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Fan-made Trailer

Postby Tai » Sun Feb 28, 2010 8:28 am

:D WHEEEEEEEE!!! I don't have to bother trying to fix it anymore! *deep sigh of relief*

:!: CHANGE THE QUALITY TO MEDIUM :!:

Meh so it don't got play and replay buttons... so sue me... :roll:
CS4 seems to have it in for me... :cry:
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Anyways, I'm doing more Actionscript 3.0 research now... and it's past midnight... and I'm all out of rootbeer... and whiskey... *sigh*

*edit*
Grah! It won't even stop at the end like I'd told it too! It did when I previewed it on my compy! Wut da cwap?! :oops:
:evil: stop(); stop(); stop();!!!
Please excuse the non-stop trailer... it'll stop making noise if you click "forward" in the right click menu...

err... other than the technicalities of krystal's spaz walk and the lack of buttons... any thoughts? :?
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Re: Fan-made Trailer

Postby Untamed » Sun Feb 28, 2010 8:44 am

Words cannot decribe how astronomically epic this trailer is.. So I'll just leave it at that.

Well done.
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Re: Fan-made Trailer

Postby LOKfan69 » Sun Feb 28, 2010 9:03 am

Pretty cool man! You did a especially good job on the voice.
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Re: Fan-made Trailer

Postby trunks2585 » Sun Feb 28, 2010 10:30 am

shit man we even have a trailer for the game now, you got me wondering if we should make some of the scenes in there canon to the game, like the interaction between scales and krystal, it's way different from what we did. Hmm maybe something to consider for later on sections on return visits to scales...
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Re: Fan-made Trailer

Postby -QQ- » Sun Feb 28, 2010 12:20 pm

you know i like it and as trunks said you put some good ideas in. i give it 6 thumbs up because im that awesome and can spawn extra limbs.
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Re: Fan-made Trailer

Postby hididilly » Sun Feb 28, 2010 2:22 pm

Epic Awesome Chuck-Norris-Kicking-Mr T's-Assness is the closest I can get to describing that.
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Re: Fan-made Trailer

Postby zekameka » Sun Feb 28, 2010 5:56 pm

very cool, "epic" !
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Re: Fan-made Trailer

Postby magnusadder » Sun Feb 28, 2010 8:10 pm

umm wow.
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Re: Fan-made Trailer

Postby JL95 » Sun Feb 28, 2010 9:30 pm

Awesome! I like the way you put everything together. > : )

If this forum had a reputation system, I would +rep you. XD
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Re: Fan-made Trailer

Postby Tai » Sun Feb 28, 2010 9:37 pm

-QQ- Wrote:you know i like it and as trunks said you put some good ideas in. i give it 6 thumbs up because im that awesome and can spawn extra limbs.

:lol: AH HAHA! This made me laugh... I actually got stares from my roomies I was laughing so hard... :P
Thank you sir, may I have another! X3

8-) And Trunks I would be SO honored if such an interaction actually became a reality in the game, and ANYTHING I could do to assist this project would be BEYOND awesome... Voicing more of Scales, ECT. :!: I will accept the job gladly! :!:

Until then I'll fart around with the other animations... hurr hurr ~^_^~
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Re: Fan-made Trailer

Postby Kalypso » Sun Feb 28, 2010 11:00 pm

Damn, that's nice. Scratch that--epic.
I wonder if you might want to make a new one with the updated CENSORED FOR SPOILERS. Then again, you'd have to be sworn to secrecy before we could let you in on that stuff.
This is great though, really is.
Here's to hopes that this gets posted on 4Chan a hundred times over.
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Re: Fan-made Trailer

Postby dollspit » Mon Mar 01, 2010 6:18 am

Very clever!

Also...
Tai Wrote:...and I'm all out of rootbeer... and whiskey...

A man after my own heart! :lol:
BTW, I'm the resident wannabe. :\
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Re: Fan-made Trailer

Postby trunks2585 » Mon Mar 01, 2010 6:32 am

4chan, paws.ru, swfchan, and any other areas talking about LoK, this trailer should be on them all.

Kal don't tease them, with what i know you are thinking, lol. Tai I'm not sure about the voice acting, we've had talks about it and we are all kinda 'meh not really needed' about it. However other things besides voice work would be nice, like the airplane crashing effect would go great, even in the current version0.2 we just didn't have the sounds. There was someone else that was making music for locations, so if he's only doing music I'd say you are more than welcome to do sounds.

I'd love to see more of what you come up with, maybe play around with making scenes like you said but make sure that they would be more 'in game' structured (forward backward buttons to advance the scene maybe some text spoken by whoever, etc.) rather than things that play on their own compleatly. Just remember what you come up with for your own ideas of scenes in the game would go along with the 'community contribution' aspect. We didn't write it or plan it but by god we'll take it and put it in. Just keep practicing since you said you had some problems.

