Jumbo70's Art Garden

[Jumbo70]

Realized that it will be easier to see the difference if i make pictures with the different things
so heres one of em.

would like constructive criticism
bigger if needed http://filesmelt.com/dl/das2.jpg
when will i bee free of pedobear cheking my posts?

[Gregdgreat]

I like it, need alil more work to show that there is hair there but otherwise it looks great! =D

[Jumbo70]

I like it, need alil more work to show that there is hair there but otherwise it looks great! =D

thanks
I still need to work on those "muscle shadows" so that they look better

Alas another one, on this i did use alot of time on shadowing, but i'm afraid i made the shadows too dark, thus making the light very bright.

bigger version http://d.facdn.net/art/crasy/1322953266.crasy_kz.jpg
Please say if you cant see the pics.

[KaTsuO_O]

The latest one is pretty good, though honestly the head ruin it so here's a little edit:

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For the shadows I think they look pretty good as well, you just need to use it in more areas.

[Gregdgreat]

yeah those are alot better, the lower leg needs to be more to the right (You wanted constructive criticism ) but i like it, that dark outlining that you did for the rest of it would look good if you did it everywhere else too, otherwise, nothing but cudos man ^^

[Jumbo70]

The latest one is pretty good, though honestly the head ruin it so here's a little edit:

"pic"

For the shadows I think they look pretty good as well, you just need to use it in more areas.

Yeh dunno why but i had sum problems with the head, made the muzzle(called that?), nose or whatever too big and couldnt get it looking smart so i left it like that. But im defiently gonna try that!

yeah those are alot better, the lower leg needs to be more to the right (You wanted constructive criticism ) but i like it, that dark outlining that you did for the rest of it would look good if you did it everywhere else too, otherwise, nothing but cudos man ^^

You mean less ass showing? dunno what you mean XD, thanks anyway!
The leg that is behind (would be her left leg) is, atleast i think little weirdly placed, not much but a little.

ps: could someone tell me when pedobear stops approving my posts? After 20 posts? Don't like it that i need to wait several hours before i can see my crappy grammar.
pss:nvm pedobear haz stopped <3

[KaTsuO_O]

You know, It's actually I who are that pedobear! I don't have to approve anymore posts from you because you have posted 10 times! yay

[Reapergod36]

Realized that it will be easier to see the difference if i make pictures with the different things
so heres one of em.

would like constructive criticism
bigger if needed http://filesmelt.com/dl/das2.jpg
when will i bee free of pedobear cheking my posts?

Uh oh, she's boarded you in. Forced sex time!

[Jumbo70]

You know, It's actually I who are that pedobear! I don't have to approve anymore posts from you because you have posted 10 times! yay

Woot!

Uh oh, she's boarded you in. Forced sex time!

NuuUuuuUUuuuu!!! <3

New stuff coming soon (i hope)

[Jumbo70]

Well dis gonna be a double post but i think im allowed to do that here
(the love rod is crap, i know)
so as said a new pic and would want sum constructive critique

Clean my spear

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Bigger version http://filesmelt.com/dl/img057.jpg

[Gregdgreat]

Well dis gonna be a double post but i think im allowed to do that here
(the love rod is crap, i know)

Yeah it is lol but thats not what im interested in

Otherwise it looks really good nothing to say other then that she looks brolic with that muscle traced in so hard on her left arm

[Jumbo70]

Well dis gonna be a double post but i think im allowed to do that here
(the love rod is crap, i know)

Yeah it is lol but thats not what im interested in

Otherwise it looks really good nothing to say other then that she looks brolic with that muscle traced in so hard on her left arm

oops
it doesent show that hard on the paper tough... hmm gotta check my scanner
thanks anyway

Anybody know any good sites or anything good wich could be help of with different kinds of fluids ex. water, cum(obviosly XD) and so on?
I've found some but they are all for digital working (layers, erasing and shit).

[Jumbo70]

Double post FTW!
So new pic again
As always, consturctive critique plox

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bigger if needed http://d.facdn.net/art/crasy/1324275167 ... editti.jpg

Still sreaching fluid tutorial.

[Jumbo70]

ive been a little quiet here, but that doesent mean i havent done anything quite the opposite infact.
so 2 images comin up
first

http://d.facdn.net/art/crasy/1325585376.crasy_untitled-1.jpg bigger if needed
(i was drunk when i did this XD )
second

http://d.facdn.net/art/crasy/1325164764.crasy_img059.jpg bigger if needed
i wasn't drunk when i did this one
constructive criticism please

[Rooiehaan #2]

Since you've asked for constructive criticism:

fourhire's ears are a little crooked
crasy_untitled-1 has thighs just as big as her waist, i'd suggest making them a little slimmer (that way her long legs will pop out more)
crasy_img has more crooked ears, but that might've been the point. Still, i think they are a little too far apart, or the right one should have a knick in it before it goes to the side :3

[Jumbo70]

Since you've asked for constructive criticism:

fourhire's ears are a little crooked
crasy_untitled-1 has thighs just as big as her waist, i'd suggest making them a little slimmer (that way her long legs will pop out more)
crasy_img has more crooked ears, but that might've been the point. Still, i think they are a little too far apart, or the right one should have a knick in it before it goes to the side :3

True true
I see em when you say em
Thanks!
Apreciate it!

[kuja]

I liked this one
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7183238/
Looking foward to see some of ur art being finalized with nakin or something like.

[Jumbo70]

I liked this one
http://www.furaffinity.net/view/7183238/
Looking foward to see some of ur art being finalized with nakin or something like.

thanksies :3
Nekkid comin soon i think :3

oh btw i made a new one XD

gunnin around
the muscle trace on the leg that is further away is traced a little too hard XD

i kinda failed with one leg but overall i like this :3
constructive criticism :33
i know, theres almost no shadows :33

[Corbac]

Yep, basically how the body is shaped is anatomy.

Step 1. Look up anatomy, http://www.posemaniacs.com is a great site for that.oh hell no... posemaniacs is definitely not a good ref for anatomy, it's only interesting use would be practicing poses but there is only ONE female modele so it's always the same proportions ( http://www.pixelovely.com/gesture/figuredrawing.php this is a waaaaayyy better tool when it comes to figure drawing) if you want to learn anatomy, try to look for books by Andrew Loomis or Georg B. Bridgman, it's not too hard to find .pdf files of those.
Step 2. Take notes, size, lengths and placement of body parts and compare parts in size, lengths and placement.definitely yes
Step 3. Draw a body using 3d shapes with circles as joints and a big circle as head.again, yes. picturing the body in 3d is extremely important but personally i prefer using cube shapes to structure it since a circle doesn't show real volume or direction (even if you draw axes on it) but that's just a personal preference.

I started to use 3d shapes for body parts and it really helped me a lot. If you have questions or want more information, feel free to ask anything.

about your drawings, the last piece definitely shows some improvement in the movement, the anatomy and the expression compared to previous ones. there is an impression of depth that works pretty well with the placement of her feet. Also, i think you should try some inking on your characters, there is more to drawing than just HBpencil.

[KaTsuO_O]

@Corbac It's not a way to learn different proportions but once you've learned one set it's a lot easier learn or even figure out others.