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I wanna play with Krystal Too, can i has?

Postby karicus » Thu Jun 23, 2011 4:52 am

Hi Guys, I'm new to this forum and 2 & 1/2 days new to creating flash.

I have created a VERY simple test of a LoK 'game'. As yet i dont have any ideas on the theme or storyline of the game, im just trying to learn how it all works. So if anyone has any ideas for the storyline, please do let me know, im always looking for ideas.

I have been looking through the many, many, many great posts of this forum and seen some truely jaw dropping works. I have yet to try creating my own characters but Id love to try to use other people's if you'd allow it (if so, please post me either a link or the files of characters you'd let me play with, many many thanks). For now im just using Krystal as the 'starlett' but beasties would be much appreciated.

Id like to post updates here too if thats ok, purely for comments and suggestions, anyway i can make things better and learn would be fantastic.

Anyway, on with what i made: Its a very simple scrolling platform like the original. So far i only have 4 areas and only 2 animations, one of which isnt my work. Please do tell me what you think.
Three buttons at the top of the screen change her outfit and the two below it change the amount of 'mess' on Krystal. Although you'll have to use the bathing pond to remove mess not manualy created. So yeh, thats pretty much it.

Thanking you all in advance and i hope to create works even half as good as what i have seen here, then id be happy :)


EDIT*******

Second update attached. Ok well, here is my second attachment of progress. Ok so still not a real game. I made amendments as suggested and added another custom animation. Found a few code bugs too while testing so hopefully i have those all sorted out. I doubt ill post much more for now as ill be working on what i want the game to DO and BE, and im sure you have seen all those kind of things before. So yeh, latest mess around. Not much to it, same as before just mods and one addition..Enjoy.

EDIT ***** 30th June

I got the start of a game, well an idea at the very least. Ok, so the map only has three locations, so please, bare in mind its just a start. I made another animation too, however there are only three sexual animations available at this time. I dont wish to explain too much about how to play, I'm hoping you will pick it up as you go.
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Re: I wanna play with Krystal Too, can i has?

Postby Digfree » Thu Jun 23, 2011 5:23 am

not bad for a newbie mate, keep at it and you'll be pro no time
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Re: I wanna play with Krystal Too, can i has?

Postby KaTsuO_O » Thu Jun 23, 2011 6:00 am

Dude, this is very impressive for only been using flash for 2-3 days. The animation is pretty good but there is things that you can do to improve the it, use another expression before penetration, fix the jaw before penetration, fix the blush, fix the moving eye, put the calf layers under the leg layers and stop the boobs from moving in the end. I know there may be things you dont know how to fix put i point it out anyways. The cum animation looks pretty good as well, there isnt that many who can actualy make a decent cum animation so its great to see one.

I look forward to see more from you, especially since you actualy use Krystal like more people should do since this forum is about her... Damn you Samus! just kidding, still a bit sad there is a lack of others.

Heres a tutorial on how to make bouncing boobs that you might want to check out: viewtopic.php?f=28&t=1390 Not because yours was bad.
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Postby BlueLight » Thu Jun 23, 2011 7:09 am

So my first reaction would've been a bad review of the game and a bad review in general.
Basically what i saw was a nice set up for something that you might have have a gallery mode or character creation and this leaded me in to thinking the only interaction that could be done was by the buttons on the screen. This made it seem like you just editing some one else's work without adding anything to it just giving it start up with buttons to replay out animations. In a way this was a good thing because it showed you took the time to stage things and not many people do this because it only last until the person moves or it's to much work for no return for the most part.

Any ways after I found my arrow keys (Im not embarrassed about not knowing i could move. :oops: ) I look at the other stages/scenes and they seemed really good.
I did find some odd bugs with the animation but look that post above me for a much more detailed list than i could do.
So at the threesome blow job again you game the impression of taking from someone else with out giving anything back by the placement.
By i believe the second arrow button click i found out this wasn't true but thats whats i was thinking when i was playing this.


