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Re: %charactername%

Postby Final Shine » Sat Mar 06, 2010 3:14 am

trunks2585 Wrote:on a side note when i hear 'acme' this is what i think of.
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How was this not mentioned sooner?

:lol:
Anyway, here's Fla
It contains 2 character, at beta stage.
There maybe a few bugs, sorry, didnt have time to finish them.
So, if anyone could finish them, it would be awesome.
Again, sorry, but i really dont have a time right now, for drowing... =(
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Re: %charactername%

Postby nebrose » Sat Mar 06, 2010 3:47 am

肉まんマン Wrote:
Kami Wrote:'Akume' is the Japanese rendition of the English word 'Acme', in the same way 'Orugazumu' is 'Orgasm'.

Acme means "the highest point (of something)", synonymous with 'peak' or 'climax' and yes, 'orgasm'.

I didn't find it at first, either, and I suspect it's used about as much as 'Acme' is used in that context in English.


I`m sorry Kami but you are wrong.

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Acme
Acme (pronounced /ˈækmiː/; from Greek: ακμή, the peak, zenith, prime) denotes the best of something.

1- Acme has no relation to climax or orgasm.
2- It`s pronounce aekmi
3- If it was Japanized it would sound like Akumi or Ekumi (I don`t know how english speakers pronounce ae)

Either way, Akume is not a Japanese word, it`s not even the Japanese pronounciation of an english word.

yes yes i got that already, it's just that it sounds better as a mistranslation than a literal translation, that and well... i don't think many people care that much about proper japanese than you do... atleast at the moment. not to be rude but not many people care about lanquages other than their own, mainly because it's too hard for them to learn the other lanquages.
i only give base ideas, ones that can be built off of, not ones with an end in sight. so don't ask me to give further detail on my ideas.
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Re: %charactername%

Postby Kalypso » Sat Mar 06, 2010 4:36 am

nebrose Wrote:i don't think many people care that much about proper japanese than you do... atleast at the moment. not to be rude but not many people care about lanquages other than their own, mainly because it's too hard for them to learn the other lanquages.

Exactly. Please understand that. Also understand that Online Japanese to English Dictionaries and Translators recognize the word "Akume" as an alternate definition for "orgasm," "climax," "acme," and also "a horse and/or a long/large horse--see stallion." Regardless of if it is a rogue or a slang translation, it's still a word, and is recognized as such whether it is correct to the point of complete anal analysis or not.
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Re: %charactername%

Postby nebrose » Sat Mar 06, 2010 5:13 am

Wow O.O really that's kindof cool
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Re: %charactername%

Postby dollspit » Sat Mar 06, 2010 5:36 am

Final Shine Wrote:Anyway, here's Fla

Looks great! Keep working on it!
Final Shine Wrote:So, Akume or Acme?

Screw it. Just call her "Mindy".:lol: It seems like some people would rather talk linguistics around here. To each his own. :roll:

Kalypso Wrote:Online Japanese to English Dictionaries and Translators recognize the word "Akume" as an alternate definition for "orgasm," "climax," "acme,"
This is true.
BTW, I'm the resident wannabe. :\
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Re: %charactername%

Postby Final Shine » Mon Mar 08, 2010 1:17 am

I need take a break, for a week or a little longer.
And yeah, need some clothing ideas/remaking advice.
(This outfit was make just for test)
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Re: %charactername%

Postby nebrose » Mon Mar 08, 2010 8:00 pm

yeah the outfit is the part that doesn't look right, but it's just that sooooooo.... keep up the good work XD
i only give base ideas, ones that can be built off of, not ones with an end in sight. so don't ask me to give further detail on my ideas.
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Re: %charactername%

Postby Final Shine » Tue Mar 09, 2010 10:18 pm

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Re: %charactername%

Postby nebrose » Wed Mar 10, 2010 1:44 am

yeah that outfit looks Much better than the first one, didn't mean to sound... rude? snobbish? with my prior posting though... yeah sorry if i burised something.
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Re: %charactername%

Postby Final Shine » Wed Mar 10, 2010 3:21 am

nebrose Wrote:yeah that outfit looks Much better than the first one, didn't mean to sound... rude? snobbish? with my prior posting though... yeah sorry if i burised something.

