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Re: New Characters/Costumes

PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 1:40 am
by trunks2585
yeah pretty rough around the edges i'm not gonna lie to ya (after being an art major for 4 years critiques are second nature to me by now) However maybe you could help with designing costumes for krystal? see if you can think of outfits that would be suitable for her, both indicating her status or fitting certain areas better.

Re: New Characters/Costumes

PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 1:47 am
by Vyksen
Oh, no, please, if you can critique me, that's an added bonus. No, I'm not being sarcastic. I really really want some critiques. I don't get enough of them as it is.
Yes, I did draw clothes on her. The one I drew is one that she's modeling.
I'll draw Krystal in them, but if you can critique me as I post pictures of her in designed clothes, I'd seriously appreciate it. Don't go soft on me either if you choose to as well, please.
Trunks, I'll do anything I can at this point to help. :)

Re: New Characters/Costumes

PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 3:00 am
by -QQ-
i like the clothing choice but to me the skirt should be shorter because in my opinion if you have a sex slave and you give them clothing you want that clothing to appeal to you and be practical enough to be out of the way during sex. and you over all body lay out isn't bad her hand is a bit funky a little to much space between the fingers and her ribs are to prominent on the back they need to be shallow there. pretty good other wise though (b^ ^)b

Re: New Characters/Costumes

PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 4:56 am
by Vyksen
Thank you for the feedback! I shall keep that in mind!
Yes, I thought they were too far spaced apart as well. Thank ya, Double Q!
I know LOL. I was actually sitting there earlier like, "Looks too... non... skimpy... hooker-ish..." LMAO.
But, yes, agreed.

Re: New Characters/Costumes

PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 7:56 am
by Robbie800
Didnt quite hit it, but really great picture.

Re: New Characters/Costumes

PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 8:40 am
by Smackman
id hit it

Re: New Characters/Costumes

PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 12:29 pm
by Renara
Awesome picture, not quite the look you sound like you were going for, but I doubt if she goes to General Scales looking like that that she'll be wearing those clothes for long, not with that teasing look anyway :P

Re: New Characters/Costumes

PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 12:34 pm
by Vyksen
I agree, I should have made it more slutty. LOL.
Thanks. ^^

Re: New Characters/Costumes

PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 2:00 pm
by Smackman
lol, I don't like my chicks in slutty clothes :S

Re: New Characters/Costumes

PostPosted: Wed Feb 03, 2010 7:56 pm
by Poob
Vyksen Wrote:Don't think I hit it though.


I'd probably go for it, despite the rug burn.

To be honest though, that looks pretty fantastic.

Re: New Characters/Costumes

PostPosted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 4:28 am
by Vyksen
That's underwear. Lol. Ty, Poob~!
To each his own, Smack.

Re: New Characters/Costumes

PostPosted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 6:37 am
by Armisael
I personally would like to see Katt Monroe make an appearance.

Re: New Characters/Costumes

PostPosted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 6:40 am
by Armisael
And Falco Lombardi >_>

Re: New Characters/Costumes

PostPosted: Thu Feb 04, 2010 9:04 am
by dandan
Doesn't Katt look like the Ditto!Krystal? Also color reminded me at first of her

Re: New Characters/Costumes

PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 1:53 am
by Atemisc
Yo. I actually have some costume designs for Krystal. I can maybe upload them later, if anyone's interested. Just need to find them in my stack of papers and scan them. I'll have at least one later tonight.

Re: New Characters/Costumes

PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 1:55 am
by trunks2585
please do share them, there's some good odds they'll get used if you've got a lot of ideas.

Re: New Characters/Costumes

PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 1:56 am
by Atemisc
Thinking of resketching a lot of them, but there's one inparticular one people might like. Kind of a mix of ripped clothing and green scale armor. I'll have it up first, I'm sure.

Re: New Characters/Costumes

PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 2:15 am
by Atemisc
The original image isn't mine, but I'm not too great with furry art. So I copied the image, but the outfit is my design. I intend to fix it up and colour it in Photoshop later on at some random point.
I also have other designs, but I need to find them. I have a huge stack of drawings to go through.

Re: New Characters/Costumes

PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 2:33 am
by trunks2585
thanks for admitting the artwork isn't yours but the clothes idea is. I'm a bit of a nazi to art thieves >.>

the outfit is definatly unique for sure, i'd say krystal almost looks like a member of the sharpclaw warriors and it's really well drawn too, i'd see no problems with our development team working form this if we use it. Keep up the good work and sharing your outfit ideas.

on this outfit maybe make it a bit more tattered and battle worn, also those shorts really bug the hell out of me, they look like guy shorts, i'm not saying make them ultra short but shorter and less baggy than those.

Re: New Characters/Costumes

PostPosted: Sun Feb 07, 2010 2:35 am
by Atemisc
Well, actually, it was supposed to be a tattered skirt, but I can see where you got shorts from the pic. lol
I'm not the best with torn clothing. But I could try to screw around with it a little more later on.