Starting fresh...

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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby bruiserdemon » Tue Jun 21, 2011 7:38 pm

lol i used to pronounce your name boo-sah
that was my mistake, sorry
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby Bussa » Sun Jul 03, 2011 6:08 am

Just posting random updates...

-new female character
-new clothing
-boob size comparison (I'm undecided how big)
-A.D.D. time turned into a character grouping ;) (a.k.a. "play time") :roll:
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sun Jul 03, 2011 6:52 am

Wowsers, I love how these characters is looking, especially the purple furred one! I dont really see anything you could change but there is some like the males legs is a bit to big and long and four toes of five but thats it, it is more than amazing.

For the tit comparison i would go for the second one.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby FruitSmoothie » Sun Jul 03, 2011 7:35 am

Well some notes on anatomy if you're interested in my opinion:
The boobs would droop a bit out of the bras, they kinda look fake if they stay the same height as they were in the bra (Purpose of which is to hold em up)
The male could probably use a bit more muscle on the trap for how muscular the rest of him is, just a bit more curved up. (Muscle from the shoulder up to the neck.). It also seems like his hips are kinda wide for his torso. It seems like you purposefully wanted them to jut out a bit to make him more canine, but they still seem like they're attached rather weirdly to me. Like the other guy mentioned, 4 toes, if it was intentional or not, I have no idea.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby Lucky777 » Sun Jul 03, 2011 3:48 pm

Best of luck with your fresh start, Ma'am.

For the tit comparison, I also vote for the one on the right.

As to a seduction game, make whatever you want, but I must at least request a mode that does not require it. Wasting time on "seductions" burns me up.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby Zeus Kabob » Mon Jul 04, 2011 10:18 am

Oh wow. Looking great to me! I like both breast sizes, and in fact I think the sizes work out well for the two characters, and no revision should be made. As for the male, the abs have very deep pits; is this intentional? (total height of abs = appx. 7 mm, whereas depth of pit = appx 15 mm.)
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby FruitSmoothie » Mon Jul 04, 2011 10:59 am

Left vote on the boobs, variety is good, not everybody likes em big.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby Bussa » Mon Jul 04, 2011 6:37 pm

@ Kat: Haha thanks hun ;) She's actually a bluish color, the grey background makes her look purple I guess. And as for the male's legs, I have fiddled with the size and perspective, it's a little hard to change them without making him look disproportionate. I do intend him to have 4 toes because I was referencing dogs in general, which only have four digits on their hind paws.

@ Fruit: Yes, I know boobs are affected by gravity...der :P but in "furry land" I prefer everyone to have perky and full breasts as if they were 22 years old such as myself. THEREFOR... no sagging will be necessary my literal-realist friend! ;) Also I agree that the male should have more muscle definition EVERYWHERE...right? (and yes I'll fix the neck thing, I just didn't get to it before i posted last) As for his current muscles, I am a female... and rock hard abs and a stunning cock are what I'm all about hehe ;) I tend to focus on those parts more than anything else, soooooooo... sorry, but forearm muscles and thighs and calves aren't the hottest things in the world to us ladies. I will eventually shade and throw in some lines and such, but the model above is what I'm goin for. And like I said to Kat, I fiddled with his legs a bunch and if his hand was out of the way you would see that line curves to his ass and down to his thigh so it's not really "jutting" out, it's just the perspective on him. (Also, if I squished his legs in more, towards his crotch, you wouldn't get to see his beautiful cock as well ;) )

@ Lucky: Thank you very much ;) I do hope you'll enjoy it as much as I am. The game will obviously have some "loop holes" to go through to get to just the sex scenes, I DEFINITELY plan on that. :D

@ Zeusy: Thanks ;) Um, I don't understand what you mean by your measurements, I just took a picture of my boyfriend and accentuated his "better" features, I actually did that a lot in my old project with photo references and then just cleaned them up and beefed up the parts I liked ha. I suppose what you're referring to is his belly button? It's an inny hahaha idk.

