Queen's Game : to v0.6 :)

[Ekoj]

Borkenone -> it is pretty cool !
do you think you can use the last map and edit it (keeping the main form with some modifications) ?
can you also choose colors of castles, trees, seas etc to look like original ? (if not, I can)
I look forward to seeing your whole map !

Wulfenheim -> really ? I like this color :,(
it is not difficult at all to create a background like mine : it takes 1 line ^^ but I'm affraid a picture as background is not attractive.
what color looks good to you ?
the more I try to write decent content, the more it gets annoying. it would be a pleasure if you joined the team
Send me a pm with your mail adress; i'll reply.

powuivnpeb -> I sent you a mail

PS : I wasted one hour on war system today because of annoying details. yet, it is fixed and I can keep on going !

[Borkenone]

Borkenone -> it is pretty cool !
do you think you can use the last map and edit it (keeping the main form with some modifications) ?!

You mean the new map you put in the OP that's for the next version?
I can but is is the right size? It's much smaller than the old one. I'd much prefer to work with the right size one.

can you also choose colors of castles, trees, seas etc to look like original ? (if not, I can)

I don't quite get this one, choose colors? there's already some variety to the castles, and I can do color changing with photoshop if that's what you mean.
but what does "to look like original" mean?

also, you have to tell me about the geography climate of each area so I know what texture to put where.

[Ekoj]

Borkenone -> a full-sized pic and an other one with instructions (not complete yet) are attached to this post

I can do color changing with photoshop if that's what you mean

this is what I mean ^^ (sorry)

also, you have to tell me about the geography climate of each area so I know what texture to put where.

look at Map_indications
this is the fastest way I found. I have a lot of things to do tonight ^^

[Borkenone]

>Ekoj
Here you go:

Tried to make the shape looks more natural, also didn't do much with the area you left out.
What do you think?

[Ekoj]

Borkenone -> your map is awesome !

it is much better than my previous version, thank you.
I'll need you to complete parts I left out.

[Borkenone]

Borkenone -> your map is awesome !
I'll need you to complete parts I left out.

Glad you like it.
So you mean I can take liberty of what to put in?

EDIT
Took some liberty with some of those parts, changed some of the land a maybe bit too much, what do you think?

Though still don't know what to do with the rest.

[powuivnpeb]

It is still missing the most important thing. The whale :p

[Borkenone]

>powuivnpeb
As much as I'd like to add one, but the RPG makers don't have a sprites for whale, and I failed to find one that fit.

[x3Darkie]

Drew a cute whale in like 5 minutes. Edit it as you see fit. No credit needed. Looking forward to seeing this game develop more.

Whale

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Edit: Okay, I lied. I did it in 3 minutes.

[Ekoj]

Borkenone -> your choices are really good

let us call every region by their numbers :
00 01 02 03 04
10 11 12 13 14
20 21 22 23 24
30 31 32 33 34

(for 22) I said "hills" but I though "cliffs" ^^ this region is the most dangerous in the world. no one wants to go there.
(for 30) I do not know what to do with this one yet ...
(for 31) there are deepest seas in the world. can you make a "dark water" ? you know, like pokemon where you can dive
(for 34) this is enemy's capital. can you implement some kind "evil churches". there are a lot of people in this city too.

the rest is perfect, so no need to change it (unless you have got a new idea)

if you want to join the team discussion and make some decisions, send me your mail adress.
you make a lot with the map

x3Darkie -> thanks for your cute whale ^^
it becomes the symbol of the game

[Borkenone]

>powuivnpeb
Here you go~ you can thank x3Darkie for it.

>x3Darkie
Thanks for the whale, I made the eye bigger and did some color change, hope you won't mind.

>Ekoj
Hum, I'm not sure how much I'd like to dedicate to this project right now.
I guess I'll send you a PM first.

[Ekoj]

New version available !

tell me what you think about it

[FMC]

You might want to update the title of the first post to reflect the current build of the game, too. I'll play the new version, though, but I might not get back to telling you about it for a while.

[pyorgara]

Good start. This could become quite the fun game with more content.

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

One thing that would probably need a yes/no option is the walking around your castle option. My eyes nearly fell out of my head when my queen started giving out blowjobs in the bathroom out of nowhere and without my input.

[FMC]

Indeed, i wish to see more with the mistress.

[Borkenone]

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

My eyes nearly fell out of my head when my queen started giving out blowjobs in the bathroom out of nowhere and without my input.

