I truly wished to give critiques on the current version, and give ideas for new content. However, after looking through the creativity corner and seeing the new artwork being used (which I must say is beautiful, and if you think it is a low bar, then obviously the stuff you are using is going to blow me away) I find many critiques I planned to have are rendered moot. And, if the storyline of the game changes as much as the artwork, even /more/ of my critiques are rendered moot. However, on the off chance you'd like to hear my critiques and ideas for the current version of the game. I shall give them. However, I first have a few questions to ask, and if one of the staff would be so kind as to answer them, I'd be much obliged. And, if you think that these questions would reveal something that you do not wish to reveal at the time, please tell me
1) The Storyline, will it remain (at least so far as it has been shown to us) in the same vein? Or will it change significantly? I don't need specifics, if you wish not to give them. Just a general explanation, or even a yes or no will work.
2) If, as mentioned before, the story /does/ remain the same. Will many parts be relatively familiar, but with updated artwork?
3) Will the cheat button be removed?
4) How many mess layers does Krystal have for each section? As in, when does cum stop accumulating on her? I guess I'm kinda weird, but I feel there aren't enough.
I am sure I will remember more, later. But for now, those are all I can think of.
Now, unto the critiques on V0.2
However! Before I start, let me say I truly enjoy your game. And I hope you understand that, no matter what I say, I do not mean to offend you in any way. I respect greatly what you have done (and are doing) and just wanted to clarify that I am not trying to rip on or flame the game, but merely point out some things that you may, or may not already be aware of. And also, that along with these critiques I may interject with ideas for making them better. Also, few of the critiques will be about the quality of the art, except for the changing of some perspective and poses, because I know you have a talented artist on your staff and don't need help =). Also, later on you'll notice they become rather rapid fire. It's because this post is just really frikkin long and my hands got tired, so I just decided to get them all out before I lost interest in writing n-n;;
Now, I shall begin. (These are in no particular order, except the kind I am seeing as I play the game at this moment.)
The Chair Blow- On this, I would like to say several things.
1) I really dislike how little stamina he seems to have. Because, if you are like me and go through the clips relatively fast, she goes down on him maybe three strokes and then he ejaculates. A few ideas? Have her lick his cock, pay attention to its head, and maybe fondle his balls. I dunno, something. I mean, she is just going up and down on him, no tongue action or anything. He shouldn't get off so easy.
2) When Krystal goes down on him, her tongue's coloration bleeds a little into her lower jaw, which is disconcerting.
3) She goes /way/ too far down on his cock. Unless his penis can pass through neck, or just magically disappear after it enter her mouth, she shouldn't be able to take it into her mouth that much maybe make her muzzle longer? (This can also be applied in other places, which I will talk about later) And, since she is kinda unwilling, I wouldn't think she would /want/ to go down that far without him trying to force her. (Which could be an option)
4) Her eyes like, vibrate after he ejaculates. It's kinda weird, I don't know what else to say on that topic XD
5) His cock moves up and down a rather great degree, like it's a frikkin bouncy ball or something. Again, rather strange.
6) His char seems too small and low to the ground for comfort.
7) He sort of just stares into space, I feel like he should be looking down at Krystal, given, after all, the fact that she's giving him a blow job. And, when he climaxes, there is no movement on his part other than that of his dick. You'd think he'd at least maybe look up, or try and force Krystal to drink his cum by holding her head down.
EDIT:8) The female getting fucked, the dicks are way too large for her to take :/ other wise, I like it =3
Sharp Claw Warriors- I just wanted to point out a few things.
1) Pants? Please? Or something in that vein? Not that seeing a bunch of dicks isn't, you know, a turn off for me. But even if they are so coarse as to have sex in public, you'd think they wouldn't always walk around naked from the pauldrons down. Also, if guys were always walking around with penises showing, and stroked themselves in public, I'd probably question their sexuality. you know, under many other things.
2) Actually, more clothes in general. I mean, the females don't walk around bare breasted,(although they don't wear undergarments either). So, it stands to reason.
3) On their dicks, I have to say that the bumps turn me off a little, because they seem too spiky for comfort. And the fact they have some on their heads is just weird. You'd think that area wouldn't have them. Also, the coloration (considering the color of the balls) seems off as well.
