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[Ren'Py] Demon in the flesh

PostPosted: Wed Mar 30, 2016 7:17 am
by rimyirr
Hello everybody!

Here is my first adult game:

Demon in the flesh
It's a short visual novel with some resource management. You play as a demon, an incubus, who suddenly awakes in a human body on Earth.

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Download v1.10

Hope you enjoy it!

Re: [Ren'Py] Demon in the flesh

PostPosted: Wed Mar 30, 2016 11:57 pm
by hoboy
Hi - tried this and am getting an exception cannot find file "._archive.rpi"

Re: [Ren'Py] Demon in the flesh

PostPosted: Thu Mar 31, 2016 1:08 am
by Alex250
Wow, I loved it.

I like how you have to grind just a little to get trough the game, just enough to make you appreciate the great sex scenes even more. While the game is not long and I reached the end it can be continued and widened easily. It is not an incomplete first release like we see so many games do (not that it is bad) but a truely finished game.

Your Patreon page says you are thinking about a new project, do you ever plan on continuing this story?

Re: [Ren'Py] Demon in the flesh

PostPosted: Thu Mar 31, 2016 4:06 am
by rimyirr
hoboy Wrote:Hi - tried this and am getting an exception cannot find file "._archive.rpi"

Hi, from the traceback it looks like you have got a damaged archive.rpa file, which is the main game file. I double checked uploaded zip file and it's fine. Try redownloading maybe.
Also, make sure you've extracted zip file before trying to launch - windows 8 by default interacts with zip file as if it was directory.

Alex250 Wrote:Your Patreon page says you are thinking about a new project, do you ever plan on continuing this story?

Definitely! I just have not decided yet should it be an rpg game (rpg maker) or a visual novel game (renpy).

Re: [Ren'Py] Demon in the flesh

PostPosted: Thu Mar 31, 2016 7:12 pm
by lostone2
At least to me, my browser didn't allow me to see the images. Any possibility of using another host?

Re: [Ren'Py] Demon in the flesh

PostPosted: Fri Apr 01, 2016 3:49 am
by rimyirr
lostone2 Wrote:At least to me, my browser didn't allow me to see the images. Any possibility of using another host?

Re-uploaded the images, hope you can see them now.

Re: [Ren'Py] Demon in the flesh

PostPosted: Fri Apr 01, 2016 5:22 am
by hoboy
Re-uploaded, and it worked fine. Good start! Will look for more and hope to help point out errors/etc.

Re: [Ren'Py] Demon in the flesh

PostPosted: Fri Apr 01, 2016 11:28 pm
by lostone2
rimyirr Wrote:
lostone2 Wrote:At least to me, my browser didn't allow me to see the images. Any possibility of using another host?

Re-uploaded the images, hope you can see them now.


Yes I can. Thank you very much for the courtesy. ;)

Re: [Ren'Py] Demon in the flesh

PostPosted: Sat Apr 02, 2016 3:43 am
by Alex250
rimyirr Wrote:Definitely! I just have not decided yet should it be an rpg game (rpg maker) or a visual novel game (renpy).

I liked this format very much. Unless you want to use RPGM's combat system or shop or other built-in systems, I'd prefer renpy. It's just not fun having to manually walk from a location to another, I much prefer clicking on the screen; it's one handed, too ;) !

Re: [Ren'Py] Demon in the flesh

PostPosted: Sun Apr 03, 2016 1:09 am
by docsilence
This was way more fun to play than I was expecting. The hardest thing for me was figuring out how to advance the story line or find the next girl to increase your power

Re: [Ren'Py] Demon in the flesh

PostPosted: Sun Apr 03, 2016 1:57 pm
by rimyirr
Good news, everybody! Uploaded a new version 1.10!
It adds one new sex scene and a gallery.

Re: [Ren'Py] Demon in the flesh

PostPosted: Sun Apr 03, 2016 11:42 pm
by Alex250
Nice! The game still ends with the same events but there's something more if you wait a little... Unless that was already there and I was too quick to go to the warehouse :) The gallery mode is nice, lets you easily re-watch the scenes and gives you clues about what scene you haven't unlocked.

I noticed something, I'm not sure if it's an error or a clue to future events...
Spoiler (click to show/hide):

In the cowgirl scene, Cassie's teeth are normal, she does not have vampire fangs. Is she becoming human? Or succubus? Or did you just forget to put fangs on her model when you made this scene?

Re: [Ren'Py] Demon in the flesh

PostPosted: Mon Apr 04, 2016 10:29 am
by rimyirr
Alex250 Wrote:I noticed something, I'm not sure if it's an error or a clue to future events...

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

Well, I thought of her as a vampire who can grow or shrink her fangs more or less at will. Otherwise it would be pretty difficult for her to blend in.

Re: [Ren'Py] Demon in the flesh

PostPosted: Wed Apr 06, 2016 5:08 pm
by Ayeka
End of game is unfulfilling, IMHO. no epilogue....

Re: [Ren'Py] Demon in the flesh

PostPosted: Wed Jun 01, 2016 8:02 pm
by UnsungHero
This is a pretty good start... the only real criticism I've got is... Cliff hanger ending at the moment... though its a cliffhanger so you obviously mean to come back and expand it.

Emily feels abit... far removed from the Harem antics, if that makes sense

I'd honestly prefer more casino building... You know those Big Vegas Casino's that are practically mini resorts in and of themselves.

The hilarious thing is the entire criminal underground is run by Super Natural creatures! -angel hit squad shows up-

Re: [Ren'Py] Demon in the flesh

PostPosted: Thu Jun 02, 2016 2:30 am
by epoxymoron
UnsungHero Wrote:I'd honestly prefer more casino building... You know those Big Vegas Casino's that are practically mini resorts in and of themselves.


this would let you add more outfits into the game, like showgirl dancer type stuff and bikinis for the pool side service

Re: [Ren'Py] Demon in the flesh

PostPosted: Sun Jun 05, 2016 9:48 pm
by greendude
Katie could also be added once you've had Alice for a week or so. I remember their being a dialogue comment about that.