Sakyubasu no Tatakai I (Finished)

[SquallLion]

Just had a good idea. Since shes a demon, shouldnt she have tatoos on her arms? That would be extremely sexy.

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cute and hot !!

[whatdontlookaatme]

that....is really good. Nice job gore, cant wait to see the model in game!

[warlord42]

That's... beyond awesome...

[GolanTrevize]

Just had a good idea. Since shes a demon, shouldnt she have tatoos on her arms? That would be extremely sexy.

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+200

[SpectralTime]

Just had a good idea. Since shes a demon, shouldnt she have tatoos on her arms? That would be extremely sexy.

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Prevailing opinion!

Though, I'll miss the Femme Fetalons. Aw, well.

[Milten]

Call me a retrograde but I prefer the old one.

[PervertedFreak]

I like them both, however you could think about making her hips a bit wider as I think somebody already mentioned. More hourglass figure or whatever you call it.

[whatdontlookaatme]

more fans than non-fans so gorepete hopefully keeps the one with the tattos. Oh, and with the clothing, doesnt it defeat the purpose of clothing if its see-through? I think it would be sexier if the bra and panties werent see-through and were just black, and then the clothing came off when she has sex.

[Lucky777]

Gonna drop in the opposing counter-vote, and vote against that request to make her clothes opaque.

[Reapergod36]

more fans than non-fans so gorepete hopefully keeps the one with the tattos. Oh, and with the clothing, doesnt it defeat the purpose of clothing if its see-through? I think it would be sexier if the bra and panties werent see-through and were just black, and then the clothing came off when she has sex.

Indeed.

[iamnuff]

like the tatoos but the makeup/expression makes her look like shes about to slit her wrists.

also, i dont like the clothing at all, if it leaves nothing to the imagination then it might as well not be there at all.

[whatdontlookaatme]

i like the makeup, just not the expression

[protognome]

Read the following in the light of constructive criticism. I mean only to give my opinion on what might result in a better looking final product.

I like the new model, but I think it needs not only opaque clothes, but something a bit more on the modest side as well. I'd personally like to see a garter belt and garters, as well as an opaque thong to match with perhaps some frilly bits. It needs to tease the imagination a little, else it serves no purpose in a sex game where we'll be seeing it off plenty of times anyway. The bra could serve to be bigger as well, opaque if nothing else. It doesn't need to be a sports bra, but it needs to keep us from seeing her tits fully as they would hang were the bra not there. Her necklace and the strings crossing her mid drift could use a little bit of refinement. Perhaps a smaller brush and smoother lines. Aside from that, the rest of what she's wearing is fine.

As for the art on the rest of the model, all her tattoos could look a bit cleaner e.g. drawn with a finer brush, smoothed edges, and perhaps a bit more detail on the one located on her left breast. I can't even make out what it is. The piercings and her fairy look good, and I'm sure the finished model will be crisper, but I figured I'd comment while it was still being worked on. Love the work you're putting into things here.

[omp123]

This is promising.

[WonderGamer]

Pretty much, yes.

I have no plans on abandoning this... people need to relax and be happy!

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I must be missing something. Either he removed the flash or I don't have rights to view it.

Just had a good idea. Since she's a demon, shouldnt she have tattoos on her arms? That would be extremely sexy.

I'd rather piercings, as in, nipple/clitoral piercings. THAT would be sexy.
(minor grammatical corrections in the quote because I'm OCD)

Wouldn't it just be better to include an slew of styles so people can swap out what features they like & what features they don't? Perhaps not easier to code, but then he doesn't have to worry about pissing off people while he's trying to please others.

[Sync]

...is her head supposed to be upside-down...? >.>

[djxbyrne]

^-rofl xD

[TheLegendaryChosenOne]

This is promising.

i kinda enjoyed this way.

>=)

[SquallLion]

ugrh! her head

[GoRepeat]

Had you said nothing Gorepete I would never have noticed, but now that you said it I will never un-see it. Either way overall the proportions are much more pleasing to the eye. Hopefully it animates well without causing any perspective issues!

She is animating okay... I have some sublayer touch-ups ahead of me though

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This is promising.

Don't get aHEAD of yourself!