[RenPy] SlutCraft: Heat of the Sperm [Ver.0.30.1]

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[RenPy] SlutCraft: Heat of the Sperm [Ver.0.30.1]

Postby ShadowPortalTeam » Wed Apr 11, 2018 6:36 pm

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Developer: Shadow Portal
Censorship:None
Version: 0.30.1
OS:Win/MacOS/Linux
Language: English/Russian/Italian/Chinese
Genre: ADV, Sci-Fi, female heroine, Corruption, Trainer, Tentacles, Cosplay, Interspecies, Monsters, Parasite, Straight, Capture, Forced, Oral, Bondage, Comedy, Moral degeneration, Handjob, Lingerie, Fap material, Kissing, Masturbation.

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It seems like Sarah Kerrigan was a loyal member of Sons of Korhal and obeyed Arcturus Mengsk's orders to every syllable just yesterday.
But who would've thought that Mengsk didn't forgive Sarah for killing his father.
Because of his plots and betrayal, a secret operation on Tarsonis, the capital of the Confederation, turned into a bloodbath
and a 'captive' status for Sarah herself...
But, as she found out later, it was just another hard way to promising new opportunities.
Opportunities to become stronger. To get revenge. To get some pleasure...
This is a story about Sarah Kerrigan's path from a loyal soldier to a powerful (and sexy) Queen of Blades.
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Changelog:
Ver 0.30.1
High priority:
Scene: Fatal climax (Level 1)
Scene: 1000 zergs (fan-scene)
Scene: Defiler essence
Scene: Second pregnancy day feeding
Help: Sai’mon’s hints

Low priority:
Main menu update (animation)
UI: update check button

Bug fixes:
Changed our Discord invite (the previous link used to be for temporary membership, but now it’s a normal one - feel free to join :)


Ver.0.29.1
High priority:
Trash collection
Minigame (trash collection)
Splish-splash (Guardian essence)
Stuck in wall animation 1

Medium priority:
Ursadon sprite
Pregnant QoB sprite

Low priority:
Bug fixes
Added older scenes (update 28) to the gallery
Some small improvements


ver0.28.1
High priority:

Scene: Fatal climax
Scene: QoB's hunger (Drone)
Guardian quest: Stuck in pipe
Scene: Bait

Medium priority:
Dialogue: Pregnancy (belly)
Sprite: Pregnant Sarah (belly/boobs)
Gallery: Added a music room (you can find it in the gallery)
Added animations to Fap material scene
Added animations to Bathday scene

Low priority:
UI updates (3rd chapter)
Non-adult scenes added to the gallery (patron request) (not all of them, just the important ones, the big fight, Sarah's acceptance to the Swarm, etc).
Added older scenes (update 27) to the gallery
Fixed Non-H scenes missing from the galalery
Fixed a bug when Sarah leaves the chrysalis (Android version)
Bug fixes



ver.0.27.3
***High priority:***
  • Defiler route (2 scenes)
  • Scene: Mistress and QoB confrontation
  • Scene: Zergling essence
  • Scene: QoB's hunger (Hydralisk)
    Scene: Feeding Lizzara level 0 (QoB)

Medium priority:
  • Updated Sarah's sprite, new boobs (sketch)
  • Updated Sarah's/QB sprite, belly (pregnancy) (sketch)

Low priority:
  • Dialogue: Hydralisk's love of boobs
  • Dialogue: Hydralisk after first meeting him
  • Changed Hydralisk's sprites in the start
  • Update checker UI updated

Ver 0.26.1
***High priority***
  • Animated: Feeding scene (level 0) (secret item)
  • Added: Hydralisk essence (2 scenes)
  • Updated: zergling essence mini-game
  • Added: Little shenanigans (scene)
***Medium priority***
  • Added: Gallery items (secret item)
  • Animated: Gallery items (secret item)
  • Added more Chinese translations (more than usual!)
***Low priority***
  • Added: endless mode
  • Changed the notification system for when all the content has been seen
  • Various bug fixes

Ver 0.25:
High priority:
Minigame: Zergling essence (beta)

Medium priority:
Scene: QoB's and Mistress's meeting
Scene: Sarah's hunger (Drone sex)
Scene: Hunger, kiss (Lizzara route)

Other:
Added ability to sort the gallery in different ways (we are open to your suggestions on other ways)
Added a visual for Lizzara's hunger.

