Wow, I get thrown off for a little while and this thing seems to be booming...!
I should probably give a heads up on what's been happening lately.
So I know I said I was back in business in February, but... eheh... A friend of mine thought it would be a funny practical joke to delete my "private" folder on my laptop. I've been smart to keep backup copies, but that didn't stop me from getting put off. Had a major set of events recently, so... I'll probably start working again on this as soon as possible. The downtime has given me some ideas, and I think a lot of my work on scenes for this update was monotonous... Will have to go back and see what I can do to make it more kinky and less "stick Y chromosome parts in X chromosome parts."
I think I'm going to fix any leftover bugs in the prison and leave it as is. I'll be honest, I'm not satisfied with the plot I put together for the prison, but I'd have to go back and butcher it to hell and back to make it more satisfactory.
Grosham Wrote:You have a wonderful beginning here. I'm excited to see what Nytarra is going to now, both during her time in the detention cells and after Sen and Lendell break her out. I won't hazard any guesses publicly, though.
I also want to offer you my thanks for being careful around a sensitive topic. This story has me hooked and shows incredible potential, so I hope that you won't let it die. Your writing is terrific, so please keep going.
Thank you! I think folks might be disappointed with the prison events, but I'm trying!
The-Rippy-One Wrote:Just my two bits - I don't care what anyone else says, that second hidden scene was hot. The first one was nice, but I keep having a war with myself between every other scene, and
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Jenallia's...oh gods, that disgusted "no" just cracks me up so hard. I hope you do eventually let us seduce grandma. XD
Pair of oddball events to report - On the first cafeteria scene, I got a pair of wrappers I shouldn't know to ask for them, and during the second, I had a replay of the first day's fight and then the screen went black. I could pull up the status screen, but nothing else seemed to work.
Eventually, but it'll take a while, "romance" (if you can call it that) for Jenallia will probably occur much later on, and with any luck it'll be a mix of erotic, creepy, and "wut" all tied together in a neat little package!
I... Think I fixed that wrapper issue. Like I said, it's been a bit since I worked on it.
AllenAndArth Wrote:I still can't pass the jail part T-T
Eyup. Working on that. The whole jail is probably the biggest clusterf*** I've ever made!
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in the partially bugtested version, not romancing Iris should allow folks to get past that.
So, like I posted on the blog, as a sign of good faith, I'm going to pop up a link to the completely untested version if folks want to take a look at what's in store... It's pretty crummy right now though, and I'd suggest having your hand on the F12 key in case you need to back out due to a bug.
http://www.filedropper.com/noteventeste ... alliawrath