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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby Nintendolo » Sat Nov 24, 2012 2:39 am

maybe something like a thinner design im not the best when it comes to proportions and i do think in my opinion that the paper peach eyes suit that design more than those anime styled ones

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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Sat Nov 24, 2012 3:48 am

Nintendolo Wrote:maybe something like a thinner design im not the best when it comes to proportions and i do think in my opinion that the paper peach eyes suit that design more than those anime styled ones

Interesting job!! I like her dress, its lineart is better! Hmm yes, its possible to use that design, but I really need more opinions. A real discussion about the body styles. A more chubby/chibi one is interesting because she will appear more unprotected, and more visible in the scenes.

I did her slimmer before but tweaking was needed.

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But yes, the slimmer design (germanic style) can be interesting, if proper shadowing were done. As for eyes, the anime one is interesting because when she blinks, or have her eyes 'crossed', 'rolled on', 'squint', and a bit lid, expressions are more evident and cute.

Do you want the FLA file of Cute Peach?
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby coolness32 » Sat Nov 24, 2012 10:24 am

So I had an idea, and I know this doesn't completely comply with the cute Peach idea being a paper game. In the Paper Mario games, you can get a party,(In all of them right?) and if this is ever implemented, you could have it be a completely female party. (I can't think of any other humanoid characters besides Peach, Daisy and Rosalinda but I'm not trying to exclude Goombella, Birdo or any other non-humanoid character) Oh original damsel, I forgot her name though...Rosa??? The one in the red dress.

I know you've stated that it is going to be a platform style game, I was curious if you would consider having it be kind of RPGish like the original Paper Mario game was? I think the biggest benefit is that the only time sex scenes would occur is after you lose an RPG styled fight. (I have no idea how hard this would be to get implemented though so I understand if it's too much work.)

It's completely off-topic for this game but just a little bit ago, I imagined a strategy rpg game with these characters. The game I was playing that inspired the strategy RPG idea and I guess the RPG idea as a whole was Pockie Ninja II, yeah I play that on facebook. I was thinking more about the all female party, I think that would only work in a game that includes all nintendo female characters and not just limiting it to the Marioverse. That would be neat to see but maybe not probable.
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby QuizmasterBos » Sat Nov 24, 2012 12:10 pm

coolness32 Wrote:So I had an idea, and I know this doesn't completely comply with the cute Peach idea being a paper game. In the Paper Mario games, you can get a party,(In all of them right?) and if this is ever implemented, you could have it be a completely female party. (I can't think of any other humanoid characters besides Peach, Daisy and Rosalinda but I'm not trying to exclude Goombella, Birdo or any other non-humanoid character) Oh original damsel, I forgot her name though...Rosa??? The one in the red dress.

I know you've stated that it is going to be a platform style game, I was curious if you would consider having it be kind of RPGish like the original Paper Mario game was? I think the biggest benefit is that the only time sex scenes would occur is after you lose an RPG styled fight. (I have no idea how hard this would be to get implemented though so I understand if it's too much work.)

It's completely off-topic for this game but just a little bit ago, I imagined a strategy rpg game with these characters. The game I was playing that inspired the strategy RPG idea and I guess the RPG idea as a whole was Pockie Ninja II, yeah I play that on facebook. I was thinking more about the all female party, I think that would only work in a game that includes all nintendo female characters and not just limiting it to the Marioverse. That would be neat to see but maybe not probable.

Have you ever played or seen Super Paper Mario? It's an rpg game, but a platformer at the same time. By killing enemies and collecting power-ups you get points and when you have enough: Level Up!

So, what I am trying to say is that this is completely possible. Every character can have her own skill that allows you to get further into the stages. Fucking enemies will get you points, but you can also kill them, giving you less points.
Characters could be:
-Peach
-Daisy
-Rosalina (not Rosalinda :ugeek:)
-Pauline (the woman you were thinking of :ugeek:)

I would limit this to the Mario universe tough, since too many characters would make this needlessly complex if we go with a Super Paper Mario style.
But I like your idea! :D
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Sat Nov 24, 2012 1:42 pm

Cute Peach - smaller eyes and improved hair:

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coolness32 Wrote:So I had an idea, and I know this doesn't completely comply with the cute Peach idea being a paper game. In the Paper Mario games, you can get a party,(In all of them right?) and if this is ever implemented, you could have it be a completely female party.