Ver.0.24:
High Priority:
Scene: Feeding Lizzara (Sarah's route) (levels 0-1)
Returning the favor: Spike/Inseminator (poll winner)
System: Lust
Selfcaster 2 (2 parts)
Dialogues: Abathur, Stukov, Zergling, Guardian, Lizzara
Added new updates to the gallery (visuals 23 update) (soon)
Drew Lizzara's mouth in the bridge location
Reworked the effects/music in Day 1 (leader fight)

Medium Priority:
System: Chapter selection
Changed the order of the triggers for chapter 3 of the game. (More changes are inbound due to the addition of new ystems)
New visuals for chapter selection

Other:
Added more Chinese translations
Bug fixes
Changes to how changelog is displayed

Ver.0.23:
High priority:
Added scene: Hunger (Lizzara blow-job) level 0
Added scene: Lizzara's transformation (???) levels 0-1
Added scene: Hunger, kiss (Lizzara route) level 1
Event slight rework: Meet the leaders

Medium priority:
Dialogue after Tentacles level 3 scene
Dialogue after Transformation (???) levels 0-1 with Sarah scene
Added scene: Jerk-off week level 3

Low priority:
Made changes to the save system, you will now see which saves were made in an older version of the game, and you will get a warning upon trying to load an old save, so you can't confuse them with normal saves now.
Bugfixes

Ver.0.22:
High priority:
Scene: Tentacles levels 2-3
Drone essence Sarah route (minigame)
Lizzara's infestation
Scene: Jerk-off week level 2
Scene: QoB's hunger zergling route level 0
Chinese translations for the first chapter
Lust system
Continuation of the story

Medium priority:
Gallery rework
Low priority:
Intro available in Russian
Epilogue 1 available in Russian
Checkpoint moved (according to gameplay chapters)
Bug fixes


Ver 0.21:
**High priority:**
  • Scene: Satisfying her needs (Mistress + Stukov)
  • Scene: Selfcest level 0 (terran form)
  • Event: Rebirth (Leaving the chrysalis)
  • Scene: Hunger, Stukov's route, level 0
  • Event: Meeting Mistress, level 0
  • Event: Day 0
  • Scene: Sport is life level 5
  • Scene: Tentacles levels 0-1
**Medium priority:**
  • Dialogue: Talking to Lizzara
  • Dialogue: Talking to Sai'mon
  • Dialogue: Talking to Sochus
  • Dialogue: Talking to Queen of Blades
  • Dialogue: Talking to Abathur
**Locations:**
  • New location: Throne room
  • New location: Bridge
  • New location: Leader's hideout
**New characters:**
  • Queen of Blades
  • Reborn Sarah
  • New persona: Drone
**Miscellaneous:**
  • Added descriptions to scene tree
  • Interface fully translated into Russian
  • Added Italian translations (60%)
  • Added a new checkpoint (beginning of update 21)
  • Fixed bugs.
[B]**20th update added to gallery:**[/B]
  • Scene: Freedom (in epilogue)
  • Scene: Inside chrysalis (transformation)
  • Scene: Jerk-off week (level 1)

Ver 0.20.1:
  • Fixed some bugs.
  • Fixed map not showing in the labyrinth event.
  • Android version added.

Ver 0.20:
  • Event: Attack
  • Epilogue: Freedom
  • Scene: Freedom masturbation (in epilogue)
  • Event: Transformation start
  • Scene: Inside chrysalis (transformation)
  • Scene: Jerk-off week (level 1)
  • Event: Labyrinth, map added
  • New level system
  • New scene tree system (available in character menu)
  • 19th update added to gallery:
  • Abathur's inspection added
  • Finale stage 3 added
  • Last request added
  • Jerk-off week added
  • Fixed/improved numerous scenes
  • Translation improvements added
  • New music added (during the content of 20th update)
  • Bugfixes

