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Re: newbie in town

Postby PlayShapes » Fri Jun 11, 2010 8:35 am

:D
... just pure :D
Your stuff kicks much ass.
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Re: newbie in town

Postby GoichiHollow » Fri Jun 11, 2010 10:35 am

If you look closely, it looks like she punches her right leg out of place XD
Everytime you look behind you your screen will come closer O.O
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Re: newbie in town

Postby Morb » Fri Jun 11, 2010 4:55 pm

The tentacle animation looks pretty good so far, can't wait for the full version!
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Re: newbie in town

Postby Poob » Fri Jun 11, 2010 5:10 pm

Your animation is truly awesome. Hope you can end up contributing to the project!
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Re: newbie in town

Postby Kryger » Fri Jun 11, 2010 6:32 pm

Yay for tentacle rape with samus :D
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Re: newbie in town

Postby Vyksen » Sat Jun 12, 2010 2:39 am

You deserve much praise.
I can't wait for those tentacles!
Guuuh.
I love tentacles.
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Re: newbie in town

Postby UserN4meTak3n » Wed Jun 16, 2010 9:06 pm

More more tentacle action! Great stuff but definitely a teaser.
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Re: newbie in town

Postby Eggplants » Sat Jun 19, 2010 9:03 am

hey thanks heaps! I love this community!
anyway sorry guys I didn't finish the flash yet cause I was starting to animate the cum scene of my Samus x Kanden flash because I kept on getting requests for it, but then instead I made this for a bit of practice.
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Re: newbie in town

Postby Xananos » Sat Jun 19, 2010 2:19 pm

I've always wondered why, instead of making one huge geyser of cum, people don't make spurts of it. I invariably come back to the idea that it's easier to animate. I must say, though, that that looks pretty good. Though It seems kind of odd that his cum branches off like that in mid-air.
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Re: newbie in town

Postby Kurohime » Sat Jun 19, 2010 4:43 pm

here's a remake of the threesome )
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Re: newbie in town

Postby Blaze » Sat Jun 19, 2010 5:44 pm

There are 3 problems, first far too fast, too few frames. Second krystal's pussy is sticking outward, looks a tad bit weird. Thirdly liz's tail needs some adjustment. But its not a bad flash, you got the boob movement right.

Also eggplant the cum shouldn't branch off that much in the air, other than that it is quite impressive.
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Re: newbie in town

Postby Kurohime » Sat Jun 19, 2010 6:08 pm

this is weird , when i download it it looks different on my flash player , but in forum it looks awful , but i have to agree pussy sucks XDDD
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Re: newbie in town

Postby DemonFiren » Sat Jun 19, 2010 6:30 pm

Don't these freaks have two dicks?

Oh, they have...I'm not that into hyper, so that's prohably why I didn't look at them so closely.
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Re: newbie in town

Postby Wolf » Sat Jun 19, 2010 9:19 pm

Is it me or does any1 else find i weird that the shorter 1 has 1 dick bigger that the other?
Im a gun nut, leave me alone with my problem. *Polishes AIMS PMC in a dark croner*
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Re: newbie in town

Postby DemonFiren » Sat Jun 19, 2010 9:28 pm

Same here. And honestly...ah, screw it. That's what they're doing, anyway.
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Re: newbie in town

Postby trunks2585 » Sun Jun 20, 2010 12:20 am

the lizard girls proportions are messed up for this, even with krystal's leg covering up parts of the liz girl, i can tell she's basically missing her waist and hips.
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Re: newbie in town

Postby UserN4meTak3n » Sun Jun 20, 2010 11:49 am

Concept is great, I also found that the shorter wolf was hilariously bigger in another way than the taller one, it happens to humans and animals why not demon wolf creatures too?
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Re: newbie in town

Postby zekameka » Sun Jun 20, 2010 3:11 pm

:drooling:
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Re: newbie in town

Postby Eggplants » Mon Jun 21, 2010 2:11 pm

helloo again I have done a bit more for the Samus but I think I may actually stop here because it gets the point across as is and I really want to get to work on some other things, mainly designs like robots or monsters. anyway here's what I got
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Re: newbie in town

Postby Kalypso » Mon Jun 21, 2010 3:03 pm

Eggplants Wrote:helloo again I have done a bit more for the Samus but I think I may actually stop here because it gets the point across as is and I really want to get to work on some other things, mainly designs like robots or monsters. anyway here's what I got

It definitely does.
You're very good with fast moving scenes, you know that? The action comes at you rapidly, you don't completely expect it, either, it just happens. That having been said, a lot goes on here, and it's good. While I might have had the breasts move back and forward with the tentacle, I know you know what you're doing, it's pretty obvious. I'll let you know that for LoK v0.3, the characters are much more detailed and we're working at 24 fps (can't remember which xD), so the animations will need slow down a little while, be more detail and will be a little--if not much more time consuming. There's going to be a lot more movement in main character alongside others.

It's really YoYooYo's place to decide whether you are ready to join the team or not, so we'll discuss this matter on the Team's Dev forums.

Also, for v0.4+ I'm planning a Samus suit that opens up entirely, though I do like the idea of her outfit being destroyed, lol ^^.
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