If you want me to keep updating you on whats going though my mind while i'm playing updates to your game then please tell me.
I can be quite blunt some times and harsh. I might still give you a review every once in a while but i'm not likely to post a review on every little update unless on every little update I think you should know something new/old like a major bug.
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Re: I wanna play with Krystal Too, can i has?

Postby karicus » Thu Jun 23, 2011 11:36 am

Thanks for the looksies and replies guys :) Firstly to Bluelight: Thanks for taking the time to even try playing when you first thought it was just a ripped set of anims placed in diff places hehe. Its by no means a finished game and not even a game as it is, more a test platform, seeing if i can get things working right. When i DO eventually get to making a game its gonna be more than click watch anims i hope. :) I been just reverse engineering the code, so before i could make my own anim i needed to know how one worked in relation to placement within the scene, hence the ripped anim of the threesum. So far its just a set of "look what i did done" scenes haha. Id love for you to keep commenting, I wont be putting out updates on the tiniest thing i learn, that'll be tedious but i will probably put out on difficulties im having or new anims i create. Ok eventually there will probably be some ripped animations within the finished game itself, mainly because some of them I kinda like and i produce what i like seeing, generally :)As long as what you say is helpful to me, i really dont mind it being said at all.

To KaTsuO_O: It truely has only been 2-3 days of playing with flashmaker, 2-3 LONG days ill admit. Nether-the-less, the codeing is familiar, its very similar to code from a game or social platform or whatever you wanna call it, that i have been playing and scripting in, so I just need to familiarise myself with it's functions and such in flash, do some reverse engineering and im good. The list of things you gave me to fix is a good one. I have to work out a better way, or more efficient way to change the eye mid animation (i didnt find the zoom tool till halfway done *facepalm*) the rest, i can certainly work on to get the quality that does the series (and forum) justice. So thanks for pointing those out to me. As for cum.. welllll who doesnt like a good quality sticky mess? :D well i DO need to work on it, i wasnt totally happy with it, but it was a first attempt at drawing in frames. Also thanks for the tutorial link, i think i saw it in here before, but at that stage it was a bit too far up the road for me, but ill be checking that out now, we all love nice bouncy boobs eh? :) I do like the other character animations, but i just think Krystal is just super cute for some reason, also, there was a downloadable adobe file with her anims in for me to open up and study, which helped. Eventually ill make my own characters - beasties - probably, or use people's who say its ok to. Id also like to animate princess Peach too. Again all things that will come in time. For now, the cute fluffy Krystal is making me smile :p

Thanks guys for all your replies :)
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Postby ByHisBillowingBeard » Thu Jun 23, 2011 11:02 pm

This is very impressive. I was a bit bemused to find the exact same threesome scene but I'll put that down to the testing thing #takes off his Gestapo coat#

Really good 'behind' scene!! Like... really good. I, myself have no problems with any of Krystal's expressions. It's nice to see so much facial expression, I think.
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Re: I wanna play with Krystal Too, can i has?

Postby karicus » Fri Jun 24, 2011 12:13 am

yeh the threesome scene was for testing.. ie..how DO i put an animation in the scene? Start with the basics right? Ok i WILL admit, there will be some original animations when i have finished but thats cus i like them, Working on my own threesum now actualy, with the comments and help from KaTsuO_O.
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Postby $orienta » Fri Jun 24, 2011 1:13 am

This is really good for someone who's only worked on Flash for a few days. The 'Behind' scene was also done really well, I liked the facial expressions. I hope to see more :3
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Re: I wanna play with Krystal Too, can i has?

Postby BlueLight » Fri Jun 24, 2011 3:13 am

so if i were you I would PM corta and ask about his/hers latest characterCreator.
It's basically a template to allow you to change or the player to change the player.

