LoK Choose Your Own Adventure

[Yawg]

You should totally do a threesome with Katt and Fox!

There- done.

If you want me to be more specific... uh... Katt and Krystal taking turns going down on Fox? Fox and Katt (with a strap on) on Krystal? Fox taking taking turns with each girl? Krystal and Katt scissoring, Fox watching?
I think thats all the combos I can come up with at the moment... what do YOU feel like writing about, though?

[Grape Me]

I'd like to help

I'm pretty decent writer. Whatever new pages I make ill post them and u guys tell me what u think

[Yawg]

Awesome! Glad to have someone else onboard!

[Spycam]

Welcome to the team, losdiablo! By the way, I absolutely love that picture of Krystal you've got there.

[Spycam]

UPDATE: Good news! I just put together a new status template and equipment category (everything can be copied and pasted from the main page), which means that I'm finally done messing around with the system and can get back to the important part- writing. Hooray!

Note: I haven't gone through any other pages yet, but if anyone wants to help, a location or equipment becomes a page when you put square brackets around it like so [[location]]. Also, the existing status bars need to be replaced with the new one.

[Yawg]

Well, I know someone's up to something... There's a mysterious new page that's been added- no content yet, but... Soon! Hopefully.

Also, been trying to write one of the three sex scenes I've cued up: Krystal and Pepper, Krystal and Slippy (penetration), and Krystal and Falco and Katt, with Krystal being on the receiving end.

I don't have any (heh) firm ideas on how to make them interesting and different, so if anyone wants to contribute... Have at 'er!

[Spycam]

Hmm, a mystery page you say? Now what could that be about?

In regards to the Slippy/Krystal scene, might I suggest that he make use of his tongue? He is a frog, after all. I seem to recall more than one situation that was leading toward a Krystal/Pepper (Almost wrote Peppy haha) scene, so would you mind specifying which one you want ideas for? Thanks.

[Yawg]

It wasn't so much that I needed ideas... Just that I had a lot of avenues open if folks wanted to contribute towards the smutty stuff.
Though I guess if there's a desire to see one scenario fleshed out over the others, now's a good a time as any to mention it.

[Spycam]

IMPORTANT UPDATE: Well, surprise, surprise, that mystery page that Yawg found came from yours truly. It is now complete, and may be viewed here http://editthis.info/create_your_own_ad ... _situation. This is the first of a set of pages that offers information concerning the world state. The rest of the set is fairly straightforward and should be completed soon. Note that you will be able to continue asking questions until you ask about what Krystal's purpose is, at which point the scene will progress (and porn will commence ).

[Grape Me]

Thanks for letting me be apart of your team guys. I've been very busy latly so I have had no time to start writing but now I should be available to help

R there any pages in particular you would like me to work on or can I just go wild and choose whatever?

[Yawg]

The only real guideline as far as adding goes is, go nuts- unless someone writes in dibs on a page. I believe there's only one such page so far, though. So its (almost) wide open.

[Spycam]

You may notice I'll post here as well as leaving a note not to edit particular pages. Otherwise, start wherever you feel inspired.

[Spycam]

I feel I should clarify something briefly in regards to Krystal's degree of undress in the planetside opening. Basically, the idea is that the three stages represent a degree of sluttiness, and her early choices will reflect that. For example, if she is fully clothed, she will only have the options to fight or submit. If she is topless, she will gain an option to be a willing participant, and if she is nude, she will be able to actively seek pleasure, but perhaps lose a few options that require less sexual talents. Think of these as suggestive guides, rather than limits. Naturally, the reader will be able to change states at various points, and in some cases Krystal may end up wearing something that does not reflect her psychological state.

[gamerfox]

Same goes for the "confronting Fox" path on the Great Fox.

[[Brand_Name]]

hey can I help too? Frankly, I'd love to work on some scenes where Kry gets raped. Think that can be worked in? thanks.

[Spycam]

Definitely. Everyone is welcome to contribute. I can think of one or two places where you could put just such a scene at the moment. Do you want me to give suggestions, or would you prefer to find your own way?

[[Brand_Name]]

Yes! A quick tutorial would be most appreciated.

Actually that was a poor choice of words. I know what to do, but yes, your suggestion on where to write would be appreciated. Also, i was thinking of (in the future) w]making a branch that would send Kry to a planet full of nasty horny tentacles. Dat okay?

[[Brand_Name]]

Well since nobody responded I did it anyway. I continued the thread where Kry crashes on the Sharpclaw planet, escapes the hut, and is by the riverside. Whoever wrote this story didn't decide her fate if she did not go in the water and I wrote what happens if Kry doesn't jump into the stream... Sorry to that person if you had hopes of going somewhere with that thread because I feel like I stole it. Anyway, It's still in the works and there's a bunch of typos and whatnot but you can still read it... caution, however, I did not add the correct options/titles, so "try to run" and the third option (I forget what I called it) lead to other stories, a death from a gunshot and a tentacle rape, respectively. The only link that works (and where most of my work was done) is the second option, "try to fight." If somebody wants to clean up the code (is it really code? I don't even know) for me that'd be awesome. And, one last thing, I promise that what I wrote is clearer than this.

Ooh one other thing, I was hoping to (whenever I decide to be done with this current story) make a new offshoot where Kry goes to a planet full of tentacles
Just thought I'd let you know.
Thanks guys!

[Yawg]

Yup... I've been a bit lax with my own contributions as of late... too much time being taken up with drawing and writing my comic.

I haven't forgotten about this project though, and I do plan on continuing... So no worries there. I WILL be back.

That being said, since we're on Sauria anyway, there are Krazoa temples all over the place- rather than having Krystal inexplicably fly away to another planet, why not have her find an underground cavern filled with krazoa tentacles?

Him.

*jots down the idea for the comic later*

[Grape Me]

hey yawg, your the same guy who made this right: http://g.e-hentai.org/g/452876/f35705a892/

if so it's a really awesome comic man