Ver.0.19:
  • High priority:
  • Abathur's checkup
  • Final test stage 3
  • Last request (mini game)
  • Jerk-off week checkup
  • Report to Mistrese
  • Medium priority:
  • Added to gallery: Zergling's needs stage 2 (ver.0.18)
  • Added to gallery: Final test stages 1-2 (ver.0.18)
  • Added to gallery: Masturbation stage 2 (ver.0.18)
  • Added to gallery: Zergling's punishment stage 3 (ver.0.18)
  • Italian translations (ver.0.18, partially)
  • Ultra high priority:
  • Bugfixes
Ver.0.18:
  • Scene update: Zergling's punishment (blowjob route) (level 2)
  • Scene: Zergling's needs (levels 2-3)
  • Scene: Masturbation (level 2)
  • Scene: Final exam (stages 1-2)
  • Event update: Jerk-off week, this event replaces the 'masturbate 50 times a week' quest
  • Event update: Preparing for the exam
  • Mistress sprite changes
  • Intro changes
  • Bugfixes
Ver.0.17:
  • Scene: Sport is life (level 4)
  • Scene: Zergling's punishment (level 2)
  • Event: Three-day long exhibitionism training
  • New locations to visit:
  • -Throne room
  • -Bathroom
  • -Hall of Evolution
  • -Corridors of the ship
  • New visuals for physical training
  • New clothing system, now Sarah can finally take off the lewd lingerie
  • New scenes in the gallery
  • Added missing scenes and levels to the gallery
  • Gallery bug fixes
  • Bugfixes
Ver.0.16:
  • Scene: Sport is life (levels 2 and 3)
  • Scenes: Naked training sessions and training with equipment
  • Scene: Let me play with you (zergling) (levels 0 and 1)
  • More functionality for the zergling in Sarah's room
  • Event: Naming the zergling
  • Scene: Feeding 2 (level 2)
  • Scene: Link to the Swarm, Sai'mon's route (levels 1, 2 and 3)
  • A change to the Masturbation 0 scene - added Stukov's route
  • Scene: Stuck in wall 2 (level 2)
  • Bugfixes

Ver.0.15:
  • Added new character, zergling.
  • Added new event "Absolute perfection"
  • Added new scene "Feeding 2" (levels 0,1)
  • Added new scene "Play with me (punishment)" (levels 0,1)
  • Added new scene "Bath day" (level 3) (0.14)
  • Added new scene "Stuck in wall 2" (levels 0,1)
  • Added a gallery to the main menu.
  • New costume teaser (poll)
  • Changed Sarah's infestation scene. (changed the gag to an organic one)
  • Bugfixes
Ver.0.14:
  • Added 2 'stuck in wall' scenes
  • Added 2 new 'Sport is all' scenes
  • Added Connecting to the Swarm event (the general introduction)
  • Added Connecting to the Swarm: Abathur's route (2 levels)
  • Added new location, Hall of Evolution
  • Added new character, Abathur
  • Added a few new dialogues with Saimon and Stukov and also a few of the ones we've forgotten to add before
Ver.0.13.1:
  • Add Italian translation.
Ver.0.13:
  • Continuation of the main storyline;
  • Masturbation scene;
  • Kiss scene;
  • An analysis scene;
  • Continuation of Bath day event;
  • Optional lulz;
  • 'HIDE' button added to interface, it can be used to hide the dialogue window and look at the images without any obstructions (click on the screen to show the dialogue window again);
  • Fug bixes.
Ver.0.12:
  • Continuation of the main storyline;
  • Continuation of side-stories;
  • New character: Mistress;
  • Bug fixes.
Ver.0.11.2:
  • Fixed a bug in the 'Find a way out' event.
Ver.0.11.1:
  • Fixed missing English translations in some scenes.
Ver.0.11.0:
  • Storyline continuation.
  • A new side-storyline (it's quite easy to stumble upon) but it's more of a placeholder for now.
  • Inventory system, you can now interact with items you find during your playthrough.
  • Changed physical training system.
  • Fixed bugs regarding wrongful display of hunger and energy bars.
  • Text improvements.
  • Fixed some inconsistencies in the plot.
  • Fixed a couple of bugs.
Ver.0.10.0:
  • initial release.


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Re: [RenPy] SlutCraft: Heat of the Sperm [Ver.0.01]

Postby dannub » Wed Apr 11, 2018 8:56 pm

I like the art. I'm into it. Are we going to get some zergling action?
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Re: [RenPy] SlutCraft: Heat of the Sperm [Ver.0.01]

Postby Jiktaq » Thu Apr 12, 2018 4:32 am

Never did I think Zergs would turn out sexy. Outside of some missing words in a few sentences, it's not too bad. I like the art and the direction in which it's going. The feeding scenes are my fav thus far, they're really good.

Can't wait to see how often this game updates, I want mroe of it
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Re: [RenPy] SlutCraft: Heat of the Sperm [Ver.0.01]

Postby ShadowPortalTeam » Thu Apr 12, 2018 1:41 pm

dannub Wrote:I like the art. I'm into it. Are we going to get some zergling action?

We are glad you liked the game. And yes, we do have some... events planned with zerglings.
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Re: [RenPy] SlutCraft: Heat of the Sperm [Ver.0.01]

Postby ShadowPortalTeam » Thu Apr 12, 2018 1:48 pm

Jiktaq Wrote:Never did I think Zergs would turn out sexy. Outside of some missing words in a few sentences, it's not too bad. I like the art and the direction in which it's going. The feeding scenes are my fav thus far, they're really good.

