Hypno Slave v.1.03

[FelixAllYouWantToSay]

Hypno Slave v.1.03

Hello guys. I want to present you a small project with very high potential.
It is Hypno Slave!

TECHNICAL ASPECTS:
That is visual novel based on a strategy with elements of rpg and combat scenes.
In the moment, project on stage of beta testing.

Tags of project:

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

Sex training, mother, daughter, BDSM, anal, hypnosis, blackmail, slave, mind break, bondage, milf, blowjob, x-ray, piercing, mind control, big breasts, body modification, breast expansion, collar

ADULT CONTENT:
- near 40 adult scenes (including animation),
- more than 100 improvements, such as bodymodes and upgrades to the "servant",
- three types of tag-filtering,
- scene gallery,
- enemies with several difficulty levels.

In the moment it's is a work in progress.

Download link:
http://hypnoslave.blogspot.com/p/blog-page_12.html

I want to hear your opinion about that game.
If you have an interesting ideas about improving the gameplay or story, you may leave it on my blog or on my mail.

BLOG:
http://hypnoslave.blogspot.com/

MAIL:
[email protected]


Thank you for attention. I hope to your positive feedback.

[MOD EDIT] Removed Patreon link

New mechanic in video on youtube

[Ayeka]

First of all, I am amazed, you put so much effort into something so much messed up!!!
This is some sort of fighting game, not hypnotism.
Tutorial have more "bla bla bla" as explanations how play.
So called scenes are mock. Guy stay behind girl for 2 seconds it is a "scene"? LOL
Rules about fighting, not explained. WTF is with bar? Sometimes I got it full of healing instead punching.
What is condition to activate uberpunch?
Most game is spended to click on heart and gaining 5 resources.
Also is BUG in game. After you gather 15 resources all types you immediately got challenged without getting a chance to activate slave. So player lost fight as default and lost resources. Do you testet this game? This is obvoius bug.
Really, do so much work and do so disappointing game...Pity, really pity

[Nanospliccer]

I have a few things to mention, as well. The visual design for the central GUI is so cluttered and overdesigned that it almost seems as though a majority of the screenspace is taken up by useless icons, oversized buttons, and information you really don't need for most of the game. Your art, even allowing for works in progress, is messy and spastic and looks like some indie dev's first efforts with flash. The only exception to this is the characters, but they still don't look amazing, with a general lack of actual style or skill placed into their making.

The writing is also lackluster at best, which becomes a problem as early as the tutorial, since all of the text the Producer spits at you is poorly spell- and grammar-checked and uses a fairly large amount of words to explain nothing at all. Any attempt at humor within the game was met by me with the same sort of reaction I would give to that block of cheese that I left underneath the fridge for three years, which became a matter of gamebreaking intensity with the inclusion of the distracting, insulting and highly unnecessary 'News' bar. Which, by the way, covers the bottom of the screen and demands your attention like a banner ad, only implemented by the creator of the game itself and telling you information you have even less need for. The writing's problems continue into the 'scenes' such as they are, with an almost immediate change for the characters from 'slightly resistant' to 'openly a submissive slave' with approximately half a scene in between. The writing crutch of assuming that all women have an inherent need to be sexually submissive makes the game come across as very sexist and slightly without thought, since clearly there didn't appear to be a faster way to make the characters submit to the player. This despite the fact that a longer transition would actually improve the game, of course.

Speaking of scenes, they're all incredibly dull as of their implementation in the demo, since a majority of them are still images (which, of course, rely on text to be any good...) and most of the art is conveniently from perspectives that require very little actual work, not that the work is done anyway. Facial expressions mostly don't match up and don't quite look right, and any images of genitals don't actually match the text being presented to us.

Oh, well... I suppose there's still time to improve...

[Lucky777]

From the description in the first post this sounds interesting, but what kind of file is it?

Is it self-contained or do you need another program to run it?

433 megabytes is a large file to download just to find out that you need something else, like Unity player or whatnot, when that's finished.

[Ayeka]

From the description in the first post this sounds interesting, but what kind of file is it?

Is it self-contained or do you need another program to run it?

433 megabytes is a large file to download just to find out that you need something else, like Unity player or whatnot, when that's finished.

For me it's worked without anything else. but not worry yourself. This is a epic fail, not game. Read posts above.

[BlueLight]

From the description in the first post this sounds interesting, but what kind of file is it?

Is it self-contained or do you need another program to run it?

433 megabytes is a large file to download just to find out that you need something else, like Unity player or whatnot, when that's finished.

Exe. They use python language but i think because their using a exe that you don't have to worry about having python.

As for unity, you should only require the player if your playing a unity game on the web and even then they might have fixed that.

