KaTsuO_O's Models

[trunks2585]

not quite sure what adjustments you made, it looks like you cleaned up the part line of her hair, and trimmed it up some and maybe did something with the jaw (giving it a more downward angle?) One thing I'll say right now, you've probably noticed it as well, the one lock of hair that's in front of the others will probably cut off part of her eye, that's why it was left cut off in my quick edit. I'd suggest making it curve back more so it's closer towards the rest of her bangs, that way when you draw the eye, it's not being obscured. (putting the hair in front of the eye could probably work as well but it wouldn't look as good.)

Edit: now that i look a bit more closely it looks like you thickened her top jaw as well from your first draft, i'd use the thinner jaw in the first version (that was some of the issues people had with her looking to young as opposed to a full grown woman) If you actually havn't touched the jaw at all, i'm sorry, i've been staring at these heads for too long then.

[KaTsuO_O]

Everything you saw was things that was changed and also the size of the head and the lenght of her hair. The tiny changes i did made it look a lot better i think.

I do like how the jaw is pointing down like that so what do you think about that i made the muzzle thicker to make the jaw thiner? I also made the front hair point more back and that made it look better when the eye is there (its not a the new eye) so it was great that you said that.

As i said before, if there is anyone that likes the first one but thinks this looks better please tell me because i dont really want to do that style and also this one isnt traced near as much as that one so it wouldent be a any problems with that i steal a style from anyone.

[trunks2585]

Let's see how i can explain this...

In the first head the top of her jaw or the muzzle, whatever you wanna call it, (from her nose to her smile) looked more squared off and angular, in the second one it looked like it was rounded more and that you'd made the muzzle thicker. I'd go back to the shape and thickness in the first one, but keep the added downward angle.

The hair looks much better for adding in an eye now.

[KaTsuO_O]

I couldent go back and get the shape from it so i hope it isnt to different to the first one.

[trunks2585]

It looks good to me, but to be honest, Pretty much any of these jaws i was fine with personally, i'm trying to think like the members that wanted thinner jaws and, well i'm not them, I've asked ebonizza to give some feedback because just me giving feedback isn't as productive, we need others that can say if they like it or not, and what they think.

If nothing else I say don't worry about the jaw or it'll get to a point where you mess with it too much and then it looks out of wack you know?

[KaTsuO_O]

I changed every color to make it look better and i also moved the hairband up a little. I think that the muzzle is fine as it is so im not going to touch it for the moment.

[trunks2585]

I like the adjustment on the hairband, the colors i actually prefered the other way, these feel a bit too dulled, and it's just weird not seeing her with the fully white fur. You might also wanna put in the real eye you plan on using instead of that placeholder.

[KaTsuO_O]

Im going to make the eye as soon as i got some more time.

There is some changes with the colors.

[trunks2585]

much better

[KaTsuO_O]

Was going to make a new eye but instead i searched for a image that contains a great body that i could use for template but i didnt found that much that would be to help so i just try to recolor playshapes body and put on my head and it looks like it will be working if i trace playshapes body and fix all the things that makes me want to blow my head of (sorry playshapes but your model is preaty bad, if you would put some more time on it would be great)

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Heres some examples why its bad:

The perspective

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Could be looking a lot better

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Different line size and alot of small holes.

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Maybe the model is sexy but its definitely not good so i hope some of you understand that its not a good model.

[trunks2585]

I think you should just use the same body you made for the first head. Seriously no one was complaining about the body you made. However I can understand if you see problems with your first body you made as well (i know you were never satisfied with her feet for example). So I say try both, use body 1 you made, and remaster playshape's body and see how that looks as well.

[KaTsuO_O]

I didnt liked my first one because it isnt sexy enough so im going to finnish what i started.

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Theres still some things that i need to fix with the body.

[trunks2585]

I'd give her more of a side view than she currently has, this was a major issue both kal had as well as ptoon-t is having. I think the way it was put is we're going for a 4/7th view rather than 3/4th view (so it's almost a full side view but with the front still visible so it doesn't look too weird when she walks (if it was 3/4) or too boring (full side view). Another option is to do 3/4 and side views of the body, I think that's what playshapes did for mario is missing with peach, the face he did that for at least, not sure about the rest of the body. But yeah that was part of the problem with this krystal model, is she was twisted in such a way so the walking part would look normal, but her torso was turned so she'd still be showing off her chest.

[KaTsuO_O]

Was working on the boobs so i missed your post.

Im going to give the body more of a side view for sure.

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Edit:

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(There will be a new eye later)

Nipples!

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[rodvi]

i kinda think her neck is too thin if she's going to give someone a bj i think it would look really weird if his dick was thicker than her neck...

[trunks2585]

I don't have anything to add, keep it up.

[OwnerOfSuccuby]

Nice breast !!!

[MrBear]

Lmfao. I really did LOL when I read NIPPLES!!!

Great to see Trunks agree to something the first time its done for once . Keep it up Katsu

[trunks2585]

So while i was digging through old threads looking for stuff i found this little gem ptoon-t did that i forgot about and I doubt he'd care about it being posted here.

This should help a lot.

[KaTsuO_O]

Thanx everyone! And thanx trunks for those hands, im going to trace them and make a new eye after im done with tracing playshapes stuff.

@rodvi the neck is a bit thicker now.

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