Can't wait to see how often this game updates, I want mroe of it

We're happy you liked the feeding scenes, they're a favorite of one of our own as well! If you wish to, you can make a screenshot of the lines that have missing words and send it to our mail, or simply write the line itself so that we can easily find and fix it.
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Re: [RenPy] SlutCraft: Heat of the Sperm [Ver.0.01]

Postby Elaymidoray » Thu Apr 12, 2018 6:40 pm

The art looks good an' the concept interesting, I'll definitely be keeping me eye on this.
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Re: [RenPy] SlutCraft: Heat of the Sperm [Ver.0.01]

Postby ShadowPortalTeam » Fri Apr 13, 2018 9:36 am

Elaymidoray Wrote:The art looks good an' the concept interesting, I'll definitely be keeping me eye on this.

We hope you'll like it.
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Re: [RenPy] SlutCraft: Heat of the Sperm [Ver.0.01]

Postby chickenmccluckcluck » Fri Apr 20, 2018 5:05 am

im not much into "trainer" type games but i like starcraft. artstyle is good. i did find it a bit strange though that stukov is in the game when he wasnt around yet when kerrigan was first captured by the zerg. still its a good concept and i look forward to seeing where you go with it.
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Re: [RenPy] SlutCraft: Heat of the Sperm [Ver.0.01]

Postby ShadowPortalTeam » Fri Apr 20, 2018 11:33 am

chickenmccluckcluck Wrote:im not much into "trainer" type games but i like starcraft. artstyle is good. i did find it a bit strange though that stukov is in the game when he wasnt around yet when kerrigan was first captured by the zerg. still its a good concept and i look forward to seeing where you go with it.

Yeah, we aren't following the original plot too closely, we thought Stukov was perfect for the role.
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Re: [RenPy] SlutCraft: Heat of the Sperm [Ver.0.01]

Postby omnipotent » Sun Apr 22, 2018 8:34 pm

Imminent wall of text, sorry

played this demo a couple days ago and gotta say I really enjoyed what was in there so far. When I got to the end of the current content I was bummed there wasn't more so it's definitely a promising start. I'm a huge Starcraft fan so i guess naturally it appealed to me, but that also is a double-edged sword where being a fan I care more about little details, lore-wise included.

While i know this game is no means meant to fit into the lore plot-wise (it's an h-game for crying out loud), but it is strange seeing Stukov. Not just the fact that he's already infested but he has a radically different personality as well. Not saying that kills the game for me by any means, but it is weird seeing my favorite swole-armed russian that is tired of everything act like a cheeky lil perv. But you guys did need a character to antagonize Kerrigan a bit, and like I said, most players won't really give 2 damns about that. Perhaps you could work in some alternate lore that you find through conversation or something that explains why he is there and why he is acting like he is. i.e. in this timeline he got assassinated earlier thus a zerg before Kerrigan and the parasite altered his personality too, i dunno. Again little details, but would go a long way for SC buffs.

On the topic of antagonists I'm surprised you didn't decide to go with Duran, after all... [SC + SC2 spoilers]
Spoiler (click to show/hide):

His mission was to make the races fight with each other as well as in the long run create the queen of blades to destroy the universe, giving him motive to *personally* see to her transformation and be an evil perv to her. Also he is a shapeshifter so it is feasible that he could be there in that point of the plot. Also the possibilities with a shapeshifter are pretty much endless. You could do so many mind games with Kerrigan and even the player with that. For example he could pretend to be someone (say raynor) in the next cell over, and use Kerrigan's trust to his advantage to coerce her more into perversion, then after the point of no return she and the player finds out it was Duran all along, boom! plot twist! Also there is the potential for a lot of good banter between Duran and Stukov.


On the topic of characters do we expect to see more big names, like the Overmind, the aforementioned Raynor, Abathur, or even Nova? On one hand i think it would be cool that once Kerrigan is finally the Queen of blades she goes around corrupting every one else, a nice little flip from being trained to doing the training, but that might be better saved for a potential sequel. The focus would probably be better served on the turning of Kerrigan. Anyway so far I think the pacing is very nice, too many times I see developers jump the gun on the corruption/breaking of someone in an attempt to "get to the good stuff", where a significant chunk of the good stuff was on the journey there all along. So please, I beg, keep the TF slow and deliberate, it really pays off in the long run if done correctly.

