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Re: Greed is good.

Postby kuja » Thu Sep 30, 2010 2:42 am

Well, i have made lot of races, i just havent finished them, so... i dunno which one i should chose.
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Shes Kaxta, a NPC which will help Sha'ray at the start. She isnt finished. A nice detail is her skin. How much darker the shade of green her skin is, the most visible is the shine of her skin. Feels good, right?
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Re: Greed is good.

Postby guilmonex » Thu Sep 30, 2010 6:44 am

Wua!!She is staring at me!!
She has sharp eyes and experienced soldier outlook! Scary....
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Re: Greed is good.

Postby kuja » Thu Sep 30, 2010 6:57 am

Dunno how the final look should be(i wanted a slave who may have had some battles, and that would already be familiar with the situation). Im waiting for the Valaska's final word. Right now he is out of town on a suicide mission(running over people with his Mustang).
Maybe a "bored" face?
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Hmmmmmmmmmmmm, ure a genius Guil. without the eyepatch?
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Re: Greed is good.

Postby Thaedael » Thu Sep 30, 2010 7:39 am

I like the darker shade of green on her skin, but the highlights on her are too contrasting, maybe tone them down a little too since the tone of her skin is much darker than the rest of th characters?

With the eyepatch she looks more experienced like a soldier, and with her stare confident from surviving many battles from her own skill.

Without the eyepatch she loses a bit of character, but looks more like a seductress or a slave that has been broken in. What kind of slave are you referring to, because if it a pit fighter slave then the eyepatch does it, if it is a sexual slave mybe give her a "broken psyche" look by giving her blank eyes?

Also for the scars, I know you are not done but maybe going a very off green for scars might work?
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Re: Greed is good.

Postby guilmonex » Thu Sep 30, 2010 11:58 am

Agree with Thaedael.
Green color scars match her skin more.
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Re: Greed is good.

Postby kuja » Fri Oct 01, 2010 6:39 am

My mind is closed. I just dont know how can i make the males. These ones i made, just suck cuz i was trying to make them "humanoid like"
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Re: Greed is good.

Postby guilmonex » Fri Oct 01, 2010 7:03 am

Are they the same race? Cuz he looks like your recent male green dragon. :o
Tell me, what is in your mind?
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Re: Greed is good.

Postby kuja » Fri Oct 01, 2010 7:23 am

I used the male green dragon as a base. So, i havent changed much yet. Dunno whats in my mind, its empty right now, my work is killing me.
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Re: Greed is good.

Postby guilmonex » Fri Oct 01, 2010 7:52 am

I think you can start editing the one on the right side. The 3 heads in the middle, the mouth type makes me think about some kind of turtle race.
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Re: Greed is good.

Postby kuja » Fri Oct 01, 2010 7:57 am

yeah, it looks like a turtle, lol.
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Spiky! LOL
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Re: Greed is good.

Postby guilmonex » Fri Oct 01, 2010 8:04 am

Umm, give him a shell? Ninja turtle, lol.
May be some spiky hair style?
Nice, the second one.
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Re: Greed is good.

Postby MrBear » Fri Oct 01, 2010 8:21 am

guilmonex Wrote:Umm, give him a shell? Ninja turtle, lol.
May be some spiky hair style?
Nice, the second one.


Yeah second one looks cool just because he looks like a bandit or something.
I dont like being bald, hairstyles would be nice. Idk about the shell though.
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Re: Greed is good.

Postby kuja » Fri Oct 01, 2010 8:31 am

Spiky! LoL
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Re: Greed is good.

Postby guilmonex » Fri Oct 01, 2010 8:34 am

Yeah, bandit style. lol
Brothers!! Rob that caravan, grab everything!! lol
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Re: Greed is good.

Postby MrBear » Fri Oct 01, 2010 4:07 pm

Lmao @ the spikey hairstyle. Looks great, but looks incredibly weird on that type of model. Maybe try it on a different race?
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Re: Greed is good.

Postby kuja » Fri Oct 01, 2010 7:36 pm

Yeah, thats why we're joking with the poor lizard
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I'm suffering a lapse of a lack of creativity
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Re: Greed is good.

Postby Thaedael » Sat Oct 02, 2010 12:33 am

kuja Wrote:My mind is closed. I just dont know how can i make the males. These ones i made, just suck cuz i was trying to make them "humanoid like"
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Made a post but it seems to have not gone through. The male reminds me of something from the three kingdoms legend era, make him a dark blue with white hair, and then dress him up in a kimono. Give him a katana and he would look like a kakita from the time of three kingdoms. He can also be a duelist.
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Re: Greed is good.

Postby kuja » Sat Oct 02, 2010 1:40 am

Dunno whats that. ;P The real problem is: I want to make a lizard-man, not a man, not a lizard. Isnt that difficult - when- u dont care if u is or isnt doing something similar to someone else's work. I dont want that. So... yes, is that difficult. Right now, i cant know how i can make a good lizardman. Maybe without hair? If so, the race will lose some particular issue in the classes, classic npcs, professions and so on ... Dunno, ill keep trying. ;P

a diabrette? lol

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Re: Greed is good.

Postby Ickya » Sun Oct 03, 2010 10:05 am

NEED DEMO lol! lookin really good keep up the good work.
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Re: Greed is good.

Postby Valaska » Mon Oct 04, 2010 4:01 am

kuja Wrote:Dunno how the final look should be(i wanted a slave who may have had some battles, and that would already be familiar with the situation). Im waiting for the Valaska's final word. Right now he is out of town on a suicide mission(running over people with his Mustang).
Maybe a "bored" face?

Hmmmmmmmmmmmm, ure a genius Guil. without the eyepatch?


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Yarr Kaxta is a rough and tough warrior, the patch will have a very neat little story to it that you may, or may not, find out dependent on choices! I may be away for more time as well, I haven't forgotten about all of you though and probably be on sporadically via laptop at best western.
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