[epoxymoron]

It wasn't that bad of a game it's really dragged out.
I don't like the astectics, but I'm not I to bdsm so I don't think this game was meant for me to begin with. Even some of the vanilla art was kind of terrifying. Some of the writing has typos and grammar errors like the person that wrote it wasn't a native English speaker, it wasn't bad but you need a native English speaker to proof read and edit the writing. The fighting system is kind of confusing like others have said it took me a while to get the hang of it though once I figured out that to uberpunch you had to save up 7 ability bubbles it got a lot easier. The beneficial abilities would be used once clicked on while the attack ones needed a second action to be used, which is pretty confusing at first. And how you need to unlock everything through the level up random item system is pretty annoying for the player. If you had it so that leveling up unlocked access to either parts or perks would probably work better and be less annoying

Also if the servant menu had both a back button and an exit button so you could either edit back to the main game or back to the main servant menu would make the game feel like more thought was out into the interface. And maybe leave a little mark on the ones with sections that have parts that aren't active.

Overall it better than anything I could ever make, but it needs a lot of polishing and refining to be good or at least enjoyable.

[Lucky777]

Right, so I played a bit.

Doubtless I'll play more later, and be able to review more of the game, but right off the bat I can tell you IMMEDIATELY that you lack some things you need.
1. You need an intelligible tutorial.
2. To help get that, and to improve the quality of the rest of the game, you need the services of someone who can fucking speak English.
I'm not volunteering; I have neither the time nor the inclination.
But do try to get someone who can do better than ... whoever produced the writing you have now, lads.

Instinctive understanding of the game might also be assisted if ANY of this shit made any fucking sense at all.
You're streaming some kind of reality show and putting a robot-notrobot-maybecyborg chick to fight other chicks - and all have energy shields for... some reason?
Wait, what?
Fucking
WHAT?

And the gameplay doesn't really have much to do with hypnosis, from what I've seen, though admittedly I've only seen the first 3 scenes.
I haven't seen what installing household equipment does - but I guess that's where the hypnosis shit will come in - after all, scenes are tied to equipment.
... But why the bloody fuck would the first pieces of equipment available cost 500 of ANY resources to install?
And is upgrading some of the stuff actually just tied to random chance, as to whether you even get a CHANCE to purchase the upgrade or not?
Why would you do that.
...Don't fucking do that.
(I mean I suppose it may not be OBJECTIVELY a bad design choice but I've never been much a fan of random chance in anything.)

... I'm probably missing something.
So yeah I'll have another look at this later, and judge the later scenes based on... having seen them, since I'm in no position to do so, not having seen them.
The first ones are garbage though.
Tame as hell, poorly written, and all that.
I expect the quality of the writing won't change for the later 37, but at least the tameness should.
Credit where it's due for one good point, though:
I do like the art.

[Kurushimi]

I don't think there's any actual hypnosis in this. Kinda disappointing.

[Lucky777]

Is this ... is this a game where you don't always have the option to attack?

Sometimes at random you might get a bar full of non-offensive abilities?

...WHAT THE FFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFFUCK IS THIS COMBAT SYSTEM?


And wait WHAT? Some scenes take AWAY resources? Oh, and there' the scene Ayeka was talking about, a guy literally standing behind a girl for 2 seconds...
...
Hahahahahahaha

Dude.
I'm not even mad.
This game isn't just bad.
It's fucking FARCICAL.
It's....
It's so bad it actually loops back around into being kinda good, at least good for a laugh.
I'm actually going to continue playing at this point just to see what hilariously bad design decisions are made next.

[BlueBody]

It's definitely very well polished. That alone actually makes me really approve of this game.

The quality of the art is great and the system is robust (meaning few glitches, has logical pattern, etc.)

The downsides is that the pacing of the game is a bit slow. Combat is easily understood after a few rounds, but they still took forever.

Hope to see more progress on this game!

[FelixAllYouWantToSay]

Hello guys.

Sorry for long reply.

Thank you all for your opinion.
We got huge experience from this project.
We will consider all of your comments.

Btw, we are working on changing gameplay of game and porting it in web browser.
If you interesting, you can check our blog for more information.

[FelixAllYouWantToSay]

Hello guys!

I want ot share with you a short video of new game mechanic.
Please check this video on our youtube channel.
I will be very pleasure, if you will see it!
https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=0kg1s7VNgM8
Thank you so much for interest!
If you want to get more information, check our blog.
Have a nice day!

[Borkenone]

The video defiantly lives up to the premise more, hope to see that actually come out.
Though from what I see in your develop blog it would probably still be too hardcore for my taste.