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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby GoRepeat » Tue Jul 19, 2011 5:08 am

edit - lol oops realized I forgot the tail!


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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby trazinn » Tue Jul 19, 2011 8:29 am

Wow!.. dance dance dance!...nice loop animation going on there!...hope you'll do more
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby Eggplants » Tue Jul 19, 2011 4:45 pm

I'm lovin the new characters especially this last one. She's sassy ;D And I'm all for the nails and claws! I just want to see her dig them into some bloke she's doing hehe. Makes her more fun and frisky.

Oh and I hadn't noticed this before but excluding the guy, I really love how much personality you draw into your characters, Bussa! They're just so much more stunning because of it.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby ByHisBillowingBeard » Wed Jul 20, 2011 2:01 am

Eggplants x2
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby Bussa » Tue Jul 26, 2011 5:51 am

So I need a little feedback on this bee chick, she's really coming together nicely but I'm really getting pissed off at her proportions and limbs...let me know what you think, any points of interest, etc. One pic is with wings up and one wings folded down.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby BlueLight » Tue Jul 26, 2011 6:00 am

Her face looks like it had a few run in with the wall.
Boobs look to big for the face or maybe it's the body in general.
legs eh.
arms i like.

Sorry but thats all i got. Not to helpful i know.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby Bussa » Tue Jul 26, 2011 6:02 am

BlueLight Wrote:Her face looks like it had a few run in with the wall.


...what does a bee face look like? that's humanoid and seductive, yet still insectoid? <---- ONE OF MY BIG PROBLEMS :roll:
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby Bussa » Tue Jul 26, 2011 6:06 am

this is her head blad, it's a pretty simple shape, but so hard to really do anything with :?
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby Zeus Kabob » Tue Jul 26, 2011 6:35 am

Idea: Use a mask to make her look completely bee-like, but allow for the mask to come off, revealing a mainly human face. It would allow for you to make huge eyes and an angular face without leaving the limits of the human form.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby BlueLight » Tue Jul 26, 2011 8:01 am

Try adding different noses is all i can say.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby KaTsuO_O » Tue Jul 26, 2011 2:31 pm

The character is fairly good, just the head that doesnt look too good. I would go for something like this, it may not fit better for a bee character but i think it will look more apealing.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby BlueLight » Tue Jul 26, 2011 8:53 pm

Looks better. not great but better
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby ByHisBillowingBeard » Wed Jul 27, 2011 1:47 am

I think it looks alright. Some of the lines on the curves are a bit jaggedy but otherwise..
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby GoRepeat » Wed Jul 27, 2011 2:25 am

Think bee would work better with small breasts... you know... BEE STINGS

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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby BlueLight » Wed Jul 27, 2011 9:39 am

gorepete2 Wrote:Think bee would work better with small breasts... you know... BEE STINGS

:lol:

I agree before the first 3 second pause.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby Axel Delerose » Thu Jul 28, 2011 12:45 am

Bussa Wrote:...what does a bee face look like? that's humanoid and seductive, yet still insectoid?


You rang?

Also, more pics for reference if you need them.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby shorterm » Fri Jul 29, 2011 12:34 am

Some of that gallery were from MGU!
personally I think it should be more humanoid, with antenea.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby UserN4meTak3n » Fri Jul 29, 2011 12:37 am

Weird...
I see small breasts and juicy vaginas every now and then in that picture but everything else is disturbing in some way.
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