The Art of Writing
Posted: Wed Jun 12, 2013 4:49 pm
So I'm almost done with my collage course of writing with an updated IT degree. I wrote this up for my creative writing class, teacher was impressed even with a few immersion errors here and there. Thought I'd just post it because I'm a bit proud of it.
Joshua "Smitty" Smith Wrote:The Experience of Hunting
Once a year my masochist family visits the rural areas of this poisoned country, for the sport of a ‘saving murder’, to keep the indigenous population from over encumbering the environment. We drive a few hours out to Halsey in the middle of Nebraska, and set up camp for our yearly deer hunting. After we finish preparing our temporary home, we lose ourselves in our conscious, leaving the real conscience behind for what we must do in the morning.
Before the sun appears over the horizon, above the tall hills worn by time, we perch ourselves where the wind blows in order to mask our scent. Wind burns escalate, and I can feel my lips starting to sting and lose their elastically. No amount of warm wooly orange can make me feel warm on this original hell of a miniature mountain. At least we are upwind of everything nature can produce, and through my burning nose hairs I can smell the beauty of nature, the cold birch woods companied by the scent of dying rodents, victims of the Cougar that lives below.
The masculine antlered species are more active at night, fewer hunters when the prey is nocturnal, unlike themselves. Hours pass and still nothing, absent of what I can notice without our most valuable resource for an important sense, light. The sky is turning from black to blue, a crimson and orange back drop behind us. We have the ideal spot where we won’t be blinded as mother light ascends over the mountain. A beauty of light bleeds above us, raining down its majestic rays on the tops of the trees in the valley.
That’s when my eye catches movement. Two four legged creatures walk gracefully across the tree line. They have naked heads, their ears perk and look toward us suspiciously as I signal to my partner with two fingers, and I slowly point to the location of two feminine doe. We wait, knowing their strategy to send the common fodder first. Sure enough, a six point buck struts past a tree into the valley, emerging itself into plain view for our rifles. I raise my thumb and look through the scope.
A shot rings out, and I didn’t pull the trigger. My decision to not end the life of a peaceful yet melancholy life, as simple as it may be, gave my companion the opportunity instead. It still rings in my ears, the sharp sound of the hammer hitting the shell, sparking a flame inside the bullet that ignites the powder, exploding the hollow point out of the primer, controlled through the barrel, and down the path into the soft furry shoulder, that is no longer a living deer. The shot expands and mushrooms as it hits the target, leaving a larger exit hole as the heart is quickly destroyed.
It is a quick death for the proud animal, the heart broken females run back into the forest, only to forget about their partner and search to be claimed by a new one. We stand up and descend down the hill to claim our prize. Before it passes out of view, I take a long look at the scenery past the valley. The Great Plains, I spot two cities and a river, as I can see for miles from this spot. “This is why I love the country” I whisper to myself, as I walk down the hill to assist in preparing our next meal.