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More content added to the game. Just more random encounters, some quests and events added. Still very barebones but it's getting there.

I really do appreciate feedback. I put a metric fuckload of time into it this week and would really appreciate knowing if I'm headed in the right direction.

The Guardian Angel:

Includes: Futa on Female, Impregnation

Plot: Set in the modern day, instead of the two genders of humanity being Male and Female, they are Female and Futanari. Additionally, futanari are rare, with only one out of 500 individuals being a futanari. Within the world there are massive campuses dedicated to housing expecting and new mothers, as well as futanari whom work for the nursery. Females seeking to conceive then petition the futanari currently working for the nursery. Due to the scarcity of futanari, females that petition offer money as a reward for copulating. Through the use of an app, futanari can see which females have selected them as potential mates, their price offers, and then select whether they wish to copulate with the female or not (Think like Tinder, but the sex is guaranteed and you're paid for it).

The player takes on the role of Red, whom is a young futanari whom has just entered adulthood and just joined her local nursery, The Guardian Angel. The player receives petitions, which they can answer to earn money, or they can just roam the town seeking out mates on their own. Which petitions are available to the player will be dependent on their skill levels, reputation, as well as game play choices.


Current alpha version released 5.14.2016 : https://mega.nz/#!O1kF1DxB!dyOluA96x0nCRQaz1D0nFprZs260gpZw4b-WO7RS2Jg

Changelog

- Changed Intelligence stat to "sensibility". Which seemed to be a better mixture of Intelligence and passiveness.
*I'm looking to have a trinity system for Red's approach to sexual encounters, with a dominant, passive, and equal approach.
*Assertiveness and Charm fit the dominant and equal encounters, but I didn't feel that 'intelligence' exactly means being passive.
*Sensibility will hopefully fit to situations in which Red is passive and submissive, being dominated somewhat by her partner.
*Edited previous dialogue to reflect change.
- Split up locations and added a few locations, I will be adding more locations as the game grows.
*I originally wanted a hub system with many locations (for example, the downtown location would have events in the club, street, and bar)
*But I needed a use for the currency system, so I think a primary use of money will be unlocking locations as well as progressing quests.
*The bar and the library have a fee to unlock, since the player doesn't earn money yet I've just given the player a ton of starting cash.
- Updated the end of day chat system so players would no longer see the same conversation twice
*If players run out of events, it defaults to a generic end of day screen
*also added a couple conversations to the end of day dialog
- Changed Mari's Model again, still not sure if I'm happy with it yet. At least she sorta looks like a doctor now.
- Added park area to visit during the day
*Moved the already in-place cafe encounters to the park location
- Added scene for completing Mari's first task
- Added Cass' task and completion scenes (Her task was changed in this update, which means little as her old task was a placeholder.)
- I added many new encounters, and split up locations. So the total encounters are as follows:
* 2 bar encounters
* 3 cafe encounters
* 3 downtown encounters
* 2 university encounters


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I appreciate all feedback as long as it's constructive. I've put a metric fuckload of time into putting together the alpha presented here today and would very much so like to know if I'm wasting my time.

Seriously, you would be surprised of the lack of quality Futa games out there. Keep up the great work man.

This makes me very happy~ Good stuff, plz keep it going~

I was ready to be turned off by this, but...it was remarkably well made and written and I want more. While futa is not a main fetish of mine this was hot. Very much - keep it up!

Considering that those are two fetishes I also have that I too feel are underused, I can't wait

Thank you so much for the feedback! I just posted an update, and while it's not a solid game quiet yet I am pleased with the amount of content I managed to add in the past week.

I appreciate any and all feedback, especially if it's constructive!

excellent! the joystick works aswell but I have no sound (except the sound speech; 'V' key)
why they all keep their bra? looks like immersive but...

Grabbed the update, played it a bit. The Intelligence -> Sensibility change is one I like, it sounds a bit more natural and less "here go raise this stat"-ish.

But two things do kinda stand out as issues that immediately grabbed me.
1) both Cass and Kris having green hair feels odd. Unless green is a natural hair color there? But if not, two of the futa in one area dying their hair the same color just...I dunno, feels off.
2) the bathroom scene in the bar has a bunch of urinals along the wall...which I'd imagine a world with 500 women to 1 futa would not really have since futa can use normal toilets just fine and women have no use for urinals! Just a background image issue, but it broke immersion instantly when I noticed.

I'll keep playing as updates come out(and post again if I notice anything more in this update that needs pointing out)

So I played through the entirety of the alpha and I really liked it.
Conversations are intelligent and well written. models are OK. There are some issues here and there (like Red having a different skin tone for her dick ) but those are minor gripes

I especially enjoyed the creampie shots at the end.