In terms of critiques of what's currently there...
The game starts pretty abruptly, a bit of a synopsis would be super helpful for players unfamiliar with starcraft's plot. give a brief explanation of the races, and Kerrigan's mission leading up to her capture, that should be sufficient enough to dial players in. The art is very good, especially the zerg creatures/stukov's arm. There are some tiny things that i've noticed are a bit off (anatomy and such) but most aren't really worth mentioning unless the artists really want to go into it. Stukov's face does look a bit strange to me, perhaps his eyes need to be more orange and glowy, or his side of his face need to be melted or whatever similar his game model. I did notice a couple of grammar errors, though i didn't mark them down so I'd probably need another playthrough to find them. I believe one of them was ecstasy spelled with an "ex"? something like that.

Anyway, long post over. Great start on the game fellas keep up the great work! looking forward to future iterations!
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Re: [RenPy] SlutCraft: Heat of the Sperm [Ver.0.01]

Postby ShadowPortalTeam » Tue May 01, 2018 12:39 pm

omnipotent Wrote:Imminent wall of text, sorry

played this demo a couple days ago and gotta say I really enjoyed what was in there so far. When I got to the end of the current content I was bummed there wasn't more so it's definitely a promising start. I'm a huge Starcraft fan so i guess naturally it appealed to me, but that also is a double-edged sword where being a fan I care more about little details, lore-wise included.

While i know this game is no means meant to fit into the lore plot-wise (it's an h-game for crying out loud), but it is strange seeing Stukov. Not just the fact that he's already infested but he has a radically different personality as well. Not saying that kills the game for me by any means, but it is weird seeing my favorite swole-armed russian that is tired of everything act like a cheeky lil perv. But you guys did need a character to antagonize Kerrigan a bit, and like I said, most players won't really give 2 damns about that. Perhaps you could work in some alternate lore that you find through conversation or something that explains why he is there and why he is acting like he is. i.e. in this timeline he got assassinated earlier thus a zerg before Kerrigan and the parasite altered his personality too, i dunno. Again little details, but would go a long way for SC buffs.

On the topic of antagonists I'm surprised you didn't decide to go with Duran, after all... [SC + SC2 spoilers]
Spoiler (click to show/hide):

His mission was to make the races fight with each other as well as in the long run create the queen of blades to destroy the universe, giving him motive to *personally* see to her transformation and be an evil perv to her. Also he is a shapeshifter so it is feasible that he could be there in that point of the plot. Also the possibilities with a shapeshifter are pretty much endless. You could do so many mind games with Kerrigan and even the player with that. For example he could pretend to be someone (say raynor) in the next cell over, and use Kerrigan's trust to his advantage to coerce her more into perversion, then after the point of no return she and the player finds out it was Duran all along, boom! plot twist! Also there is the potential for a lot of good banter between Duran and Stukov.


On the topic of characters do we expect to see more big names, like the Overmind, the aforementioned Raynor, Abathur, or even Nova? On one hand i think it would be cool that once Kerrigan is finally the Queen of blades she goes around corrupting every one else, a nice little flip from being trained to doing the training, but that might be better saved for a potential sequel. The focus would probably be better served on the turning of Kerrigan. Anyway so far I think the pacing is very nice, too many times I see developers jump the gun on the corruption/breaking of someone in an attempt to "get to the good stuff", where a significant chunk of the good stuff was on the journey there all along. So please, I beg, keep the TF slow and deliberate, it really pays off in the long run if done correctly.

In terms of critiques of what's currently there...
The game starts pretty abruptly, a bit of a synopsis would be super helpful for players unfamiliar with starcraft's plot. give a brief explanation of the races, and Kerrigan's mission leading up to her capture, that should be sufficient enough to dial players in. The art is very good, especially the zerg creatures/stukov's arm. There are some tiny things that i've noticed are a bit off (anatomy and such) but most aren't really worth mentioning unless the artists really want to go into it. Stukov's face does look a bit strange to me, perhaps his eyes need to be more orange and glowy, or his side of his face need to be melted or whatever similar his game model. I did notice a couple of grammar errors, though i didn't mark them down so I'd probably need another playthrough to find them. I believe one of them was ecstasy spelled with an "ex"? something like that.

Anyway, long post over. Great start on the game fellas keep up the great work! looking forward to future iterations!

