Yu-Gi-Oh: Cards Of Desire - (Last Edited 17 Jan 2012)

[dndman997]

rex is really odd so you could keep the face though im thinking of rex from the abridged series

[FuzzFace]

The hair is a mess

Wasn't her hair a bunch of squiggles and zig zags in the first place? excuse me, but she could be having "sex hair" as it's called. it often looks messy after or during sex.

I mean obviously half of you are underage and hiding it..

Oh I'm sorry, i had no idea that there would be a chance that I'd be underage. You say half, right? right?! So I guess then it will be insinuated that a certain percentage of us are also faggots and are therefore gay. who are you to say who's under 18 and not!! I was a minor, just like you until I got hit in the knee with an arrow! see what I did there? it's called humor. lighten up a bit dog. Also, Id honestly didn't comprehend your post. I just saw that sentence and thought it peeked my interests.


Now…for the guy’s balls. Where are they? He has no balls, he’s balless. No balls whatsoever. I forget what his name is, but dang...where is the semen going to come from? Those nice juicy balls just need to wiggle and bounce while he’s haveing hot sex. It wouldn't be right without his testicles.

I just remembered…his name is bones, right? HAHAHAA! I literally laughed out loud. Such an appropriate name for someone that has a boner. Hey, the guy needs balls, balls, balls, balls. I feel like my own has been castrated just by looking at his empty crotch. I fear that If I were to kick him, he won’t crumble over in fetal position. Suck those puppies In her mouth, I bet she bit them off is what happened to his balls.

BALLS FOR EVERY BODY!!

[Lucky777]

1) Yeah, the guy needs balls.

2) Obviously some of the users of the site are gay or Bi, it's hardly a secret.

3)... Whatever Fuzz-face is high on, I totally want some of it.

[FruitSmoothie]

Loling pretty hard at this thread, the art mixed with some of the comments. I come in here just to laugh.

[HairMetalIsGod]

Just feel the need to now clarify with the underage talk - I myself am not underage - I am a full time uni student/musician with a decent amount of free time:
This project is also (for those who love legal disclaimer's) intended solely for the use of people of consensual viewing age and should be of such an age in their respective country...however if any of you have managed to work out how to either lie or simply press the enter or start button...haha :')

Yeah I know he's missing balls, haven't drawn them yet - i'll add them in soon - didn't have time to get them sorted before I posted the new teaser, and figured you'd all like a teaser (even one without balls).

Lucky777 -
(2) exactly, each unto their own
(3) I know exactly what you mean!

[HairMetalIsGod]

new update, it's not much, but i've finally un-castrated rex - he has balls!
I've also thrown him and mai together in a still - i'll add animation to it soon

Any issues come to mind when you see it? Would love some feedback

[Lucky777]

Only issue that comes to my mind is that his body-position seems a bit too frontal for his cock to be going that much to the side, really.

[Fawkes]

If you're accepting suggestions for scenes, could I request Mai getting raped by some of Rex's Dinosaurs? Or that Awesome dragon Joey has?

[Rooiehaan #2]

again my two cents, ignore it if you think its inappropriate

i believe the guy would be having quite the problem in this particular position. Not because of the position itself, hell i think it was the first position used in the world's oldest profession, but due to the fact that he is rather facing away from her. Just like before, you had turned mai's shoulders too much to the camera, and here its the same thing with the little dude.
If you could make him face her back/ass, then i bet i'd work wonders

[HairMetalIsGod]

lucky777 - yeah i'm thinking the same thing now that i'm looking at it again - i'll just move it a bit before I start animating the scene

Fawkes - She will be having a scene with two-headed king rex, couldn't miss that opportunity haha - as for Joey's monsters, I was toying with red eyes but figured a lava battleguard/swamp battleguard scene might work nicely - but if I decide to add any more scenes into it red-eyes is definitely on the cards

Rooiehaan #2 - Yeah i'll see if i can have a go at sorting that out, I only need the sprite for the one scene - so i'll see if I can tweak the pelvis and body to turn a bit more towards her...it's really tricky to find side on shots of alot of characters though, so re-drawing would be pain (but if I can't sort it I may have to)

[BlueLight]

so i think we have a problem with Mia sprite.
By the look of it she taller than the guy she's fucking. What That doesn't explain why her feet don't reach the ground... it sorta looks like shes standing but then it sorta looks like she's on a table. The main thing is should she be taller than the guy fucking her.