For sure! But remember I will be making an ENF style game (why that? That's because Peach doesnt want sex - but inside HER desires, yes, she want to try).
Later in the game, she will be used to it.

coolness32 Wrote:I know you've stated that it is going to be a platform style game, I was curious if you would consider having it be kind of RPGish like the original Paper Mario game was?

Of course it will have RPG elements, as I've stated on page 1. And more. The 'platform' style will be mixed with isometric, because you will be able to 'go up and down' instead of left/right only. Like the worldmap of MIM PUT.

coolness32 Wrote:I think the biggest benefit is that the only time sex scenes would occur is after you lose an RPG styled fight. (I have no idea how hard this would be to get implemented though so I understand if it's too much work.)

I can make an RPG style fight like Paper Mario 2, and I can even make a stage/threatre appearance ( in order to put a crowd and make Peach embarassed if she's naked, while the crown cheers) but I dont like that 'fourth' wall thing. I still prefer a crowd in the game area (e.g. cratures coming and having a seat/being stand up in the background). However. If people reeeeeeally prefer the stage, I can think about it.

coolness32 Wrote:It's completely off-topic for this game but just a little bit ago, I imagined a strategy rpg game with these characters. The game I was playing that inspired the strategy RPG idea and I guess the RPG idea as a whole was Pockie Ninja II, yeah I play that on facebook. I was thinking more about the all female party, I think that would only work in a game that includes all nintendo female characters and not just limiting it to the Marioverse. That would be neat to see but maybe not probable.

I dont want to put non nintendo characters (I really like to make it as a Mario universe). I really want to make those special for our imagination. But I will put Rosalina, Pauline and Daisy, and I may put Krystal and maybe Zelda as bonus (they may be wandering around). But this is low priority. I'll be focusing only on Peach again (to fasten development).

QuizmasterBos Wrote:Have you ever played or seen Super Paper Mario? It's an rpg game, but a platformer at the same time. By killing enemies and collecting power-ups you get points and when you have enough: Level Up!

Peach should be able to Level Up in Cute Peach too ;)

QuizmasterBos Wrote:So, what I am trying to say is that this is completely possible. Every character can have her own skill that allows you to get further into the stages. Fucking enemies will get you points, but you can also kill them, giving you less points.

It could be!
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby QuizmasterBos » Sat Nov 24, 2012 7:26 pm

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:Cute Peach - smaller eyes and improved hair:

The eyes are cute, but a tiny bit too small now I think.

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:
coolness32 Wrote:So I had an idea, and I know this doesn't completely comply with the cute Peach idea being a paper game. In the Paper Mario games, you can get a party,(In all of them right?) and if this is ever implemented, you could have it be a completely female party.

For sure! But remember I will be making an ENF style game (why that? That's because Peach doesnt want sex - but inside HER desires, yes, she want to try).
Later in the game, she will be used to it.

Do you want to use ENF style for all your games involving Peach? It could be used if we go with the SPM (Super Paper Mario) route, which I think would work better than the standard turn-based RPG style.

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:
coolness32 Wrote:I know you've stated that it is going to be a platform style game, I was curious if you would consider having it be kind of RPGish like the original Paper Mario game was?

Of course it will have RPG elements, as I've stated on page 1. And more. The 'platform' style will be mixed with isometric, because you will be able to 'go up and down' instead of left/right only. Like the worldmap of MIM PUT.

If you choose to use SPM, you probably can't put isometric perspectives in, because it would be too difficult to jump on enemies and such. Keep this in mind.

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coolness32 Wrote:I think the biggest benefit is that the only time sex scenes would occur is after you lose an RPG styled fight. (I have no idea how hard this would be to get implemented though so I understand if it's too much work.)

