Thoughts so far: The new "skip intro" is nice. Gives the non-patrons a decent skip, while leaving the perks to the pats
And man, lots of updates to go through heh. Looking at the guide: I do really like the slow progression. Relatively speaking.
The color coding is a nice touch too.
Hm, will say: Feel like Eri's scene might require a bit much sub tbh... but I guess this can be justified story wise.
That said, Cenvir is a similar ordeal, but he only requires list so...
But I guess you got some reason for it. I can say: Being pretty sure there will be more lewdable females, it feels like this will be a lust/sub split between both male and female scenes. Just saying: I'm hoping you'll handle it fine
Oh, and before I forget: I love that meme you put in. Doesn't overstay too much. But it's a rather funny callback hehe. Might should make it a % chance to appear though. Or like, every x days. So it doesn't overdo itself.
And even if she can DT, some build up is nice as said. I always deadpanned at games where you ex: Play a virgin or w/e, then suddenly: DT expert at first BJ.
Granted, she just does a few days here, but it's more than what we usually get heh.
Still not a big fan of those annoying babies xD Gotta walk past em every day xP
Oh, and: Nice work smoothing out the bugs. It runs quite smooth now.
Hm... have you thought about adding lust gain to like, the nightly chats? Feels like it could fit story wise.
Small bug: Eri's dialogue of "I saw greatness in you" and something about a "cub" (also, should prolly use "hatchling" or "juvie". Using many mammal terms here) shows in white instead of her color.
Really nice how her expression stays btw. Neat feature. And on that: The different expressions are nice.
For the footjob dialogue, he says "take of your boots and lay on your back", which, doesn't represent what you actually do. Might should tweak that.
Might have found a small bug: If you open the map next to Cenvir, you trigger dialogue if you press to travel anywhere his body is covering.
Hm... story is... quite peculiar so far. Can't really tell where it will be going tbh.
It does leave a lot of "wut?" though.
Will say: Krystal's orgasm looks really good. Could do with some hip tensing/bucks, but overall solid.
Feels like the whole "I dropped them again" might should just be replaced with like "Want help at home?", feels like a kinda odd conversation choice for her to go with.
The sex scenes so far are good. Looks fine. Smooth and loops well. Some of the dialogue is rather corny. But, some of it is
very good. Has nice progression to it. You are managing to give her a more "not cumdump" personality.
Also, looking at the current scenes, I can totally see some reward tiers for later game/patreons to get. Like, a "recorder" and x-ray shiz.
There is a very minor inconsistency with the footjob scene. You can do the pantie less version after you've already let him see you naked. Making the "I'm not letting you see my pussy" dialogue a bit dated
Kinda hooked on the story tbh... manages to be enticing.
And aw... Krystal can't squirt?
(That said, makes me curious to see if there'll be any scenes with her in focus)
Huh... tried the zoom, damn. It goes very close. Like, I expected at most full body. But nope, it can get very up and personal haha.
I can tell a guy wrote the dialogue though. "Hitting my cervix, pain and bliss at the same time" there's like, less than 5-10 % of women that can have their cervix hit and still stand, so to speak. To translate this to guy terms "Elbow dropping/curb stomping my balls, pain and bliss at the same time." that's pretty much what's written there xP
And hm... backstory wise, Krystal does seem to come from a culture very similar from ours. Very male pleasure centric. Especially based on her really low personal needs and talking about sex like a chore she's just been dragged into in the past. Feels very much like she's just had sex because "she was supposed to". At least based off most of her dialogue. Especially how she gave up on getting off. And didn't mind not being offered "a hand".
She did make a comment about it in the "rape" scene she spied on. She does mention getting hard. But, she rarely does anything about it. I'm a bit split on where to be on this tbh... mostly since I just dunno where to place her. She's a bit blurry and all over the place heh. Think I offered it way back but: Do tell if you'd want some female perspective on stuff.
Oh, was nicely surprised by the "return the favor" offer. (Also; Jebus, been up playing for hours, only meant to give it a quick look over xD)
Also, if you try the DT+RP wearing panties, Krystal magically removes her panties mid-scene.
Still not a huge fan of her loli vag, or the balls on the "reptiles" or that you use said loli vag on them as well xP
But oh well. They at least match somewhat. Still, for the end product, you should try to spice it up a bit. Giving every female the same junk is kinda... ~eh... (Could tell minor difference I think when fully zoomed in, but should be a bit more than barely notable tbh.)
Anyhow: Checked out the oral scene, managed surprisingly well to make her an utter asshole. Could have gone for some clit sucking, and semi-notable splodge (at least a few drips after she pulls back) but, overall really solid work there too. Could have made her even more off an ass by like, having her lock Krystals head in place and cover her nose, forcing her to swallow. Was a bit surprised she actually jizzed in her mouth tbh. But yeah, it's good. Pot could prolly go with a "fuck it, won't even move it" option possibly.
- Anyhow, hope it's coherent, and hopefully some useful stuff in there.
Sorry if it's a bit disjointed. Been a bit fizzled as of late.