The World Of Nora RPG Maker VX Ace

[brontanius]

Hey, I downloaded this game and so far, I am really enjoying it. I like the art style and can see that you use custom tilesets which make the game look fairly awesome. Keep up the good work on that end. I especially love the blond guy in the school with the deal with it glasses.

However, I did notice a fair few grammar errors/spelling errors that could be fixed in the game. There is quite a few in the intro text scroll too which could be fixed as well. To that end, if you want to use it, I've put a text file attachment with the intro section in it. I'm fairly confident in my English and most, if not all, of the of grammar and spelling issues are fixed. A heads up though if you do decide to take the file, the top part of the file is the current ingame version and the edited version is at the bottom of the file.

Again, I look forward to when you make a lot more progress with the game and keep up the good work.