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Slave Lord (slave management game)

Postby pinktea » Mon Aug 08, 2016 5:46 pm

Greetings.

Here's the recent addition to the Slave Lord game; previously posted.

This is the 3rd part of the game concerning the sacking of the Capital and enslavement of the Queen. Themes: bondage, slaves, bdsm, breaking, etc...

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The unified version (containing all three girls) is available for patrons on Patreon. I will be making that version public in time and post it up here, once I've got the next part of the game completed.

Note; there seem to sometimes be problems when played on Chrome. No idea why this is.

Comments, reviews, advice would be appreciated.

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Greetings. I'm developing an Erotic Game called 'Slave Lord'.

You play the bad guy on a mission to conquer the peaceful kingdom of Erolandia and to force its women into sexual slavery.

Sexual themes focus mainly on bondage, mindbreak, humiliation and domination. Gameplay at the moment revolves around training the girl to become more obedient and sexually capable.


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I've released the second part of the game. Concluding part will follow in a few months.



My blog: https://pinkteacreations.blogspot.com/


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Re: Slave Lord (slave management game)

Postby evildumdum » Mon Aug 08, 2016 7:44 pm

This is.... Actually very good. Congrats mate, I'll be watchin this one closely.
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Re: Slave Lord (slave management game)

Postby Abelius » Mon Aug 08, 2016 8:09 pm

Well, this is really promising and an enjoyable demo. :-)

Bug reports:

1. From what I saw playing a little it seems that the dialogue of the handjob second stage could be broken. It tells that she's curious but when the MC speaks you only get an empty box.
2. In front sex, 'insert' and 'slow fuck' buttons change to 'Open Legs' when hovering with the cursor.
3. In anal it happens the same with the 'slow fuck' button.
4. In back sex, a text tag that says "Undress Nelaana" appears but it's not interactable (she's already naked anyway).
5. Lashing, in the final (?) stage of submission, if she collapses, a black screen appears with the text box blank.

Also, may I suggest to unlock a deepthroat animation when she's fully trained...? ;-D

Keep up the good work. So far so good! ;-)
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Re: Slave Lord (slave management game)

Postby Lucky777 » Mon Aug 08, 2016 8:18 pm

I like it.

An option to back out of the punishment screen without giving the punishment might be cool, though.

I've clicked on a punishment option accidentally before, thinking that I still had the "feed" menu open.

Actually, changing the menus so that they appear when you click one of the main buttons and don't disappear until you click something else might help too.

As my third line demonstrates, sometimes quality-of-life User-Interface improvements are actually about idiot-proofing.

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Also, having to stimulate her in a specific order with the vibe-stone, Meet'n'fuck style, really doesn't make any sense.
Heck, having to get all the areas doesn't necessarily make sense in and of itself; touching games are done better when there's only one bar.
Stimulating her nipples could raise the bar slowly a bit, maybe not max it out - but just leaving the stone on her clit should be more than enough.


Also, when you hover the mouse over "Slow fuck" in "Front Sex", the text inaccurately toggles back to read "Open legs", though the function itself works correctly.

And last of all for now:
You're missing an obedience prompt.
The slave begs "Please abuse my ass until you're fully satisfied" when she's at obedience level 3, but when you continue whipping, she loses all obedience points.

Either an oversight or a glitch, or else I clicked something without seeing it when the game seized up.

EDIT

Whoops. I see I got ninja-ed by Abelius. But yeah, the "Nelaana" thing should be a bug as well, since you name your slave, and I didn't name her Nelaana.
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Re: Slave Lord (slave management game)

Postby ValturNaa » Mon Aug 08, 2016 9:35 pm

Lucky777 Wrote:I like it.

An option to back out of the punishment screen without giving the punishment might be cool, though.

I've clicked on a punishment option accidentally before, thinking that I still had the "feed" menu open.

Actually, changing the menus so that they appear when you click one of the main buttons and don't disappear until you click something else might help too.

As my third line demonstrates, sometimes quality-of-life User-Interface improvements are actually about idiot-proofing.

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

Also, having to stimulate her in a specific order with the vibe-stone, Meet'n'fuck style, really doesn't make any sense.
Heck, having to get all the areas doesn't necessarily make sense in and of itself; touching games are done better when there's only one bar.
Stimulating her nipples could raise the bar slowly a bit, maybe not max it out - but just leaving the stone on her clit should be more than enough.


Also, when you hover the mouse over "Slow fuck" in "Front Sex", the text inaccurately toggles back to read "Open legs", though the function itself works correctly.