4) The drool. HUGE TURN OFF. HUGE. I don't mean to be mean, but if, of all my suggestions, you took one to heart. This would be it. The droll is just really, really a turn off for me.
5) Their hands. They seem to have only two hand animations. More flexibility would be nice.
6) Perhaps more variety in the sprites? Have some that have different color armor? More decorated? Something.
7) Smaller dicks, or bigger abdomens on the women. I have to tell you, they should be giving their women internal injuries every thrust. It's (once again) disconcerting. And a turn off n-n;
Sharp Claw Women- Very nice, (I already know that they are deliberate recolors of Krystal that use the same sprite) but a few modifications would help
1) Their breasts area little too large (I will overlook the fact that they are reptiles and thus shouldn't have breasts or nipples in the first place). Some might think bigger is better, but they look like they'd have major back problems.
2) Larger abdomens! As mentioned before! They look like they should have /serious/ internal damage in several scenes!
3) Have them look up maybe? That head position looks uncomfortable :/
4) The ass- very sexy <3 but set too far back :/ Also, you shouldn't see her far ass cheek I think. It doesn't flow with the image. Which, by the way seems to change perspective in several places.
5) Hair- While I enjoyed it, I felt that in some scenes it would look sexier down instead of up.
6) Clothes, again seems rather strange to want clothes in a sex game, but for realities sake (again putting aside the fact that they are furries... er scalies?) you'd think that they'd wear rather more, and that their bra, breast armor thing would cover more of their boobs.
7) Shoes, it seems like in some scenes they wouldn't need them, and maybe not heels? Those seem impractical.
8) Variety! Maybe some with streaks in their hair/different clothes? Or maybe varying bust size. Not everyone likes huge boobs :3
Krystal-
1) Her tail, I think it should be down rather than up, it would be impossible to have it that far up anyways
Also, although you can see her far butt cheek, the taill seems to be placed BEHIND that, which doesn't make sense.
2) Like the Sharp Claw Women, she has several anatomical issues, most obviously her abdomen size.
3) Breasts- Nothing to say, love them. They are perfectly sized to me. Not huge, but still large, and not too small.
4) Ass- no problems with the size, because I know that if her waist wasn't so minuscule it would be very attractive.
5) Head/Hair/Ears- On the head, the positioning is off, again that looks like an awkward position. I love her hair =D. The closer ear is wonderful, but the far one seems like the corner of a rectangle :/
EDIT:6) Tail, again XD - In several scenes (namely Table fuck/Drench/and Pile Drive) she wags it when it would have to go off to the side then move upward, which would be kinda like sitting on part of a rope while being fucked. Which has to be uncomfortable. Also, it is wagging /behind/ her, even though you can see that the area where the tail should connect is bare.
Hand Job-
1) I actually really like this one, from the way he seems to force her to how she closes her eyes in resignation when he comes. However her legs seem overspread and awkwardly placed in relation to the soldier.
2) However in that same area there is a female giving head. And when the soldier thrusts forwards at the end he jams it in her mouth, which, I mean is okay even though it goes in too far. But his back leg just jams backward, it is a little weird cause it kinda seems to dislocate D8
3) Also, the female Sharpclaw's tail that goes up, it's base is overly thin and then juts out.
Table Fuck- Not too much to say once more
1) His dick goes too far in just like the chair blow n-n;
2) I kinda wish she'd swallow some of the cum, just preference. >>;
3) And as stated before about the tail
Make Out- Very nice :3
1) They go too far down on his dick (sorry I keep saying this by the way :c)
2) If you wear anything, the belt she wears disconnects from her body when she goes down on him
Ass Rape- Again, very nice =D
1) Again, (SORRY! D8>) his dick is too big for her
2) There are several perspective changes in the pic from the 3/4 view of her butt to the profile of her head
3) Her eyes vibrate at the end again, kinda confusing
Suck Dick- Very fun to see!
1) Love this scene! However (tired but true) the dick goes down too far.
2) She never actually swallows the cum. Even though he tells her to.
3) If you do it again, perhaps you could have new text? After all he can't think highly of her if she does so by choice!
-more to come later-