Anywho, I'm still at a lack of discord for new characters, and I'm not about to redo any of the old ones, so if anyone has any character ideas I'd be more than happy to explore them. Also, Axel if you get a chance to read this, I am working on your "bee lady" ;) She's a little harder to put together than I thought but I'll post her when I have a decent color model for her and you can tell me what you think.

So... see any hot furries lately anyone? ;)
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby Digfree » Mon Jul 04, 2011 9:43 pm

glad to see you back bussa :3

Sorry for size btw (see more at http://g.e-hentai.org/s/4604ad82e9/345801-69)
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby FruitSmoothie » Mon Jul 04, 2011 11:09 pm

Yeah, that's all guys, they just had to widen his hips/lower his abs for his giant penis to fit.

I lol'd.

Better anatomy than most posted here anyways, so that's good.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby ByHisBillowingBeard » Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:10 am

Variety is the spice of sex games.. so the common saying goes. I like both.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby Lucky777 » Tue Jul 05, 2011 12:13 am

With those "loop holes" in place to spare unnecessary effort, I have literally no doubt whatsoever that I will enjoy the game.

At least as much as you enjoyed making it.

PROBABLY SOMEWHAT MORE : O
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby lebutcheker » Tue Jul 05, 2011 5:07 am

Left vote for me too but i agree with beard it shouldn't be limited to one size there's gonna be more chicks right? that way everyone will be happy XD.
Great work as always bussa, cheers.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby Bussa » Wed Jul 06, 2011 6:59 am

:shock: :o :shock: COMPLAINT!!!! I wish I could still post PSD files so you guys could maybe help me with color choices, specific lines, and such... BUT I CAN'T :x

Can anybody fix that problem? :?:

Anywho...

@ Digfree: I like her, she's like a cat/dog thing with spots, I think I could even do her x-mas outfit too! ;) I'll post when I have her sketched out :D

@ Fruit: Hahaha thaaaaanks. ;)

@ Lucky: Well they will either be cheats right at like the start menu of the game or you have to beat it to unlock certain scenes and such, idk what to go with just yet.

lebutcheker Wrote:...there's gonna be more chicks right?


(to answer ^) Started her last night:
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby ANooB » Wed Jul 06, 2011 9:06 am

Not a big furry fan, but this is gorgeous!!! Dog's have four main digits and a dewclaw, which really has no function. So no worries.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby origamitoast » Wed Jul 06, 2011 3:21 pm

oooo a cat :3 u caan do eeeeeeeeeet! hmm is it gunna be a snowtigerish cat? or just a white cat?
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby Lord Panzi » Wed Jul 06, 2011 6:16 pm

can you do a lizard one? :P

this is amazing stuff (i like the smaller breasted one myself) The guy seems... off to me. Not sure how to put it into words.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby ByHisBillowingBeard » Thu Jul 07, 2011 1:06 am

If you can get Tammy done ... I would be infinitely grateful.
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby Bussa » Wed Jul 13, 2011 7:32 am

Just getting organized with a list of things coming up:

- Axel's "bee woman" who has a body currently but I am having a bit of trouble with her head and appendages ha.
-Tammy, whom I haven't started yet, but have all the references I need ;)
- Lord Pan requests a lizard female, so I'll be making a liz-girl hehe.
- I'm a little disappointed with how my male came out so I'm thinking of possibly making a new one...taking suggestions
- And I've also been working on character mapping by making front-facing, 3/4ths, profiles, 1/4ths, and back-facing poses for each of the characters (almost all 360 degrees). Not too sure what that'll be useful for but it helps me get a better view of each character.
- I'm also taking a human form arts class this coming semester, which I am greatly looking forward to and will definitely be using to pump up this project ;)

Well, I was gonna post some screen shots and such, but I think I'll just leave you with one to heighten the suspense :lol:
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Re: Starting fresh...

Postby arconite » Wed Jul 13, 2011 8:02 am

cant explain what but the white lioness (calling her that due to the tail) her hip seems kind of off maybe due to lack of shading? but her hip seems almost dislocated. otherwise really well done. again though it might just be me
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