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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sun Jan 23, 2011 3:36 pm

I have decided that im going to have the voting later today or if not tomorrow (the deadline is that i need to be complete with at least 4 different styles by sunday 24:00 swedish time so i need to follow it) so if you have any final opinions please let me know.

First there will be a voting for the style then there will be a voting for the colors for the eye and the fur so if you dont think the colors fits you will have a chance to change them. The last thing will probely be the accessories.

Heres all of them:
Head 1
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Head 2
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Head 3
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Head 4
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Head 5
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Head 6
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Head 7
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Head 8
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby momba » Sun Jan 23, 2011 5:00 pm

2! those "cute looking" heads just don't cut it ;)
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sun Jan 23, 2011 7:00 pm

@Ebonizza it would be a really good thing to do, if we can give a opinion what we think about the stuff created then the you (you = the team) will be working faster because you know that everyone wants to see more and you also know what to do next. Thats why i can get things done as fast as i do because of the post i gets about my stuff that i then convert to workfuel that i use with my creativity to get stuff done.

Btw my favorite is 2.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby trunks2585 » Sun Jan 23, 2011 8:48 pm

Hard to pick, I still like 1, but 2 and 7 arn't bad, i gotta tell you though, 2 would probably need a new eye (i'm sure you've learned enough about them by this point) and 7's hair hair needs to be redone for sure, the eye might need a touch up as well. I'm trying to focus on just the shape of the head and which muzzles look the best.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sun Jan 23, 2011 9:33 pm

I dont realy understand why i would need to a new eye, it looks preaty good to me. But i made another one and I hope you like it more.
Head 2 eye edit.png

Also i think that the hair on 7 is preaty awesome but i think im going to make some changes there as well.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby trunks2585 » Sun Jan 23, 2011 9:49 pm

It's just an issue of how long you make the eye lids, usually either the top eye lid is longer than the bottom, or the longest part of the eye will be in the middle between the two. Let me dig up some references.

http://i.ytimg.com/vi/Hd88gyw11lc/hqdefault.jpg very awesome realistic drawn eye.

http://www.absoluteanime.com/naruto/shino-eyes.png might as well reference a popular anime, notice the guy's eyes has the top eyelid longer and the side angles down into the bottom (the glasses kind of hide it but you can see the sharp inward angle it goes at) While the girl's eye is more equal length on top and bottom. the top of the eye does curve down slightly before it ends, but you can see where the top of the eye ends and the bottom ends is equal. (the bottom of her eye also angles up slightly)

http://tinypic.com/view.php?pic=343hkir&s=5 last example, if you prefer bleach instead, here's an example of another female and male (although for him the speech bubble kinda cuts off the eye)

I hope this helps clear up a few things. Also if you want examples from your own heads, head 1 that i did the eye for and your head six have the best eye shapes.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Sun Jan 23, 2011 9:52 pm

I do understand completly now, i was preaty stupid that i didnt saw that. I dont really know how i could make a hair style that would look better for the 7 so im going to leave it like that for now and if it gets the most of the votes i change it.

Btw the link in the middle isnt working.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby trunks2585 » Sun Jan 23, 2011 10:09 pm

the bottom of her eye still looks just a bit too long, trim it up a bit more and they should be dead even with each other. Don't just extend the top eyelash, you also need to fix the vertical line that connects to the top of the eye to the bottom (or just remove it all together if you wanna try that style, personally I wouldn't do that though). Sorry the middle link didn't work, it was of shino and hinata from naruto.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Mon Jan 24, 2011 4:47 pm

Heres a mix of 2 and 7 (Ebonizza's idea) that is added to my poll, everyone have to revote if they want to be heard.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Mon Jan 24, 2011 9:21 pm

While i im waiting for the result im tracing some more. If you like one of these that im doing it may be another voting but just for like two days or something.

This is one that i think would be very good because its sexy and thats what i want to see but it wouldent really work vell because the head is looking to much att the screen.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby OwnerOfSuccuby » Mon Jan 24, 2011 10:48 pm

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Really good but the second eye ? It is a little strange position :mrgreen:

But she looks sexy ! ;)
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby trunks2585 » Mon Jan 24, 2011 11:20 pm

I think the new one terrifies me a little to be honest. That aside the eye is a good shape (maybe a bit too wide, but a good overall shape non the less) I'd stick with that sort of style for eyes. there's no reason we can't have krystal facing the viewer or at a 3/4's angle for scenes, we'd originally planned on having her with side, 3/4, front, and back views at least. one issue, i'm not sure if you'd really see as much the right side of her face (our left) as you do in that image.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby MrBear » Tue Jan 25, 2011 5:24 am

Hahahahahaha yeah I slighty got scared myself when I looked at it. Not that its ugly but the angle of the face itself was like "wtfnugget". Would still bang her nevertheless.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Tue Jan 25, 2011 7:46 am

Poll has ended! And you know which one who won... number 1. So im going to continue with that even if i am a little bit disaponted that i couldent get something new to work but what can i do when the crowd has speaken.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby trunks2585 » Tue Jan 25, 2011 8:53 am

Katsu, I suggest taking a look at my half ass edit to face 9 in the poll thread, see what you think about using those changes, that might stir up some support for a different head.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Tue Jan 25, 2011 4:42 pm

Looks like it could work. I play around with that and also i think im going to do a side view of that latest head.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby swirls » Tue Jan 25, 2011 6:26 pm

If nothing else, the eye style looks pretty nice! I think once you try a new angle for the head it'll probably look good.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Tue Jan 25, 2011 8:11 pm

Trunks your idea worked really well! This is my favorite one yet and i hope that the people that likes my first one will think that this looks better (please say if you think) because i dont like that one (kind of hated it) but this looks really good. there is still some adjustments i have to do and also i need to make a new eye, its going to be based on the eye thats on the first one but a bit changed to fit the perspective better.

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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby trunks2585 » Tue Jan 25, 2011 8:33 pm

Sounds good, glad i could help.
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Re: KaTsuO_O's Krystal models

Postby KaTsuO_O » Tue Jan 25, 2011 8:38 pm

Trunks, your always helpful.

Heres some adjustments that i was talking about and more is coming later.

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