Hi! About Stukov: we've changed him a little so that he fits into the game better. And we know that we probably should've used Duran instead of Stukov, but we completely forgot about him. Nova and Raynor will most likely appear in the game in the future, but currently we are working on adding Abatur. We acknowledge the importance of a slow transformation, so there won't be an immediate conversion. We wanted to add some sort of intro or a prologue to explain the context of the game, but that would mean even more development time without releasing anything, and we've been working for 5 months on the project already, so some bits that should've been in the game weren't included in the first release. Thank you for you 'wall of text', we are always happy to hear your opinions and advice.
Respectfully yours,
Shadow Portal team.
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Re: [RenPy] SlutCraft: Heat of the Sperm [Ver.0.01]

Postby omnipotent » Thu May 10, 2018 1:52 am

ShadowPortalTeam Wrote:Hi! About Stukov: we've changed him a little so that he fits into the game better. And we know that we probably should've used Duran instead of Stukov, but we completely forgot about him. Nova and Raynor will most likely appear in the game in the future, but currently we are working on adding Abatur. We acknowledge the importance of a slow transformation, so there won't be an immediate conversion. We wanted to add some sort of intro or a prologue to explain the context of the game, but that would mean even more development time without releasing anything, and we've been working for 5 months on the project already, so some bits that should've been in the game weren't included in the first release. Thank you for you 'wall of text', we are always happy to hear your opinions and advice.
Respectfully yours,
Shadow Portal team.



Good to hear! You guys got a very promising beta and i'm very much looking forward to seeing what else is added. regarding the beginning, you could just add a temporary paragraph of text saying kerrigan was on a mission and got deceived and subsequently captured by the zerg, until you are able to put in a prologue mission proper. But knowing that you do plan to add an intro sequence is definitely welcome news. Keep it up!

p.s. how does kerrigan take her panties off through her suit? *thinking* i need me some of that future tech
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Re: [RenPy] SlutCraft: Heat of the Sperm [Ver.0.01]

Postby ShadowPortalTeam » Sun May 13, 2018 1:52 pm

omnipotent Wrote:
ShadowPortalTeam Wrote:Hi! About Stukov: we've changed him a little so that he fits into the game better. And we know that we probably should've used Duran instead of Stukov, but we completely forgot about him. Nova and Raynor will most likely appear in the game in the future, but currently we are working on adding Abatur. We acknowledge the importance of a slow transformation, so there won't be an immediate conversion. We wanted to add some sort of intro or a prologue to explain the context of the game, but that would mean even more development time without releasing anything, and we've been working for 5 months on the project already, so some bits that should've been in the game weren't included in the first release. Thank you for you 'wall of text', we are always happy to hear your opinions and advice.
Respectfully yours,
Shadow Portal team.



Good to hear! You guys got a very promising beta and i'm very much looking forward to seeing what else is added. regarding the beginning, you could just add a temporary paragraph of text saying kerrigan was on a mission and got deceived and subsequently captured by the zerg, until you are able to put in a prologue mission proper. But knowing that you do plan to add an intro sequence is definitely welcome news. Keep it up!

p.s. how does kerrigan take her panties off through her suit? *thinking* i need me some of that future tech

We knew somebody would eventually ask that question... Well, let's just say that that's some ghosts' shenanigans and they wouldn't share their secrets with us ;)
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Re: [RenPy] SlutCraft: Heat of the Sperm [Ver.0.01]

Postby HelloworldIizded » Mon May 14, 2018 5:35 pm

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omnipotent Wrote:
ShadowPortalTeam Wrote:Hi! About Stukov: we've changed him a little so that he fits into the game better. And we know that we probably should've used Duran instead of Stukov, but we completely forgot about him. Nova and Raynor will most likely appear in the game in the future, but currently we are working on adding Abatur. We acknowledge the importance of a slow transformation, so there won't be an immediate conversion. We wanted to add some sort of intro or a prologue to explain the context of the game, but that would mean even more development time without releasing anything, and we've been working for 5 months on the project already, so some bits that should've been in the game weren't included in the first release. Thank you for you 'wall of text', we are always happy to hear your opinions and advice.
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Good to hear! You guys got a very promising beta and i'm very much looking forward to seeing what else is added. regarding the beginning, you could just add a temporary paragraph of text saying kerrigan was on a mission and got deceived and subsequently captured by the zerg, until you are able to put in a prologue mission proper. But knowing that you do plan to add an intro sequence is definitely welcome news. Keep it up!

p.s. how does kerrigan take her panties off through her suit? *thinking* i need me some of that future tech

We knew somebody would eventually ask that question... Well, let's just say that that's some ghosts' shenanigans and they wouldn't share their secrets with us ;)