Who ever is doing the mario is missing hack has it how ever it's has a crude design and im guessing it's partly because how the game plays.
Corta (you the person i told you to PM) uses it in his(Im using his because im to lazy to say her even though i just did it) game and it's very neat design(some features like adding cum has been null). However I do believe corta does have a requirement that you don't limit the player to 1 character but you would have to ask him)
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Postby viper2003923 » Fri Jun 24, 2011 7:09 am

may i suggest somethin? i saw the female sharpclaw behind the bar bouncin, and to me, i see two possibilities either a lesbo 69 scene, or another threesome, but its up to you however you wanna do it if you wanna use her for a scene when and if you start an actual game with it, for only two or three days of messing with flash you did great, keep it up....
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Re: I wanna play with Krystal Too, can i has?

Postby KaTsuO_O » Fri Jun 24, 2011 5:19 pm

karicus Wrote:how DO i put an animation in the scene?
I dont quite understand what you mean, explain more and i can see if i can help you.
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Postby PinkPandaBear » Fri Jun 24, 2011 5:53 pm

Well dispite these being re-done animations, I thought you did an excellent job getting all of them to flow together fairly well. I think you'll be fairly good at this. Better than anything I can do. XD

And KaTsu, I think that was a retorical question. He was just making a statement about how the three-some was a test on making animations. I think he already knows how to animate by looking at this. =P
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Re: I wanna play with Krystal Too, can i has?

Postby karicus » Fri Jun 24, 2011 6:00 pm

KaTsuO_O Wrote:
karicus Wrote:how DO i put an animation in the scene?
I dont quite understand what you mean, explain more and i can see if i can help you.


Oh no, that was one question i was asking myself when making the attached example. Thats all. :)
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Re: I wanna play with Krystal Too, can i has?

Postby PinkPandaBear » Sat Jun 25, 2011 1:45 am

Um... I got stuck on the spot with the female Sharpclaw. Is there no spawn point to appear there from the new scene?
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Postby karicus » Sat Jun 25, 2011 3:11 pm

PinkPandaBear Wrote:Um... I got stuck on the spot with the female Sharpclaw. Is there no spawn point to appear there from the new scene?


Not sure i know what you mean. Its just a test platform, going through the bar should just take you back to the first wood area.
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Postby PinkPandaBear » Sat Jun 25, 2011 5:19 pm

Well I like got to the bar scene and then Krystal didn't appear. It doesn't seem to be happening now, so never mind. >.<
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Postby KaTsuO_O » Sat Jun 25, 2011 6:46 pm

The spit roast animation is pretty good, just how you did seperated was not so good. I suggest each step should have a movement and a loop, like the first one should be the first three and the fourth can be seperated in to two parts. There is a few things you can fix, seperate it better like i said, make the sharpclaw fuck deeper on the third one, take away that weird arm movement they make and last the arm movement krystal does in the forth one but seperating would fix it. The use of expressions in this one is better, feels more real but the cum could be better since you showed a real good one in your first one.
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Re: I wanna play with Krystal Too, can i has?

Postby BlueLight » Sat Jun 25, 2011 7:39 pm

First off you got 3 versions of this on the site. Space ain't free for the one paying the bills. I would take the first one and remove it, Get rid second and third, and upload your lastest version on to the first post. While there is no rule that you have it's shows some respect for fellow users who share the same space. Also it makes topic look cleaner. I would also add a change log to the top say on what dates what change. See if you can upload a txt file and then you can just upload a new change log with game updates and it compresses on post size.

Second at the bar when she doing behind... um the eyes are worthy of a LOLZ.

third i noticed that after a sex scene your krystal will start a animation for the end of the scene(standing up) and then the cum layer will be magically added.
What should happen is the sex, cum, cum layer add (i don't know if this is a layer or and new model head) , stand up animation.
Im guessing when the cum is added is done by code so what i would do is try to find what ever effects when the cum is added and when she starts the standing up animation and make it so the cum is above the animation so it's a priority. This will make the cum stop from magically showing up.
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