[HairMetalIsGod]

The way her hands are positioned imply that she's on a table, which was the inital idea - this will be altered when I put the animated version up...because there'll be another sprite coming into play (weevil underwood), so it'll be a double team idea and she'll be hanging onto him instead of resting on an imaginary table (which i was originally going to add in). But yeah she's meant to be taller than them both, those two are relatively short characters. Her legs will get a bit of re-positioning too when I redo it

[Fawkes]

Thanks for the reply, and yes Red eyes would be awesome

[Aaleen13]

The hair is a mess

Wasn't her hair a bunch of squiggles and zig zags in the first place? excuse me, but she could be having "sex hair" as it's called. it often looks messy after or during sex.

I mean obviously half of you are underage and hiding it..

Oh I'm sorry, i had no idea that there would be a chance that I'd be underage. You say half, right? right?! So I guess then it will be insinuated that a certain percentage of us are also faggots and are therefore gay. who are you to say who's under 18 and not!! I was a minor, just like you until I got hit in the knee with an arrow! see what I did there? it's called humor. lighten up a bit dog. Also, Id honestly didn't comprehend your post. I just saw that sentence and thought it peeked my interests.


Now…for the guy’s balls. Where are they? He has no balls, he’s balless. No balls whatsoever. I forget what his name is, but dang...where is the semen going to come from? Those nice juicy balls just need to wiggle and bounce while he’s haveing hot sex. It wouldn't be right without his testicles.

I just remembered…his name is bones, right? HAHAHAA! I literally laughed out loud. Such an appropriate name for someone that has a boner. Hey, the guy needs balls, balls, balls, balls. I feel like my own has been castrated just by looking at his empty crotch. I fear that If I were to kick him, he won’t crumble over in fetal position. Suck those puppies In her mouth, I bet she bit them off is what happened to his balls.

BALLS FOR EVERY BODY!!

lol ive been gone for like a week thanks to computer problems and i come back to this lol just great
at first i was looking around for omp's post and im like was it really that bad that it got removed then i realized it was on the first page

idk as i dont pay much attention to most people on here, there are a few that i pay particular attention to but omp has always seemed kinda trolly to me might just be the picture o.o

and ill have to second luckys request, whatever you are on fuzz, give us some, like now lol

(edit: and now that i look at my posts i really do need to start posting more o.o i havent posted much since dusty finished lol curse you.... uh... year? years? of being a lurker!)

[Zeus Kabob]

yargh, quick post for more criticism.

Firstly, you're improving with every model; kudos!

Second; her kneecaps seem off, as they are drawn as if the knees are facing forward despite the feet showing otherwise.

Third: The lines showing her ribs could be reduced in angle a little bit, I think.

[HairMetalIsGod]

I'll get more scenes done in the new year...been preoccupied with my bands at the moment (new year gigs and such), so it's just having the time to work on stuff...but I'll try and get to work on red eyes

I've done a quick re-edit of the kneecaps, but currently i'm happy with the rib lines...although I may get sick of them and take your suggestion...improvement is alwaysa posibility! Thanks Zeus - you're criticism is really helpful and I appreciate it

I'm throwing together the first animation (bar the handjob thing I threw up a week or so ago), and it's a little rough around the edges but it should be up on the first page later tonight (i'm just trying to smooth it at the moment). I keep getting sidetracked when I actually have free time, because I have the pokemon based game on the backburner until this is finished (but I can't help getting little bits of that done...story wise, art wise etc...so while progress may be slow on this game compared to the more hardcore creators like Gorepete, I assure everybody that in terms of games this is my first priority and before I post anything on the pokemon game (which may actually be in semi- working order by that time) I will finish this one

[Biles]

I'm just kinda curious, do you own a scanner? Because if you do, then it might save the trouble before you render her first.

[HairMetalIsGod]

I'm unsure of what you mean biles, is this in reference to the artwork I mentioned? Or to something else I said

[Biles]

Well, if you had a scanner, it would be easier for you to draw the character first on paper and show us the drawing. From there we can help you on improving the character design. Once you have a finalized sketch, then you can re-scan (or scan an entirely improved version) and then you can start rendering it in vector lineart and color.

[HairMetalIsGod]

I'm currently finding it alot easier to use flash - while my drawing skills on paper are good, the drawings are never as smooth as when I draw them with flash (line curving etc)
But I can see where you're coming from, that is a good method!