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Re: [RenPy] SlutCraft: Heat of the Sperm [Ver.0.11.2]

Postby ShadowPortalTeam » Wed Jun 20, 2018 1:13 pm

A new update 0.11.2 is released. You can see the changes under the Changelog spoiler.
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Re: [RenPy] SlutCraft: Heat of the Sperm [Ver.0.11.2]

Postby omnipotent » Mon Jul 02, 2018 4:28 pm

Enjoying the new update! Glad to see you guys are still plugging away at it. I used this opportunity to go through the text a little bit more thoroughly looking for spelling errors and the like, this is what I found, up to about the point where Sarah has her meltdown

_General erros_
-The plural for Zerg is Zerg, so the s is unnessesary. In context you would end up saying Sarah resists, not letting the Zerg do what they intend" or "The two Zerg were obviously discussing something"
-There is a lot of jumping between past and present tense in the sentences, which in this case, unless you're specifically referencing something in the past or future, you probably want to keep it present tense. for example: "Zergs started to actively talk among each other but Sarah couldn't hear it. Her vision quickly blurred and she lost consciousness." We want to keep the sentence in current tense, so the sentence should read as: "The Zerg start to actively talk among each other but Sarah can't hear it. Her vision quickly blurs and she loses consciousness." ... While you can still understand what is going on in these sentences, they do sound a bit wonky when they jump between tenses. I could go into a lot more detail about it but a forum page isn't a great spot to go into a lecture about sentence structure lol :D

_Specific errors_
-"Preference" on main menu should be "preferences"
-On the Sarah status screen her name is missing an 'h'
-"Sarah sensed a lot of disgusting smells. That made her feel nauseous" either A) get rid of the period or B) replace it with a comma and change "That" with "it"
-"Sarah swallows last drops of the liquid"... add a "the" before the word "last"
-"It makes me sick" is a bit of a strange expression in this context, "I think I'm going to be sick" or "I feel sick" is more common-tongue
-"Why the hell can i even hear you?" replace "Why" with "How"
-"i've noticed your strong psyonic abilities"... spelled "psionic" (also the abbreviation "psy" should be changed to "psi" as well
-"Zergs dragged Sara to another room." missed the h on Sarah
-"Look who is there!" "here" instead of "there" sounds better in this instance
-"And you'll assist him, you understand?" replace "you understand" with "understood"
-"Who are you supposed to assist to?" change to "Who are you supposed to be assisting?"
-"I was just wondering when they're going to send the new..." "they were" reads better
-"Me?My name is Alexey Stukov." throw a space after "me?" Alexei has an i at the end as well
-"What exactly parasites do?" put a "do" before parasites as well
-"You can get away only if Queen herself remove the parasite from you." put a "the" before Queen and add an 's' to remove
-"Easy, girl. I just paralysed you." paralyzed has a z instead of s

Anyway thats about as far as i got before getting tired of having to retype stuff (sucks not being able to copy text in this engine), but that's most of what i noticed from the intro. The English translation is honestly very good, especially from some of the stuff i've seen before, there are just some really little things here and there that would make it read better. Not sure what your plans are in terms of development, but if at some point you got someone who spoke English as their native language to go through the pages of text to iron it out, that would be a big plus. Keep up the awesome work and looking forward to the next release!
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Re: [RenPy] SlutCraft: Heat of the Sperm [Ver.0.11.2]

Postby ShadowPortalTeam » Sat Jul 14, 2018 1:06 am

omnipotent Wrote:Enjoying the new update! Glad to see you guys are still plugging away at it. I used this opportunity to go through the text a little bit more thoroughly looking for spelling errors and the like, this is what I found, up to about the point where Sarah has her meltdown

_General erros_
-The plural for Zerg is Zerg, so the s is unnessesary. In context you would end up saying Sarah resists, not letting the Zerg do what they intend" or "The two Zerg were obviously discussing something"
-There is a lot of jumping between past and present tense in the sentences, which in this case, unless you're specifically referencing something in the past or future, you probably want to keep it present tense. for example: "Zergs started to actively talk among each other but Sarah couldn't hear it. Her vision quickly blurred and she lost consciousness." We want to keep the sentence in current tense, so the sentence should read as: "The Zerg start to actively talk among each other but Sarah can't hear it. Her vision quickly blurs and she loses consciousness." ... While you can still understand what is going on in these sentences, they do sound a bit wonky when they jump between tenses. I could go into a lot more detail about it but a forum page isn't a great spot to go into a lecture about sentence structure lol :D

