[Ren'PY] Slave of the Sharpclaws (Planning phase)

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[Ren'PY] Slave of the Sharpclaws (Planning phase)

Postby Spookshow » Wed Oct 16, 2013 12:54 pm

So, I've been messing around with Ren'Py, and I'm amazed at just how easy it is to make things in that language. The scripting is amazingly intuitive - and after a while, I got to thinking about what I could do with it.

Having lurked here for a few years, the idea of a LoK game sprang to mind immediately.

SoS is a title about another slave that ends up on the Sharpclaw planet, enslaved by the lizard-conquerors. After being there a few days, our player has a choice to make - will she attempt to fit in with this strange culture and find a place for herself there? Or will she try to rebel and escape?

I have a VERY LOOSE plan for the game thus far; this will tighten up as I actually write it. I do need an artist - and at least some of the game content will be dependent on what the artist likes/is comfortable with.

So without further whatnot - the present design doc!

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

A1 - Stranded on the Sharpclaw planet
-Introduce PC
-Introduce Liz, your friendly captor
-Introduce the Chief
-Introduce the barmaid
-Introduce other slaves
-Choice - try to escape or try to get along?

E1
-Gather information
-Sneak around
-Several voyeur scenes
-Liz becomes suspicious
-choice - seduce Liz (E2) or just lie? (e3)

E2
-Sex scene w/liz
-She still doesn't buy your excuses
-Decides that if you want sharpclaw sex THAT bad...
-Several 'use' scenes in bar and w/chief
-A little more information gained
-Choice - daring midnight run to try and get K's ship running (E4) or challenge Liz for freedom (E5)

E3
-Liz doesn't buy it.
-Sent w/other slaves to work gathering food
-Chance at a few scenes w/slaves here.
-Guaranteed voyeur scene
-Reconsider - really escape or get along? (G1)
-If escape - K's ship (e4) or head for the other `zard colony? (e6)

E4
-Breathless run to the ship
-Intact... but totally out of fuel/not working.
-Found by Krystal
-Mocks you for wanting to leave
-Beats/rapes PC
-Bad end - E9

E5
-Hoooooo boy.
-VERY tricky dialogue-driven battle
-If lose, decided that you will be made into a PROPER slave via mindwiping - bad end - E9.
-IF win, it's announced that you will go free, and Liz will be executed for her weakness.
-Choice - try to get Liz, or let her die? (E7, E8)

E6
-Breathless run through the night
-Being tracked by hunters
-Can tell it's Liz on the one hand, a group of SC warriors on the other
-Have to go in the direction of one or the other.
-If Liz, have a chance to seduce her and have her let you escape.
-If Warriors, same chance - but they'll just beat you, bring you back, bad end (E9)
-Run to Hornhead colony successful!
-...you're promptly enslaved! But at least it's a less rape-fueled version of slavery! END.

E7
-Pushing your luck, eh?
-Well, fuck.
-Convince the Sharpclaw leader to let her go. If you fail, E9 for your audacity.
-If succeed (which basically entails declaring your love for Liz, immediately cast out to go find somewhere to live.
-Long, hard trek to the Hornnose colony in injured state
-Liz's expertise is key to you getting in - and yours as you actually beat a Sharpclaw warrior.
-New life. Can't get offworld... but it beats being a slave. Also, cute lizardgirl wife! END

E8
-Doublefucksundaes.
-Liz declares that she let you win because she loves you.
-AND OFF GOES HER HEAD.
-Mind cracked, you're thrown out into the wilderness.
-Can keep wandering towards hornhead colony, or just wander aimlessly.
-If hornheads, ending as E6. If wander aimlessly, taken by dickwolves. END.

E9
-Herded into a cell
-Fed a combination of drugs and aphrodisiacs.
-RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE RAPE!
-If ending did not come from E7, Liz gets in on the act, disgusted with how you treated her.
-By the end, you become a mind-blown sex-toy.
-Other details may depend on artist.
-END!

G1
-Talk to Liz about how to get along better.
-Bartender, Temple acolyte, Warrior roles apt
-Short scene of each
-Each sort of a disaster
-Can choose any (B1, T1, W1)

B1
-Report to Bartender again.
-Montage of a few days -

(Bartender arc - become a fucktoy, or assimilate into the culture and become a canny businesswoman and psychologist - that also enjoys a good fuck? Only Bartender sex scene is with latter route.)

W1
(Warrior arc - mighty protector of the tribe, conqueror of the hornheads, warden and fellow of the beasts of the field, or prey?)

T1
(Sacred prostitute, Prophet of the Dark One (demon futa path), or enlightened seer?)
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Re: [Ren'PY] Slave of the Sharpclaws (Planning phase)

Postby [Brand_Name] » Sat Oct 19, 2013 5:07 am

Great ideas- looks promising. Afraid I can't help though... :(
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