I can make an RPG style fight like Paper Mario 2, and I can even make a stage/threatre appearance ( in order to put a crowd and make Peach embarassed if she's naked, while the crown cheers) but I dont like that 'fourth' wall thing. I still prefer a crowd in the game area (e.g. cratures coming and having a seat/being stand up in the background). However. If people reeeeeeally prefer the stage, I can think about it.
Try making it more action-oriented and not turn-based. I prefer action since it works quicker and better; it's good for a short fap OR a long one. Another problem with choosing turn-based mechanics is that the game would become like a RPGmaker game, and there are already so many of them.
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Sat Nov 24, 2012 7:46 pm

QuizmasterBos Wrote:The eyes are cute, but a tiny bit too small now I think.

How about now?

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QuizmasterBos Wrote:Do you want to use ENF style for all your games involving Peach?

No. Only in MIM PUT and this one. The ENF style doesnt avoid other styles in the same game, though. I only want her to be always restraining from sex (this gives more excitement to see her in action).

QuizmasterBos Wrote:It could be used if we go with the SPM (Super Paper Mario) route, which I think would work better than the standard turn-based RPG style.

I'll improve the plot when I have those PM2 style levels.

QuizmasterBos Wrote:If you choose to use SPM, you probably can't put isometric perspectives in, because it would be too difficult to jump on enemies and such. Keep this in mind.

I will make the game based on PM2. Peach will be able to use a hammer, and maybe stomping too. Difficult or not, I'll make it easier anyhow.
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby QuizmasterBos » Sat Nov 24, 2012 8:09 pm

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:
QuizmasterBos Wrote:The eyes are cute, but a tiny bit too small now I think.

How about now?

I like them. Good job.

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:
QuizmasterBos Wrote:Do you want to use ENF style for all your games involving Peach?

No. Only in MIM PUT and this one. The ENF style doesnt avoid other styles in the same game, though. I only want her to be always restraining from sex (this gives more excitement to see her in action).

If you choose to put multiple girls into the game, you could give them all a different personality which also come close to the generally accepted personalities for the girls.
So:
Peach would be embarrassed
Daisy would be rash
Rosalina calm and collected
Pauline a whore


Ivan-Aedler Wrote:
QuizmasterBos Wrote:If you choose to use SPM, you probably can't put isometric perspectives in, because it would be too difficult to jump on enemies and such. Keep this in mind.

I will make the game based on PM2. Peach will be able to use a hammer, and maybe stomping too. Difficult or not, I'll make it easier anyhow.

But with turn-based battling? I'm not sure I like the idea.
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Sat Nov 24, 2012 9:17 pm

QuizmasterBos Wrote:If you choose to put multiple girls into the game, you could give them all a different personality which also come close to the generally accepted personalities for the girls.
So:
Peach would be embarrassed
Daisy would be rash
Rosalina calm and collected
Pauline a whore

Gotcha! ;)


QuizmasterBos Wrote:But with turn-based battling? I'm not sure I like the idea.

No. The battles will be in the open. Characters can make a crowd in some scenes (like they're passing by, then stopping).
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby coolness32 » Sat Nov 24, 2012 11:02 pm

I'm excited to see this game! Of course don't rush on it or anything though.

What exactly are the benefits of leveling? In SPM (If I remember correctly) the only point of leveling is to have more HP and to have a higher DMG output. Will the characters have special skills? In SPM, Mario can jump higher and a bit farther than the others and he does more DMG when stomping on enemies, Peach can glide with her parasol(for some reason I remember her being able to get turnips but I could be mistaken), and Bowser has a fire breath attack.

Peach could still glide of course, I don't know what to have for Daisy and Rosalina but since Pauline(I don't know how I came up with Rosa...) is a whore, she could simply take the sexual attention away from the other three since she is more willing to get nasty.
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby QuizmasterBos » Sat Nov 24, 2012 11:27 pm

coolness32 Wrote:I'm excited to see this game! Of course don't rush on it or anything though.

What exactly are the benefits of leveling? In SPM (If I remember correctly) the only point of leveling is to have more HP and to have a higher DMG output. Will the characters have special skills? In SPM, Mario can jump higher and a bit farther than the others and he does more DMG when stomping on enemies, Peach can glide with her parasol(for some reason I remember her being able to get turnips but I could be mistaken), and Bowser has a fire breath attack.

