Elana Champion of Lust Chap2 βeta 1- Updated(01/31/2019)

[convel ryuu]

looks great!!
keep up the great work
and stay awesomes

now if you'll excuse me i have to return the shadows from witch i came
-fades into the shadows as if nothing but an imagined apparition-

[Husky]

Judging by the .es in the blogspot address you posted and some of the mistakes you made in the text, you guys speak Spanish, right?

Well, if you need a proofreader or translator, send me a message. No hablo español muy bien, pero lo entiendo perfectamente.

[KeiranD]

The art and animations and concept looks great.
But there's one thing: why use something outdated like flash? The game would benefit much more from using Renpy.

[Biles]

Because at least Flash is cross-platform. If it was .exe'd then people like me wouldn't have been able to play it at all. I don't know much about Renpy but if it was compatible with all major OS platforms, then I wouldn't mind at all.

[musical74]

I would stick with flash, especially if you know it well.

I really like where you are going with this. Are you treating this more as a lighthearted romp? Sure seems that way so far (that's a good thing!).

[Knotgames]

Judging by the .es in the blogspot address you posted and some of the mistakes you made in the text, you guys speak Spanish, right?

Well, if you need a proofreader or translator, send me a message. No hablo español muy bien, pero lo entiendo perfectamente.

Yes, we are, ^^
Well, thank you, but it won't be necessary today it has joined us a new partner who will translate and will correct the text, but thanks also.
Soon there will be corrected.

The art and animations and concept looks great.
But there's one thing: why use something outdated like flash? The game would benefit much more from using Renpy.

Well,we know more flash than Ren'Py as well we think that's easier animate this with flash than Ren'Py and share with the people it's easier too. (in our opinion)

[VintageBass]

Yes, we are, ^^
Well, thank you, but it won't be necessary today it has joined us a new partner who will translate and will correct the text, but thanks also.
Soon there will be corrected.

Who's "it"? Just wondering since we got others, including myself, who offered and there's quite the selection. It seems too vague. But either way, good to know and it'll be nice to hear we are getting some great content coming!

[Knotgames]

Who's "it"? Just wondering since we got others, including myself, who offered and there's quite the selection. It seems too vague. But either way, good to know and it'll be nice to hear we are getting some great content coming!

We have an old friend who is English philologist and he will give us some help, but again thank you.
We didn't expect so many offers of help and we were looking for a solution with the texts.
It has been amazing to find so many people who wants help ^^ (we were a little scared about the acceptance of the game )

[VintageBass]

We have an old friend who is English philologist and he will give us some help, but again thank you.
We didn't expect so many offers of help and we were looking for a solution with the texts.
It has been amazing to find so many people who wants help ^^ (we were a little scared about the acceptance of the game )

Ah, OK, thanks for clarifying that! Nice to hear that you got another friend on board and we can't wait to see what they will bring to the table!

[Knotgames]

I've updated the post with two new images that show how will be the random locals and a event example ^^

[VintageBass]

Mmmm, yes, the event looks to be very sexy, indeed~ Can't wait to play that! <3

[kvier]

Oooh, hair tentacles!

[White_Lighting]

Looking good. Can't wait to play it.

[Knotgames]

New updated with some samples of the events and the witch character.

[Knotgames]

Hey there! at last! we have corrected the opening of the game! and we added to it the Spanish version too.
We would be happy to hear your opinions.
Please tell us if you spot some spelling mistakes.

[m3rchant]

Much, MUCH better grammar than the first time around, though there are still quite a few mistakes. Thought I'd put up a few and how to fix them:

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

He even went to think they work the least in order to pay less taxes and tributes they owed to him.

He even went so far as to think they worked less in order to pay less taxes and tributes.
___
But such vast power did the sorcerers require and amount from the sources that it went out of control.

But the sorcerers required such vast amounts of power from the sources that it went out of control.
___
Facing extinction, the sorcerers… managed to created a cloning…

Simple fix here, created simply needs to be create.
___
Centuries passed and nobody on the island neither remembered nor knew any other way to endure.

Double negative: Just remove the word neither.

I told you I was a grammar Nazi.

[Knotgames]

Much, MUCH better grammar than the first time around, though there are still quite a few mistakes. Thought I'd put up a few and how to fix them:

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

He even went to think they work the least in order to pay less taxes and tributes they owed to him.

He even went so far as to think they worked less in order to pay less taxes and tributes.
___
But such vast power did the sorcerers require and amount from the sources that it went out of control.

But the sorcerers required such vast amounts of power from the sources that it went out of control.
___
Facing extinction, the sorcerers… managed to created a cloning…

Simple fix here, created simply needs to be create.
___
Centuries passed and nobody on the island neither remembered nor knew any other way to endure.

Double negative: Just remove the word neither.

I told you I was a grammar Nazi.

Thanks this will be fixed for the next update




Well, this is more or less what we are planing to do as a structure of the game.

It’s not immovable (we are already changed things last month so...) but it will be a guide to us to follow.

Spoiler (click to show/hide):

1. Area: Every area will have its own events and singualar character events for each level.

2. Level: It will be 3 different levels with its own events although events from lower levels will have a chance to appear to add more possibilities.

3. Events: Events will have more or less chances to apper when Elana is observing the area dependig on wich point of it she is (experience).

4. Quest events: Some events will send Elana to a quest.

5. Bad events: Depending on the level when Elana fail to perform some actions bad events will be shown. Some of them will have consecuences but Elana could may fight some of them at some point.

6. Rituals: Each level will have a low ritual and a high ritual to recharge the magic points.

7. Physical action talents: Actions Elana will learn througt levels.

8. Magical actions: Powers and actions Elana will learn throught levels.

9. Subactions: Soma actions (like summon minions) will lead to some more actions.

10. Singular characters: every area will have a chance to show its own singular character to interact and a lower chance to show a secundary singular character (you will have 35% chance to find Rala in the forest but just 15% to find the twin bards for example).

11. Singular character actions: Singular characters will have its own physical and magical actions to perform with.

12. Singular character events: Also they will have its own events.


If you have any doubt, just ask, with a comment or a PM

[Akkin]

I would like to warn you that your blog might be removed overnight. That of Lesson of Passion was removed and it was also a blogspot. Google changed its policy vis-à-vis pornographic blog.

[VintageBass]

I would like to warn you that your blog might be removed overnight. That of Lesson of Passion was removed and it was also a blogspot. Google changed its policy vis-à-vis pornographic blog.

Well thanks to people complaining about it, the old policy still remains intact, but for how long is the question. At least if it does go down, there are alternate sites to go to, and here being one of them.

[Knotgames]

I would like to warn you that your blog might be removed overnight. That of Lesson of Passion was removed and it was also a blogspot. Google changed its policy vis-à-vis pornographic blog.

Thanks! these days we are discussing about this and other similar thinks, we will try to continue uploading information of the game online.

Well thanks to people complaining about it, the old policy still remains intact, but for how long is the question. At least if it does go down, there are alternate sites to go to, and here being one of them.

Indeed, thanks to places like this where we can keep loading game updates.

On the other hand, if this is a policy to protect the minors in my opinion I think this should be the job of the parents. Because any kid will find (if he wants) sites with explicit material without google...