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[DemonFiren]

A whole lot better, indeed.

[nebrose]

A whole lot better, indeed.

agreed

[Kalypso]

I should reiterate: colored outlines are your friend. Use them, and your character will look ten times better.
I would do it for you so you'd know, but I'm busy making the characters easier to animate for community-made content, so seriously, give it a go. They will make you very happy.

Sorry, i forget that =P
Like this, right?

Yes. See what I mean? It's a-beautiful! :D

[LittlePwnah]

I should reiterate: colored outlines are your friend. Use them, and your character will look ten times better.
I would do it for you so you'd know, but I'm busy making the characters easier to animate for community-made content, so seriously, give it a go. They will make you very happy.

Sorry, i forget that =P
Like this, right?

Yup,its way better.

[Final Shine]

Full Armor...

[HolyPaladin]

I love her :3, She's GRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRREAT!!!
I could not resist

[Kryger]

Agreed.

[Final Shine]

So, any suggestions? Add/remaking something maybe?

[Pyron]

Maybe the colour and/or shape of her hands...or is it claws?
furry syntax confuses me sometimes

[Kalypso]

So, any suggestions? Add/remaking something maybe?

Some things I never touched on:
I'd move back the eye a slight bit, it's very close to the nose.
Make the pink cheek slightly opaque and a bit more pinkish white, that'll bring out her cheeks without it being to overly dominant.
Darken the back leg, because it needs to be shaded to be different from the front one.
Yeah, and maybe change the color of the hands, they're too different. Possibly a very white purple, and purple up the outline of it as well.

Otherwise, looking good for you to take to the animation stage.

[nebrose]

mqaybe add a distinguishing characteristic that would make this character have an important and releveant role, like link's triforce, but not cut cut and paste that on it was just an example

[Final Shine]

Well, i'm leaving in some sort of vacation, for a few days...
And, the character still have one little problem... her jaw is to small for mm... you know =)
So, i wanna ask you guys, for a little favor, that maybe someone can solve this little problem...)
And, maybe someone intresting in animation of this.
Anyway, here fla file.

Fluffy.fla

(666.5 KiB) Downloaded 543 times

Once agan, thx to all, and over 9000 thx to Kalypso =)
P.S Sorry for my poor English =P

[Final Shine]

The Death Knight with a "horse" =)

[serebii]

this looks good

[Kryger]

The legs are kind of small aren't they o.o?

[Kitsune]

Amazing job really love the look

[Syv]

Fantastic, I really want to see her in action! Rawwrr!

[Kryger]

Armor looks kick ass

[guilmonex]

Why can't I open the .fla file??
FlashMX always says the file is corrupted....
I really want to open it !! =(

[LittlePwnah]

Fantastic, I really want to see her in action! Rawwrr!

Same here