a short test

[franny]

this was an attempted remake based on LOK but its been taken as far as I really want it to. It started to get unorganized and I couldn't figure out some of the actionscript in the original
it doesn't really effect the project going on here, but since its done, take it as you will

[hididilly]

It's nawt that bad actually. Shame you only put in one animation, but it's really well done and the figures have obviously taken a while to make. Good effort!

[trunks2585]

hmm so you put in your own artwork for this, i really like the animation on her tail, very fluid, i'll save the rest of the art critique as this is more about the flash itself.

so i see 2 real screens, the empty clearing, and the face fuck scene, not much to show, but you said it's a short test.

My biggest problem would be once you get to screen 2 you can't go back to screen 1, something that really needs to be fixed. Likewise on screen one it looks like you can just keep walking off to the left, put something in there that prevents that.

the facefuck scene doesn't look too bad to me, i'd change the cum effect as that just looks like water or drool or something along those lines.

[bobsen]

This is freaking awesome! It all looks so fluent, from the walking animation to the actual scene! Great job mate!

[dollspit]

Awesome! I actually really like your interpretation of Krystal! Shes kinda more mature here. Was that what you were going for?
You really seem to have the animation down. Very smooth and very accentuated.

Considering that this is just a test, I only see one thing I would change. That'd be the translucency of the cum. I'd go brighter, more visible.
Thats just me though.

I really dig what you've got so far! Keep it up!
hurr imma durr

[Melkiah]

Wow, seriously please continue your work cause its the best I've seen, the animation and characters look much more realistic, its great.

[Untamed]

You have great skill, you should probably make some scenes for LOK. Keep it up (and I mean that in more ways than one ;3)

[franny]

yeah, its definitely unfinished, I can understand why playshapes wanted to quit flash. There's alot of work involved. Still, I learned a great deal about actionscript/animation from this

LOK is a pretty ambitious project, and animation in scenes would be fun to do. In fact, this was mostly done to refresh my AS/animation chops without coming up with an idea of my own

Anyway, heres the .fla if anyone wants to look the mess I made
warning: it was saved and compacted in cs4. I'm not entirely sure, but choosing "save and compact" cut down .fla size from 40mb to 7mb, so I don't know if it'll work
http://www.mediafire.com/?myy0gimtfvz

[Ketsueki]

From what I can see of the .fla files they're effectively like the difference between .bmp files and .png files; no loss of quality but a file that must first be decompressed before any meaningful operations can alter it's content (aside from deletion or bulk copy that is).

[Renara]

From what I can see of the .fla files they're effectively like the difference between .bmp files and .png files; no loss of quality but a file that must first be decompressed before any meaningful operations can alter it's content (aside from deletion or bulk copy that is).

They also have some kind of wacky internal file-system that gets badly fragmented quite quickly. So when the file was 40mb it will have been a mixture of uncompressed space, but mostly empty space as well.

The animation you posted is really well done! I agree with the comments on the cum being a bit too translucent, however it's been done really well otherwise; it's the part that takes me forever to do just a simple and crappy effect

[Lazycat]

I could haw been fooled to believe it was the game itself in a remade version. Its both a good drawing still and well animated, and have high potential.

[Vyksen]

...OMG.
This is impressive!!!!
Not bad. I really like it.

[dollspit]

I agree with the comments on the cum being a bit too translucent, however it's been done really well otherwise...

Oh, absolutely! Don't get me wrong, I think the cum animation was extremely well done. As far as I could tell, each bit was hand animated, so it didn't disappear or melt or fade into the foreground which is something you usually see in low quality flash productions.
I just wish it were a bit more visible so I could appreciate it better!

[Nextus]

Damm, that's some pretty darn good work on the animation, if you take criticism, you might want to work on character design and texture work. Of course, that's easy for me to say, still haven't learned flash meself, but planning on it

[Bmuerte]

I really like the art style in this one.

[iKurby]

I dig this.

[Ranard Lightningfall]

I like the more mature feel of your iterpretation of Krystal. Also her walk is a bit more determened it seems. I'm diging this, hope you do more for the project.

[dollspit]

I wanted to point out that I really like the way the camera kinda goes into a hand held zoom when you initiate the BJ. It looks really cool! Z0NE tried this on the "Pleasure BonBon" flash that was done a few months back, but it seems that a helluva lot of people experience massive slowdown when it happens in the game.

Your technique on the other hand is very smooth and is actually practical, since it zooms in on the action as opposed to crudely cutting to the close up.
Very nice!

[Renara]

Depends how the zooming is done; it can be killer in scenes with a lot of alpha content.

[Nextus]

Z0NE tried this on the "Pleasure BonBon" flash that was done a few months back, but it seems that a helluva lot of people experience massive slowdown when it happens in the game.

This was actually related the way the zoom effect was made, given that (he?/she? The mystery remains unsolved >.>) always uses hi-res textures, 25 fps'ish animations etc., and when the zoom effect starts, all of the content is getting scaled up by 100's, especially when trying to run it in full HD, and since flash is still CPU driven, even my quad core 2.4 gHz starts lagging, lol >.>

But seriously, can anyone solve the mystery about Zone-sama?