Oh yeah i do plan to include some stuff from the trailer in my script, maybe not like how it appears in the trailer but it'll be there.(like your first encounter with scales, the "you have no idea what awaits" i could do right there but the ' you see, it's hopeless' line I've got in mind for a later visit to him. I think i'm allowed to tell you that since it's obvious you're gonna see him more than once) I can't promise you'll see it in 0.3 or 0.4 it all depends on how quickly we advance the story with the releases.
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Re: Fan-made Trailer

Postby prettypinkpwny » Mon Mar 01, 2010 8:00 am

Haha, cumming soon. Try looking up some epic fonts to do the trailer justice. Just out of curiosity, do you guys already have a storyline set for LoK or is it open-ended at this point? Or did I miss a thread?
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Re: Fan-made Trailer

Postby Brainstorm » Mon Mar 01, 2010 2:54 pm

Hehehe nice attempt. Seems like you know a bit about flash! :)
I like your rendition of scales and a how the trailer opens up with the trees and scales walking up too her, that was a promising cut scene.
also the scene with scales how it looked was fluent and pretty neat.

my constructive criticism here would have to be mostly the text graphics and title and ending title screens need work *End Criticism*

My personal opinions?, the epic and dark atmosphere you added to the trailer needs to leave, allow me to explain.

Odd for me to say such a thing BECAUSE in most cases "Epic and Dark" are pretty awesome! I just don't think this game should aim for an Epic feel.
It was definitely the night wish song + dark voice overs which gave it that feel, NOT trying to tear your voice acting up, in fact that was pretty damn good, but I felt it was unsuitable for this project, so I am glad that we have opted for no voice overs in the end game because a voice can evoke so much feelings, and if done wrong the voices could invoke the wrong feelings, maybe too much work, for something I feel the game could do without, again I don't want to come off as thrashing what you have done, I am just brainstorming about what I have seen here.

There ya go, those are my two cents.

Have a nice day.
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Re: Fan-made Trailer

Postby Tai » Mon Mar 01, 2010 4:10 pm

;)
Brainstorm Wrote: 1)Hehehe nice attempt. Seems like you know a bit about flash! :)
2)My constructive criticism here would have to be mostly the text graphics and title and ending title screens need work *End Criticism*
3)My personal opinions?, the epic and dark atmosphere you added to the trailer needs to leave, allow me to explain... ect.
4)Have a nice day.


1)Heh, sorta... had some experience with 8 but 10(aka CS4) had some pretty big changes so I'm still getting up to speed...
2)/agree! A lot of the ones I picked were feeling too strange to look at by the time the end rolled around... If the LOK members had a specific font in mind I'd gladly replace what I got in there...
3) The more I've looked at it, and the game, and the responses, I tend to agree... I admit giving it this atmosphere was a LOT of fun, but perhaps not fitting for the project... And don't worry, unless someone says, "Dude, you suck... go back to art class..." without ANY helpful hints, I'm not gonna take it as "bashin' mah goods" every artist, however lousy or experienced, should be ready to take some constructive critisism.
4)Oh I will... especially when they finish the V0.2 Build... :) What a NIIIIIiice day that will be...

Thank you for your thoughts Brain, it seems to have hit the nail on the head of what I was looking to fix/learn from this post... :P


dollspit Wrote:Very clever!
Also...
Tai Wrote:...and I'm all out of rootbeer... and whiskey...

A man after my own heart! :lol:

heheheheh... *blush* :D
And someone after mine apparently... ;)
trunks2585 Wrote:4chan, paws.ru, swfchan, and any other areas talking about LoK, this trailer should be on them all.

:? And many many words that are trimmed to slim an already unforgivingly long post that are important!


Hehe, I'd be honored if such a thing happened, but as was said, with what I know now I might like to do a new one with "new" content or a new feel at least. On voice acting, I have NO QUARRELS picking it up or putting it down, if it is unneccessary right now, forget I offered! ;)
As for sounds, I'm a forager, and with many torrenshal and extracting "secrets" ( 8-) makin myself sound cooler than I really am :? ) I can snag many a sound from many a dark corner... name your need and I'll give it to you in at least 3 flavors... :lol: (I might make my next post to the creative corner a soundboard with the sounds you requested and any others that I have ATM that I think may help X3)
I also have the facilities to edit sounds you already have to make them, "more appropriate" like stoney reverb on a moan or step since she is in a cave, or forest rustling ambience could be editted to exclude birds, speed up the tempo on a sound without changing the pitch...things like that.

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Now seriously, keep up the good work LOKTeam! Ah bah-leave in yuh bruthah!! :mrgreen:

*edit* Maybe I should get some breakfast... and stop chugging so much... >.>
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Re: Fan-made Trailer

Postby -QQ- » Mon Mar 01, 2010 4:42 pm

i finally now will have free time to start animating our other characters so we can start moving toward a v3 build.
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Re: Fan-made Trailer

Postby Tai » Mon Mar 01, 2010 4:52 pm

-QQ- Wrote:i finally now will have free time to start animating our other characters so we can start moving toward a v3 build.

:o *GASP* WOOT!!! :D
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OW! *lifts a lil' root*
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Re: Fan-made Trailer

Postby -QQ- » Wed Mar 03, 2010 7:40 am

let me tell you though i really am impressed by your trailer. and that might actually work if we have general scales speak another language but have subtitles i think it was kinda cool reminded me of pans labyrinth.
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Re: Fan-made Trailer

Postby Ketsueki » Wed Mar 03, 2010 8:52 am

I seriously loved the way that 'scales and krystal interacted; even the voice was perfect. It was like Krystal had some kind of implant subtitling it for her, but keeping the source audio so she could begin to learn the language and hear the emotional undertones; which I think you nailed.
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