Mario Kart Wii Biker and Strikers Outfits

[Bang It Up!]

The hands are too small, the head may be a bit big and the blushing is off but other than that I think you`re being too hard on yourself, this is actually very impressive work and most people will probably agree with me when I say that.
お疲れ様！！

I don't agree with you.
For me, it's perfect the way it is... no changes needed.

[SexyFoxTime]

I Do agree very well, the hands are a little to small, blushing needs to be toned down and i think the earings need to be smaller, but as far as it all goes Great Job! take a break

[Anonymous]

yea just the hand other than that its perfect.

[肉まんマン]

The hands are too small, the head may be a bit big and the blushing is off but other than that I think you`re being too hard on yourself, this is actually very impressive work and most people will probably agree with me when I say that.
お疲れ様！！

I don't agree with you.
For me, it's perfect the way it is... no changes needed.

Sorry for not being clear.
I meant that most people will agree with the second part of my post, not the first one which is just my opinion.

[LuftMallow]

The following improvements have been made:
-Fixed hand size
-Shrunk head size down
-A bunch of changes to the hair to make it look more like a ponytail
-Added nipples, click Peach's name to strip clothes
-Made eyes look more on model, mostly the lashes
-Clothes have been altered to fit better and earrings made smaller

Head and hand sizes always give me trouble, so pointing it out helps me. I took the head from the Playshapes' model, whose eye shape have bothered me since I started. Her lashes were in the wrong place, but I finally got around to fixing it. I should start animating, just to see how it moves. The stripes are already I see a problem in, but that's due to making it dynamic an absolute pain.

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[SexyFoxTime]

Now i think.., It's great! good job WOOHOO! 9/10.. The shoe's.. they look funky.. to me >.<.. but all in all, GREAT JOB I LOVE IT! WOOT! "Lol spam and smiley" WOO XD

[Reaver]

i like it u should defenitly show the nipples pressed against the shirt

[Unholy Sonic]

I WANT G-CUP BOOBS [/joke]

Nah it's fine the way she is and I agree with ikechi with the pressed nipples on the shirt.
I also liked the piercing she had on her belly button on the 1st model you made.

Besides that, the rest is fine by me.

[肉まんマン]

wow LuftMallow I didn`t expect it to turn out so well.
If you want to take it further, I also think that showing the nipples pressed against the shirt and adding a piercing on her belly button would greatly enhance the sexyness while not requiring much work.

[AnotherArrow]

look'n good there... but... it may be me... but her "rear" leg looks... off?... to thin?.... to small?...hmm

If you're worried about the animation with the "stripes" along the breast... i recommend just moving the stripes slightly down such that the breast line is the cutoff point. This could hide / fix some problems for ya.

[SexyFoxTime]

No, another arrow her legs are..., No there ok not trying to be mean, but nope i think (my opinion i know) there amazingngng xD

[AnotherArrow]

Well, I'm comparing her front leg to her rear leg. Something feels off...
Like, her shins/calves are disproportionate...
Maybe the front leg needs to be thinner...
I don't know...
Something just doesn't look right in my eyes with the legs.
Just sharing my thoughts.

[LuftMallow]

The legs might be off due to having to change their shape. The alterations from humanoid fox to human required a lot changes to the overall shape, with little to go by. Shoes are another problem, none of my references have the shoes in view other than the official "sketchy" art. The pressed nipples on her top are back, only because I had just finished the nipples right before the last release. I like the idea of moving the stripes around so they wouldn't be a problem. I've changed the outfit a lot already, If I could make it simpler I should. Here's a quick animation showing my gripe about it. No idea why she's twitchy though, I never even touched those parts...

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[Reaver]

thats looks really nice ur making lots of progress

[haloman]

Ok looks nice. But the arms and breasts... Ya...they are like, on rails and not body parts. XD

[LuftMallow]

I've been playing around with this outfit idea. Basically, I made the shorts incredibly short. It's kinda rough right now, but I wanted to know how much everyone likes it first. Also put in the belly button piercing to see if it should stay as well.

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[Mechanios]

I like this version.

[Unholy Sonic]

Me likey da short shorts with da piercing vewy much!

[Surskit]

The disparity between her breast size in your new version and the side view bothers me.

I can't however say which one I like better since the smaller ones feel more correct and suits her. But, big tits. =/

[LuftMallow]

I know about the proportions being inconsistent, I mixed two different bases just to quickly work out a potential outfit design. I want to get this out of the way as fast as possible to start animating proper. I have the story mostly done, just the art is left.