And last of all for now:
You're missing an obedience prompt.
The slave begs "Please abuse my ass until you're fully satisfied" when she's at obedience level 3, but when you continue whipping, she loses all obedience points.

Either an oversight or a glitch, or else I clicked something without seeing it when the game seized up.

EDIT

Whoops. I see I got ninja-ed by Abelius. But yeah, the "Nelaana" thing should be a bug as well, since you name your slave, and I didn't name her Nelaana.



Agree with most of the above. I suspect the undress thing is for a future version? But maybe it could just be disabled until it's ready to be fully implemented. And I definitely second the deepthroat animation.

Also, a basic design suggestion. When I first tried this, I wandered all over the place but couldn't figure out how to earn gold. I think it took me a game week to finally figure out that it required a *free* item from the shop. You might want to either make this item assumed, or create a minor event where the shop goblin offers a free slave outfit "only for you, dark lord." And in the latter case, only the first one would be free. Either way, it should make the game a little more "idiot proof" for new players.
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Re: Slave Lord (slave management game)

Postby LMJD » Tue Aug 09, 2016 8:48 am

This is a really cool game. I haven't finished it yet, I had to stop playing it after 30 minutes, but from what I played I enjoyed it immensely. Great job. Are you planning to add any thing else to the game or have you completed it?
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Re: Slave Lord (slave management game)

Postby pinktea » Tue Aug 09, 2016 4:09 pm

Thanks for pointing those out.
I've just fixed the bugs (hopefully) and posted the updated version now.

Abelius Wrote:Well, this is really promising and an enjoyable demo. :-)

Bug reports:

1. From what I saw playing a little it seems that the dialogue of the handjob second stage could be broken. It tells that she's curious but when the MC speaks you only get an empty box.
2. In front sex, 'insert' and 'slow fuck' buttons change to 'Open Legs' when hovering with the cursor.
3. In anal it happens the same with the 'slow fuck' button.
4. In back sex, a text tag that says "Undress Nelaana" appears but it's not interactable (she's already naked anyway).
5. Lashing, in the final (?) stage of submission, if she collapses, a black screen appears with the text box blank.

Also, may I suggest to unlock a deepthroat animation when she's fully trained...? ;-D

Keep up the good work. So far so good! ;-)
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Re: Slave Lord (slave management game)

Postby AcetheSuperVillain » Wed Aug 10, 2016 5:04 pm

It's a cool game system, just ... why always with the loli-cons, LoK?
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Re: Slave Lord (slave management game)

Postby roskrad » Thu Aug 11, 2016 8:31 am

This is really well done, it puts a lot of games years into beta to shame and its just an Alpha! I hope this takes off, I'll be watchin for sure.
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Re: Slave Lord (slave management game)

Postby razelfark » Thu Aug 11, 2016 11:05 am

Really good quality for an alpha. Looking forward to being able to explore your world and what all comes with that as you update (I Understand that might take some time).

Like that you made it so the person has to wear certain clothes to unlock jobs, but would be nice if you had the option to control what she wheres when you visit her; or, if you have time for it, performing acts with her. Small detail, but I think it would add bit to your game.
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Re: Slave Lord (slave management game)

Postby evildumdum » Thu Aug 11, 2016 5:16 pm

AcetheSuperVillain Wrote:It's a cool game system, just ... why always with the loli-cons, LoK?


I didn't think it was that loli, and that's coming from a loli fanatic. Besides, this is a furry forum. We can hardly sniff at other fetishes lol.
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Re: Slave Lord (slave management game)

Postby pinktea » Thu Aug 11, 2016 7:03 pm

Yeah, it's not supposed to be loli. It's just that the 'anime' style girls generally tend to look younger.

As for the clothes. I really am gonna add that. I'm too busy working on the next part of the game (locations and characters etc) right now.
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Re: Slave Lord (slave management game)

Postby MisterSnowman » Fri Aug 12, 2016 2:08 am

The back button in the "give item" screen doesn't seem to work.
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Re: Slave Lord (slave management game)

Postby PervyNeko » Fri Aug 12, 2016 5:29 am

Cant wait to explore the rest of Erolandia. More slaves in new locations? I'm keeping an eye on this one.
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Re: Slave Lord (slave management game)

Postby AcetheSuperVillain » Fri Aug 12, 2016 1:54 pm

evildumdum Wrote:
AcetheSuperVillain Wrote:It's a cool game system, just ... why always with the loli-cons, LoK?


I didn't think it was that loli, and that's coming from a loli fanatic. Besides, this is a furry forum. We can hardly sniff at other fetishes lol.


pinktea Wrote:Yeah, it's not supposed to be loli. It's just that the 'anime' style girls generally tend to look younger.

