LoK Choose Your Own Adventure

Discussion about Legend of Krystal. For now this also includes any feature-requests or other ideas.

Re: LoK Choose Your Own Adventure

Postby Spycam » Tue Aug 20, 2013 10:33 pm

bigdick69 Wrote:I have a suggestion for your team, you shoud make it in flash or in rpgmakerit would be good.


I have actually suggested that a game should be made in this format, with the text being largely replaced by video, but sadly I currently lack both the skills and resources required to create such a game. It seems to me that simply having an interface to choose the next scene would actually be easier than creating a standard game engine, but again I don't really know how all that works. However, if you or anyone else wishes to create such a game, feel free to use any of my writing- provided the game is free and in some way posted on this site, of course.
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Re: LoK Choose Your Own Adventure

Postby hunnyd3w » Thu Oct 10, 2013 5:20 pm

Is this still being worked on? I'd like to take part if you're accepting willing writers! :)
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Re: LoK Choose Your Own Adventure

Postby Spycam » Tue Oct 15, 2013 4:51 am

It is. If you want to contribute, just submit a page, mention it here, and I'll approve it. I should also probably take this opportunity to apologize for my recent absence. Life has been a bit crazy lately, and regular updates are unfortunately out of the question for the time being. I do however intend to keep writing, and I will make an effort to at least continue to check the site regularly in case any other writers need to contact me.
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Re: LoK Choose Your Own Adventure

Postby [Brand_Name] » Sun Nov 03, 2013 3:09 am

Is there any way to see the story tree that details the possible paths Krystal can take prior to jumping in and actually going through the adventure? Thanks
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Re: LoK Choose Your Own Adventure

Postby gamerfox » Sun Nov 03, 2013 5:49 am

You need to sign up with an account first, but there is the option to see the tree.
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Re: LoK Choose Your Own Adventure

Postby Enkide » Sun Oct 19, 2014 4:44 pm

I have an account and would love to join in as a writer, though I'm not the best, but I can help contribute when I can :P
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Re: LoK Choose Your Own Adventure

Postby thetruemog » Wed Oct 22, 2014 1:52 am

Do you think you would be able to get a narration feature on it? I ask because some people (like myself) lose their place reading online easily alot more then with a book. I do not mean to offend I ask just to know and in hope.
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Oh my god it is dead.

Postby DeadlyAlias » Tue Nov 11, 2014 5:04 pm

I can't help but notice that www.Chyoo.com has been abandoned, with VERY poor notification, by its administrators.

http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.page/197223

New site www.chyoa.com
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Re: Oh my god it is dead.

Postby Totemist » Sun Nov 30, 2014 10:50 am

DeadlyAlias Wrote:I can't help but notice that http://www.Chyoo.com has been abandoned, with VERY poor notification, by its administrators.

http://www.chyoo.com/index.php/main.story.page/197223

New site http://www.chyoa.com


Jesus, I wish I'd seen this post before making my attempt at carrying the torch. I pretty much threw away pages of my work because the CHYOA dudes were too lazy to put up a banner or even disable their nonfunctiuonal story submission.
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Re: LoK Choose Your Own Adventure

Postby kingcupworld » Tue Dec 09, 2014 10:52 am

Well, at least it still exists on Chyoa.

http://chyoa.com/story/the-legend-of-krystal
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Re: LoK Choose Your Own Adventure

Postby TheMasterLurker » Tue Apr 07, 2015 4:41 pm

I'd love to see some more work put into this (its amazing so far) and perhaps I myself will give it at try...no idea how that would turn out though :D
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Re: LoK Choose Your Own Adventure