Keep up the good work and I will keep playing it

Saika Wrote:1) both Cass and Kris having green hair feels odd. Unless green is a natural hair color there? But if not, two of the futa in one area dying their hair the same color just...I dunno, feels off.

Aw, shit.

Well, truth be told I'm actually red-green colorblind, so I was under the impression that both Kris and Cass were brunettes...I had no Idea I made their hair color Green! I might fix their hair eventually, but for now I guess since I'm bending the world so much it's not a huge deal.

Saika Wrote:2) the bathroom scene in the bar has a bunch of urinals along the wall...which I'd imagine a world with 500 women to 1 futa would not really have since futa can use normal toilets just fine and women have no use for urinals! Just a background image issue, but it broke immersion instantly when I noticed.

I use a game I've modded to absolute hell and back called TheKlub17 to get the images for the game, so I didn't even notice the urinals as I didn't build the room the scene takes place in. I'm unsure if I'll redo the images, but good eye!

Spartacus Wrote:(like Red having a different skin tone for her dick )

I should have spent more time making sure the dicks in the game jived a bit more, but as I mentioned to the other poster I'm somewhat colorblind, so to me they look close enough, but in reality it probably looks like Red's dick is made of playdough...



I'll continue working on the game more over the next few weeks, focusing on adding more content and the next release I hope to have enough new content to make it worth the time to play through again. I can't give a timeline, as I work on this in my spare time so I haven't any idea when I can put major work into it. But thank you for the feedback!

I found and just completed the current content of the current version. I consider this to be the best futanari game in development. The main reason is the lack of the male gender. The futanari is not competing with another gender for impregnation. Also, i hope the next release will allow Red to advance in rank. Any hints about Red attending the university, part time jobs outside the nursery, or Red setting up her own habit in conjunction with the nursery.

I have to replay the game again to get my facts straight about pregnancy for futanari's. I got the impression the futanari in this game are more like males with breasts. Instead of futanari's with dual reproductive systems. My comprehension is lacking and requires a few replays to get things right.

Overall a get game, and hope it has a spectacular life.

WhiskeyRose Wrote:

Spartacus Wrote:(like Red having a different skin tone for her dick )

I should have spent more time making sure the dicks in the game jived a bit more, but as I mentioned to the other poster I'm somewhat colorblind, so to me they look close enough, but in reality it probably looks like Red's dick is made of playdough...

I'll continue working on the game more over the next few weeks, focusing on adding more content and the next release I hope to have enough new content to make it worth the time to play through again. I can't give a timeline, as I work on this in my spare time so I haven't any idea when I can put major work into it. But thank you for the feedback!

Well it is not so much that the dick shape or color looks wrong. It's just you got a somewhat mildly suntanned body color for Red (think Italian skin), with a pink Caucasian dick (think piglet skin). It looks off But I can see colorblindness being a problem there. What program do you use to generate the bodies? maybe you can match RGB codes when setting skin colors?

On a side note. I would focus on getting some romancing up in the evening. Right now there is a bit of a disconnect between the conversations at the Guardian Angel and the actual sex.
At the Guardian Angel every futa is going on about how special the sex event is for your selected partner, and then you go into town where you sort of date rape a girl at the bar, fuck a couple women without much ceremony in alley ways or bathrooms and trick a girl into getting pregnant at the university. Don't get me wrong I LOVED these stories, but maybe some background where Red needs to blow off steam when not getting any at night would make this a bit more coherent ... Or not it is your game

Just my 2 cents. Loved the game and keep up the good work

Hmm.

This is fine.

I'm not much into shemales, and I especially don't like it when they're called futanari, since that's as explicitly clear a mislabelling as calling them hermaphrodites.

But the game's fappable enough that I'm looking forward to the rest of it, regardless of the cock-to-body pigmentation mismatching noted by Spartacus.

I don't know how much raising individual attributes will eventually affect Red's overall personality.
Perhaps it'll remain a per scene thing, and not have any overall effect on her character.
Doesn't matter too much, really, but I won't mind if high enough assertiveness causes her to conclusively stop stumbling over her words and become more like Jackie.

Very good game. Any updates, beta versions or something?

Good luck @WhiskeyRose

i cannot find the bathouse i think i missed somethin

DragonG Wrote:i cannot find the bathouse i think i missed somethin

I had same problem too. I think that bathouse is not implemented yet.

where is the latest update and i cannot find it on renpys site

ok seriously how does the renpy thing work to update guardian angels

dibimpregnator Wrote:ok seriously how does the renpy thing work to update guardian angels

It doesn't. I believe due to the post wording they missed read the post. Thinking it was asking for a ren'py update and not for a new Guardian Angels version.

As far as Guardian Angels, consider it on hiatus since May 2016. The developer might be developing another game called Haramase Simulator. There is a thread here on LOK.

Edit. Editing the post wording.