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Should I go ahead with this?

Postby that man » Thu Oct 02, 2014 10:42 pm

Yeah, I was thinking of doing this as a one-on-one, or even as a normal roleplay, but I also feel like writing this as a normal story too. This is the idea:

Rosalyn Luxembourg is the last of the all powerful Luxembourg line, and sole heiress to the family's multi billion dollar fortune. Caring for her is an army of maids, who have only three, very inseconsequentuly minor facts over their head:
1. Their mistress is a futanaria, at the age of sexual discovery, is more than capable of calling upon just about every boy (or girl) in town, and naive enough to believe their calls.
2. If she gets pregnant, or gets someone else pregnant (with the exception of her maids) then she has to marry whoever that is.
3. If she gets pregnant, or gets someone else pregnant (with the exceptiin of her maids) before she gets married, all of the maids will be fired.
So, its up to the maids to keep their mistress happy, stave off all potential suitors, and above all, stay alive.

So, would this make a good story?
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Re: Should I go ahead with this?

Postby BlueLight » Fri Oct 03, 2014 2:15 am

I'm hearing a mechanic more than a story. There is no reason why this can't be part of a good story but assuming you don't add anything then it will be the GM and the players that make the story.
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Re: Should I go ahead with this?

Postby that man » Fri Oct 03, 2014 2:44 am

I know. It's a base idea now, and I was going to create the other characters around it. Not just maids, but also some of the suitors.

edit:
...my response doesn't make much sense, does it?
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Re: Should I go ahead with this?

Postby BlueLight » Fri Oct 03, 2014 5:38 am

I said character not story in my post. ;_;

Ya but this might be fun but does seem more mechanical than story driven.
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Re: Should I go ahead with this?

Postby that man » Fri Oct 03, 2014 12:38 pm

Yeah, I'm trying to figure out how exactly to write this. If you want, I can describe some of the maids or Rosalyn Luxembourg.
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Re: Should I go ahead with this?

Postby BlueLight » Fri Oct 03, 2014 9:50 pm

you could make a story about how the young lady is trying to find a mate.
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Re: Should I go ahead with this?

Postby that man » Sat Oct 04, 2014 3:35 pm

I was thinking of having it focus slightly more on the maids (since it's their skin) but that does make more sense.
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Re: Should I go ahead with this?

Postby that man » Fri Oct 10, 2014 5:12 am

How are these for basic character profiles?
Spoiler (click to show/hide):

Name: Rosalyn Luxembourg
Age: 18
Gender: futa
Appearance: About 5'5" in height, with a slim figure and long blonde hair. Looks about a year or two younger than she really is.
Bio:Rosalyn Luxembourg is the sole heir to her family's fortune, but could really care less. Do to said fortune, she has been isolated most of her life, with the few people she does meet only "care" about her fortune. Publicly, she is aloof, almost cold, but secretly, she has read every faery tale she could, and even all of the movies, and is convinced that her "prince" charming is real.

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

Name:Natalie Mays
Age: 25
Gender: female
Appearance: About 5'8", with an average body figure, and orange hair in a ponytail. Likes to wear bangles, and the like.
Bio: The older of the May sisters, Natalie portrays herself as the kind, loving, and attentive maid to her mistress. In reality, she is trying to find anyway possible to get her mistress to marry her, so that she can have access to her fortune, as well as not having to work. Even with that, she is still very optimistic and slow to anger.

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

Name: Jamie Mays
Age: 25
Gender: female
Appearance: about 5'7.5", with a slightly larger "body figure", and orange hair in pigtails. Also forced to wear a large, pink pin.
Bio: The "younger" of the May sisters, Jamie was often the plaything of her sister's schemes, and so is used to abuse. In fact, even though she always cries and begs when being punished, she actually seems to like it. Like her sister, she is always optimistic and slow to anger.

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

Name: M
Age: 2+
Gender: female
Appearance: 5'4", with a slim figure, and short, black, hair in a pageboy style. when needed, she has spectacles.
Bio: M just sort of showed up at the mansion one day, dressed as a maid, and started working. No one really talks to her, but she also always seems to be around when needed. Either way, she is incredibly reliable, and never says a word about anything.

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

Name: Luka Stal
Age: 28
Gender: female
Appearance: just above 6', with a well toned figure, and brown hair cut short. Wears a furred hat, even when indoors, for protection.
Bio: an "ex" member of the Russian Special Forces, Luka is the maid one calls one for when they want something done. Normally, she oz very sweet and honest, being more than capable of winning over anyone in just about every situation. At the same time, should someone upset her sufficiently, then nothing short of sedatives will stop her.

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

Name: Leanne Strauss
Age:."29"
Gender: female
Appearance: 5'9" with a slightly thicker figure, and white hair in a bun. Also wears glasses.
Bio: The head maid, Leanne is often seen as the strictest and most abused, leading to the rumors that her hair is not actually dyed. Seemingly in love with perfection, Leanne will rage if even the slightest hiccup occurs in her plans, or even if things go right. At the same time, she is still totally unexperienced in "personal" areas, and has a hard time acting proper when brought up.
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