Postby Spycam » Mon Apr 13, 2015 7:24 am

Hey guys. I feel I should apologize for my extended hiatus. I guess it's been over a year now. Without going into any personal details, let's just say that life got crazy for a while, and as time dragged on, coming back to write this just became a more and more distant goal amongst a myriad jumble of projects and responsibilities. However, things have restabilised now, and yesterday I decided it was time to come back to our dear Krystal. I couldn't just show up again with empty promises, so today I added a 19-page thread chronicling the baseline story, aka the clothed arc, up to and including Krystal's confrontation with Galvatron (the Redeye). It's basically the original game in print with my own embellishments (spoiler alert, see: vaginal sex) and some important 'plot' developments, but it gives a much needed framework for me to work around when adding other paths.
Please note that I have done zero editing or proofreading, and I'm not entirely sure some of the things I wrote were good ideas, the bar scene in particular, but it's posted here http://chyoa.com/story/the-legend-of-krystal . If anyone wants to edit or reword things, please do, especially in regard to the sex scenes. I've never been the best at describing what i envision concisely. And now, I'm rambling. Enjoy!
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Re: LoK Choose Your Own Adventure

Postby ACuddleyTeddy » Sat Apr 18, 2015 6:30 am

I gotta say I am really impressed with your work. I am new to the forums and I am glad i found this project. I hope you are able to continue this. I am curious what will happen next in the story!
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Re: LoK Choose Your Own Adventure

Postby Technobummer » Fri May 08, 2015 12:30 am

Some suggestions:

For the Artists:

If you're into this story, please consider drawing artwork and, if possible, creating a chyoa account and linking the pictures with a DeviantArt or similar, so that we don't need to necessarily use our imagination (some of us are brain-dead, like me). In return you get the gratification of calling yourself "that guy who makes pictures for that one LoK CYOA which nobody knows about". Okay, for real though, it'd be mighty appreciated.

If you DO decide to link pictures for specific events along the progression of the CYOA, please link them in a new paragraph surrounded by parenthesis, which are these - (), at the bottom of the page. Or, link them here somehow (new thread?) if Chyoa doesn't allow that (did not see "NO URLs" under the author-set guidelines or any other rules section for the site).

For the Writers:

Please don't be afraid to contribute, signing up for Chyoa is really, REALLY easy. If you don't like to use your personal email, make a junk one and use that. Remember, this is a OPEN-ENDED CYOA, meaning ANYONE can write to it. Please, though, if you decide you want to help, please be aware that posting spam is NOT tolerated, and we would all be very grateful should you proofread. Naturally, proofreading is not a requirement (as the good sir Spycam so gloriously illustrated for us). It's also not a bad thing to simply submit an idea you've had, but put into a story context (not something in the first-person, where it's YOU talking, something where the characters (Krystal, Liz, Fox, Katt, Falco, etc) are the ones talking and narrations are given, describing the setting or event. Doesn't matter if the dialogue is a little bit sketchy and amateurish or if the descriptions of areas and events are lacking, it can still be a really big help to other writers with writers block). That way, any author who's a little stumped on progression for a specific area of an arc gets a little jumpstart from your creativity and inspiration. However, PLEASE don't just post absolute junk (e.g. Viagra adverts or self-promotion), it only serves to infuriate us and everyone.

Spycam Wrote:Hey guys. I feel I should apologize for my extended hiatus. I guess it's been over a year now. Without going into any personal details, let's just say that life got crazy for a while, and as time dragged on, coming back to write this just became a more and more distant goal amongst a myriad jumble of projects and responsibilities. However, things have restabilised now, and yesterday I decided it was time to come back to our dear Krystal. I couldn't just show up again with empty promises, so today I added a 19-page thread chronicling the baseline story, aka the clothed arc, up to and including Krystal's confrontation with Galvatron (the Redeye). It's basically the original game in print with my own embellishments (spoiler alert, see: vaginal sex) and some important 'plot' developments, but it gives a much needed framework for me to work around when adding other paths.
Please note that I have done zero editing or proofreading, and I'm not entirely sure some of the things I wrote were good ideas, the bar scene in particular, but it's posted here http://chyoa.com/story/the-legend-of-krystal . If anyone wants to edit or reword things, please do, especially in regard to the sex scenes. I've never been the best at describing what i envision concisely. And now, I'm rambling. Enjoy!


