20-2014

Postby AllenAndArth » Mon May 05, 2014 1:02 am

normally i read from my phone too and although i can download pdf...just doesn't work, let's leave it at that, so i don't really know how the pdf is
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Re: Steam | an AMJ CYOA novel | updated 4-20-2014

Postby axmanjack » Wed May 07, 2014 3:48 am

So, .pdf isn't really a big deal. Cool.
In defense of it, it does preserve my formatting options (shit just gets turned into true text here), but I did notice only a handful of people downloaded it.
Alright, duly noted.
Barring incident, I'm going to start outlining this week and writing by at least Sunday. There's nothing to do in the town I moved to, which bodes well for you my glorious five person fan base.
Look forward to

Dark Things

the next chapter of Steam.
COMING SOON
ZOMG
FUR RLZ
sorry
-AMJ
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Re: Steam | an AMJ CYOA novel | updated 4-20-2014

Postby [Brand_Name] » Wed May 07, 2014 12:06 pm

axmanjack Wrote:So, .pdf isn't really a big deal. Cool.
In defense of it, it does preserve my formatting options (shit just gets turned into true text here), but I did notice only a handful of people downloaded it.
Alright, duly noted.
Barring incident, I'm going to start outlining this week and writing by at least Sunday. There's nothing to do in the town I moved to, which bodes well for you my glorious five person fan base.
Look forward to

Dark Things

the next chapter of Steam.
COMING SOON
ZOMG
FUR RLZ
sorry
-AMJ


*ten, per the polls
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Re: Steam | an AMJ CYOA novel | updated 4-20-2014

Postby axmanjack » Wed May 07, 2014 6:12 pm

[Brand_Name] Wrote:
axmanjack Wrote:So, .pdf isn't really a big deal. Cool.
In defense of it, it does preserve my formatting options (shit just gets turned into true text here), but I did notice only a handful of people downloaded it.
Alright, duly noted.
Barring incident, I'm going to start outlining this week and writing by at least Sunday. There's nothing to do in the town I moved to, which bodes well for you my glorious five person fan base.
Look forward to

Dark Things

the next chapter of Steam.
COMING SOON
ZOMG
FUR RLZ
sorry
-AMJ


*ten, per the polls


One of the votes is me. :(
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Re: Steam | an AMJ CYOA novel | updated 4-20-2014

Postby thealchemist » Wed May 07, 2014 6:51 pm

axmanjack Wrote:
[Brand_Name] Wrote:
axmanjack Wrote:So, .pdf isn't really a big deal. Cool.
In defense of it, it does preserve my formatting options (shit just gets turned into true text here), but I did notice only a handful of people downloaded it.
Alright, duly noted.
Barring incident, I'm going to start outlining this week and writing by at least Sunday. There's nothing to do in the town I moved to, which bodes well for you my glorious five person fan base.
Look forward to

Dark Things

the next chapter of Steam.
COMING SOON
ZOMG
FUR RLZ
sorry
-AMJ


*ten, per the polls


One of the votes is me. :(

At least you have 7 dedicated fans and 2 loyalists
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Re: Steam | an AMJ CYOA novel | updated 4-20-2014

Postby axmanjack » Fri May 09, 2014 5:36 pm

:D
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Re: Steam | an AMJ CYOA novel | updated 4-20-2014

Postby axmanjack » Wed May 14, 2014 1:45 pm

Votes are locked in.
IT'S TIME FOR TEA.
I start writing Sunday-ish.
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Re: Steam | an AMJ CYOA novel | updated 4-20-2014

Postby thealchemist » Wed May 14, 2014 6:49 pm

I am extremely excited to see how you would pull this off.
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Re: Steam | an AMJ CYOA novel | updated 4-20-2014

Postby axmanjack » Fri May 16, 2014 1:12 pm

thealchemist Wrote:I am extremely excited to see how you would pull this off.

I'm outlining that section right now. I think it may have saved Pram as a character.
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Re: Steam | an AMJ CYOA novel | updated 4-20-2014

Postby [Brand_Name] » Fri May 16, 2014 8:09 pm

What do you mean, as a character? Was she going to die or something?
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Re: Steam | an AMJ CYOA novel | updated 4-20-2014

Postby axmanjack » Sat May 17, 2014 8:13 pm

I just meant it's going to keep her from falling away into the background.
There's no way I'd kill off a primary character or two in this next chapter, right?
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Re: Steam | an AMJ CYOA novel | updated 4-20-2014

Postby axmanjack » Mon Jun 02, 2014 3:26 am

First 2000 words of chapter four down on paper. Well, written in rich text format or whatever.
I'll keep you guys posted as I write more!
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Re: Steam | an AMJ CYOA novel | updated 4-20-2014

Postby thealchemist » Tue Jun 03, 2014 2:16 am

sweet. keep going axman.
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Re: Steam | an AMJ CYOA novel | updated 4-20-2014

Postby axmanjack » Tue Jun 10, 2014 1:32 pm

Making progress, going to write again Wednesday or Thursday.
Anybody have some feedback on what they might like to see in the upcoming chapter?
More sex? Less sex? Weirder sex?
There's going to be a new character, and I'm pretty excited about her.
People call her the Frisco Bomber.
She doesn't use bombs.
That bothers her.
See you soon.
-AMJ.
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Re: Steam | an AMJ CYOA novel | updated 4-20-2014

Postby thealchemist » Sat Jun 14, 2014 6:53 pm

Hmmm... in all honesty I feel that Steam is more of a novel than Pressia was. Pressia on its own seems more like an erotic novel. So in terms of more or less sex... I feel you should just keep writing as things go on. If a chapter feels like it needs more sex then add some. If it needs less or stranger then do as you please. I have full faith that no matter what you do to it, Steam will be an excellent read.
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Re: Steam | an AMJ CYOA novel | updated 4-20-2014

Postby thealchemist » Sat Jul 19, 2014 7:10 am

...soooo chapter four anyone? hello? anyone else on the hype train? chapter four?
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Re: Steam | an AMJ CYOA novel | updated 4-20-2014

Postby AllenAndArth » Mon Jul 21, 2014 10:52 pm

Me, me, me! o/
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