You're remembering SPM quite well. Level ups only increased Hp and Attack power like you said. Attack power would work for this game, but what about health?
Maybe increase the sexual energy, making the girls better at sex and granting them new scenes. But, the isometric perspective can bring some problems, specifically because Ivan wants to base it more on PMTTYD then SPM. Which I don't think is a very good choice by the way, since SPM gameplay mechanic fits this kind of game much better.

coolness32 Wrote:Peach could still glide of course, I don't know what to have for Daisy and Rosalina but since Pauline(I don't know how I came up with Rosa...) is a whore, she could simply take the sexual attention away from the other three since she is more willing to get nasty.

This is a difficult one. None of the girls other than Peach have gotten much screen-time in the games, so only Peach can easily be thought ideas for.

However, Rosalina is a potent magic user, being able to create a shield around her as well as other things, most likely. So Rosalina can become our sexy witch.

Daisy is quite rash, I suspect she can put up quite a fight. She's quite the tomboy and should act like one. She must be a good fighter, maybe being capable of breaking certain bricks, jumping higher, or running faster, or a combination of sorts.

Pauline... I don't really know. Making her good at sex completely nullifies the sexual use for the other girls, so this one requires the most brainstorming.
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Sat Nov 24, 2012 11:46 pm

QuizmasterBos Wrote:The isometric perspective can bring some problems, specifically because Ivan wants to base it more on PMTTYD then SPM. Which I don't think is a very good choice by the way, since SPM gameplay mechanic fits this kind of game much better.

A plausible explanation of using isometric is that:
1) you can wander more, and activate certain items that is closer to Peach. Also, dodge from some enemies better.
2) you can see peach walking backside and frontside towards 'or farther' from you.
A possible problem: she will not be able to make 'LAPS' around a thing like a table, for example. Its isometric, not 3d. So the table will be in foreground always, or in background always. But not a problem.

QuizmasterBos Wrote:Pauline... I don't really know. Making her good at sex completely nullifies the sexual use for the other girls, so this one requires the most brainstorming.

I really dont want (at least for the short and medium term like 2013, 2014), to make other women fight. I prefer to do some quick scenes with Pauline and others. So, in regard to Pauline being a whore, she will do nasty things with Peach in a way Peach will not flee. Peach is 'doomed' in her hands :D
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby coolness32 » Sat Nov 24, 2012 11:54 pm

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:I really dont want (at least for the short and medium term like 2013, 2014), to make other women fight. I prefer to do some quick scenes with Pauline and others. So, in regard to Pauline being a whore, she will do nasty things with Peach in a way Peach will not flee. Peach is 'doomed' in her hands :D


So you want to focus on Peach and implement the other characters down the line? in terms of fighting.
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Sat Nov 24, 2012 11:58 pm

coolness32 Wrote:So you want to focus on Peach and implement the other characters down the line? in terms of fighting.

Yes. Peach is the main character after all. And I would need to create different character heads, colors and clothing for that. Peach can talk to these characters but we may not play as Daisy, Pauline and others, only if the game gets completed (or almost done) and people want to walk using any of them (like MIM PUT).
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby Nintendolo » Mon Nov 26, 2012 12:01 am

you should have a brainwashed mario called Mr.M parody of the Mr.L alter ego of luigi in one of the paper mario games cant remember what one tho.

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I think with the model you have created you need to adjust the thighs as at the moment the model looks a little out of proportion or stumpy cant really put my finger on it, maybe shaving a little off her belly area as well as the huge curve that you currently have makes the general model look on the chubby side, but overall good work so far keep it up.

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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby Ivan-Aedler » Mon Nov 26, 2012 12:32 am

Nintendolo Wrote:you should have a brainwashed mario called Mr.M parody of the Mr.L alter ego of luigi in one of the paper mario games cant remember what one tho

Hmm interesting! Yes I will think about it. So Peach can think its a real Mario and he could do interesting things on her.