As for the clothes. I really am gonna add that. I'm too busy working on the next part of the game (locations and characters etc) right now.


So this is not entirely directed at you, you've made a perfectly good game with perfectly good animations, I just feel like many times I've seen good premises for hentai games or shows and then all they have are unattractive little girls. Or Ace is all like "ooh! this hentai author draws really well, what's this manga about? Raping highschoolers!? AGAIN?!?! Goddammit!" The fact that this girl does not look loli to you is proof that the infection is spreading. Sure, anime/manga style art uses neotonic features and romanticizes childhood due to its creation as a reaction to the horrors of WWII, but you can still have all that and a more attractive body type. I mean, sheesh, can porn games not have pornstar bodies in them? Anime is perfectly capable of producing grown-up looking women:

This is not my list, but a good example: http://myanimelist.net/featured/1138/20 ... _Your_Mind

And here's a collage of hot anime babes I found on google:
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And I make games too, I don't expect you to completely change your direction based on my preference. Just something to think about.

(Honestly, I'm probably grumpy from not sleeping enough too)
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Re: Slave Lord (slave management game)

Postby Feraksu » Fri Aug 12, 2016 2:58 pm

This is very good. I've been working on a game with a very similar concept myself, and I think I'll following this for a bit.
The animations could use some work, more motion and the like. The gameplay, however, is just fine. Can't wait until you add the overworld map!
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Re: Slave Lord (slave management game)

Postby evildumdum » Fri Aug 12, 2016 3:28 pm

On the other hand, how does an average cup size of HH make a woman attractive? If the tits are bigger than the head then you have problems. Starting with back pain.
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Re: Slave Lord (slave management game)

Postby foundling » Fri Aug 12, 2016 4:20 pm

AcetheSuperVillain Wrote:
evildumdum Wrote:
AcetheSuperVillain Wrote:It's a cool game system, just ... why always with the loli-cons, LoK?


I didn't think it was that loli, and that's coming from a loli fanatic. Besides, this is a furry forum. We can hardly sniff at other fetishes lol.


pinktea Wrote:Yeah, it's not supposed to be loli. It's just that the 'anime' style girls generally tend to look younger.

As for the clothes. I really am gonna add that. I'm too busy working on the next part of the game (locations and characters etc) right now.


So this is not entirely directed at you, you've made a perfectly good game with perfectly good animations, I just feel like many times I've seen good premises for hentai games or shows and then all they have are unattractive little girls. Or Ace is all like "ooh! this hentai author draws really well, what's this manga about? Raping highschoolers!? AGAIN?!?! Goddammit!" The fact that this girl does not look loli to you is proof that the infection is spreading. Sure, anime/manga style art uses neotonic features and romanticizes childhood due to its creation as a reaction to the horrors of WWII, but you can still have all that and a more attractive body type. I mean, sheesh, can porn games not have pornstar bodies in them? Anime is perfectly capable of producing grown-up looking women:

This is not my list, but a good example: http://myanimelist.net/featured/1138/20 ... _Your_Mind

And here's a collage of hot anime babes I found on google:
Spoiler (click to show/hide):

animebabecollage.png


And I make games too, I don't expect you to completely change your direction based on my preference. Just something to think about.

(Honestly, I'm probably grumpy from not sleeping enough too)


Though I certainly empathize with your frustrations with most hentai games (I'm one of those people who plays them for the game rather than to get off), I have to disagree with that the slave is very young. She is young, but I can easily see it as 18ish. There's often not a huge difference in looks from 16 to 18 in girls age wise. Heck, I still look a lot like I did in high school and I've been an adult for some time. (Not bragging. I just don't wear make up.)

I think she is "generic anime girl" (no offense meant to the game creator!) and that is why she sets off your "too young squick!" reaction. It's very common of armature artists, and even professionals if you look at a lot of mainstream Anime. (You have no idea how long it took me to realize the adults in Azumanga Daioh were not young teenagers.) I just went to the art store earlier this week and that's exactly what I saw on every "How To Draw Manga" book they had. This is also not a very detailed variant of the style to use and it easily makes characters look much younger. It takes very subtle details to make a character look mature without looking too old. It's difficult for even experienced artists to master. Though of course I am mainly talking about the face.

All the examples you provided have pretty much the same body type and are generously proportioned. What about petite girls? Flat chested, narrow hipped, muscled, chubby, or any of the other variations the human body comes in? The body is not exactly a good way to determine age. There are so many women in the world who have no boobs or butt to speak of, but that doesn't mean they look like kids. Easy ways to make someone more mature: make up, hair style, clothing style, narrower eyes.