The first one it's a 5 minutes work, created just for test =)
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Re: %charactername%

Postby Final Shine » Wed Mar 10, 2010 6:36 pm

Well, this is my final release.
Maybe this is not what you expected, but i've think she looks...good enough.
As i already tell - i'm new to flash, and this is my first (second) work, thats why she's not perfect...
And by the way - "Fluffy" it's her beta name, so it's for you to decide, keep it or not. =)
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Re: %charactername%

Postby HolyPaladin » Wed Mar 10, 2010 11:47 pm

I like it, it looks good.... hate to be a pain since you said that its your final release but I think that the Strap for your Battle-bra(:P) should go all the way around, it looks kinda odd to me. If you don't wanna, I understand :)
Boom... nuff' said.
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Re: %charactername%

Postby Mr.Elefant » Thu Mar 11, 2010 12:38 am

Looks good.
Let us know when your beta(alpha, w/e) comes out.
I'm right 98% of the time.
Who cares about the other 3%.
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Re: %charactername%

Postby Final Shine » Thu Mar 11, 2010 1:38 am

HolyPaladin Wrote:I like it, it looks good.... hate to be a pain since you said that its your final release but I think that the Strap for your Battle-bra(:P) should go all the way around, it looks kinda odd to me. If you don't wanna, I understand :)

Umm... you mean like this?
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Mr.Elefant Wrote:Looks good.
Let us know when your beta(alpha, w/e) comes out.

It was my final release =)
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Re: %charactername%

Postby Final Shine » Thu Mar 11, 2010 4:11 am

And yes, forgot to say...
I've understand that, most of you people, think that's this some called character is crap.
I'm not blame anyone, even i can say, that Kalypso's little hint lookes much beter than this whole character.
But, what can i say? this is far as i can gone, for now.
This character would not apears in game, couse, again, it's lookes like a crap to most of you.
But, for those who like it, you can download it, there is fla. attachment in my "Final release post"
And i want to say thanks for everyone, who tryed to help me, naming previous character, and creating history (Dollspit, thank you) =)
P.S sorry for double post
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Re: %charactername%

Postby Visplane_Overflow » Thu Mar 11, 2010 4:26 am

Final Shine Wrote:And yes, forgot to say...
I've understand that, most of you people, think that's this some called character is crap.
I'm not blame anyone, even i can say, that Kalypso's little hint lookes much beter than this whole character.
But, what can i say? this is far as i can gone, for now.
This character would not apears in game, couse, again, it's lookes like a crap to most of you.
But, for those who like it, you can download it, there is fla. attachment in my "Final release post"
And i want to say thanks for everyone, who tryed to help me, naming previous character, and creating history (Dollspit, thank you) =)
P.S sorry for double post


Yep, that's right.
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Re: %charactername%

Postby nebrose » Thu Mar 11, 2010 10:10 pm

Final Shine Wrote:And yes, forgot to say...
I've understand that, most of you people, think that's this some called character is crap.
I'm not blame anyone, even i can say, that Kalypso's little hint lookes much beter than this whole character.
But, what can i say? this is far as i can gone, for now.
This character would not apears in game, couse, again, it's lookes like a crap to most of you.
But, for those who like it, you can download it, there is fla. attachment in my "Final release post"
And i want to say thanks for everyone, who tryed to help me, naming previous character, and creating history (Dollspit, thank you) =)
P.S sorry for double post

hey i think it looks better than anything i could make on my own
i only give base ideas, ones that can be built off of, not ones with an end in sight. so don't ask me to give further detail on my ideas.
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Re: %charactername%

Postby HolyPaladin » Fri Mar 12, 2010 12:13 am

Final Shine Wrote:Umm... you mean like this?

Yea, like that. My only problem with it was that the "Bra" stopped right there and it didn't look too good imo :/. But good work all the same :)
Boom... nuff' said.
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Re: %charactername%

Postby Kalypso » Fri Mar 12, 2010 1:12 am

Final Shine Wrote:And yes, forgot to say...
I've understand that, most of you people, think that's this some called character is crap.
I'm not blame anyone, even i can say, that Kalypso's little hint lookes much beter than this whole character.
But, what can i say? this is far as i can gone, for now.
This character would not apears in game, couse, again, it's lookes like a crap to most of you.
But, for those who like it, you can download it, there is fla. attachment in my "Final release post"
And i want to say thanks for everyone, who tryed to help me, naming previous character, and creating history (Dollspit, thank you) =)
P.S sorry for double post

Aww, come on Final Shine, don't beat yourself up, its definitely a start, and if you keep at it, who knows :)
You might want to try colored outlines. Its not to hard. Just take the object you made, select the outline, eyedropper the base color and then drag down the color a tinch lower. Not too hard, and the result is great.
You also might want to look at a lot of hentai anatomy. It helps a lot, even though you're using a pre-made body, you can get the proportions to your leisure.
Don't give up, and never tell your self you have limits on what you can make -- and don't down yourself. Nobody's here to attack ya, just to help you. Be open to what others have to say about your work, and it will all work out in the end.
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Re: %charactername%

Postby magnusadder » Fri Mar 12, 2010 4:29 am

Final Shine: i was enjoying watching your project evolve... granted most likely would not make it into the game it was still note worthy to see how much one could do given the constraints of the models presented
knowledge is juicy and sweet like an apple, but it more addictive then even the most potent of drugs. so i ask you as eve once asked Adam and the serpent asked her before. "care for a bite?"
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