LOL,
Don't know if that's a place holder or what. But I was expect it would be a slower progress for the queen to become a whore.

[Sivertop]

Hm i really like it, so much u could do with it and still stay on ur road..

Someone before said he would like more one-characterbased look for maincharacter..
^ I think its good as it is right now...like this u have way more options to build around with and dont have to always use pictures also u can put more gifs into it which are in my opinion better because a picture just tells u about 1-2 or maybe 3 expressions about what happens with her..so u have to spam more pictures in 1 conversation..with gif´s u have way more impact. Well that doesnt mean u should only use Gif´s but i think u know what i mean.

And as i said if u want to restrict ur maincharacter on just 1 look..u wont find pretty much..only if u use something from an hentai/rlporn-movie and even than u will have problems later on (depends on how far u wanna go with ur game ^^)

Or Maybe if u rly wanna go for a bit of restriction than u should go for using everything from one area just for ur maincharacter (for example...everything related to queens blade is only for maincharacter) and all other stuff is random.


Well anyway i think u already know what U want to do..its just my opinion about this..


So now about ur map...i like it and i have some suggestions..
Around ur Kingdom are some Villages which links u to ur Kingdom if u click them..maybe u can make them as their own regions (still owned by ur kingdom) but upgradeble with idk farming resources like food/water/mining and such things which u can use to feed ur troops and villagers so they stay alive for so long u have food and water..and mining for ore´s which u can use to upgrade the strength of ur army like building swords/bows or something like that..
Yeah i know im a bit to far out about this..maybe its a bit to much for an freegame..but it would improve it a lot in terms of interaction..

right know its more about u click something and it happens or u fail and get raped. No influence except for loosing ur troops. to be honest it doesnt feel like u have any impact on whatever u do, except as i said before loosing ur troops and/or getting sexscenes. I know its a fresh game but dont get me wrong its just an suggestion what i said above


Now about ur Costumes..Idk if u got plans on adding stats on these or make some something like a event-locker/unlocker but thats what i wanted to suggest..u could change them in exactly what i said an event-locker/unlocker depends on which costume u wear and/or adding stats on them which makes u a bit stronger/or weaker? for absolving an queens-arena-battle against an other queen of the enemy..(i know such an arena doesnt excist but hell it could excist ^^)


I got so much ideas for this game just because its so rich on what it can be/could be and yeah..


As u can see i like ur game i wouldnt waste my time on writing all of this if it wouldnt be good
And no i wouldnt be disappointed if my suggestions are declined because i know it rly doesnt matter what u do with this game it will be good anyway..you just started..

Sry for my bad English its not my native language i prefer Japanese and a bit of German ^^

[ttowen]

Pretty good game so far. Really liking the female perspective here. We need a lot more games like this. Great job so far; can't wait to see the meta "Queen's Game"

[Elenn]

Your game has not much content so far, but i must say i really love the concept.
I made an account just to propose you my help. English is not my first language but i would gladly do my best to help you in your project as a writter if you still need some !

[Ekoj]

FMC -> yes, thank you I did not see that we can change the title ^^
I like mistress too. I do not have many pics but I guess it is ok; I am looking for another shots of this model. I found who took the photographs too.

pyorgara -> indeed, it is extremely fast ^^ first thing I am about to do is implementing a progressive fall in darkness.

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

the story of this event might be drug-related, and more precisely caused by Inyldrug black market

Sivertop -> I like gifs too. I do not intend to remove static pictures at all, thought. In general, a game creator chooses hentai, or he chooses real photographs. I want to "mix up" both.
We are now discussing about chooseing one character based look or not. yet some really good games do not try to be coherent vis à vis the character, but vis à vis the situation (check The Coleman Institute )
Your suggestion is too hard for my first game ^^ I really want to end it, so I prefer making a simple system which runs properly. The idea is to make a visual novel which does not look like a visual novel. I like looking for hidden content in games, so I intend to put a lot of conditional events.
my coding skill is not that great, and it is absolutely an amateur work.
thank you so much for your long post
(I am not regarding on your English, it is not my mother tongue you know ^^)

ttowen -> I like playing a girl, concerning an adult game. Choices you make become more exciting; this is how I feel it.
that is why I enjoyed playing LoK vG ^^

Elenn -> just sent you a pm

thank you all for those positive comments ! I am really happy that you like our work