Okay, art talk over.

pinktea, I'm really excited to see where this game will go. I like the training aspect and the background given to the characters. (I am also a shameless LotR dork so yeah.) And please don't take my "generic anime girls" comment personally. I often get frustrated when it comes to Anime style stuff as I have a more traditional background with art. Most of it, especially the modern stuff, just blends together for me. (Especially the use of one to seven faces for everybody thing.) My criticisms is on the style across the board. The art used here is fine for the style.

As for gameplay, my biggest complaint is when you require an item you don't have. I agree with ValturNaa that it's not clear at first what you need to do. The only reason it didn't take me too long to figure out is because I make it a point to talk to everybody and noticed the option to make her do a job. But then I had to figure out how to get her to do that job. When I first tried to get her to do the bottom tier job, all it said was an item was required. But what item and where can I get it? Yeah, the shop might be obvious, but I don't have any money. It took me several minutes to realize the slave outfit was free. I second the idea that it is given to you automatically when you enter the shop.

This game has potential and I really want to know what those other locations on the map will do.
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Re: Slave Lord (slave management game)

Postby ValturNaa » Fri Aug 12, 2016 5:44 pm

foundling Wrote:Though I certainly empathize with your frustrations with most hentai games (I'm one of those people who plays them for the game rather than to get off), I have to disagree with that the slave is very young. She is young, but I can easily see it as 18ish. There's often not a huge difference in looks from 16 to 18 in girls age wise. Heck, I still look a lot like I did in high school and I've been an adult for some time. (Not bragging. I just don't wear make up.)

...

All the examples you provided have pretty much the same body type and are generously proportioned. What about petite girls? Flat chested, narrow hipped, muscled, chubby, or any of the other variations the human body comes in? The body is not exactly a good way to determine age. There are so many women in the world who have no boobs or butt to speak of, but that doesn't mean they look like kids. Easy ways to make someone more mature: make up, hair style, clothing style, narrower eyes.


Thank you. One of my biggest frustrations when I search hentai is that it seems like every hentai character has a porn-star figure and inflated breast sizes. To me, cartoon and anime women alike should have realistic breast sizes relative to their bodies. My mother has had smaller breasts than this girl her whole life (but large hips from five children), and my sister is quite...heavy. Top and bottom. So I can see both ends of the spectrum. But a lot of hentai and cartoon sex models seem to have my sister's breast size on my mother's frame and that...well it doesn't feel right to me. The more extreme cases that I see literally shut off whatever mood I managed to get into. I'm glad to see someone who isn't going for breast enhancement for every woman.
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Re: Slave Lord (slave management game)

Postby AcetheSuperVillain » Fri Aug 12, 2016 8:43 pm

The images I picked are all clumped at the bubble boobed end of the spectrum to make a point. She doesn't look like a little girl because she's anime, she looks like a little girl because she looks like a little girl. Although yes, the more modern anime seems to be especially neotonic compared to its predecessors. 80sanimewasbetter,nowIcan'tjustsayIlikeanimeIhavetospecifyspecificerasorspecificartistsbecauseofallthisdopeyloliconartworkrantrantrantrantrantrant

I actually work in a department store jewelry section and I see different types of women all the time. There's definitely a lot of attractive women that don't have enormous boobs or that don't fit into a standardized bodyshape. I would even say that I especially like real-life petite women, what with the anime-babe being a work of fiction. It would definitely be another thing if this were a game with several women to choose from, but when there's only one woman in the entire universe, you're basically saying "this is the ideal female" and I'm saying "not my ideal, buster". And after the opening, I was expecting the orcs to deliver something like an elegant elf babe or growling goblin girl or wild cat woman, not an extra from K-On. Again, it's like you're saying "in a universe of infinite possibilities, this little girl is exactly what I wanted".

And as you say, when you're making cartoons (anime or otherwise) you're dealing with a simplified form, you have less tools available to make your characters look matured or attractive or whatever, so you really need to use the tools you've got, even if it makes them look unrealistic. And also, since you can make cartoon babes look like anything you can imagine, you're expected to exaggerate at least a little. Exaggeration is a part of cartooning, you want to pick a feature that makes a person stand out and really highlight that feature in the character's design. Also, a point that a lot of artists don't get, is that just simplifying or stylizing a subject automatically exaggerates certain features of the character, often a sense of flatness or inorganicness, and in the case of anime and most american toon styles, a sense of neoteny, so if you don't want the character to come across as a flat, plastic, little kid, you need to compensate for that, so being purely realistic is actually not that realistic.

But, if we are making the argument that this is supposed to look realistic, here's some real-life teen/petite porn for comparison:
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