I'd like to suggest updating the link on your first post, since some people won't want to look through all the pages in this thread. Simply updating your first post with the new link would save some people a lot of trouble. That, and it looks MUCH cleaner. However, if you cant update your first post due to it's age, I suggest you create another thread. Also, if you're into it, I might suggest trying to work on the arc where Krystal goes back to Great Fox, if you get bored or stumped on the progression of the "canon" arc, since the Great Fox arc has great potential for any number of different situations.
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Re: LoK Choose Your Own Adventure

Postby Spycam » Thu May 28, 2015 8:12 pm

Thanks for pointing out that the initial post was outdated, Techno. That was an oversight on my part. I should really stop updating in the middle of the night. Also, to reiterate Techno's point, ANYONE is welcome to contribute to this project, and we would be very grateful if you did so. Don't worry about any form of canon, write whatever scenario you find inspiration for. If you struggle with spelling and grammar, I'll edit it for you, but we need some fresh ideas. Even if you just add a choice with a blank page, that could be enough to inspire someone else.
By the way, I've only received two or three feedback notes since this project began. I'm sure other writers will agree that this is somewhat frustrating, as I have no idea what I'm doing well, what can be improved, and what never should have seen even the deepest, darkest corner of the internet. So, be a critic! Tell us what sucks and why, tell us what 'exited' you, or what made you laugh, or point out flaws in logic or contradictions (please note that physically impossible sex is an integral aspect of the LoK universe, although I've been trying to justify it in this story). As long as I can understand it, I'll be extremely grateful.
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Re: LoK Choose Your Own Adventure

Postby gamerfox » Thu May 19, 2016 8:16 am

I really think this project needs a revival.
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Re: LoK Choose Your Own Adventure

Postby Furman12 » Thu May 19, 2016 9:49 am

gamerfox Wrote:I really think this project needs a revival.


I second that
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Re: LoK Choose Your Own Adventure

Postby Enkide » Fri May 20, 2016 12:13 am

Furman12 Wrote:
gamerfox Wrote:I really think this project needs a revival.


I second that

Ditto, any one willing? XD
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Re: LoK Choose Your Own Adventure

Postby MR.H » Sat Dec 30, 2017 11:32 am

hey just registered to let people know for those interested I add a chapter on the cyoa site titled dance this is supposes to be an introduction of the events and its small for those interested there I intend to add more and am up for reviving the story and adding some possible choices from the games from here on the site like Krystal version G and possibly rebirth to help find dance its on the for lack of a better word slut rout of choices and pleas I ask for ideas on what to do next and I ask for you not to be to harsh on the grammar vivid vocabulary I can muster but things like period and a few other things I tend to forget about and the things I intend to add are a dance option on the yet again for lack of better word paragon - ish events but the dances will be pole dancing Duh what erotic story doesn't have that with dancing in it and belly dancing since the the story before mention krystal having gold appendages with what what happens during the dances be slightly different depending on the yet again lacking of a better word rout and stripping will obviously be on the pole dance as an option to do and stripping on the slut rout will lead to always nude again as the slut rout will give the option to dress up just to dress down again or work the pole nude and with paragon might give the option there to with more of a comedic reason but this comments long enough and I "Really" cant wait for response and forgive me if I spoiled what I was going to do for some of you and because this feels like a letter at this point and even tho this part is point lis MR.H
P.S if anyone needs any clarification on what I said freely ask and I feel like I'm going to get a few questions well maby not who nose
P.P.S to hopefully not confuse any one I posted the dance option on the current CYOA site
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Re: LoK Choose Your Own Adventure

Postby MR.H » Mon May 21, 2018 2:14 am

same as before with last post and thank you to spycam for letting my chapter public and I encourage others to help an complete the nympho or pure sex crazed route to this chyoa and the middile rout as well to this well writtin project
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