Nintendolo Wrote:i think with the model you have created you need to adjust the thighs of it as it makes the model look either a lil out of proportion or stumpy cant really put my finger on it as well as possibly shaving a lil off her belly area

Now I got the point, thanks, I'll make those adjustments, no problem! I like your sketch, and her eyes became better than the 'black eyes default option'. Quiz, what do you think about the eyes?
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby QuizmasterBos » Mon Nov 26, 2012 12:43 am

Nintendolo Wrote:you should have a brainwashed mario called Mr.M parody of the Mr.L alter ego of luigi in one of the paper mario games cant remember what one tho

The game you're thinking of is Super Paper Mario, I mentioned it in this thread already.
Ivan-Aedler Wrote:Hmm interesting! Yes I will think about it. So Peach can think its a real Mario and he could do interesting things on her.

This idea sounds similar to an idea Asian and me brought up quite a while ago. The inclusion of a fake Mario, in our case: Bowser Jr. using his transformation mask.



Nintendolo Wrote:i think with the model you have created you need to adjust the thighs of it as it makes the model look either a lil out of proportion or stumpy cant really put my finger on it as well as possibly shaving a lil off her belly area as the huge curve you got at the moment also make the general model look on the chubby side but thats my opinion overall good work so far keep it up

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I agree with your changes. I like the model a lot as well, it's even better than Ivan's in some places.

By the way, not to be mean-spirited to you, but please try and use punctuation.

Ivan-Aedler Wrote:Now I got the point, thanks, I'll make those adjustments, no problem! I like your sketch, and her eyes became better than the 'black eyes default option'. Quiz, what do you think about the eyes?

I think there is too much white, it's a little unsettling that way. I like her eyelashes though.
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby Nintendolo » Mon Nov 26, 2012 12:47 am

I do apologise about my punctuation I post rather quickly and then usually go back and make adjustments will fix in a moment, definitely should consider the inclusion of a fake or brainwashed Mario would mix the story up a little, as well as giving a valid reason why Mario and peach could have sex through out the game. It would also allow the chance for more forceful sex scenes between peach and this fake/alternate Mario character.

my model is more of mess around to be honest aha but thanks, im not happy with the eyes that i made tho so im currently still messing around with that its hard to find a medium between paper peach and normal peach
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby QuizmasterBos » Mon Nov 26, 2012 1:06 am

Nintendolo Wrote:I do apologise about my punctuation I post rather quickly and then usually go back and make adjustments will fix in a moment, definitely should consider the inclusion of a fake or brainwashed Mario would mix the story up a little, as well as giving a valid reason why Mario and peach could have sex through out the game. It would also allow the chance for more forceful sex scenes between peach and this fake/alternate Mario character.

my model is more of mess around to be honest aha but thanks, im not happy with the eyes that i made tho so im currently still messing around with that its hard to find a medium between paper peach and normal peach

I'm glad you took my criticism well. I'm a person that tries to get it right immediately, so I spend a lot of time writing posts.

Now, the only problem I have with your Mr M. idea is that Mr M is already a parody. It is not an actual Mario universe character, but merely a fake character created by the fans. I would like to see this game non-influenced by fandom, character-wise. Now as I said, Bowser Jr.
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dressed up as a fake Mario via that mask he's wearing in Super Mario Sunshine, it looked like this:
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Now, seeing how Jr. is a forceful character as well, he could take Mr M's place.
Would you accept this as a replacement?
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Re: Cute Peach: An Ashamed Princess (v0.0) XXX

Postby AsianP3rsuas10n » Mon Nov 26, 2012 1:19 am

As you can see! This new guy is my replacement! Hes here to do everything I will not be able to do anymore. Please treat him kindly and make sure to feed him with inspiration everyday. I promise he'll do a great job and trust me he wont bite.

:lol: :lol:

I cant quite put my finger on it BUT SOMETHING IS WRONG....something about peach irritates me...Quiz...its discussion time. (Cant discuss with you Ivan cuz I want opinion of others. Not that your opinion doesnt count but since you're the one that chnages stuff, I go to you last.) TO THE PM!
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