Unholy Sonic Wrote:I've check the animation a dozen of times and I can't find anything wrong except for the 4th personallity, the "none".
In this one, it would find it better to simply remove the text bubbles entirely cause it still gives me the impression that one of them are gonna say something at anytime but thats just me tho.
It's not like it's something major, I'll probably get used to it the more I watch it.
Other then that everything seems fine and well done.
Good job!
paint-the-seconds Wrote:looks awesome but you should put corta's sheik model in it.
geos Wrote:Krystal's hips are still acting weird.
Blargh Wrote:geos Wrote:Krystal's hips are still acting weird.
They're going to act weird until I chop off the ass cheeks from her body model. >_>
Digfree Wrote:Blargh Wrote:geos Wrote:Krystal's hips are still acting weird.
They're going to act weird until I chop off the ass cheeks from her body model. >_>
Don't you need to have gone too medical school to be legal able to do that?
Sexybones Wrote:The only issue i found is that after the titjob whit a bigger breast character the left hand stick through her left breast.
Digfree Wrote:Blargh Wrote:geos Wrote:Krystal's hips are still acting weird.
They're going to act weird until I chop off the ass cheeks from her body model. >_>
Don't you need to have gone too medical school to be legal able to do that?
KaijoPhanex Wrote:Blargh <3 <3 <3
It's amazing! I think my only complaint would be the finish for the first blowjob (where he finishes in her mouth). To me, while it's cool to see how far into her mouth all that stuff is going (like an internal shot haha), it looks kind of weird. Maybe just take out the blasts of mess from the actual release, then just make her gag it all up like she does after.
The transition-turn to where she faces away from him after that is still a little awkward too. Other than those two little things... mmmmm mmmmmmm. I love most how the mess just keeps stacking on her and stacking on her... <3 <3 hottttt hahaha
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kagenoryuu Wrote:this is really cool. just needs the arrow buttons to allow you to move forward or back through the scene. other than that, great job!
LuftMallow Wrote:In your added sex scenes, all the characters I've found open their mouths in a way that looks unnatural to me. It looks less like they're panting/moaning than that they're distending their lower jaw like a snake. My suggestion is to have it open not as wide and articulated not where the jawline meets the neck but a little above there like so:
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Blargh Wrote:Okay, so I was hoping to include a main game update with this post, but it looks like flash is fucking up my FLAs every time I open them, so I'll have to re-install. In the meantime, I did get done with the text, so here you go. Unless there's anything game-breaking, this'll be the final build to copy over to the main game.
EDIT: Main game has now been updated. I can finally get back to sweatin' the small stuff.KaijoPhanex Wrote:Blargh <3 <3 <3
It's amazing! I think my only complaint would be the finish for the first blowjob (where he finishes in her mouth). To me, while it's cool to see how far into her mouth all that stuff is going (like an internal shot haha), it looks kind of weird. Maybe just take out the blasts of mess from the actual release, then just make her gag it all up like she does after.
The transition-turn to where she faces away from him after that is still a little awkward too. Other than those two little things... mmmmm mmmmmmm. I love most how the mess just keeps stacking on her and stacking on her... <3 <3 hottttt hahaha
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Eh, I'm just kind of letting it go at this point. I'll try to revisit it another time, but I'm about done with Morton for now.kagenoryuu Wrote:this is really cool. just needs the arrow buttons to allow you to move forward or back through the scene. other than that, great job!
That may be done in the main game, later.LuftMallow Wrote:In your added sex scenes, all the characters I've found open their mouths in a way that looks unnatural to me. It looks less like they're panting/moaning than that they're distending their lower jaw like a snake. My suggestion is to have it open not as wide and articulated not where the jawline meets the neck but a little above there like so:
You're right. I'll see about toning it down for the parts where she's not giving out blowjobs.
Crossbow1701 Wrote:so this Peach extra is now in the game, anything else?
haloman Wrote:I dont wanna be the bitch here... But i kinda find the text hard to read. Ya i read it and watch the fucking, not just enjoy the fucking. Sue me. So anyway, Light purple against grey and blue is just to hard to read (In my case. I dont know about others)
Lord Panzi Wrote:i second this, halo dude
ikechi Wrote:very good at first i thought the ending wasn' t going to be right but u proved me wrong it was great
bed_intruder Wrote:Eh, text is kinda weird. By that I mean what she is saying like how she wants to get pregnant or whatever. "I have a having kids fetish, it just feels so good to pop out kids!" - Princess Peach. Anyway the animation looks good enough for now, I agree that you should work on the other aspects of the game like more enemies, levels, etc.
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