_Specific errors_
-"Preference" on main menu should be "preferences"
-On the Sarah status screen her name is missing an 'h'
-"Sarah sensed a lot of disgusting smells. That made her feel nauseous" either A) get rid of the period or B) replace it with a comma and change "That" with "it"
-"Sarah swallows last drops of the liquid"... add a "the" before the word "last"
-"It makes me sick" is a bit of a strange expression in this context, "I think I'm going to be sick" or "I feel sick" is more common-tongue
-"Why the hell can i even hear you?" replace "Why" with "How"
-"i've noticed your strong psyonic abilities"... spelled "psionic" (also the abbreviation "psy" should be changed to "psi" as well
-"Zergs dragged Sara to another room." missed the h on Sarah
-"Look who is there!" "here" instead of "there" sounds better in this instance
-"And you'll assist him, you understand?" replace "you understand" with "understood"
-"Who are you supposed to assist to?" change to "Who are you supposed to be assisting?"
-"I was just wondering when they're going to send the new..." "they were" reads better
-"Me?My name is Alexey Stukov." throw a space after "me?" Alexei has an i at the end as well
-"What exactly parasites do?" put a "do" before parasites as well
-"You can get away only if Queen herself remove the parasite from you." put a "the" before Queen and add an 's' to remove
-"Easy, girl. I just paralysed you." paralyzed has a z instead of s

Anyway thats about as far as i got before getting tired of having to retype stuff (sucks not being able to copy text in this engine), but that's most of what i noticed from the intro. The English translation is honestly very good, especially from some of the stuff i've seen before, there are just some really little things here and there that would make it read better. Not sure what your plans are in terms of development, but if at some point you got someone who spoke English as their native language to go through the pages of text to iron it out, that would be a big plus. Keep up the awesome work and looking forward to the next release!


Thanks! We are really glad you enjoyed our little game. We've passed your corrections to our translator, he will recheck the script. Yeah, we do need a native speaker. Hopefully we'll be able to find one in the future. The next update is soon, stay alert!
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Re: [RenPy] SlutCraft: Heat of the Sperm [Ver.0.12]

Postby ShadowPortalTeam » Fri Sep 14, 2018 6:53 pm

A new update 0.12 is released. You can see the changes under the Changelog spoiler.
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Re: [RenPy] SlutCraft: Heat of the Sperm [Ver.0.12]

Postby omnipotent » Fri Sep 21, 2018 5:06 am

Just played the new update, loving what was put in! I was surprisingly into the alternate lore you got going on, and you definitely got the groundwork for some exciting stuff in future updates. It's a bit of a shame it took as long as it did to update, but i know how game development can be and sometimes it just goes that way. As long as you are pretty good at showing the people (patreons especially) proof of life and progress, you'll gather a lot of goodwill.

a couple things i noticed:

-I had a conversation with mistress and she mentioned the story arc with Stukov and the poster, before I had even really progressed it at all. (all I did was put it on the wall, Hadn't started making the hole at all and Stukov hadn't noticed it yet. wasn't sure if this was a bug, but it definitely seemed like a bit of a sequence break with them discussing something that hadn't occurred yet.

-During the navigating of the labyrinth, some of the directions I went would lead me in seemingly unintended directions (unless that's the point, it IS a labyrinth after all). its a bit hard for me to pinpoint, because that place is a maze of directions, but sometimes going backwards doesn't seem to lead to what should be the room behind you. or some forks would lead to the same place (unless there's multiple overlord rooms, because multiple paths lead to a room with an overlord). Maybe if there a was a map that filled in as Sarah explored (like she's making a mental note of where everything is) it would help the player parse out where they have already been and need to go.

-potential ingame spoiler
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Not sure how much of your future plans you wish to divulge, but the 3-way choice you make with mistress to join the Zerg or not, is that meant to be a a big branching path in the game? or does that kind of just effect your corruption? I can see the can see the former being very exciting but would definitely be quite the undertaking. nothing wrong with it just affecting your corruption either, just curious. guess i'm just hyped for future stuff lol


There were some more typos and stuff i found but having to retype everything is kinda a bummer, is there anyway the engine you are using allows for a text log? If it's too hard to implement i understand forgoing doing it, but it would definitely make bug/typo reporting a lot easier with ability to copy/paste things. Anyway super excited for the next update, keep it up fellas!
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Re: [RenPy] SlutCraft: Heat of the Sperm [Ver.0.13.1]

Postby ShadowPortalTeam » Sun Oct 28, 2018 5:29 pm

A new update 0.13.1 is released. You can see the changes under the Changelog spoiler.
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